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An Allowable Deduction

StormySkize

28 Reviews   |   28 Ratings, 0 Likes, 23 Favorites )

Humor Romance General Snapshot post-HBP/HBP compliant Malfoy Manor 3,041 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Severus Snape

Hermione, now working for the Ministry, has an interesting encounter with Lucius Malfoy.

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Chapter 1: An Allowable Deduction


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StormySkize

Member Since 2005  |  13 Stories  |  Favorited by 172  |  431 Reviews Written  |  998 Review Responses

I am in my late 50's and I didn't even start reading Harry Potter until after the third book came out. My granddaughter got me 'hooked on Potter,' and while surfing the net one day, I found a fanfiction site. That was it! My first story, "Renaissance," was published on Ashwinder a month later and I've been writing ever since. I am primarily a HG/SS shipper, but I also enjoy reading and writing RL/SS. I live in Tampa, Florida with my wonderfully adoring and supportive husband, and three completely spoiled cats. (Kallie, Mysha, and Smudge {who was the inspiration for the cat that Severus gives Hermione in my story "Renaissance."}) I'm always happy to correspond with my readers and I answer ALL reviews. I'm always looking for plot-bunnies, so feel free to throw some ideas out.

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10/10

RedsAttic

EXCELLENT!!!!

0/10

EverMystique

For a minute there, I wasn't sure what pairing you were going for. :) Nice set up and execution.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed.

10/10

fizzabella

I love it:) This was perfect:) And there is no arguing with Lucius's logic:)Fizzabella

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed.

10/10

fizzabella

I love it:) This was perfect:) And there is no arguing with Lucius's logic:)Fizzabella

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you again! lol   And thanks for all the lovely stars!

10/10

irishredlass

How positively charming.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you!

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you!

10/10

irishredlass

How positively charming.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

And thank you again for all the lovely stars.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

And thank you again for all the lovely stars.

0/10

Aldara

*lol* Very cute. I like clever!Lucius. ^^

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you so much. I've never really written Lucius before. This story was a 'gift' for a big Lucius fan!Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.

0/10

MollysSister

Severus gets the girl he loves & the manor. All things worked out well I would say!

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Yep, for once, no drama, no angst, just a well-deserved happy ending for our beloved Potions master. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

10/10

firefly124

This was very cute.  I got a huge kick out of the acronyms and, of course, Lucius' machinations.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

First, let me apologize for my late response to your review. I was in hospital on the day you left it, and I'm afraid I got a bit behind in my e-mails. (Actually, once I got back home and opened my mail-box, I deleted them enmasse and decided to start over -- I was that overwhelmed!) Anyway, I do appreciate your lovely review. I had great fun writing this story. Thanks again!

Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)

Sorry to hear you were in hospital.  I can just imagine the email deluge!  I hope you're doing well now.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you. I'm actually doing well now and will be returning to work on Thursday. I'm a pretty tough old broad!

10/10

Fairfield

Very entertaining.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was a fun piece to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing. And thanks for all the lovely stars!

0/10

nightshift

That was just sneaky. I wish my accountant was that accomplished.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

lol ... don't we all? I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

10/10

Lyndie578

I loved this!  Lucius was so marvelously manipulative in this fic!  Thanks, this was highly entertaining!

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. This is my first attempt at writing Lucius. I'm happy to hear you think I did a good job.Thanks for reading and for taking the time to post a review. And thank you for all the lovely stars!

10/10

ja_vonna

love your story its vry funny in the end

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

MollysSister

Don't mind me I am just here doing a bit of background reading for our blind date~set up Quizwhistles innocently

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Feel free to drop by anytime!

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Feel free to drop by anytime!

10/10

karelia

*grins* you know... I would never have read this if it hadn't been required reading for the Juy 2007 podcast. But I must say, i utterly, thoroughly, wholeheartedly enjoyed it!!! It is simply brilliant. Made me chuckle all the way and the end is ever so satisfying! :-)

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

I'm so glad you liked it. I'm very flattered that TPP has chosen to discuss this story for thier podcast. Thanks for reading ... and thanks for all the lovely stars!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I love it! Great story.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for all the lovely stars!

9/10

phoenix

Ah, I love devious Lucius. Even when he's down, he's not out. Very nicely done with his clever manipulations to get what he wants even if it gave someone else what they want.

10/10

Annabun

Hermione really should have been a Slytherin - and you've done Lucius beautifully.

10/10

Arachnae

This fic is just too cute! LOL I enjoyed it very much!!

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and for all the lovely stars!

0/10

Anijade

That was very clever of dear Lucius. Well done

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Oh, he's a Slytherin through and through, isn't he? I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.

10/10

mmesnape

LOL Very AU, but oh-so-lovely!  Nice story, well executed too.  Bravo!  (I knew Lucius could be a very slytherin devil, in the good sense.)  ;)

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

I'm glad you liked my very foray into writing Lucius. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. And thank you for all the lovely stars!

10/10

juliannanight

My dearest, as always, once more I see a ride I must take with you. I got a little owl in my email box to tell me that you have posted something new, so before I could even grasp what this story would be about, or even how long it is, I came by and started reading and ALAS, here I am in love once again with a small piece of work done by yourself. As always, thank you for writing, and allowing people like me to view it. Julianna

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

As always, Julianna, your comments are appreciated beyond measure. Thanks so much!

9/10

Elisabeth

What a stylish thank-you gift--thanks so much for sharing it. And it reminds me that I have to make an appointment with my accountant since it's that time of year again. So thanks for that too. Sort of.

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

We have our own Muggle-American version of the OFUCK, don't we? I'm glad you appreciated the story. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.

9/10

my little secret

This was very cute!  A bit of a twist, too, since I thought it would be a HG/LM fic.  Nicely done.Peace!  ~ j

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Oh, I don't think I could EVER write a LM/HG fic! I'm shuddering at the thought! I did want to 'star' Lucius in this fic, though, because Shiv has a fondness for him. I thought this was a good compromise. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. And thanks for the lovely stars!

10/10

Anon

I loved it! I'm still smiling!


Even when I thought it wasn't going to be SS/HG I kept reading. That is a true testament to the quality of your writing!


~Bravo~

Response from StormySkize (Author of An Allowable Deduction)

Well, Shiv really likes Lucius. When I first decided to write something for her, I thought of a LM/HG/SS, but there just wasn't a way for me to work that into this story. I thought this was good way to 'showcase' Lucius without compromising my true HG/SS calling. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be posting the little ficlet I wrote as a thank you gift for GinnyW31 soon. Thanks for reading, thanks for trusting me enough to read what you thought wasn't a story about 'your' pairing, and thanks for all the lovely stars! 

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