If Only I Could Turn Back Time
debjunk291 Reviews | 291 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )
Severus Snape regrets not becoming romantically involved with Hermione Granger in his past. Will a trip back in time solve all of his problems?
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
Reviews for If Only I Could Turn Back Time
Neither one of our boys strikes me as the dancing type. But it’s the thought that counts, right?
Loved Minerva walking up on them. So glad she approves, too.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Severus is really stepping out of the box to impress Hermione.
The jealousy continues! I can see this getting complicated, especially as Hermione is likely to figure things out at some point! LOL Honesty is the best policy, boys!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
You were so right! She's no idiot, and now she knows the truth. At least they told her the truth in the end. That's one thing for them.
Cyrano de Snape! Love it!
I hope Snape doesn’t mess it up- or maybe I should hope he does, for a while, just for the fun of it!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Oh, I just love that story!
I like how you differentiate between the two with Severus and Snape. It makes it easy to follow once you realize that. Looking good!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Thank you!
I could see this sort of thing happening to Snape if he lived, not getting what he wanted because he didn’t have the nerve to go after it.
Good setup here. Looking forward to more. Oh, there’s more right now! Great!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
LOL. Yep, there's a bit more. Missed opportunity and Snape kind of follow each other along, don't they?
i hope this has a happy ending. poor sev...she was really upset. terrific update. thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
You'll have to see. It won't take too long for Hermione to figure out what she wants to do... or not do.
Uh-oh! LOL Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Major uh-oh!
Hahaha! Busted. :)
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
As if he thought he could get away with this forever! Silly man/men.
This chapter has many funny parts. hahaha I love the two Snapes together and especially the imagery you give us.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Thanks, southern! I really enjoyed playing them off each other.
Haha, I especially liked the first part. I could just see the other Snape giving him a swift kick in the shin. :) Great date as well, and Minerva's reaction... ahahaha! Good imagery.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Thanks again. I'm sure Hermione was wondering what was going on with Severus there. LOL.
A great date. The present day Snape seems so unsure of himself. I kind of like that, but I enjoy the tarty future Snape. hahaha
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
He's the image of what can be. 
The man's done his homework, that's for sure.
Hahaha. This is such a fun story. :) I like the back in forth between the two and find myself wanting to kick the younger Snape (present day) in the bum for being such a chicken. :)
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
I agree. If only he'd gone out on a limb just a little! But then we wouldn't have a story.
Great chapter!!! I'm soooo looking forward to her decision!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
She will pretty much decide in the next chapter, so you won't have to wait too, too long. 
I think their luck is changing now, it could have gone much worse. Of course Hermione will forgive them, she's like that. Does she love him, we all hope so. LOL, loved the chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Thank you! We can hope that their luck is changing. Hermione is no Lily. I think she's the type to think things over when she's cooled off.
Arrrg! Evil, evil, totally evil cliffie. the worst I have ever seen.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Really? The worst? I'd better hurry up and update then! Thanks!
Hermione deserved to learn the truth - but perhaps not so directly? It didn't seem very diplomatically to me.Of course she's mad. My first reaction would be to be mad, too. Hopefully she'll see just how much she is loved and come around.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Severus has never been one on tact, has he? Snape squared are hoping the same thing. C'mon Hermione!
Yay, Another Update! I'm so glad they decided to tell her the truth instead. She may be irritated now, but I think she'll still give them a chance...hopefully. Thanks again. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
She's incredibly angry and confused. She needs to sit and think for a bit. She'll do that. Hopefully, she'll come to the right decision.
thank you for lots of dialoge with themselves - love the two Snapes!!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Thank you! They're a blast to have interact. You never know what's going to come out of their mouths. (Sometimes even I don't!)
Oh noes!Hermione is so cranky! I hope it all goes well for Snape :)Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!A~
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Thanks! Hermione IS cranky. She needs some alone time, that's for sure. You just want to smack her upside the head and tell her to wake up! Who wouldn't be swooning if someone did that for them?
wow! the snapes were completely honest??! good for them. i understand hermione's dilemma but i hope she comes around... snape just isn't good at stuff like this. i just hope that this isn't another thing that leads her into ron's arms - even earlier.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Oh, that would be a really bad turn of events. Think of Severus kicking himself for ruining it all over again! You'll have to wait and see. You'll have some idea of what she decides by the end of next chapter.
Oh dear, they are really in trouble now! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
They are! Can Hermione get past this? We can only hope. (Well, you can. I know already what she decides.)
I sure do HOPE:1. That you have the next chapter ALREADY WRITTEN; and2. That it is in queue already, with a QUICK turn-around time!AAAAAAAAAAAAACCCKKK!!!
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
Well, the chapter is definitely written. It's with my beta for a look over. It will be up soon, fear not. (Probably not soon enough, though, from your loud shout at the end.)
Response from countrymouse (Reviewer)
Not meant to be a shout, just a cry of despair---hardly anybody is updating right now (everyone must be at Leaky) and so my fanfiction addition is going unfed. Sorry! Just consider a measure of how much your story is appreciated! :-)
I'd feel manipulated too, but I'd also take this as a compliment. He must really want her bad to go to all this trouble.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
I think Hermione needs some time alone to think. Hopefully, she'll see things the way you do!
I hope she can forgive Severus and that they can move past this.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
That would be ideal, wouldn't it?
I didn't expect her to be so upset. I thought she wanted his attention. He went back in time for her. Boy, she is fickle. Yet I love HG/SS. Can't wait to see the next chappie.
Response from debjunk (Author of If Only I Could Turn Back Time)
You're so right. Unfortunately, this was quite a shock for Hermione. She really needs to sit down and think.