Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 If Only I Could Turn Back Time

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If Only I Could Turn Back Time

debjunk

291 Reviews | 291 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 22,410 Words 11 Chapters Complete

Severus Snape regrets not becoming romantically involved with Hermione Granger in his past. Will a trip back in time solve all of his problems?

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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Reviews for If Only I Could Turn Back Time

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gersknightlady

Very entertaining two Snape's play acting together, Great job.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thanks.

8/10

gersknightlady

Awesome chapter, The tango what fun sigh :)

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Oh, I just loved writing that. To be Hermione for just two minutes during that. Yum.

Response from gersknightlady (Reviewer)

only 2 minutes lol, forever would be nicer :)

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gersknightlady

LOL very funny, the two Snape's conversing. Good chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

They're incredibly fun to play off one another.

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gersknightlady

I like this story already, It has great possibilities :)

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thank you! I'm glad you are/did enjoy it!

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Clairvoyant

Yes, the expected happy ending was just lovely. Any plans for a sequel?

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

None right now, but you never know.

9/10

apisa_b

You nearly fooled me for a moment when Severus thought it was Ron's wedding.Interesting how you chose to have him remember the last two years. No wonder he seemed a bit out of it.Lovely vows.I really enjoyed the story, dear mystery author.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thank you apisa. I'm glad it was fun for you. I can assure you, it was fun for me. And I'm glad I fooled you for an instant. That was my intent, of course.

10/10

braye27

I have loved every word and couldn't have hoped for a better ending than this. I know that Hermione will be cherished by her Prince for all of their lives!Thanks for such a rewarding story for my OTP.Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

He will definitely cherish her, especially after all he did to get her. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Beth.

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FruGal

I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus/Snape. Hermione saved from Ron again. Yah!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

She really needs to be saved from that Weasley fellow. Thanks!

10/10

braye27

This is such a sweet chapter. I'm glad that all three of them won!And now Future!Severus has returned to his own time, and I want to see how things are going in two years time.Nice little chapter, this is,Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thanks! Hermione will hopefully still be there in the future.

10/10

braye27

I'm glad that Hermione won her battle with herself. At least I hope she won... deciding that she deserved to be happy with Severus. I hope.And now I have to go to the final chapter to find out for sure just how all this will end.Good chapter!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

She's no dummy. She had a right to be mad, but she'd literally be mad if she didn't go for Snape!

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braye27

OMG! What will she decide? I can understand her being upset when she first found out, but I hope with the evening ahead of her to think on the implications that Severus had regretted not courting her that she will decide in Severus' favor!This is a unique take on the Time Turner theme.Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Hermione is a thinker. She won't decide anything until she's thought it through. Thanks!

10/10

braye27

She knows! Brightest witch of her age, she is. Flying is so much fun!I love it!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

I think Hermione has discovered that flying is very fun. LOL. But, yes, she's a bright one. Nothing gets past her.

10/10

braye27

I just knew he was going to want to see his future-self's memories of the date with Hermione... and I can't blame him.I wonder what kind of man Severus will find when he returns to the future.Well done.Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Snape is no fool. He does want this all to work out, though.

10/10

braye27

Woo Hoo! That went brilliantly! Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thank you! It was a fun chapter to write.

10/10

braye27

I know Future!Severus has taken a wand oath to be a gentleman while he is on this date with Hermione, and he will be unobserved by Past!Severus, but what will happen if Hermione encourages him to take their relationship to the next level? Will he have to interupt the goings-on to go get his other self to take over?I can't wait to see how this date goes! Well done.Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Severus, over anything else, is a gentleman. Besides, he doesn't want to move too, too fast.

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braye27

Having Future!Severus take over the reins was a good idea, but I had to laugh when Past!Snape grumbled that he was the one who should have had the first kiss. Maybe now he get on the stick over dinner tomorrow night. LOL!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

LOL. Snape is a tad bit jealous. He'll get his turn. Hopefully he doesn't blow it.

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braye27

This Past!Snape is just as hard headed as ever, but I think Future!Severus will build a fire under his arse before too long. LOL!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Oh, he will! The man will need some encouragement, though.

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braye27

This is a very nice begining to this Time Turner tale. Now I just hope that Severus can convince himself to get with the program!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

That would definitely be ideal! Thanks, Beth!

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Kore

Yay! I have to confess, I've been delinquent in keeping up with this story, and chose to wait a couple of updates, but the wait was well worth while. (Whew, try saying that 10 times fast.)I love happy endings, and I liked the moment of confusion when Severus was waiting for all of his memories to come back.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Sometimes it's nice just to read something to its conclusion instead of having to wait for updates. Thank you for catching up!

10/10

luna_lovegood

oh i love this story great job!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thanks, Luna!

10/10

Iza

wow , just great I love this story !

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Oh, thank you!