Chapter Thirteen
Chapter 13 of 15
_Levicorpus_A game of spin the bottle releases some tension...
ReviewedChapter Thirteen
It was a tranquil kind of party on the surface, but tension ran high beneath. Hermione and Severus were at opposite ends of the staff lounge, shooting each other the occasional secretive smile over their beverages. Severus was deep in conversation with Septima Sinistra about magical theory. Draco Malfoy sat on his own, staring into his drink. Hermione, to Severus’s great chagrin, was engaged in conversation with Lucius Malfoy. She tilted her head back in generous laughter from time to time, and Severus noticed Lucius watching the way her shirt inched downwards with the shaking of her torso.
Upon considering it, Severus realized that everyone present was single, well, technically not. But Lucius hardly counted as married, as he had proved over and over again in their war days. There were Septima, Severus, Hermione, Draco, Rolanda, Lucius, and Lucius’s Mistress. They had congregated as the only people who weren’t ready for bed that night. And they all planned to stay up a little later. Minerva trusted them enough to keep up appearances. But Severus, having seen Professor Granger drunk, wasn’t sure that trust was entirely deserved.
Hermione plucked a drained bottle off of the table and held it up. Draco smirked at the skin her shirt exposed, and Severus imagined clasping his hands around the boy’s pale esophagus in a weak moment of fury. She was saying something to those who congregated about her.
“What is that objectionable girl doing now?” Septima asked snidely, taking a prim sip of her drink.
“Loosening up these prigs, that’s what.” He laughed, rolling up his sleeves as he walked towards the circle they had made around the bottle.
“Lucius Malfoy is hardly a ‘prig’ from my experience,” she said, a hint of pride in her tone.
He raised an eyebrow as he sank to his knees. She sat beside him and pressed her thigh into his. He saw a flash of jealousy in Hermione’s gaze. Holding her eyes, he pressed his leg back into Septima’s, challenging her.
Draco placed the bottle in the middle of the circle. “Someone spins the bottle. They give two options to the one it lands on, Truth or Dare. We know how it goes from there.”
He spun the bottle and it landed on Septima, the most unwilling of them all. Draco laughed, but Lucius looked sobered.
“Septima,” he began with a wicked grin spreading across his devilishly handsome features. “Take the neck of the bottle into your mouth as far as it can go.”
“I thought you said I could choose,” she said huffily. “But you’d doubtlessly ask me something equally revolting for ‘truth.’ Here goes nothing.” She then took it in three or so inches and then gagged. The men laughed disbelievingly. Lucius laughed loudest of all.
“There,” she said, embarrassed. She spun the bottle and it landed on Camille.
“Truth or Dare,” Septima said, narrowing her eyes. Lucius responded for her. Dare. His eyes glittered.
“I dare you to kiss Lucius.” She clearly didn’t understand the devious intentions of the rest of the circle. Lucius translated with amusement, and the two dove into a searing, passionate kiss. There was a collective sigh when they separated. Camille reached forward and gleefully spun the bottle. It landed on Hermione. Camille smirked. Lucius said ‘truth or dare.’
“Truth,” Hermione responded, eliciting a frustrated groan from Draco.
Camille whispered to Lucius who laughed. He then turned to Hermione and translated as Camille watched, intrigued. “Camille dares you to tell us if you’ve had a sexual dream about anyone in this room. And if you have, she wants to know who it was and what happened.” Rolanda toasted her in appreciation.
Hermione met Severus’s eyes tentatively. She bit her lip and looked around the room. “Once, when I fell asleep in sixth-year Potions, I had a dream about Professor Snape.”
He subtly licked his lips at her, punctuating the gesture with a quick raise of his eyebrows.
“We did it…” she sighed, “...on his desk.”
“How creative, Professor Granger,” Snape said. Lucius was translating to Camille, who looked disappointed. She said something to Lucius.
“My, God,” Lucius said, exasperated. “I can’t believe she’s making me translate this.” He sighed, glanced at Severus, and continued. “Camille says that if she had been dreaming about Professor Snape, she would have been much more adventurous.”
Severus lifted his glass to her, and she winked at him. Hermione spun the bottle aggressively and it landed on Draco. She rolled her eyes, unwilling to address him directly.
“Truth or Dare?” she asked, staring past him indignantly.
“Dare,” he responded, rather roguishly if you asked Severus.
“I dare you to kiss Septima. Mouth open.”
Draco smirked and crawled towards her. He kneeled and pulled her into his lap. She wrapped her arms around his neck. He eased his lips onto hers, and Severus was so close that he saw Draco’s tongue tracing her lips. They plunged into a deep kiss. Their bodies were actually undulating. Her hands ran through his hair, and she whimpered as he caught her bottom lip in between his teeth.
“Okay,” Hermione said, a blush creeping over her cheeks. Severus caught her eye and cocked his head to the side.
They separated, clearly having worked off a little excess tension. Draco smoothed his messy hair and spun the bottle again. Luck had it that it was Severus’s turn for humiliation. Draco asked the question, and Severus responded with the same answer Hermione had given. Draco took a moment to think.
“Well,” he said. “Since Professor Granger has shared her deluded little crush on you with us, why don’t you tell us if you’ve ever dreamt about her?”
“Never.” Severus responded, stone-faced. But his eyes caught Hermione’s and he quickly dove into her mind, imprinting images of their sweaty bodies moving together on his work bench. She averted her eyes, stifling a grin.
Draco was crestfallen. He obviously had hoped to expose a secret. Snape spun the bottle and it landed on Lucius. They exchanged questions and responses. Lucius asked for a dare.
“I dare you…” Severus began, casting his eyes around the room, “...to kiss Septima. Now I’m off to bed.” He stepped out of the room before he could witness anything forbidden.
Author's Note: Hello everyone! I hope that you have been enjoying the new chapters. I have really appreciated the wonderful reviews you have left.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Captivation and Obsession
255 Reviews | 6.53/10 Average
Wow....what a disappointing ending..............Ron and Hermione makes me sick. Well written though. God speed in your future efforts.
I liked this story, in spite of Hermione's lame ass explanation there at the end. I guess it's a way to keep almost strictly DH compliant, anyway. Not many will try to incorporate the epilogue so faithfully in a SS/HG fic. Thanks!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thanks for respecting the effort
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thanks for respecting the effort
there is nothing quite as cathartic as reading a truely sad story - i love it poor bless the snarky bastard
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
What a releif! I saw that I had a review for this story and was gearing up to hear another person say that hate it! I'm glad you enjyed it despite the sad ending. Thanks for your review :)
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
What a releif! I saw that I had a review for this story and was gearing up to hear another person say that hate it! I'm glad you enjyed it despite the sad ending. Thanks for your review :)
Good writing, but it was the worst ending I've read yet on this website. I absolutely hated it. I wish I had never read it, because it made me so sad that I fucking cried. D:<
I don't think your writing is shoddy and I don't think the story is bad. I'm bummed by the ending, sure, but, you know, Hermione didn't really get to grow up because of the war, so I think she's entitled to a little bit of confusion and flippancy.At least Severus is happy in the end even if he is still alone.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
That was the problem about adhering to canon! I keep wondering if I should write a post-epilogue but I think it's time to move on.
Please don't discount your writing. Sure, it doesn't have the happy ending that we all are looking for, and yes, I have wanted a good time for Severus and Hermione for more years than I can count...but look. You started this three years ago, you were different, we have all changed. this story tells yet another twist in the characters personalities that could have been a progression to a logical conclusion.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I LOVE YOU! :) Hey, though, I'm seriously psyched about this new story! I hope you check it out!
Response from maridesalyn (Reviewer)
I am looking forward to it!!!
Don't take this the wrong way, but I think a lot of people will be really really dissapointed in the last few chapters of this story and the way it turned out. It really wasn't a "Happily Ever After" story about Severus and Hermione staying together despite the odds like we are all used to. Don't be suprised if you don't get the reviews for the ending, either. It left me feeling quite lousy too, and I seriously thought of not reviewing, but then I thought, what would that prove? That I just walk away from stories I don't like the ending to? Yeah, I've done that more times than I care to admit, but you're such a great author that I don't believe you deserve that. I think this Hermione is very immature. I find her fickle and unsure of exactly what love is. No, she didn't "love" Severus. She liked him enough to find potential in him, but she didn't have the emotional maturity to stay exclusive with either Draco or Severus. And to flip flop to safe old Ron after playing with both of them is really odd. Draco as well, wasn't thinking with his upper brain. To bounce between Camille and Hermione and lead Severus to believe there might still be hope for him...then to go shagging with Hermione to me shows relationship immaturity as well. And where does that lead Severus? Let down again, by another woman he loved. Why did he have to get the short stick again? It really wasn't fair to him. No, life doesn't always have a happy ending, but I'd rather at least have sad endings be because someone was a prick and not because they were led on again.
Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)
I just realized I spelled disappointed wrong! My bad.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I completely agree. I'll be honest, I have a hard time standing by this work since it was done so long ago. I am working on a new one, which is in the queue right now, that I hope will make up for the incredible suckitude of this shotty piece of work. Here's the 1st paragraph of the 1st chapter:"The ruins of Hogwarts were bathed in the scant light of a crescent moon. And gliding through the darkness below was the imprint of a lost hero. The spirit flexed its growing permanence, feeling the unnerving sensation of swallowing boulders with its newfound form. It, or rather he—he had been a ‘he’ at one point—moved through the dewy, body-strewn grass tense with the memory of the extraordinary choice he’d been given."
I’ll be working with what JK left in order to create a much more solid, formed love story. The love story all of you fans deserve. I am so sorry that this one was put together so poorly. I hope I can make it up to you.
I kind of feel let down by the ending, but at the same time it makes sense.
Poor Severus getting the completely rotten end of the stick. But, I thought he was supposed to be dying? I kind of expected to find Hermione mourning and lamenting at his graveside for her shoddy treatment of him.
Oh well, thanks for sharing!
I followed this story hoping for a happy ending and THAT's what you give me? So bummed right now. yuck. I hate Ron and Hermione about as much as I hate Draco and Hermione so boo. Well written but very disappointed. That should not be listed under Sev/Mione without a warning on the first page that they don't end up together!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I think I would have a lot more energy to argue if I hadn't finished writing this 3 years ago! I actually agree with you. Shotty writing, shotty ending, cheap cop out. I was so struck with guilt that I wrote a new chaptered fic, which somewhat follows Canon, will give readers a more real Sev and Hermione relationship--one that is actually worth reading. Here's the summary preview:"The ruins of Hogwarts were bathed in the scant light of a crescent moon. And gliding through the darkness below was the imprint of a lost hero. The spirit flexed its growing permanence, feeling the unnerving sensation of swallowing boulders with its newfound form. It, or rather he—he had been a ‘he’ at one point—moved through the dewy, body-strewn grass tense with the memory of the extraordinary choice he’d been given."
So the story will deal with the idea that Severus has died, but Ghost Severus and living Hermione will fall in love. This will be interspersed with flashbacks, dreams, et cetera so it won’t all be depressing. The challenge here was to take all of book 7 into account (except maybe the epilogue) and still find romance for Sev and Hermione despite the book’s bleak end.
So I hope you haven’t given up on me!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried that the semi-Canon ending was too depressing! And please, please, please read this new Sev/Herm fic I have in the pipes--I am super excited about this project! It's coming from a place of understanding canon in a way that creates obstacles to their love, and then conquering the obstacles in order to make a really unique love story. It's all I think about! How strange to get a second wind for fan fic after several years away!
i'm lovin' severus in this great story!!
love the plot, so far!!!!
I've just caught up reading this incredible story! I hope you don't wait very long to update again. There aren't many readers who will journey four years through a story, let alone inspiration that will let someone continue while life goes on. Severus is dying. Draco is flitting around with everyone. Severus hasn't confronted Hermione about the tryst with Draco - even though they're well past the 'how do you do' stage themselves. So, what is going on with her? Is she seeing Draco on the side? Does she know about Severus' health issues, but is trying to act like she doesn't know and it's bothering her? Things need clarified, and I hope it doesn't take two more years to find out!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Bless your heart,
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
! This chapter took forever to make it through the queue. I will post the next chapter (and stick two chapters together so you'll get a little more out of it.. or maybe three... I'll see what I can get away with) tonight. The problem is that I did write this so long ago, and my style has changed so much... I did write a Bellamort recently, maybe I'll post that as well... Thank you so much for your perserverence! I hope to reward it!
I started this because I was intrigued, and saw that it had been recently updated. Keep going! It's proceded uniquely, and I'm curious as to how it will pan out. Who came to Hermione that night? Is Severus really going to die? Please, please, more!
Severus has no idea how to behave, does he?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
nope! :)
Long indeed! I had to go back and re-read the entire story because I couldn't remember what it was about.
Now this sad twist is my reward. How devestating. But Hermioine did fall in love with him, so he must believe in miracles, right?
Or will this be one of those "he lives on in his children" kind of fics?
Either way, I enjoy your writing and anxiously await the next installment. I just hope it doesn't take quite so long.
A lethal dose curse syndrome...with more than one victim? Hermione may well have received bad news herself. While wizarding HIPPA rules may be in force...a little exposure to research 'in the public eye' is only to be wished for.
The engagement of passion after a curse making things worse...the 'Dork' Lord's evil post mortum nastiness?
Your Snape characterization and his passion is finely drawn. Your foreshadowing subtle...till it isn't. I say, "Take your time with updates, if your story benefits." JF
"Lethal Curse Survivor’s Disorientation." This is terrible news. Surely there is something that can be done? A way to isolate the infection? Please tell me that there is a way.Perhaps Severus and Hermione can figure out just what is causing this infection and develop the magical equivalent of an anti-biotic. I know I'm grasping at straws, but it seems so unfair for this to happen just when he and Hermione have found love. I remember that when he was in St Mungo's just after the war part of his recovery was that he had been told that his passions had declined and he'd begun to read potions journals so he would be able to teach again: "The healers said that while in his coma, Snape’s passions had lessened. He believed them, since he had found an especial lackluster in all that he saw. He’d had to read potions journals for days on end while recuperating to be able to teach again. From what the Healer told him—“Well, the good news is that you can continue to teach. But the bad news is that Headmistress McGonagall may soon have difficulty keeping you employed if the disease continues to get worse.”—I can't help feeling that this Lethal Curse Survivor’s Disorientation will cause him to become confused and forgetful. Is this why Minerva might have trouble keeping him on the staff as the curse progresses? Now on top of everything that has happened it's Valentine's Day and he has to hear all of the snide remarks about his apparent lack of a love life. I'm glad that he and Hermione are still together and still in love, but it all seems so unfair.Please don't go so long with the next update. I love this story and want to find out how this resurgence of Severus' curse affects him and Hermione... and hopefully that they will be able to find a way to cure him. Please, please, please.Glad to see you back! I reread this story from the beginning so I could remember everything that had happened before.Beth
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
First of all, the next chapter is in queue! Secondly, all I can tell you about the disease is that it won't be the forefront of most of the story, but a shade of Severus's character. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! I will definitely keep updating.
Thank you for the update - good to have you back! :) Wow, what a twist. He seems so complacent and accepting of it. (Even though he's clearly not as unaffected as he wants to be.) Is he going to tell Hermione, or just carry on as if nothing's wrong? Do we have a time frame on his infection? Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
It is always interesting to have someone so strong and stoic battling with a disease. It has been a really interesting way to write Severus.
First it's so good to have to have you back. And second how sad. I don't want him to die, I mean so soon. Surely like the great potions master that he is, and maybe with a bit of help there is a cure somewhere, well hidden that they can dig out?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm glad to be back! And you'll just have to see what happens to our dear Severus... :)
okies loving this story
draco may have been her first choice but snape is the better one
i hope you arent planning on killing him off
and who the hell was hermiones visitor grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i hate cliffe's
hugs and chocolate julie
facinating story! thanks muchly
wonderful update! so glad you were haunted. thanks muchly
You leave us wondering what's up with Hermione and then throw in what's up with Snape?? Is it going in two different directions or are the two related? Eagerly awaiting more!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
You'll see! And an update is in progress!
Something is definately up with Hermione. First avoiding Severus, then not wanting to kiss him. I hope she is not just using him. Can't wait to find out what is up with Severus either.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
You are such a perceptive reviewer! I love it!