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Magic in my Tree
Grace has Victory75 Reviews | 4.64/10 (75 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
How would you react if everything you had always believed impossible suddenly turned up in the centre of your family?
A series of one-shots narrated by Muggles whose sibling, lover or child turned out to be a wizard.
In the first episode, Lavender Brown's younger sister is completely delighted by the magical news that surprises their very ordinary family in July 1991.
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Grace has Victory
Member Since 2006 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 23 | 3 Reviews Written | 356 Review Responses
My family became hooked on Harry Potter in 2001, when my son was going through a stage of reluctance to read fiction. Now it is a family hobby. I am a psychology teacher from Birmingham, England. My husband, who is Australian, is a computer programmer and network engineer. We have three teenaged children and two cats. We are all Evangelical Christians.
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:P Just wondering,.. what did he use to pay her for the consultation?
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
One Galleon, swapped at Gringotts for pounds sterling.
Realistic story about the church of England... pity Mr Finnegan does not treat his first wife as how Christ treats His bride.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Well, I expect the Finnegans and O'Brien's are Catholics, and there was no divorce in Ireland before 1995, so he never actually married the Other Woman. But he was severely, devastatingly spooked by his encounter with wizards. He learned about Death Eaters before he learned about the "good" wizards. I wonder how any of us would react if that kind of thing were possible in real life?
No idea what your A/N introduced... but jolly good entertaining lark of a gem this is,... and how i reconcile the HP world with my rl Christian faith.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
The A/N refers to various other stories that I have written.If you're interested in HP and Christianity, keep reading: the chapter called "Redemption" deals with most of the questions.
Super engrossing!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Well, I was engrossed, so I'm glad you were too.
Such pathos and understanding!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thank you!
This is so sad, but happy all at the same time. Makes me just want to take Miles and hide him away from his horrid parents!! Glad there was a network already there for him to go into, but it doesn't seem far considering his brother's lack of prowess with a wand, but maybe that's just me reading more into something that isn't really there! Keep up the good work!!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thanks for caring about Miles. Some families just don't deserve children, do they? Surrey is quite a distance from Cambridge, so someone as stupid as Marcus wouldn't know where to start looking for his missing sibling. Frankly, I think Marcus went on to relish the advantages of being an only child. Thanks for reviewing, GhV
It has been a pleasure to follow your stories, and see how differently the fact that a child was magical/or not would be accepted/or not in all those very different families. Glad to learn you have to chapters more
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thank you! I'm so glad to hear the pleasure was not all mine.
I've thoroughly enjoyed your story - what a creative and interesting idea!! I like how each chapter explored different reactions to learning that a child has magical ability. Great job!! I could happily read more if you feel like writing more chapters. Thanks very much for sharing your story with us!!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thanks for taking the tine to write in and review,
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
. I have written two more chapters, but I couldn't find beta-readers, so they are on hold for the time being. Best wishes, GhV
I've been enjoying these stories a great deal, but this one is one of my favorites so far...because it's been my theory for some time now that magical ability would have to be the result of recessive genes. Even though JKR has reportedly stated that this is not so and that the genes which determine magical ability are very strong, there's really no other logical way to explain either the presence of Squibs in magical families or the presence of wizards and witches in Muggle families. Poor Miles...at least he managed to land on his feet.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Dear
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
,Thank you for enjoying my stories and for writing in to tell me so! I wanted Miles to survive because his family were placing their trust in magical power and money, but when those things are gone, surely there are other things worth more? I don't think Marcus ever amounted to much, even if he was still alive by the end of the war, but Miles could have been a happy Muggle.I strongly recommend you read this essay on wizarding genetics http://www.sugarquill.net/index.php?action=gringotts&st=genetics. A few of us at the Sugar Quill collaborated over it, but Shinelikestars did most of the work and pulled it all together out of her professional knowledge. Briefly, the theory is that magic is originally a recessive gene, but when a person is a wizard, this releases enzymes that alter the structure of the original gene and make it dominant. SLS had other theories that explain why half-bloods never pass on their non-magical zygotes and why the magical gene needs to be actually damaged before there can be a Squib.Your interest has brightened my day. Regards, GhV
Response from MlleGigi (Reviewer)
If I'm not mistaken, isn't Marcus Flint the one who -- as a result of an apparent oversight or episode of forgetfulness on JKR's part -- apparently remained at Hogwarts longer than he should have? If he was "held back" one year as students here in the United States sometimes are when they don't do well academically, then Marcus indeed might not amount to much!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Yes, this is the origin of the fandom term "Flint" for mistake. A reader asked how Marcus Flint could be in Y6 in 1991 yet still at Hogwarts in 1993, and JKR ad-libbed that he had to do a year again. Later her editor changed the text of PS to make Marcus only Y5, but I think JKR regretted this change. The readers don't like Marcus Flint and are very happy to have him too stupid to pass his exams. In a subsequent interview, JKR admitted, "I'd rather believe that he made a mistake than that I did." In my story, Marcus (= "belonging to Mars," the god of war) has the magical power, but it's Miles (= "mild") who has the brains.
Oh, this one is heartbreaking! I'm glad Miles landed on his feet. Madam Podmore is a lovely lady.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
There was no nice way to tell this story, was there? But in the end, Miles is the only Flint who can truly survive. Take away money, blood status and magical power, and the others are revealed as pretty pathetic. Thanks for your long and faithful reviewing!
Sobering, but ultimately uplifting. Nice touches, using the Cresswells and Stonewall High!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thank you! The distaste can definitely go both ways, can't it?
What a sweet story of sisterly affection. I'm glad that Ernie's sister was able to help. Lovely.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thank you! Magic can't do much to alleviate poverty, but it has to be able to do something, doesn't it?
I checked Hearthlinks- they killed Louise? :( :( :(Stupid Death Eaters. A very well written chapter, but now I'm sad that Louise dies.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
She dies of tuberculosis in the Snatchers' prison. It seems that nothing could undo the fragility of her early years. I'm sad too - by the time I'd finished this, I almost wanted to change the ending of Hearthlinks!
Hehe, I hoped that would be the case! I assume she didn't manifest for so long because Sophie took charge. Very sad background, but I liked how sensible and maturely she came across.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Dear
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
, Actually Louise manifested earlier than she realised. She was the one who lit the fire that took hold of the whole house (although the reader couldn't know that), and Sophie wasn't able to deal with the bailiffs until Louise came to join forces (which you might have noticed if you knew what to look for). But Sophie probably made a good head of family, and Louise had indeed developed a pattern of relying on her big sister to do everything. Thanks for writing in, GhV
Very interesting! I liked this POV because it wasn't when she found out about Terry being a wizard, though we find out about her views as she responds to the Pastor. I also enjoyed that the Pastor was critical of her parents for not being Christians, yet their open and accepting attitude was more in line with Christ's message than his. It was nice to see, albeit only a glimpse, parents who truly accept their children for who they are, even if they don't totally understand or follow their choices, and the neat parallel of religion and wizardry.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Dear
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
, Yes, I feel I've now done to death the theme of "the day we all found out..." Whatever the Boots might have felt at first, they are now used to Terry being a wizard, and this story is about the issues of living with it. As you point out, for the parents it's not so different from having to live with his being a Christian. Fortunately Britain doesn't have too many crackpot pastors like Ewald, but it only takes a small amount of crooked thinking to rock the boat. Thanks for reviewing, GhV
This is a wonderfully imaginative series. I've read and enjoyed Lavender's and Hermione's chapter. The girls are so different, yet so perfectly suited to Hogwarts. Very fun.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thank you! More different characters are coming up.
This was actually a story idea I had for some time. How does a Muggle react when discovering a family member, partner or child, to be a wizard. But I’m a reader not a writer. And you did much better and much more and in depth, than I would ever have been able to. Complimenti!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Thank you! But I'm not so sure you couldn't write - you just need an idea that's fighting its way out of your mind. I'm sure there are enough ideas (and more) to go around all of us writers, so I hope to see something by you soon.
This story is both bittersweet and funny, and really puts into perspective the utility of magic in human (personal) affairs. Thank you!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Utility or futility? Let's hope Linda has a better side, even if Derek can't think about it today. Thanks for writing in, GhV
Explaining to the family and friends, especially those predisposed to misunderstand, has got to be the worst part. Poor Lucy, having to explain something she can't possibly understand herself! Is her name inspired by Lucy from Narnia?
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Fortunately she won't have to explain too often, as most Muggles won't think to ask!To be honest, I named her in a hurry; I just wanted a Latin name to complement "Terry". But Lucy (= light, as you doubtless know) works rather well in this case.
That's so sweet, and so typical. It's rarely a big thing that causes romance to fade; more often it's a lot of little things piling on.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Selfishness never helps, does it? It wasn't until I reached the end of the writing that I realised this couple were probably going to stay together regardless. Thanks for reviewing.
Nicely done! I can only imagine how many letters Pastor Evald has written to John Granger over the years...
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
What a shame that the book Lucy mentions will never exist in her world...
That was another brilliant addition! It was a sad state of affairs for all involved, though Seamus`s father made the best decision he thought possible. The details about wizarding life in Ireland was also fascinating. Thank you!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Tenoh, you can thank Rory for the local colour. Niall didn't necessarily make the "right" decision, but was it really any worse than Maeve's decision to drop out of the resistance? The moral of this story is that Lord Voldemort destroys lives.
Response from tenoh27 (Reviewer)
You are certainly right about Niall`s decision (and Maeve`s), but while cowardly, I won`t say that I blame him for it, as he thought he made the best decision there was to make for himself and those he loved.After all, not every is like Hermione (or Luna, Neville and others) and her unwavering loyalty, devotion and courage. (And I suppose Seamus was sorted into Gryffindor for a reason). ;)LV certainly destroyed many lives, but which megalomaniac doesn`t?This series of stories has really been very illuminating, thanks again.
Aw, just a normal family with the same old problems despite magic! This had a real feelgood factor even though he was complaining. I think it's because it was obvious that he loves her and his family despite his irritations, and he doesn't really have anything against magic. Still really enjoying this fic.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Yes, just normal! The real problems here have nothing to do with magic. I'm glad I made you feel good, because I was out of sympathy wtih Linda by the end of the wrting. Now you mention it, however, she probably does have a better side that he's simply not talking about today.
Wow, that was a brilliant chapter. I'd wondered about Seamus' parents, so it's good to see background on him, but sad the way it turned out. It's a shame that Niall sees things the way he does, he obviously thinks he is doing right and lying to himself. You raise an interesting point about electricity, phones etc. It wouldn't have been unusual in 1970s Ireland, particularly in rural areas, to not have a phone and even electric - when my parents were courting they had to go to the nearest phone box to chat, for example. It's reasonable that Niall wouldn't have questioned the lack of these things then. How would it be explained to a muggle now though? Even in the late 90s, you might explain not having a mobile but no tv?!! Looking forward to the next few spouse stories :)
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Dear
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
,I'm actually not sure of the canon background to Seamus's parents. We never see his father but there's no scene where we could see him (Muggles cannot enter Hogwarts or go to the Quidditch World Cup). However, he doesn't seem to have much authority over the household; Seamus only ever talks about his mother; so I tentatively conclude that the father isn't there.I thought the "nasty shock" had to be something more than "I don't like magic," and once I realised that the O'Briens were related to the Goyles, it was obvious how Mrs Finnigan developed her attitudes. Of course Niall was deceiving himself. It would have been so much better if he'd stayed. What makes the canon material a story is that Seamus was braver than both his parents. I like to think he was reconciled to his father one day.Interesting observation about electricity. My parents in central England didn't have a telephone until 1973, and this was unusual. I don't like TV and I didn't have one in my married home until 2006, which was a great talking-point among our acquaintances. Rory, who found many mistakes in my original draft, didn't question this part; I don't know if it makes a difference that Patrick & Brigit Moon live in Dublin and are a cut above the Finnigans & O'Briens socially. I assumed their Muggle equivalents would have telephone & TV, even though I picture Tulsk as a near-medieval village. I think the moral here is that these cultural details need to be checked from someone who knows the culture from the inside - in terms of time, place and social class - and outsiders are unlikely to guess correctly.Thanks for writing in and for liking my stories, GhV
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
Update: Here is what Rory says about electricity in Ireland.On the subject of electricity: in 1955 we visited Inisboffin (island off west coast); no electricity. I can remember staying in a farmhouse in just outside Arklow as a child about 1958; no electricity in farmhouse, acetylene gas plant fuelled by carbide, but they had telephone. Next year we revisited and electricity had come. Arklow is a major town about 40 miles south of Dublin; it had electricity before 1958, but its hinterland didn't until 1959. By the time I went to university in 1963 almost all areas apart from the remotest seemed to have had electricity and entire rural electrification scheme was closed in 1979 as complete. Every town would have had a phone kiosk, or a payphone in the post office or local pub from the early 60s onward at latest.So I suppose I Cork man would be surprised to see a Dublin household without electricity in 1979, but perhaps only mildly surprised.
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
Thanks for going into so much detail about your thinking and for going back to Rory for his views. I am talking from a secondhand point of view, of course, and from a mix of ROI & NI, so I don't claim great authenticity. I have spoken to both my parents about them getting electricity and later TV, and my understanding is that was in the mid-1970s, though schoolfriends from the town did have both earlier. My uncle who grew up the city doesn't remember not having electricity, and his family wasn't particularly well off. My parents didn't have a telephone at home until they got married in the early 1980s, though they both had access to a local phone box. On the other hand, I remember a neighbour of my grandmother's who got electricity put in by the council in the late 90s because they had never chosen to put it in themselves. I was also under the impression that though the government provided electricity lines, it was up to the homeowner to get it installed. So all this led me to think that it wouldn't have been particularly shocking in a rural community to be without these modern conveniences at that time, and therefore that Niall was less oblivious than he may otherwise have been considered. (Phew, sorry for the long response!)The TV thing popped into mind because one of my best friends spent her teenage years sans TV and it was a much-discussed topic, of the ''I can't believe your parents make you live in the dark ages'' variety. Teenagers lol!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
I go back to Rory? Oh, no! It was Rory who read your review and was so excited that someone appreciated his work enough to engage in a conversation about Harry Potter and Ireland both at the same time that he dashed off an answer to me before I'd even read your review myself! That's what I mean about the importance of conferring with a native. There's just no way that someone like me could be accurate to time, place and social class about a detail like that. But, yes, I take your point that Niall might have simply concluded that Patrick Moon wasn't quite as wealthy as the size/location of his house suggested and then not thought about it any further.
Oh, how tragic. Poor Seamus. No wonder he makes some of the choices he does during the canon.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Magic in my Tree)
There's always a reason, isn't there? Seamus's family has suffered, but that's why he makes the right choice in the end. Thanks for reviewing.