Snape`s revenge was certainly inspired.... ;)Glad he didn`t pass up Hermione`s offer of a full body massage and other perks. Thank you!

Oh, good lord, it was something fantastic! i laughed a lot... what a sense of humor you have! loved this one a lot.

Another very cool plot!

I like this ending so much more than the real one.

"Don't kill Ron, please, he thought you were dead,"   Too too funny!  Great line!

I enjoyed this.  It was very funny!  The idea that person after person was summoned and was just useless was a complete hoot!

I like it. It's nice how you can make something so dark a comedy as well. I loved Snape's snark as the others are dithering over why they are there. And Winky. LOL what a wonderful touch. Glad it ended alright for him. :D

You must be a real pro because that was brilliant and funny as hell.  It's too bad you didn't let Severus get back at Ron.  That would have made it beyond perfect.

"Dying was a lousy way to spend the evening.... really I should have stayed in the lab tonight". Brilliant. Just brilliant!

The first part could have been written by JKR (except snape's thoughts) she cared about snape that much.

Heh! Ron's moustache is just so inappropriate I had to snicker with laughter in exactly the same way I envisaged him doing.

The crap reactions of all but Hermione (eventually Remus) and Poppy were spot on. Much amusement here and a change from all the usual rescues

*snickers* I love your humorous take on the ending. Ron drawing a moustache - lovely.

Hooray for an alive Snape! Stories like this just make my day.

Very good. Ron painting the mustache was a strangely lighthearted note to an otherwise creepy situation and a very Ron-ish thing to do. He probably didn't win any boyfriend-points with Hermione, though.

As were his and Harry's words, 'We appreciate what you did, but we still don't really like you much'

I would have thought that Remus would have had the sense to check if Severus was really dead, but I guess he assumed that Ron and Harry had done so. (I would also have thought he had the sense to remove the mustache, but apparently not)

I also liked Madam Pomfrey actually scolding him for almost dying and the use of 'next time, try to...' As if he was going to go out and get mortally wounded again on purpose.

:) I liked everyone mulling around chatting while poor Snape lay dying on the floor. I'm sure he'll have some cutting words for Ron too :)

Great! Loved the humorous undertones.

Loved it!!!! Poor Ron, he is in soooo much trouble!

Missy

I hardly care that this is AU. I love your take on this prompt! It is delightful! I loved the line: Just throw me out so you've got some more space for your party! since every one and Nagini responded to his summons!  And really got a giggle over: – one of his pupils getting that close to him without him being able to lift as much as a finger to hinder her was surely a reason to hide in the next mouse hole with embarrassment for the rest of the century. Thank you. This is a treat!

Ah, of course *this* is the way it really would have gone down! Remus, Tonks, and Severus all survive—yay! And of course Snape would have an antivenom prepared. He probably made it since Nagini first attacked Arthur Weasley. I'm glad to see someone wrote a response to this prompt. I like your idea of a summoning charm. It was entertaining to see what each character did when they arrived. Winky—pathetic LOL. Ron—!!!! prat !!!! Harry—still stumbling through everything he does—cluelessly, Remus—his sentimentality—aww and Hermione—brilliant, aware, and saves our hero's life—YES!

This is a much better ending to the series than the one Jo wrote. And even near death, Snape is still at his snarky best! Great job, you!

i really like what you did with this.  and i marvel at the fact that you were able to infuse so much humor into it, given the gravity of the situation.  (the blood mustache creeped me out a bit, but i'm pretty squeamish.)

Loved it, absolutely loved it!!! I wouldl have liked to "see" Ron facing Severus when Severus has got some of his strength back though:-))

And, your ending was much better than JKR's ending. I would not be surprised if she made hers in a feeble attempt to ruin the great fanfics out there, probably because some smart fanfic author had already used her idea. That is the only reason I can find for her to write a book seven that was so much lacking compared to the first six books.....

Loved this. The constant little Snapey comments as he lay dying felt spot on.

Really.  You should. Continue, that is.

What a lovely, darkly funny one-shot.  You really should continue in, er, this same vein!