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Potions Under Duress That Language He Has Never Spoken
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That Language He Has Never Spoken

madqueenmab

105 Reviews   |   105 Ratings, 0 Likes, 48 Favorites )

Drama Angst Erotica Psychological post-HBP/HBP compliant post-DH/DH Potions Under Duress 8,386 Words 6 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Snape lies dying on the Shrieking Shack floor, hemorrhaging silver thought. Here are a few key memories that Potter failed to collect.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: 1

Chapter 2: 2

Chapter 3: 3

Chapter 4: 4

Chapter 5: 5

Chapter 6: 6


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Member Since 2008  |  3 Stories  |  Favorited by 58  |  2 Reviews Written  |  218 Review Responses

Woman of mystery. The stories I write are the most interesting things about me.

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10/10

_oa_

this is one of the most beautiful stories i have ever read.

10/10

thickety

Good night, this is gorgeous. Thank you for putting so much into your writing, it's as dense and lovely as silk brocade.

10/10

Helena Rickman

"Tits to the table, Miss Granger. I'm going to fuck you full of splinter." Oh, my. One of the best and most imaginative things I've ever read!  Love it !

10/10

caitriona

this was beautiful. you're a fantastic writer. well done.

0/10

tenoh27

This fic is so bittersweet, and flowing, and flowing and...! Poor, poor Severus...
Thank you very much for a wonderful read.

10/10

firefly124

Desperately sad and breathtakingly beautiful.

10/10

firefly124

His desperation is so heart-rending.

10/10

firefly124

Short but steamy!

10/10

firefly124

Oh.  My.  GODS that was hot!

10/10

firefly124

Oh wow.  I love the way he's melding both her and Lily and himself with Lily in this.

10/10

firefly124

I've been meaning to read this forever, and I'm glad I finally am now.  Love the way this has started!

0/10

sapphire_phoenix

brilliant.

0/10

mhari dhu

Wow, that's all I can say. Wow! the beauty of the language, the masterful handling of the words, the emotion of sorrow you evoke. It is beautiful because of the ending, because it is human life and sacrifice and waste. Something finer from JKR's materials. Wow!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you so much.  I wanted to find a way to make Snape's death in DH a bit more significant than canon has it; I'm glad it moved you.

10/10

helshez

*sniffle* kinda sad, but really beautiful at the same time. Excellent fic, many thanks for sharing it with us!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you. 

0/10

MollysSister

Oh! I thought it was going to end on a lighter note. I thought his plea would be answered. Oh hell! IMPERIO Fluff from you next time sister!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Sorry about that...As for the fluff, I consider myself duley imperio'd.  The next one will have a happy ending. 

10/10

sunny33

Beautiful story, very sad but so well written!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you vey much.  I'm glad you liked it, despite the sadness.

0/10

sunny33

great chapter again!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you!

0/10

sunny33

a quickie, in a quickie chapter LOL

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Ha!  I hadn't thought about it that way.  I feel much less guilty now for posting something so short.

0/10

sunny33

there seems to be such an ethereal feel to your writing, it fits with the experiences being  memories

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you.  The death scene was so blunt and so quick in DH I felt I wanted to give the poor guy a prettier, gentler waning.

0/10

sunny33

amazing how much you can evoke just with his thoughts!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you.  I really had fun figuring him out for this fic.

0/10

sunny33

haemorrhaging silver thought.. that is an amazing phrase!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you! 

10/10

rlc

Sad, but beautiful all the same.  Thank you.

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you--I'm glad you found it beautiful despite the ending,

10/10

blue artemis

That was so sad. 

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Sigh.  I know.  I'm sorry.Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

LaiksMarei

Madam, while you have ended this fic on a somber note, it rings true and is surprisingly satisfying.I cannot begin to express just how gorgeously written this fic is. I commend you for showing us Severus' humanity and the facets of his relationships with Lily and Hermione. His journey was heart-wrenching but wholly believable.I shall definitely look forward to your next story and am adding this to my favorites as we speak.Bravo to you!!

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Wow!  Thanks you very much.  I do have a new fic on the way, so hopefully you won't have to wait all that long.

9/10

faula_tara

wow i wasnt quite sure how you were going to wrap it up but you did so very nicely thank you this was a little sad but sometimes life us a little sadthank you again my dear

Response from madqueenmab (Author of That Language He Has Never Spoken)

Thank you.  I'm glad yo liked the balance here.The next one won't be as sad, I promise!

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