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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 If Only I Could Turn Back Time
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If Only I Could Turn Back Time

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2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

If Only I Could Turn Back Time

debjunk

291 Reviews   |   291 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 22,410 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus Snape regrets not becoming romantically involved with Hermione Granger in his past. Will a trip back in time solve all of his problems?

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

ChiffonShock

Beautiful story, absolutely loved it!

0/10

Montara

I'm glad Hermione choose Severus! It was indeed the right choice!Loved your story. Thank you.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Awww, gee thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Awww, gee thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

5/10

PanduhBabyy

This was so sweeeeeeeet!!!

10/10

ferguy505

BEAUTIFUL

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thank you so much!

10/10

Morsmordre

Awesome! Im surprised he didn't curse first and ask questions later, the old snark.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

That would definitely be in character, wouldn't it?

10/10

Shadow

Good. If anyone desrves to be happy it is Severus. I am so glad he got his happy ending.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

So is he,

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

... so is he! Thanks for reading and reviewing! ~Me

10/10

Shadow

Mmmmmm. Two Snapes and a witch. Glad she came to her senses and made the right choice. I just hope Snape doesn't mess it all up.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

It really is too bad the older Snape couldn't stay! But hopefully, younger Snape will not blow it.

10/10

Shadow

Hermione Snape sounds miles better. She can't settle for Ron when Severus has just told her he loves her!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Given all the facts, as she has here, she'd be a fool to settle for Ron. Really, why just have half when you can have the whole wonderful thing?

10/10

Shadow

Uh oh. They failed to reason that by changing his past, they are changing Hermione's future as well. Oh, yes, they also forgot how independent she is too

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

True. Hopefully, they'll all like the future.

10/10

Shadow

Good girl Hermione. I knew she would get suspicious after the library incident. How are they going to get out of this one?

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

With Slytherin cunning, no doubt.

10/10

Shadow

Hehe. I loved the two of them practicing together. "He had his head on Snape’s shoulders, and he was rubbing his chest. The image almost made him gag".

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Yes, it's not really a pretty picture. Poor guy... all this for love.

10/10

Shadow

Oh my. I would definately like to volunteer my services to play Hermione Granger in the movie version of this!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Sorry, I get dibs on Hermione.

10/10

Shadow

Hmmm. Hermione seems just the witch to bring Severus out of himself. If that doesn't work, a swift kick on his self-pitying behind from his older self just might!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

I think both of those will definitely help.

10/10

Shadow

Both Snapes fighting over who gets to kiss her... Sigh. I'm glad older!Snape took matters into his own hands.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Yes, not one, but two. Be still my heart.

10/10

Shadow

Two Snapes working together to get Hermione. As long as the younger one doesn't mess this up, its a done deal!!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Indeed.

10/10

Shadow

Yip. I can see Snape, having survived the war, truly regretting not going for what would make him happy. Although I think this is going to get a bit muddled, I am glad he is finally considering his own happiness.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

It's about time he thought about himself. Too bad he didn't do it a couple years earlier!

0/10

RhiannonAvon

He made it back just in time for his wedding!  Well done.  I enjoyed the story and am glad I caught back up, my life got very busy for awhile.  I look forward to reading your other stories [once I know who you are of course ;-)]  Good luck!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed this.  It will be fun to find out who we all are when the reveal comes.

0/10

RhiannonAvon

Yay!  Good choice was made.  Wonder what Severus is going to encounter when he returns to his time?

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

She did the right thing.  She's no dummy.  She can see the potential with Severus.

0/10

RhiannonAvon

Quick and easy decision to make, Hermione and Ron I don't think have ever been suited.  Maybe Rowling thought Ron grew up in the 19 year break, but I doubt it.  Glad to see Hermione might end up with someone she is better suited for...course I had better keep reading to make sure that's who she ends up with.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

I'm sure Ron did grow up some, but his jealous streak is a mile wide.  Also, he couldn't care less about knowledge, something that Hermione can't live without.  I would think that whatever attraction they have would grow old when faced with someone who really doesn't understand you.

0/10

RhiannonAvon

Poor Snapes...Severus at least should have known that Hermione would not take kindly to the fact that she was being manipulated in order to please what could be one man's whim.  Guess they'll just have to wait to see what happens.  And while they wait, I'll go to the next chapter and find out without the wait. ;-)

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

I think Severus did know, but he knew this was his only chance too.  He took the risk.

10/10

rosered

I'm so glad that everything worked out in the end for our couple.  Taking a chance on going back in time to try to give her the love she deserved was the most romantic thing he could done for her.  Fantastic story.  Well done!  :D 

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Thank you!  Severus really recognized his major blunder.  He did the only thing possible.  And how romantic was that?

10/10

MrsStrawberry

Wow! Great story to get over all the HBP movie blues...if I could turn back time I'd have JKR re-writing that particular ending in DH..and let's just scrap that epilogue altogether!Brilliant how the 2 Severus's would bounce from each other. Paradoxes? Pah, what paradoxes?A great new slant on an old plot. I shall wait to see who you are when voting is over...great little fic. You deserve to win !

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

  Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it so well.I too would turn back time and make JKR fix the end and epilogue.  What was she thinking?  Ron and Hermione?  Give me a break!  Attraction can only go so far.

10/10

MollysSister

OH what releif! I am so glad all is well in the past. I can only hope it held and see what the future is like now! Im on pins and needles I tell you!!

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

I should have the end up soon.  I've sent it along to my beta.  Thanks!

0/10

genrou

i think i actually want her to end up with ron in the end here. it just seems more right from the feel i get from this fic.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

Really?  Huh.  Well, you'll have to see what happens.  A lot can happen in two years, both good and bad!

0/10

genrou

glad hermione took it the way she should-furious about hte both of them manipulating her and altering a happy future.

Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)

She's pretty ticked now.  But she needs to weigh her options and make an educated decision.

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