Simply Entranced
pookah33 Reviews | 4.67/10 (33 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
Hermione has been inveigled into entertaining the children at the Wizarding Library’s story hour. Will she ever survive to have children of her own? Will she want to?
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fifty-something happy wife and college mom.
Matchmaker is on a bit of a hiatus. We've had two deaths amongst our closest freinds, my beta is ill, and my mom is in bad health. So it may take me a while to get back to that cheery place where I can write such nonsense. I will finish it though, unless I die, too.
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That's hilarious!
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
Thank you! I'm thrilled you like it.
read some*giggle/snort*read some morerepeat
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
read review*grin/squeal happily*read againrepeat-So glad you enjoyed it!
Tee Hee ... this had me giggling. "They ate too much cake."Too funny. And the mental picture of Severus Snape tossing loo rolls was enough to set me off for another round.Thanks for the inspired story!
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
Thank you for your charming review! Once I thought of Snape tossing loo rolls, I simply couldn't leave it alone. I'm so happy you enjoyed this!
Loved the thought of Hermione being forced to tell the story as Mother Goose to a bunch of talkative kiddies. I imagine it would be difficult to tailor a story about a wild party and Snape to fit the delicate sensibilities of toddlers. It makes me wonder how Snape, as Father Goose, would tell the same tale!
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! I love your idea about Severus's Point of View. I shall try to come up with a sequel for after the reveal.
Squeee! (Am I allowed to say that was my prompt?)
I love it!!! And I would have never dreamed of this, not at all. What a fun way of showing it--story time!
Well done, all around!
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
I began with something else in mind. but the story twisted until it became what you find here. Thank you for your inspiring prompt! Thank you for your lovely review.
a total hoot! i teach sunday school to 12 and 13 yr olds and this was deja vu alll over! thanks
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I am so thrilled to get such a nice response for my story! Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I am so thrilled to get such a nice response for my story! Glad you enjoyed it.
Aw that was wonderfully sweet! She slipped near the end though, and said hangover potion. I loved all the little interruptions and the theyhadalotofcake.And I gotta love the Danish prince! We don't have any that look like Severus though.
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
If your royal family doesn't look like Snape, that's probably good for them! Yes, she did slip up, didn't she? 
Perhaps Hermione's not as clever as she thinks when it comes to dealing with children. I daresay some of the older ones will understand what 'too much cake' means. Thank you for your kind review.
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
If your royal family doesn't look like Snape, that's probably good for them! Yes, she did slip up, didn't she? Perhaps Hermione's not as clever as she thinks when it comes to dealing with children. I daresay some of the older ones will understand what 'too much cake' means. Thank you for your kind review.
LOL! That was an amazingly clever response to the prompt. What a fabulous style of writing, and I love that you got around the two troublemakers without making it romantic.
Response from pookah (Author of Simply Entranced)
Wow! Thank you for the flattering review! I'm so pleased you approve of the non-romantic pairing.