Pang of Contrition
silverdoe14 Reviews | 14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
Honorable Mention for the Potter Place Anything Goes Challenge. Lucius begins his first day in servitude to a new master.
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I am just a fan who likes to tell stories.I don't pretend to be an author and I may not even be very good at it, but I enjoy it. It gives me a break from real life.
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WOW!!!EXCELLENT!!!To bad this is complete---I would love to see how this goes for the 5 year sentence...
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
I am considering adding to it. keep a look out for it. Thank you for the review.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
I am considering adding to it. keep a look out for it. Thank you for the review.
For a minute there I thought Severus was a portrait, but then how would Hermione know about how his bits work. lol I loved it even more the second time I read it.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
He is very much alive, just no one knows it. Thanks!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
He is very much alive, just no one knows it. Thanks!
Very nice twist to this. Poor Lucius.
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Thank You
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What a fun one shot! Makes me wish there was more to this story!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Maybe someday. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Maybe someday. Thanks for reviewing.
this sly girl.she was doing her best in helping in his case to get out.ha. and he, being a slytherin didn't have the faintest idea that this could mean trouble... that plan went nice!!revenge tasts best being served cold.well, cold as the dungeon, cold as the dead person he has to serve for now. but he's very much alive.do you continue? or leave it to our phantasie?
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
hehe, Thanks. For now, it will stand alone. I may continue it in the future after I catch up on my other stories.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
hehe, Thanks. For now, it will stand alone. I may continue it in the future after I catch up on my other stories.
Oh to see the prissy Lucius riding a train and sweating his arse off. Bloody sweet picture to imagine. Brings him down a notch or two. I just knew it was Severus. He just couldn't be gone for too long and all the love between him and Hermione, very fitting. Awesome work, dear.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Thank you! :)
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Thank you! :)
Well, I think that explains why they worked so hard to get Lucius out of prison. Revenge is sweet!
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Yes, He should have seen that coming, being a Slytherin and all.
Love it! Severus is out for revenge I hope?
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Thanks :) Revenge is Sweet.
is snape a ghost, a portrait, or just not dead? this one shot would make a really interesting longer story.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
He's just not dead. I am thinking about writing more. Thanks for the review.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
He's just not dead. I am thinking about writing more. Thanks for the review.
this is a 'pang' of a story.
Mwahaha! I love the way they have denigrated him immediately. She calls him "Lucius" in the greeting, but one he vows she simply refers to him as "the servant". The loss of identity must be so difficult for him.It makes me smirk.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Thanks, I liked that part myself.
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
Thanks, I liked that part myself.
What do they plan on doing with him?
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
I'm not sure. I have a few ideas sketched out in case I decide to take this further, but for now I am happy with it as a one shot. I know, i can see your wand and the curse flying at me now. 
Response from silverdoe (Author of Pang of Contrition)
I'm not sure. I have a few ideas sketched out in case I decide to take this further, but for now I am happy with it as a one shot. I know, i can see your wand and the curse flying at me now.
It would be interesting to see just a bit more of Lucius' servitude.
yes!!! i knew it. i await to see how this will progress. thanks so much