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Unrequited Love

1: Unrequited Love

Unrequited Love

KellyH

42 Reviews   |   42 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Drama Video Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 130 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Video based on Prompt 110: MLC. Yes, there was a Marriage Law but it proved to be a disaster.

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Chapter 1: Unrequited Love


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0/10

JordanneLeigh

O.O
wow. Wonderful job at this!

9/10

Darque Hart

I've never watched a video based on a story prompt before, so I'm not quite sure what to say. I think without the prompt I might have been rather lost ... but with it, I found that what I was watching was held together by the words. It can't be easy to find and place together all those little pieces-parts and toss in a few dozen words in print and have it come out right. So, with that I must say, good job!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks. And no it isn't easy to find pieces that fit together for vids. Tis why I tend to stay clear of them now. Too much frustration and fit throwing for me. XD

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Wow... just, wow!  The music was beautiful and rose and swell with the tension of the video.  The clips you used were incredible - the scene with Ron in the bath in particular - he seemed so despairing!  Loved it!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks! I thought the music was beautiful too.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks! I thought the music was beautiful too.

10/10

Noe

wow! you a filmaker be. Brilliantly chosen clips, dialogue and especially the music. It all contribued to a really tight, cohesive narrative.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks!!!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks!!!

10/10

andyourbirdcansing

Wow!... very very very gooooood!!!!

and the end... heartbreaking... who cares... uuuuuu

5 stars!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks!I always laugh at the end because I had to take AR's voice from Die Hard so I'll I can hear is the German accent!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks!I always laugh at the end because I had to take AR's voice from Die Hard so I'll I can hear is the German accent!

10/10

debjunk

This is very well done.  I like how you've combined the images.  They really tell the story you wish to portray.  The music you used also conveys the pathos, and yet a bit of urgency in the plot.  (Leave it to a musician to critique the music, lol.)  But really, an excellent choice.  I'm a big believer in music painting the scene.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Oh I'm a big believe in the music painting a scene as well.  Sometimes it is the music in movies that enhances the scene amazingly. Thanks for the review!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Oh I'm a big believe in the music painting a scene as well.  Sometimes it is the music in movies that enhances the scene amazingly. Thanks for the review!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Great workmanship on the video and the story was very sad but well played.  Two thumbs up.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Yeah! Double the reviews! But hey I got two thumbs up again!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Yeah! Double the reviews! But hey I got two thumbs up again!

0/10

phoenix

nice mix of clips from varous films to tell the story. I think it came out quite well.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks! XD

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks! XD

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

Very nicely done!  Loved the music in particular--it suits this melancholy tale exceptionally well.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thank you XD

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thank you XD

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

This is byfar my favorite.  This was a great movie.  I wish someone would write the story to it.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Squuee! Thanks!  I doubt anyone would would write this story. *whispers* They like happy endings ;)

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Squuee! Thanks!  I doubt anyone would would write this story. *whispers* They like happy endings ;)

10/10

jcrowell

That was amazing...the videos went together smoothly and the music was a perfect choice...The dialogue used made it all the more powerful!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks! I'm glad that you thought that!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks! I'm glad that you thought that!

0/10

kimjo2

wow...how did you do that?  emotional and angsty!  thanks so much

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

No, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

No, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

0/10

kimbee73

Wow I really liked this. It was well done and told the story so well.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thank you!

9/10

Shadow

That was put together so well. Your use of those clips was amaizing!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thank you!

0/10

carley9

Very good video.  It fit together very well

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks!

10/10

SS Lupin

Excellent use of audio and video. I really got the story. :D

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Yeah! Thanks for the review!

10/10

snitchette

This is fantastic but where's the happy end? I've looking everywhere but I can't find it. You have to make a happy end. PLeeeaaase.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks for the review! It's Harry Potter of course there is sequels!

0/10

hgelman

Wow - great imagery.  I am always impressed when a story is told this way.  Great job!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

I am too! Thanks!

10/10

pookah

It took half an hour for my computer to download this, and then it played in fits and starts, but I am very impressed.  It obviously took a lot of searching and planning to put this together.  well done, indeed, Mystery filmmaker!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks!

0/10

klschmidt

Excellent movie.  :-D

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

 Thanks!

10/10

KMJ

that was fantastic! I adored it!can you please tell me what movies these scenes came from, Appart from Harry Potter of course because i am now intensely curious and would like to know. thanks for sharing this amazing video.

 

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Ballet Shoes, Driving Lessons, Mesmer and an episode of Robin Hood 2006. Thanks for the review!

0/10

tinytexans

Those were very lovely and very appropriate clips. I enjoyed it very much!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks!

0/10

sunny33

very cleverly put together!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks

9/10

StormySkize

This was wonderful. I liked the way you pulled the clips together into a cohesive whole. I liked the music as well ... very moving.Great job!

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks! I'm glad that it made sense.

9/10

beaweasley2

You have pulled together some very good footage.

Response from KellyH (Author of Unrequited Love)

Thanks!

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