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Deliciously So...
Ophelia Immortal30 Reviews | 30 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
Hermione Granger is about to set off with her two best friends to find a way to defeat Voldemort. But even before she could start her search for Horcruxes, she meets someone totally unexpected...
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oh no, you cannot seriously do that!evil.please at least: post an update... you owe us this much.
Ciao Francy.Spero tanto che molta più gente possa apprezzare la tua storia. Comunque puoi stare sicura che se non ricevi commenti numerosi è solo perchè questo sito è meno frequentato rispetto agli altri (dopotutto la trafila che bisogna fare per postare è abbastanza lunga :P)Dunque, appena mi hai detto che il secondo capitolo era stato approvato, mi sono precipitata senza dirti nulla.L'ho riletto con piacere, e devo ammettere che ho notato un notevole miglioramento rispetto a quando lo hai postato su AFF. Inoltre, sono anche di meno le frasi del tipo: "She has poisoned me! How else could I be subject to this madness?!" il che va decisamente bene. Se nei prossimi capitoli tu riuscissi ad eliminarle del tutto, la storia ci guadagnerebbe in qualità.Come sempre è stato un piacere leggere un tuo lavoro, e personalmente non vedo l'ora di posare lo sguardo sul 17° capitolo.Ti prego! Completalo in fretta!Bacioni xxx
One little nit pick. Malfoy wouldn't have thrown his garments at poor Blinky. If Blinky took them or caught them, he'd have been freed, as Dobby was.Creepy story so far. Good for Hermione to use her brain and her body to overcome Malfoy. Personally, I hope it doesn't become too violent. But I'm not trying to tell you how to write it. Thanks for writing.
Response from Ophelia Immortal (Author of Deliciously So...)
Oh, I hadn't thought of that. But then witches and wizards who have house-elves, would never be able to give them cloaks or clothes in general, as we would do with butlers or servants? I'll try to think of a solution, but thank you for pointing it out.I won't lie, it does get violent, but nothing grusome, or violent-for-violence's sake. It's moderate, and needed for the plot. Thank you eves so much for your review.Ophelia
Response from pookah (Reviewer)
Actually, as I understand it, only the master or mistress (or perhaps a member of the family) can give a House Elf clothes. As I see it, a guest could hand his cloak to a House Elf, no problem. A member of the family, or perhaps only the heads of the family, would lay an item of clothing down and then the Elf could take it to hang up, clean, or whatever.
So Hermione's hats insulted the Hogwarts House Elves, but I do not believe the Elves were ever in 'danger' of being freed by touching them.
Response from Ophelia Immortal (Author of Deliciously So...)
Oh, I hadn't thought of that. But then witches and wizards who have house-elves, would never be able to give them cloaks or clothes in general, as we would do with butlers or servants? I'll try to think of a solution, but thank you for pointing it out.I won't lie, it does get violent, but nothing grusome, or violent-for-violence's sake. It's moderate, and needed for the plot. Thank you eves so much for your review.Ophelia
Response from pookah (Reviewer)
Actually, as I understand it, only the master or mistress (or perhaps a member of the family) can give a House Elf clothes. As I see it, a guest could hand his cloak to a House Elf, no problem. A member of the family, or perhaps only the heads of the family, would lay an item of clothing down and then the Elf could take it to hang up, clean, or whatever.
So Hermione's hats insulted the Hogwarts House Elves, but I do not believe the Elves were ever in 'danger' of being freed by touching them.
Honey that is the age old question. Why do people rape? Because they think they can. That it is okay to get theirs with no thought of the people they are hurting. Or the damage that they leave inside that person. The rapist is mental. Can't wait for more.
Response from Ophelia Immortal (Author of Deliciously So...)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, unfortunately man (intending both genres) has the nasty instinct of demanding supremacy and stregnth, and to do so and prove it to themselves, they will hurt others. Omna Homini Lupus... or something like that. Anyway thanks again for reading and leaving a review.'cheersOphelia
Response from Ophelia Immortal (Author of Deliciously So...)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, unfortunately man (intending both genres) has the nasty instinct of demanding supremacy and stregnth, and to do so and prove it to themselves, they will hurt others. Omna Homini Lupus... or something like that. Anyway thanks again for reading and leaving a review.'cheersOphelia
Oooo. That was so wicked. Very controversial but done well. And I like that Lucius was kept in character.