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Potions Under Duress In Dreams
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In Dreams

1: Prologue

2: Chapter 1

3: Chapter 2

4: Chapter 3

5: Chapter 4

6: Chapter 5

7: Chapter 6

8: Chapter 7

In Dreams

shefa

99 Reviews   |   99 Ratings, 0 Likes, 68 Favorites )

Angst Romance Psychological Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 27,740 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Her dreams have haunted her for years. What will change when she finally remembers them?

Winner, Best Hurt/Comfort and Judge's Choice H/C in The New Library Awards.

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Chapter 8: Chapter 7


About shefa

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shefa

Member Since 2007  |  24 Stories  |  Favorited by 151  |  73 Reviews Written  |  944 Review Responses

Relatively longtime reader of this OTP, fervent SSHG shipper. 

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Reviews for In Dreams

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0/10

whitehound

Oh, yes, that's a really clever idea - to have her make a container for his soul subconsciously, while collecting the memories.  It enables you to set this up without departing from the canon scene in any way.

0/10

gersknightlady

I have read this before. It's a wonderful story. 

10/10

mick42

Thank you ,for a beautiful, moving story, it has been a joy to read.

10/10

mick42

It is good that Draco thought enough of Severus, to keep his body safe. Now Severus and Hermione, have a chance to be together.

10/10

mick42

Severus has a puzzle to solve, and Hermione is on a rescue mission. the wedding, or bonding, was perfect.

10/10

mick42

I hope the book doesn't take offence, at being droped.  

0/10

gersknightlady

Excellent story. I enjoyed it so much. An amazing idea and wonderfully executed.

10/10

wannabewolfe

*sniffle* I loved it!

10/10

ClayPotter

That was a beautiful story. I am in awe of your mastery of the English language.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Thank you so much -- I'm delighted you enjoyed it.  That was my first piece of fiction, actually :)

10/10

MollysSister

M you did such a wonderful job of describing their souls. I felt like I could really see it in my mind’s eye. Well done, this was a wonderful story and it is certainly in the sex magic quiz! Now I just have to finish it!!

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

*squee.  Thank you!  :D  Thanks for all your great work with quizzes.  And *squishes you for your reviews :)

0/10

MollysSister

How disconcerting that must be to see his person but with none of the animation. This is a really well done story, one of the best of the exchange!

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

I would imagine that Hermione was so torn -- It was her Severus, and yet, not.  *hugs you for your comments about the story.  There were so many outstanding stories in the exchange, I'm thrilled that you would count this among the best ones.

0/10

MollysSister

BINGO there it is the sex magic. Although maybe there is more when they replace his soul? I shall keep going.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

I'm sorry it's taken so long to reply to these, I forgot they were here!  Yes, indeed -- there is the sex magic :D  Thanks for your reviews, my dear -- I'm delighted that you enjoyed the reread!

0/10

MollysSister

You light up my life

You give me hope to carry onnnnnnnn

 Apparently it is my day to break into song.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Glad that the story inspires song :D  It did for me! 

0/10

MollysSister

“Bed, we were headed for a bed…” he murmured. I adore how Severus got distracted…

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

*grins... I did, too :D  *gets distracted by Severus getting distracted....

0/10

MollysSister

Getting to know you

Getting to know all about you….Are you singing that song in your head with me?

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Indeed I am :D 

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MollysSister

I am not surprised that Hermione has many issues bottled up from the final battle. Doctor heal they self. Have  I mentioned I am enjoying the reread?

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

She would have to be impacted by the war -- and it's so painful to try to be helping others when you are traumatized, too.  I'm delighted that you are rereading (and reviewing) and that you're enjoying it a second time!  *squeee

10/10

MollysSister

Oh Snape's pain is so fresh! But something has changed this time. Hermione is on the job ((insert uplifting music)) she will save the day!!!

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

He is feeling so raw -- and has been alone in many ways for so very long.  Hermione is on the job :D  Love the soundtrack!  Thanks for reading and reviewing this again!

9/10

harrypotterwanter

Yay, the potion worked! Since this is the end, I will pretend that they live happily ever after together. I wonder what has happened to the book. Was it ever returned to the person Hermione borrowed it from? Anyway, this was a lovely fic. I'm glad that both of them were able to see into the other's soul, not just Hermione into Severus's.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Thanks for reviewing!  I'm so glad that you enjoyed it -- and yes, the mutuality was really important to me in this fic. So, the fact that Hermione could see Severus and he could see her soul was really critical.  I'm thinking about a sequel, so these good questions may yet find answers!

10/10

purple dragon

A great ending to a wonderfull story!Could'nt have asked for more.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Awww.  Thank you so much

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

!  I appreciate your reviews and I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story.

9/10

pyjamapants

Thanks for such a beautiful and touching story.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I appreciate your review. :)

10/10

KinaKitty

Oh wow, this was so intense.  It was complicated, soulful, and utterly brilliant and I'm so glad I read this random story!

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Thank you,

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

!  *blushes at compliments.  I'm delighted tha you enjoyed it!  Thanks for taking time to review.

10/10

sinbad

What a lovely ending, it's so nice that they found each other and neither has to be alone again.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Thank you, Sinbad.  I appreciate your reviews.  I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.

10/10

irishredlass

Absolutely beautiful! Irish BUt it cries for a sequel

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Thank you!  Ooh, sequel.  Hmmm... maybe at some point!

10/10

irishredlass

But where is his body? It has been so long, does it take longer for a wizards body to deteriorate?  Well done. Itish

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Good questions!

0/10

sunny33

compellingly written, their souls transcend their physicality liberating them both at the end.

Response from shefa (Author of In Dreams)

Thank you so much!  I appreciate your reviews and am so glad that you enjoyed this.

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