Origination of the Contact Lenses
Chapter 4 of 5
SeventhMalfoy gets exactly what he deserves.
ReviewedDear Diary,
I've done it! Eureka! I made my contact lenses change colour! Usually they just hide the scar down my left eye with a plain hazel colour, but I got bored of hazel! Oh, I forgot, you're a new diary, so you don't know about the scar yet! Well, I have a scar down the left side of my face. It bisects my eyebrow, then goes through my eye, and carries on to the middle of my cheek. I got it from the Rogue Death Eaters who were trying to hurt Dad. Mum was away at the time, having an interview at Hogwarts at the time, and I was only four...
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”Effer! Effer! Where are you?” Daddy shouted for me, fear coming through into his voice.
“Daddy!” I cried back to him. “Daddy, they've got Crookshanks!”
“Effer, leave Crookshanks! Quick, Effervescence, get back inside!” He was banging on the door now, but it had been locked by Lucius Malfoy, the so-called leader of the Rogue Death Eaters trying to live in the past and pain.
“Daddy, the door won't open!” I was sobbing openly now as Malfoy grabbed the back of my robes and yanked me down the path. Then the door broke open, Daddy running down the path and punching Malfoy really hard in the face, then drawing his wand as he pushed me towards the house.
“Snape, we came to recruit; now you're going to have to die!” Malfoy yelled, aiming his wand at me, where I became stuck to the ground. “However, I'll have some fun with your girl, Effer, did you say?”
Daddy had been Petrified, standing stark still, not moving at all but the frenzied movements of his eyes. Then Lucius made a figure-of-eight movement with his wand.
I screamed out in pain as a curse sliced a deep cut through my eye and cheek. I fell to the floor, cradling my face and shouting for my father. Then the Petrifying Charm that held over Daddy loosened, allowing him movement of his head and arms.
He yelled a curse I didn't know, and Lucius disappeared. Whether he was banished or vanished I didn't know, nor do I care. Daddy ran to me, murmured a healing spell, and picked me up against him.
“I'm so sorry, Effie, so sorry. Your eye won't heal properly because it's been cursed with Dark Magic, but it'll only be a scar,” he said soothingly, rocking me back and forth.
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So that's where the contact lenses originated from. Lucius Malfoy's frenzied attack on my summer home.
His body was found 4 years later, 5 months before I went to Hogwarts. Thankfully it wasn't Daddy that had killed him, but a gang of real rogues who sought revenge on the pompous git.
Apologies for my language,
Effie
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Latest 25 Reviews for Miss Snape's Diary
32 Reviews | 6.0/10 Average
LMAO!!!!
Very cute! I'm looking forward to Effer's next entry.
haha... I can't wait to see what Effer tortures her parents with next!
I'm almost disapointed that she's not been put into Hufflepuff. And how is she going to call her parents in class?
Response from Seventh (Author of Miss Snape's Diary)
Ah, well that is still to be decided! And please do not be disappointed as the entry to Slytherin will not be without humour(I hope).
Thanks for R&R.
i'm so happy you are writing more of this; it's so charming. i liked her birthday presents very much. i look forward to getting to know more about her. the line about trying to find her signature made me giggle - i remember doing that myself, about a million years ago!
I am so glad you are continuing this story. The first chapter was very enjoyable and your Effie seems like a cute, bundle of trouble waiting to happen. And couldn't happen to a nicer couple. I look forward to more in the future. Thanks, JoAnne
Lovely girl. And about Slytherin or Griffindor you'll understand soon enough. But I'm under the impression that you'll be sorted in neither of them. That will be a shock for both your parents, even more it's Hufflepuff. :D
Too funny! Great job on creating a child's view of the world and family.
Old people are confusing.
That's just perfect for a child to say! And "eye-caterpillars" is too cute. What a great story.
How precious! you must write a sequel...or three. :)
That girl is so cute! I imagine how she will feel when she reread it ten or twenty years later.
That was really cute.
this was adorable. it would be fun to read more of her diary.
LOl, this was great. hope there is more.
Excellent!!! More Please! "Effervescence" - great name. You can't waste it on a short little drabble!
Response from Seventh (Author of Miss Snape's Diary)
I got really bored during my Chemistry homework, so I got out my fountain pen and trusted notebook. I couldn't think of a name, so when I looked down at my homework I saw the word "Effervesce" or something such as that. Efferevescence popped into my head, and I think of the meaning as "bubbly personality".
Thanks for R&R!
Response from Seventh (Author of Miss Snape's Diary)
I got really bored during my Chemistry homework, so I got out my fountain pen and trusted notebook. I couldn't think of a name, so when I looked down at my homework I saw the word "Effervesce" or something such as that. Efferevescence popped into my head, and I think of the meaning as "bubbly personality".
Thanks for R&R!
LMAO that was absolutely adorable!!!
This was so very cute. I do think that Miss Snape really and truly does need to continue writing in her diary.
This is very sweet and nice. I really love her first name : Effervescence. If that reaveals her character I pity poor Sev and Herms.
"Daddy's eye-caterpillars" ROFLMAO How funny! Cute chapter! Will there be more?
Response from Seventh (Author of Miss Snape's Diary)
I might write some more, but at the moment it is a Completed story.
Thanks for R&R
Response from Seventh (Author of Miss Snape's Diary)
I might write some more, but at the moment it is a Completed story.
Thanks for R&R
Very cute!
Tough Pygmy Puffs LMAO!!
Response from Seventh (Author of Miss Snape's Diary)
Ah hah! You found my 'tough Pygmy Puffs'! Well, this came around when I very nearly swore in front of my little cousin (oopsies!) and I had to think of something quickfire! Thanks for your review! Hugs, Sev.
she could try different coloured contact lenses , keep people guessing
Response from Seventh (Author of Miss Snape's Diary)
Well, if and when my other story featuring Effer, Different, appears on here, you will see she does play about with her lenses quite a bit. Thank you for your review! Hugs, Sev.
Nah, she's never a Slytherin!
she sounds more like a Hufflepuff to me, now wouldn't that put the cat amongst the pigeons!
LOL bed at 3pm