Chapter Ten
Chapter 10 of 15
_Levicorpus_After the wait of a lifetime...
ReviewedChapter Ten
“Oh, God,” she sighed as he picked her up to her feet. He backed her up to the wall by his workbench and kissed slowly up and down her neck, savoring the naked flavor of her blushing skin.
“Oh, God, oh, God, oh, God,” she chanted, the back of her hand pressed against her forehead. He had to grab a handful of her hair to steady himself for the persistent shivers running down his spine. Every time she leaned down to kiss him, he was sure he would die for how close he came to heaven.
Pulling away, she placed a hand on his chest to slow him. Oh, no, he thought. Here comes the rejection.
“Stop,” she whispered, still panting, looking a little woozy. “We can’t.”
“I know,” he said. “Deputy Headmaster and all…”
“No,” she said. He looked back at her, challenging himself to hold her gaze. “I just want to take it slow this time.”
He nodded in acquiescence and rested his forehead against hers, smelling the sweat on her cheeks. She was a goddess. He was holding her. The feel of her skin, the intricacies of her clothing—they were all things he never could have imagined. He was gathering proof even still that it wasn’t a dream. He held both her cheeks in his hands, and he kissed her once more, tenderly, longingly.
Their heartbeats slowed together as they waited. The tension was building though, and he could feel her mood changing to the situation. Her hips gently ground against his from time to time, the movements becoming even bolder as time passed. Her impassioned breath stirred him to a place just short of arousal where he was content to rest until she warmed up to him. He slipped a hand under her shirt to hold the small of her back. He worked his way downward, kneading all the way. He groaned deeply when one of her nudges was accompanied by a soft whimper. It took all of his self-restraint not to just take her through her clothes.
He moved his other hand to her chest. He swirled the pad of his thumb over the rosy tip of her breast. Her breath became animalistic. He felt like he was witnessing something forbidden as she keened back and forth under his touch—just as he had felt looking at her on her first day. He knew she was ready when she wrapped a leg around him, pulling his hips into hers with a deliberate moan.
Not yet, he thought sadistically. Not until you suffer like I have. He ground himself into her, the heat radiating from her goading him to lose control. But he kept all his movement prolonged and slow. Her eyes fluttered shut as he opened his mouth to run the tip of his tongue up her neck to where he knew she would shiver, right where he had felt so much heat when he saw her in the hallway. But even he couldn’t wait any longer when she put her delicate hands on him. She unbuttoned her shirt quickly and then shucked her bra. You little vixen.
He knew he had to do this the right way, so he led her into the next room and laid her down on the bed. He unbuttoned his shirt in record time, and she watched him with hungry eyes. She pulled down her skirt and yanked him onto her, sighing, pushing. She leaned against the headboard.
“Do you really want this?” he asked while embracing her, blessedly unobstructed.
“Yes,” she said, looking into his eyes steadily.
But he was not fooled by the strong facade, for he could feel her trembling.
“Hermione,” he whispered into her ear. He could feel his own hot breath refracting onto his lips.
“Please,” she moaned.
He gave her mercy.
The following weeks were riddled with stolen moments. He kissed her in a corridor once. She nudged his leg at the dinner table. She drank with him. She laughed with him. He spoke with her. They shared their thoughts. But there was never a word about commitment. His noticing this absence shocked him, mostly because before the Last Battle, he disdained all to do with the concept. It wasn’t that he thought he needed to voice it for her to know how he felt; it was just that he was unsure about her feelings towards him. It was the typical lover’s trap.
One Saturday night, they were reclined on her bed. Both were on the edge of slumber. They had spent the evening as most other free evenings and now basked in the afterglow. His bottle of Herbridian Ale lay discarded on the rug. The white canopy rippled in a slight draft. That was all he saw before his eyes closed.
He didn’t know how long he dozed before he heard banging on the door. There were three desperate pounds and then silence, then three more. Hermione sat up. She grabbed a handful of his undershirt while the other hand ran through her tousled hair. She jumped off the bed and pulled her hair into a high ponytail and put on a robe over her nightgown.
Three more pounds resonated through the room, shaking all the sleep out of the lazy lovers. Severus started pulling on his robes. He pulled up his pants and buckled them. He slipped on his shirt, then his frock coat. He fastened every button neatly and primly. He used her mirror to smooth back his hair. And then he turned the corner and hid in her bathroom after giving her a swift kiss on the cheek.
“If you need anything,” he whispered urgently before he departed, “call for me.”
She nodded solemnly and stepped to the door with a mug of chamomile tea in hand. He waited in the bathroom as he heard the door open. He heard a rumble of low voices. He heard the door shut. There were clicking footsteps. A breath of silence in which every one of his nerves stood at attention. The scraping of wood furniture across stone. Then breaking glass as her mug shattered on the floor.
Author's Note: Hey everybody! After one of those awful, painful fan fic breaks, I have returned to post the rest of this story. I have missed all of my readers, and I hope there are a few of you left! And I can't wait to find out if this chapter made up for my absence. I'm waiting for your reviews with bated breath...
Also, I recently received the sweetest email asking me to continue posting! I have been successfully "haunted" by PotterPlace users. And I got a beautiful banner:
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Latest 25 Reviews for Captivation and Obsession
255 Reviews | 6.53/10 Average
Wow....what a disappointing ending..............Ron and Hermione makes me sick. Well written though. God speed in your future efforts.
I liked this story, in spite of Hermione's lame ass explanation there at the end. I guess it's a way to keep almost strictly DH compliant, anyway. Not many will try to incorporate the epilogue so faithfully in a SS/HG fic. Thanks!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thanks for respecting the effort
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Thanks for respecting the effort
there is nothing quite as cathartic as reading a truely sad story - i love it poor bless the snarky bastard
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
What a releif! I saw that I had a review for this story and was gearing up to hear another person say that hate it! I'm glad you enjyed it despite the sad ending. Thanks for your review :)
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
What a releif! I saw that I had a review for this story and was gearing up to hear another person say that hate it! I'm glad you enjyed it despite the sad ending. Thanks for your review :)
Good writing, but it was the worst ending I've read yet on this website. I absolutely hated it. I wish I had never read it, because it made me so sad that I fucking cried. D:<
I don't think your writing is shoddy and I don't think the story is bad. I'm bummed by the ending, sure, but, you know, Hermione didn't really get to grow up because of the war, so I think she's entitled to a little bit of confusion and flippancy.At least Severus is happy in the end even if he is still alone.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
That was the problem about adhering to canon! I keep wondering if I should write a post-epilogue but I think it's time to move on.
Please don't discount your writing. Sure, it doesn't have the happy ending that we all are looking for, and yes, I have wanted a good time for Severus and Hermione for more years than I can count...but look. You started this three years ago, you were different, we have all changed. this story tells yet another twist in the characters personalities that could have been a progression to a logical conclusion.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I LOVE YOU! :) Hey, though, I'm seriously psyched about this new story! I hope you check it out!
Response from maridesalyn (Reviewer)
I am looking forward to it!!!
Don't take this the wrong way, but I think a lot of people will be really really dissapointed in the last few chapters of this story and the way it turned out. It really wasn't a "Happily Ever After" story about Severus and Hermione staying together despite the odds like we are all used to. Don't be suprised if you don't get the reviews for the ending, either. It left me feeling quite lousy too, and I seriously thought of not reviewing, but then I thought, what would that prove? That I just walk away from stories I don't like the ending to? Yeah, I've done that more times than I care to admit, but you're such a great author that I don't believe you deserve that. I think this Hermione is very immature. I find her fickle and unsure of exactly what love is. No, she didn't "love" Severus. She liked him enough to find potential in him, but she didn't have the emotional maturity to stay exclusive with either Draco or Severus. And to flip flop to safe old Ron after playing with both of them is really odd. Draco as well, wasn't thinking with his upper brain. To bounce between Camille and Hermione and lead Severus to believe there might still be hope for him...then to go shagging with Hermione to me shows relationship immaturity as well. And where does that lead Severus? Let down again, by another woman he loved. Why did he have to get the short stick again? It really wasn't fair to him. No, life doesn't always have a happy ending, but I'd rather at least have sad endings be because someone was a prick and not because they were led on again.
Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)
I just realized I spelled disappointed wrong! My bad.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I completely agree. I'll be honest, I have a hard time standing by this work since it was done so long ago. I am working on a new one, which is in the queue right now, that I hope will make up for the incredible suckitude of this shotty piece of work. Here's the 1st paragraph of the 1st chapter:"The ruins of Hogwarts were bathed in the scant light of a crescent moon. And gliding through the darkness below was the imprint of a lost hero. The spirit flexed its growing permanence, feeling the unnerving sensation of swallowing boulders with its newfound form. It, or rather he—he had been a ‘he’ at one point—moved through the dewy, body-strewn grass tense with the memory of the extraordinary choice he’d been given."
I’ll be working with what JK left in order to create a much more solid, formed love story. The love story all of you fans deserve. I am so sorry that this one was put together so poorly. I hope I can make it up to you.
I kind of feel let down by the ending, but at the same time it makes sense.
Poor Severus getting the completely rotten end of the stick. But, I thought he was supposed to be dying? I kind of expected to find Hermione mourning and lamenting at his graveside for her shoddy treatment of him.
Oh well, thanks for sharing!
I followed this story hoping for a happy ending and THAT's what you give me? So bummed right now. yuck. I hate Ron and Hermione about as much as I hate Draco and Hermione so boo. Well written but very disappointed. That should not be listed under Sev/Mione without a warning on the first page that they don't end up together!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I think I would have a lot more energy to argue if I hadn't finished writing this 3 years ago! I actually agree with you. Shotty writing, shotty ending, cheap cop out. I was so struck with guilt that I wrote a new chaptered fic, which somewhat follows Canon, will give readers a more real Sev and Hermione relationship--one that is actually worth reading. Here's the summary preview:"The ruins of Hogwarts were bathed in the scant light of a crescent moon. And gliding through the darkness below was the imprint of a lost hero. The spirit flexed its growing permanence, feeling the unnerving sensation of swallowing boulders with its newfound form. It, or rather he—he had been a ‘he’ at one point—moved through the dewy, body-strewn grass tense with the memory of the extraordinary choice he’d been given."
So the story will deal with the idea that Severus has died, but Ghost Severus and living Hermione will fall in love. This will be interspersed with flashbacks, dreams, et cetera so it won’t all be depressing. The challenge here was to take all of book 7 into account (except maybe the epilogue) and still find romance for Sev and Hermione despite the book’s bleak end.
So I hope you haven’t given up on me!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried that the semi-Canon ending was too depressing! And please, please, please read this new Sev/Herm fic I have in the pipes--I am super excited about this project! It's coming from a place of understanding canon in a way that creates obstacles to their love, and then conquering the obstacles in order to make a really unique love story. It's all I think about! How strange to get a second wind for fan fic after several years away!
i'm lovin' severus in this great story!!
love the plot, so far!!!!
I've just caught up reading this incredible story! I hope you don't wait very long to update again. There aren't many readers who will journey four years through a story, let alone inspiration that will let someone continue while life goes on. Severus is dying. Draco is flitting around with everyone. Severus hasn't confronted Hermione about the tryst with Draco - even though they're well past the 'how do you do' stage themselves. So, what is going on with her? Is she seeing Draco on the side? Does she know about Severus' health issues, but is trying to act like she doesn't know and it's bothering her? Things need clarified, and I hope it doesn't take two more years to find out!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
Bless your heart,
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
! This chapter took forever to make it through the queue. I will post the next chapter (and stick two chapters together so you'll get a little more out of it.. or maybe three... I'll see what I can get away with) tonight. The problem is that I did write this so long ago, and my style has changed so much... I did write a Bellamort recently, maybe I'll post that as well... Thank you so much for your perserverence! I hope to reward it!
I started this because I was intrigued, and saw that it had been recently updated. Keep going! It's proceded uniquely, and I'm curious as to how it will pan out. Who came to Hermione that night? Is Severus really going to die? Please, please, more!
Severus has no idea how to behave, does he?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
nope! :)
Long indeed! I had to go back and re-read the entire story because I couldn't remember what it was about.
Now this sad twist is my reward. How devestating. But Hermioine did fall in love with him, so he must believe in miracles, right?
Or will this be one of those "he lives on in his children" kind of fics?
Either way, I enjoy your writing and anxiously await the next installment. I just hope it doesn't take quite so long.
A lethal dose curse syndrome...with more than one victim? Hermione may well have received bad news herself. While wizarding HIPPA rules may be in force...a little exposure to research 'in the public eye' is only to be wished for.
The engagement of passion after a curse making things worse...the 'Dork' Lord's evil post mortum nastiness?
Your Snape characterization and his passion is finely drawn. Your foreshadowing subtle...till it isn't. I say, "Take your time with updates, if your story benefits." JF
"Lethal Curse Survivor’s Disorientation." This is terrible news. Surely there is something that can be done? A way to isolate the infection? Please tell me that there is a way.Perhaps Severus and Hermione can figure out just what is causing this infection and develop the magical equivalent of an anti-biotic. I know I'm grasping at straws, but it seems so unfair for this to happen just when he and Hermione have found love. I remember that when he was in St Mungo's just after the war part of his recovery was that he had been told that his passions had declined and he'd begun to read potions journals so he would be able to teach again: "The healers said that while in his coma, Snape’s passions had lessened. He believed them, since he had found an especial lackluster in all that he saw. He’d had to read potions journals for days on end while recuperating to be able to teach again. From what the Healer told him—“Well, the good news is that you can continue to teach. But the bad news is that Headmistress McGonagall may soon have difficulty keeping you employed if the disease continues to get worse.”—I can't help feeling that this Lethal Curse Survivor’s Disorientation will cause him to become confused and forgetful. Is this why Minerva might have trouble keeping him on the staff as the curse progresses? Now on top of everything that has happened it's Valentine's Day and he has to hear all of the snide remarks about his apparent lack of a love life. I'm glad that he and Hermione are still together and still in love, but it all seems so unfair.Please don't go so long with the next update. I love this story and want to find out how this resurgence of Severus' curse affects him and Hermione... and hopefully that they will be able to find a way to cure him. Please, please, please.Glad to see you back! I reread this story from the beginning so I could remember everything that had happened before.Beth
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
First of all, the next chapter is in queue! Secondly, all I can tell you about the disease is that it won't be the forefront of most of the story, but a shade of Severus's character. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! I will definitely keep updating.
Thank you for the update - good to have you back! :) Wow, what a twist. He seems so complacent and accepting of it. (Even though he's clearly not as unaffected as he wants to be.) Is he going to tell Hermione, or just carry on as if nothing's wrong? Do we have a time frame on his infection? Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
It is always interesting to have someone so strong and stoic battling with a disease. It has been a really interesting way to write Severus.
First it's so good to have to have you back. And second how sad. I don't want him to die, I mean so soon. Surely like the great potions master that he is, and maybe with a bit of help there is a cure somewhere, well hidden that they can dig out?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
I'm glad to be back! And you'll just have to see what happens to our dear Severus... :)
okies loving this story
draco may have been her first choice but snape is the better one
i hope you arent planning on killing him off
and who the hell was hermiones visitor grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i hate cliffe's
hugs and chocolate julie
facinating story! thanks muchly
wonderful update! so glad you were haunted. thanks muchly
You leave us wondering what's up with Hermione and then throw in what's up with Snape?? Is it going in two different directions or are the two related? Eagerly awaiting more!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
You'll see! And an update is in progress!
Something is definately up with Hermione. First avoiding Severus, then not wanting to kiss him. I hope she is not just using him. Can't wait to find out what is up with Severus either.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Captivation and Obsession)
You are such a perceptive reviewer! I love it!