The Begining of the End
Chapter 9 of 11
silverdoeAgoraphobia – The abnormal fear of being helpless in a situation from which escape may be difficult that is characterized initially by panic or anxiety and finally by avoidance of open or public places. As a result, severe sufferers of agoraphobia may become confined to their homes, experiencing difficulty traveling from this “safe place.”
ReviewedA/N: There is severe torture and graphic rape in this chapter. I am sure everyone has seen the warnings. They still apply.
In case you live under a rock, Harry Potter and associated characters belong to J.K. Rowling. Chapter title is from Year Zero, Nine Inch Nails.
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Harry Potter made his way through the Atrium at the Ministry of Magic. Once he reached the lifts, it was just a short ride to level six where the Department of Magical Transportation was located. It was still very early in the morning, and the office was empty. He leaned against the wall, waiting for the man he hoped could help him.
Several years ago, before he had left the Auror Department, Harry had helped the man with a complicated problem involving the illegal breeding of fire crabs. Harry had been investigating the disappearance of a young wizard child when he'd stumbled upon the man's hidden breeding facility. Harry had promised not to make a report as long as the man gave him all of the animals. He'd promptly taken the creatures to Hagrid, who had agreed to care for them until he could release them somewhere safe.
Harry closed his eyes and tried to relax. All the events of yesterday and very little sleep was making his head spin. About ten minutes later, he heard footsteps coming towards him. He opened an eye. Basil. Just the man he was looking for.
"Good morning, Mr. Potter. Are you waiting for me?" the man asked, his voice carrying a hint of nervousness.
"Good morning, Basil. I was wondering if I might have a few words with you."
A look of panic flashed in the man's eyes, and Harry decided to put him at ease.
"Not to worry, I just need some information."
"Of course, come in and have a seat."
Harry followed him into his office. Even though Basil was the only person who worked in the Portkey office, it was fairly large due to the amount of discarded objects in boxes that were waiting to be turned into Portkeys. Harry took a seat in front of the desk and waited for him to place his belongings in a small closet.
"What can I do for you?" Basil was looking more relaxed.
"As I said, I need some information. I also need to make sure what I am about to tell you remains between us."
Basil nodded that he understood, and Harry grabbed his hand and said, "Dissimulo." When Harry felt the burst of magic spread through him and into the man in front of him, he began the story of the two long lost heroes.
To say that Basil was surprised by the sudden resurrection of two of the Light's celebrated heroes was an understatement. He sat in stunned silence after Harry had finished his story. Harry broke the silence.
"I need to know if you can trace this Portkey." Harry held the small silver band out in front of him. "Snape used it to escape. I want to use it to find the person responsible for the disappearance and torture of both of them."
Basil took the ring and went over to a table that had several large maps spread out on top of it. He waved his wand over the band. It began to hover over the table. After casting a few spells at the map, he switched to a different map. Harry looked at the pile. There were probably close to thirty maps lying there. Harry ran his hand through his hair. This was going to take some time.
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Severus was lying in his bed in the Hogwart's infirmary, watching the first light of day through the window. His first sunrise in nearly thirteen years. He had spent most of the night in various stages of sleep or wakefulness. He found that his memories became clearer the more he allowed himself to think about them.
He remembered the day he first woke in that hateful cave where he had spent the last thirteen years. He knew that cave. It was a small cave, disguised as a bell barrow, at the edge of the Malfoy property. It was Lucius' bolt hole, known only to him and Lucius. Lucius had made him the Secret-Keeper for that place more than twenty years ago, shortly after the first fall of the Dark Lord. Neither of them had believed him to be truly gone, and Lucius had felt the need for a safe place in case the Ministry decided that he was lying about being under the Imperius Curse. He had hidden it well; not even his family had known of its existence.
Lucius had come to him one day and asked him to perform the Fidelius Charm. He'd told Severus that he knew that Severus had gone to Dumbledore and turned on the Dark Lord. Lucius told him he would keep his secret, if Severus kept his. Severus had agreed. He had kept the secret, telling no one about the cave's location. Only those present when the spell had been performed knew of its existence.
Lucius had only asked him once to reveal the location. He had acquired a new elf and had wanted the house-elf to be able to access the room. Severus had thought this a little odd since the elf would have been able to come and go using house-elf magic as long as Lucius was present in the cave. Severus deduced that Lucius was using the cave as more than a hide-out. It was well known among the Death Eaters that the only reason Lucius kowtowed to the Dark Lord was so he could indulge in his more sadistic hobbies.
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The elf was not in the room when Severus awoke, and at first, he thought he was alone. He tried to sit up, only to find himself bound to the bed. He struggled but was still too weak from his wounds to put any real effort into it. He tried to turn his head and look around, but his neck was too stiff to move. The skin felt tight and unyielding. The snake bite. The skin and tissue must have healed wrong.
He tried to utilize the little wandless magic he was capable of to release himself from the bindings, but it felt as though something was suppressing his magic. He had a brief moment of panic before mentally calming himself, only to nearly jump out of his skin when something, or someone, touched his leg.
"Professor Snape, are you alright?"
The voice sounded familiar. A student, but which one? She wasn't in his line of vision, so he was unable to determine just who she was. He tried to voice his curiosity, but his tongue felt like it was stuck to the roof of his mouth.
"Professor Snape, it's Hermione Granger. Do you know where we are?"
At least that answered his first question but prompted so many more. How had she gotten in here? Maybe he was wrong. Maybe they were not in the cave on the Malfoy property. If that was the case, where were they, and how did they get here? He needed answers.
"Water," he managed to croak.
"The elf left me with a glass, but I don't think I can reach you to give you any."
As she spoke, a glass straw appeared above Severus and dribbled water into his mouth.
"Oh," she said.
Severus was able to catch most of the water. It was not enough to cure his thirst, but it did help. If he ignored the pain, he was able to move his head enough to see the girl. She looked as bad as he felt. Her bushy hair looked as though it hadn't seen a brush in weeks. She had bright purple bruises along her jaw and over her left eye. She was sitting on a bed next to him, wand arm chained to the bed post. He could see red marks on her wrist where she had obviously been pulling against the cuff in an attempt to remove it.
"Are you hurt?" he croaked again. Damn, how was he supposed to convey strength if his voice would not cooperate?
"Nothing that won't heal." Severus hated how the war had affected the children. The wounds that he could see should not be dismissed so easily by someone her age.
"Where are we?"
"A cave on Malfoy's property--," she started to say before Severus interrupted her.
"Lucius' bolt hole? But how did you enter? This cave is under the Fidelius Charm."
"The elf showed me a bit of parchment that said, 'Lucius' secret room is a bell barrow in the far northwest corner of his property in Wiltshire, on the edge of Cranborne Chase'."
Severus realized that what she had read was the slip of parchment on which he had written down the location on for the elf all those years ago. It still did not answer how they came to be there together or why.
"I am assuming we are not guests and are instead prisoners of some kind. Do you know if the Dark Lord or Potter won?"
"I am not sure. The elf that comes here to feed me won't speak to me, and the last thing I remember is looking for Harry on the grounds of Hogwarts. After we saw you and Vol... the Dark Lord in the shack, Harry disappeared to the Headmistresses' office. Ron and I went to find him, but he was gone, so we started searching the grounds for him. I got separated from Ron. I was tired and had a few minor injuries. I remember stumbling and then getting hit by a stunner. When I woke, I was in the Shrieking Shack, I think. That elf made me read the location here and then spelled me back to sleep. The next time I woke up, I was here, in this room. I did not even know that the elf belonged to Malfoy. I have not seen Malfoy since we got here."
"How long ago was that?"
"Five or six days ago." She paused for a moment, trying to gather the courage to ask the question that she had been thinking about since she'd woken up in this room. "Professor Snape, do you think Malfoy is going to kill us?"
Yes, he did, but he wasn't sure he wanted to tell her that. He didn't think he could handle a hysterical teenage girl while chained to a bed.
Trying his best not to scare her or snap at her, he said as calmly as he could, "I am not sure, but I don't think he has us hidden here so he can invite us to dinner."
She smiled. Not a full smile but enough that he saw a light dance in her eyes that had been absent since he first woke up. She saw right through him and it seemed to lift her spirits. At least with him awake, she did not feel so lonely. He made the decision to be honest with her.
"Miss Granger, Lucius Malfoy is a sadistic bastard. We are in a place that only the three of us and the elf know about. It is warded just as heavily as Grimmauld Place. I am the secret keeper. No one will find us unless Lucius wants them to. I don't know what his plans are, but judging from our condition and the fact we are both restrained, I would imagine that torture is going to be involved."
"Thank you."
"For what?"
"Treating me like an adult and not lying to me."
"Unfortunately, this war turned you and your friends into adults a long time ago."
"Yes, it did, and since I am an adult, will you call me Hermione."
Severus nodded.
"Professor Snape..."
"Severus. If I am to call you Hermione, you may call me Severus. Besides, I am no longer a professor."
"Severus, I am scared."
"I know. I am as well."
She looked at him and met his eyes looking back at her. He was serious, she could see it.
"But I promise not to let anything happen to you."
As soon as he said it, he wanted to take it back. There was no way he was going to be able to keep that promise. He knew that they were both likely to be killed. The smile she gave him made it worth it though.
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It was several months later when the day came that he could not protect her. He had always taken the brunt of the beatings from Malfoy, mouthing off at him so he would ignore the girl and take his anger out on Severus. The sessions never lasted long. Lucius was usually in and out in less than thirty minutes.
He sometimes wondered why Lucius was holding back. Not that Hermione could tell, but Severus could. Lucius only came every few weeks to check on them. The elf, Mot, came daily to feed Hermione and tend to their wounds.
Lucius had evidently ordered the elf to keep Severus weak as it only fed him every other day. He would loosen the chains long enough for Severus to gulp down a bowl of porridge. The elf never took his eyes off him while he ate.
The first time the elf had come to feed him, Severus had tried to fight it. Severus had ended up with a broken arm and had not been fed for a further three days. By the time he was finally fed, it had been five days since his last meal, and he was incredibly weak. Lucius had not allowed the elf to heal the arm for days to teach him a lesson.
Severus and Hermione spent their time telling each other about their lives. Severus had not opened up to anyone like this since Lily. He quickly realized that Hermione had a thirst for knowledge that rivaled his own. He had always thought she just memorized the books and regurgitated the information back to her teachers. He was surprised to hear of the effort she put into learning about the world she had become a part of.
The day she was taken from him, they were deep in discussion about house-elves, Mot in particular, and did not hear Lucius and Mot enter.
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"I can't believe Malfoy named his elf 'death'. That's just evil," exclaimed Hermione.
"Lucius did not name him. I believe his father, Abraxas, did. Lucius has nothing on Abraxas. Abraxas was very inventive in his torturing of people. Mot was his greatest weapon. Most house-elves have a conscience of some kind. He does not," said Severus, still oblivious to the newcomers.
"Yes, but my father had several more years of practice. I am just beginning to learn the art."
Hermione squealed in surprise as Lucius strolled into view, Mot just behind him. Severus' face grew tight as he schooled his features into a mask of indifference. They hadn't meant for Lucius or Mot to discover how friendly they had become. Severus had a feeling that this knowledge would be used against them. He wasn't wrong.
"Do you recognize this, my pet?" Lucius asked, holding up a vial of purple potion. "You should. You made it. I believe you told me it was one of you best inventions. A potion that would grant total control over the drinker. Just a few drops a month and they will do whatever is asked of them. Brilliant, if you ask me. Did you ever get the chance to test it? No, you wouldn't have, would you? You would not have wanted to subject someone to the torture of it. Such a shame really. I'll tell you what. Why don't we test it now and see just how well it works."
Lucius reached over and pinched the man's nose shut, waiting for his breath to run out. When he finally gasped for breath, Lucius poured the dose down his throat and quickly clamped his mouth shut.
The effect was almost instantaneous. The dark eyes glazed slightly, and his facial muscles began to relax. When Lucius felt that enough time had passed, he ordered Mot to remove the chains. He needed to test it to see if it had worked.
"Sit up."
The dark-haired man did, swinging his long legs to the floor in front of him. Not enough; he really needed to make sure that the toy would obey him completely. Turning to Mot, he said, "Tie the Mudblood to the rack."
Mot quickly complied. Hermione was strung up, with her arms tied at the wrists above her head, her toes barely touching the ground.
"Now, we will see just how well this works. I want you to whip the girl, and I want to see the marks. Do not stop until I tell you to."
Severus looked at Malfoy. He tried to resist, he really did. Hermione looked at him and started to whimper when she saw Severus take the whip. He started to walk towards her, his eyes showing his remorse. He tried to apologize as he walked past her, but the potion would not allow him to.
At the first hit of the whip, Hermione screamed. Inside of his head, Severus screamed along with her. Her screams turned to whimpers after a few minutes. When her legs finally gave out, Lucius ordered him to stop. There was not an inch of flesh that he had not struck. Her back, thighs and calves all had red or bleeding welts across them.
Severus stood there, whip in hand, and watched as the elf untied her and laid her down on her stomach across the bed. A few minutes and several healing potions later, her back was healed. Not even a small scar remained as evidence of the torture he had just inflicted upon the poor girl. Lucius went over to her and Obliviated her. Wiping her mind clear of any memory of what he had just done to her. A small part of Severus wished that the hateful man would Obliviate him as well, but he knew that Lucius would not, if only to torture Severus even more.
Mot arranged the girl on the bed and secured her hands and legs to the posts. Lucius eyed the dark man as he slowly circled him. Since the potion had proven efficacious, Lucius was trying to decide how best to use it.
"On your knees."
Severus fell to the floor, arms to his side.
"I have decided on the best way to get back at you, traitor. A great mind like yours deserves to be wasted. I will control you until I get bored, and then I will kill you. Oh yes, make no mistake, I will be killing you. You see, although this lovely potion of yours forces you to do my bidding, I can see from the look in your eyes that you remain fully aware of what you are doing whilst under its influence. Perfect. You will be forced to remember and relive all of it. I think, in time, it may even break you, though I am not sure how long that will take."
With a nod from Lucius, Mot began to tighten the binds on Hermione's arms and legs until they were stretched painfully to their limits.
"Physical torture, as rewarding as it is, is draining, and though I enjoy it, I think that other forms should be explored. I have recently become interested in psychology. I believe you are familiar with the word, so I won't go into detail on these Muggle beliefs. Some of their theories on how prisoners react to psychological stress are intriguing, and I am going to explore, or in your case, exploit, them for my enjoyment."
Lucius flicked his wand, and the shift that Severus wore disappeared.
"In the few months you have been in my care, I have yet to break either of you. I have never had this much difficulty in breaking someone before. I blame that on being too busy avoiding prison to give the two of you proper attention. That is about to change."
Another flick and Severus' wrists were bound behind his back.
"Seeing how I now have all the time in the world to proceed, I think we will be trying this new approach. It's simple really. While your psychological torment will be remembering, hers will be forgetting. I wonder who will break first."
Another flick and to his horror, Severus found himself getting hard. A silver ring was added to the base of his cock.
"Some say knowledge is power. That may be true. However, knowledge will be your torment and your downfall. The absence of knowledge will be hers. For someone who craves knowledge as she does, I am sure the lack of it will damage her eventually. The power will be mine."
One last flick and his knees were spread open, displaying him to all.
"In the morning, your little companion will be gone, on to her new life in total isolation. You will remain here, in my presence, so that I can control you. We are going to see just how well that control works."
Lucius stood in front of Severus and opened his robes.
"You will pleasure me with your mouth. There will be no teeth and you will not bite down. You will follow my orders, or I will allow the elf to continue to stretch the Mudblood until she rips in half. Do you understand?"
"Yes."
Severus was surprised to hear how frail his voice sounded. He had always been able to control his voice and to use it to instill fear in others.
"Open your mouth."
An order, Severus complied. He was determined Hermione would not be tortured because he had not followed orders. He had created the potion, and though Lucius was correct that he had never tested it, there was no doubt in his mind that it would work perfectly. He would be at this man's mercy until the potion wore off. Sometimes he hated his brilliance.
As Severus pleasured the man before him, Lucius fisted his hands into the dark hair. When Lucius was close to reaching his peak, he began to thrust violently into the mouth before him, not caring that the man was gagging with each thrust. Before he reached his completion, he pulled back from the mouth surrounding him to come all over the man's face.
Severus was disgusted. He moved to wipe his face but was unable to do more than squirm, as his hands were bound.
"You were not told to move."
Severus flinched, anger and hatred expressed on his face. He longed to wipe the spunk from his eyes and the bit that was hanging from his nose.
"You allowed yourself to gag and it decreased my pleasure. That was unacceptable. For that, the girl will be punished. Mot, stretch the girl."
Mot snapped his fingers, and the rope drew tighter on Hermione's limbs. Severus could hear her joints popping as she was slowly pulled from the bed by the bindings. Hermione's screams echoed around the room until she passed out from the pain.
When she was suspended above the bed, Lucius ran his hands across her naked abdomen. He stroked her almost lovingly before he plunged three fingers deep inside her. Removing his fingers, he stalked over to Severus and wiped the come from his face before shoving the same three fingers into Severus' mouth.
"Lick them clean."
And he did. He hated how his body reacted to each command before he could even try to fight them.
"Shall I tell you something, Severus?" Lucius did not wait for a reply. "This is a lesson, not unlike the ones you teach to your students at school. There are two parts to this lesson. First, this lesson is about actions and consequences. You displeased me. That was your action. The punishment of the Mudblood was the consequence. Take note. Every time you disobey me, I shall punish her. The harshness will depend on the amount of disobedience. In time, I expect you to obey me without use of the potion, but we will have to wait and see on that.
"From my studies, I have learned that this is called conditioning. A Russian physician discovered the particulars. I am sure this was not what he had envisioned when he commenced his experiments.
"The second lesson has much to do with the first. You see the Russian physician used dogs as his subjects. That is what the two of you are: my dogs. I am teaching you your place in this lesson. I am teaching you what you are, what you were born to be."
Lucius paused in his speech to push Severus' face to the floor. He positioned himself between Severus' spread legs. Without preparing or lubricating him, he thrust viciously into him. Severus screamed at the sudden intrusion and pain. As Lucius continued to thrust into him, the blood slowly began to lubricate him, and the intense pain died a bit. Severus became aware that Lucius had been asking him a question. One his brain seemed unwilling to process through the pain and humiliation.
"What are you?"
Unable to respond, he heard a whimper escape his throat.
"You are my toy, my pet. You like me using you like this, fucking your arse, being ripped in two. You like being my whore. Don't fight it. You will learn to love this. Trust me."
Those were the last words Severus heard before he slipped into oblivion.
When he awoke the next morning, he was bound to his bed. His body ached all over. The feeling of dried cum on his face and dried blood on his thighs made his stomach lurch. He looked over to where Hermione's bed was to find it and the girl gone.
He struggled desperately against the leather straps that had replaced the chains. He was alone. Hermione had been taken to someplace else. He had sworn he would protect her. How could he do that now? During their first few weeks in this place, they had come to know one another. They had spoken of their fears and of their desires. He had come to care for the girl.
Severus decided the next chance he got he would use his emergency Portkey and escape. Then he would try to find Hermione and rescue her. It was the only way. They both knew that they had been among those declared dead. Lucius had been ecstatic whilst telling them that news about six weeks after they'd come into his possession.
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But Severus did not get the chance to escape for quite some time. The elf watched him closely when he came to care for him. The house-elf's magic was too strong for Severus', and the potion made him unwilling to even attempt an escape.
He later learned what had happened to Hermione. Lucius showed him when he dragged Severus to her flat and forced him to rape her. He then Obliviated the girl and returned Severus back to the room.
When the magic holding him began to fade, many years later, and the potion started to wear off, Severus decided to take his chance. He was able to finally reach the little silver band. He only hoped he would be able to save Hermione as well. After all these years, it was this small piece of hope that saved him.
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A/N: My thanks to Sempra for reading through this, time and time again, until I got it all right.
Dissimulo means keep secret. Thanks to CharmedForce for inventing this spell for me.
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162 Reviews | 6.09/10 Average
Stumbled upon this today, and it's brilliantly written. It's been nearly 10 years since you last updated...but I would love to know how the story ends. Even if you published rough drafts of the last few chapters, I think we'd all appreciate reading them.
loved the story, wish it were completed
ITS BEEN YEARS.............THIS IS A GOOD STORY PLWASE DONT LEAVE US IN WONDER.
I never knew that this story existed but now that I do, I'm hooked!! Please post more soon!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I am glad you found it. The next chapter is giving me some problems but I hope to have it up soon. Thanks for the review.
Wow! This story was fresh (though dark). I was surprised and glad when the villan was not Snape. I didn't want to stop reading, and was disappointed when I reached then end of what was posted. I do hope you will pick it back up.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
It is not abandoned just have too much on my plate at the moment. I hope to update sometime soon. Thank you for reviewing. I am glad you like it.
Good job. Constructing a back story is not easy.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thanks
Quite a good chapter with the good guys showing some cracks.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thank you
From a narrative point of view, I think the interaction between the 'good guys' in the first part is too smooth. The chapter is redeemed by the last section.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
hmm, I'll have to review it.
Dangit. I've read the end of available chapters. This was a great read. The drama and flow of plot-development was perfect. Looking forward to the next update!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thanks, I'm still working on it.
Great twist at the end of this chapter. The simple or 'obvious' identity of Hermione's tormentor pointed to Severus.
I would have still read this (and enjoy it XD) if it was. So far this is great.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
The original story had severus as the bad guy, but he didn't want to play that role and I rewrote it. maybe someday I will post the original, it's already finished.
Pobrecito. I'm wondering if Mot really did go insane, or if he had some sort of sinister scheme/command instigating his attack on Scorpius. I'm also curious as to what's going on with the girls. Poor Perdita. Talk about the ultimate in confusion, Hello my dear, magic is real and you can do it but your parents can't, on and by the way, your real parents were both physically and psychologically tortured and may be insane, we're not sure yet. Have fun at Hogwarts!Eesh. That poor girl.Fabulous chapter by the way. It hadn't occured to me at all that Draco killed Mot thus... "insert other plot points here"
Response from NoxSomnium (Reviewer)
Note: I was reading previous review responses and upon seeing that it will be done in twoish chapters my thoughts were, "Aww, Sad!" but my happiness was renewed when you made the Addendum about having been saying that for a good bit now. I have a horror of overly abruptly ended stories. :) It happens.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Mot was just evil from birth. There are always those few, bad blood and such. Perdita will adjust, I think. She has strong parents and her adoptive parents are supportive. I am working on finishing the story up. But i still feel it may only be 2 or 3 more chapters. Lots to do in those chapters so we will see. Thanks for the review.
Response from NoxSomnium (Reviewer)
Note: I was reading previous review responses and upon seeing that it will be done in twoish chapters my thoughts were, "Aww, Sad!" but my happiness was renewed when you made the Addendum about having been saying that for a good bit now. I have a horror of overly abruptly ended stories. :) It happens.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Mot was just evil from birth. There are always those few, bad blood and such. Perdita will adjust, I think. She has strong parents and her adoptive parents are supportive. I am working on finishing the story up. But i still feel it may only be 2 or 3 more chapters. Lots to do in those chapters so we will see. Thanks for the review.
In a way I feel sorry for Draco. He finally grew up and is now being persecuted because of his father. I don't believe for one minute that Harry would have treated Ron the same way as he treated Draco if the shoe was on the other foot.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
No, I don't think Harry would have either. Draco is always going to have that cloud of suspicion hanging over him because he is a Malfoy. He is trying to make his name respectable again. His father certainly doesn't help that much. Thank you for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
No, I don't think Harry would have either. Draco is always going to have that cloud of suspicion hanging over him because he is a Malfoy. He is trying to make his name respectable again. His father certainly doesn't help that much. Thank you for reviewing.
it would be hard for draco to admit his father was truly evil. great update. thanks so much and i look forward to the next installment.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thank you. I am working on it now. Hopefully soon.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thank you. I am working on it now. Hopefully soon.
I do do do do like so very much!!! I know how it is with RL getting the way--but I am so happy to see another chapter! Love the ending!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thanks. RL sucks. It would be nice if we could just sit and read and write fanfic all the time. :)
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thanks. RL sucks. It would be nice if we could just sit and read and write fanfic all the time. :)
AAAH! Clifhanger!!!!This is a wonderful individual and inventive story! Please write more! :)
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Working on it now. Sorry about the long delay. Thanks for the review.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Working on it now. Sorry about the long delay. Thanks for the review.
Wow! I just read this story for the first time at one sitting,I do hope you are one of those authors who updates frequently!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I do try to update often. I expect this to be finished in 2 or 3 more chapters. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I do try to update often. I expect this to be finished in 2 or 3 more chapters. Thanks for reviewing.
Just started reading this one this morning, and literally could not stop. Honestly, this is one of the most original, twisting, scenarios I've seen. How clever to put all the blame on Severus, then it's Lucius and the naughty elf! I am horrified by the torture, and hostage bits, but that's a good thing, isn't it? Shouldn't be pleasant. The secret port-key was equally brilliant, and fits nicely with many of my canon-based questions. I wondered if you'd mind saying about how many more chapters you were thinking of? I just want to know how many more times I've got to gasp in horror or surprise. Cheers!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I am glad you found it and it kept you reading. I think there will be 2 more chapters, but then I have been saying that since chapter 9. Thank you for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I am glad you found it and it kept you reading. I think there will be 2 more chapters, but then I have been saying that since chapter 9. Thank you for reviewing.
As with anything to do with Lucius in this fic, this is just creepy! To have someone that sick in the head hiding out under a Fidelius Charm, on the property. Lucius might not be able to leave the property, but he can Disillusion himself, move about late at night, he could attack Draco and force him to drop the wards. [He'd have to keep an eye out for that elf of Draco's though.]The Manor may have wards meant to maintain Lucius within, but he is hardly contained and helpless.Great to have a new chapter to read!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Don't worry, Harry has plans to keep Draco safe. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Don't worry, Harry has plans to keep Draco safe. Thanks for reviewing.
Excellent! Can't wait for more.Livvy
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thank you
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thank you
Poor Draco. He knew his father was bad, but not THAT bad!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Children never imagine their parents to be anything but their mom and dad. He is holding up well in light of things. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Children never imagine their parents to be anything but their mom and dad. He is holding up well in light of things. Thanks for reviewing.
Oh dear, thank you so much for continuing this fantastic tale! I was fearing you'd given it up... And what a great chapter it was. It's probably going to take a very long time, but I do hope that Draco will be able to live in peace from now on and that things will work out for Hermione and Severus eventually. Lucius, on the other hand, seems to be done for.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I never plan to give up on this. Never worry. RL got in the way of this chapter. Thanks for reviewing
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I never plan to give up on this. Never worry. RL got in the way of this chapter. Thanks for reviewing
Thank you so much for the update! I have been missing you, it was great to see that the story wasn't abonded. I still hope that when they get hold of Lucius, he gets to feel some of the pain he has inflicted on Hermione and Severus before they end his life. Then again, he is probably so mad that no pain in the world would make him feel anything but outrage for anyone trying to hurt Lucius Malfoy. I still hope you will manage to bring freedom to Hermione and Severus, meaning healing of their minds (I know they will never forget, but maybe so they will be able to move forward), regain trust and comfort with others and not at least get to know their daugther. Oh my, I admit that I long to read much more of this:-))
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I am glad that you are sticking with me. I hope it works ou tin the end to your liking. Thank you for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I am glad that you are sticking with me. I hope it works ou tin the end to your liking. Thank you for reviewing.
What a chilling update! This story has a unique premise to it and I'm really enjoying it! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thank you.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
Thank you.
I had just removed this story from my bookmarked list, thinking it had been abandoned. Then presto! It appears in the Recent category. Eagerly awaiting another chapter.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I am sorry for making you think I abandoned it. I don't plan to. Thank you for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Agoraphobia)
I am sorry for making you think I abandoned it. I don't plan to. Thank you for reviewing.