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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 How Ron Lost Hermione
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How Ron Lost Hermione

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How Ron Lost Hermione

silverdoe

31 Reviews   |   31 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )

Drama Video Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 82 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Variety Challenge first runner up. Ron does not realize how wonderful the woman he is engaged to really is. His thoughtlessness and temper cause him to lose her.

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Chapter 1: How Ron Lost Hermione


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Member Since 2007  |  16 Stories  |  Favorited by 32  |  180 Reviews Written  |  601 Review Responses

I am just a fan who likes to tell stories.I don't pretend to be an author and I may not even be very good at it, but I enjoy it. It gives me a break from real life.

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Severessa

WOW! That took a lot of work! Well done.

Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)

It did but it was fun. Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

Bambu

Oh, nicely done!  Your choice of images meshed beautifully with the soundtrack, lyrics, and judicious use of text to move the story along.

Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)

Thank you.

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Anijade

That was pretty cool

Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)

Thank you.

10/10

braye27

This is brilliantly done, and tells an entire love story in six minutes.  I liked the way you established the background and then showed the steps along the way that lead to Hermione's disillusionment and ultimate decision to leave Ron.All the while we are told that Severus is aware of her and her problems, and he is ready when she needs a friend the most.  His offer of sanctuary is given at just the right time, and we're allowed to see the happiness that Hermione and Severus find in one another.*claps hands and cheers* Well done!Beth

Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)

Thank you. It was tough to get all aspects of the story in the time frame. I am glad the song was long enough :). Thanks for reviewing.

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StormySkize

What an incredible amount of work you've put into this pieces. The photos and the bits of writing blend seamlessly to tell the story. The song was a perfect backdrop, for Ron truly is a 'stupid boy' to treat Hermione so abysmally. Of course, he pays in the end when he loses her. I enjoyed this very much.

Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)

Thank you.

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pookah

What a huge number of photos (and videos) you must have looked through.  You put them together with a good song, one that I am not familar with, but that fits the story.   clever use of pictures from other sources, not just the HP  movies.   Really well-done! 

Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)

Thank you. I thought the song would be perfect for Ron.

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