Chaper 8:The Value of Family
A Different Kind of Love Story
Chapter 8 of 15
fizzabellaA little motherly council and a glimpse of the next generation.
Disclaimer: The characters you recognize belong to the brilliant J. K. Rowling; I owe her an immeasurable debt of gratitude for her creation, a new kind of Camelot.
Author's Note: My beta reader sent back the last chapters of this story this morning, and asked me if I am excited that it's finished. I am, I'm totally thrilled in fact, but one of the reasons for my elation is the chance to work with her, and the wonderful, talented admin on this archive who has been helping me with html and other stuff. These two ladies, and my totally wonderful original beta reader have given me encouragement, support, suggestions, and help beyond what I could imagine in my wildest dreams. I owe them a debt of gratitude that rivals what I owe J.K. Rowling. Thanks to all who are enjoying this story:) I am going to try posting a longer chapter next time, also, and thanks for the suggestion.
Chapter Eight: The Value of Family
Potter's Hollow, Hogsmeade, Scotland
Hermione looked around sleepily at the sound of the door opening. The guest room was dark, but the hallway was well lighted, and she blinked at the sudden change in light level. There were two childish figures silhouetted in the doorway; one was her daughter, Rose, the other her niece, Lily Potter.
"Mummy?" "Auntie 'Mione?" The two girls stepped into the doorway and drew closer to the bed, smiling a little uncertainly when they saw Hermione was awake, but not up yet.
"Girls, it’s alright. Come in, I'm awake."
She sat up in bed and murmured 'Lumos' to turn on the lights, then patted the bedside. "Did you want to talk to me?"
They both nodded and came to sit down on either side of the bed, pulling their feet up under their voluminous flannel nightgowns to stay warm. Hermione looked at their bare feet, but didn't make the obvious comments about slippers. Instead, she scooted forward and hugged her two visitors. And that was all it took for Rose and Lily to begin to cry.
"Mummy, why did Granny Min have to die?" Rose asked when the storm of weeping had passed.
"Sweetheart, it's the natural order of things. We're born, we live our lives, and then we die. This phase of our existence ends, and we go on to the next one."
She swept Rose's curly red hair back from her face and pressed a tender kiss to her daughter's forehead. She wanted to weep, not for herself, now, but for the pain her little girl was feeling.
"We shall miss her so much." Lily got a hug and kiss on the forehead too.
"I know, dears. I And Granny Min will miss us, as well. But she gets to be with Professor Dumbledore now, and the other people she loved, who've already died. I absolutely believe that we shall see her again when we die. And I promise she will still love us, and will be glad to see us again."
"That's what mummy said yesterday; Daddy too,” Lily agreed. "They talked to us last night when they tucked us in."
"Well, then. We do all feel sad, and this first bit of time will be hard because we aren't used to Granny Min being gone. But it will get better. We need to remember how much she loves us, and try always to make her proud of us, don't you think?"
"Oh, yes, Mummy."
"Yes, Auntie 'Mione. You sound an awful lot like my dad."
"And Aunt Ginny, and Grandma Molly too."
'That's the good thing about families. We all mostly believe in the same things, and you always know what to expect from us."
The blessing of being friends with someone for a very long time, Hermione thought, was that you did have the same standards, and it made for a wonderful, comfortable feeling of security at times like this.
"Mummy?"
"Yes, darling?"
"Shall we have to wear black for a whole year? You know, in mourning?"
Hermione chuckled at her daughter's question. They had never discussed mourning customs with the children; Rose had to have found that old rule in a book someplace.
"Where did you read that?"
"Oh, this old Muggle book on etiquette.” Rose paused for a moment and Hermione knew she was dredging up the memory of the exact book. "It was by this very sneakily funny woman called Miss Manners. She wrote a whole chapter about funeral customs."
"I do remember those books. Grandma Granger has them."
"Yes, Mummy."
"Well, it's not the custom any longer. Your everyday dress and robes are already black, so you can say they're for mourning if that comforts you, dear heart."
'Well, no, I shan't do that. But look, Mummy. Show her, Lil."
Rose pulled back the sleeve of her nightgown to reveal a bracelet that looked like a thick black rubber band.
"I transfigured my old Muggle school bracelet, Mummy, and I did Lily's, too."
Lily pulled back her sleeve also, and looking closer, Hermione could see words embossed into the band. In bold block letters, the band said "Granny Min, In Memoriam."
Hermione's eyes filled with tears at the loving gesture.
"What we were wondering was whether this is alright for wearing at school."
"Yes, I think so."
"Cause we loved Granny Minerva and we shall miss her so much."
Hermione looked into their earnest tender faces and felt her own heart breaking for them.
"I know Granny Minerva would be honored that you would wear them as a remembrance of her."
Lily and Rose both nodded their heads. That, it seemed, was all they wanted to know, for they began to fidget. A moment later they excused themselves.
"We need to get dressed for school. Daddy told us last night that he would take us back to Hogwarts this morning, but we would need to get ready early, so we don't make him late."
"Of course. Off with you both, I need to get up and get ready, myself."
Both girls gave her another hug and left the guest room. Hermione got slowly out of bed and made her way to the bathroom, wanting a long hot bath, but deciding she needed to settle for a bracing shower, instead. She would save the bath for tonight when she needed to relax and sleep. It didn’t take a talent for Divination to predict that it would be a difficult day.
~OoO~
Prompt Information
This story was written for the Potter Place Deathly Hallows Challenge.
I used prompts 6 and 8 but modified them.
The original prompts:
6. The kids leave after Snape dies. He sits up and realizes he is a ghost.
8. As Hermione, Ron, and Harry watch Snape die, Hermione is devastated because she has been secretly in love with him. Waiting until after the war is won, Hermione gets her Time Turner and goes back a year. She confronts Snape and tells him what will happen. They take the year to come up with a potion that will react once the Dark Lord and the gang leave the Shrieking Shack. Since Hermione cannot be seen by her other self, she must stay with Snape in the dungeons until the day of the battle. I think it would be kind of cool is she were to fight during the battle as herself and her time turner self.)
My modifications: The story is written about a portrait and not a ghost. I only borrowed Hermione being in love with Severus from prompt 8.
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Different Kind of Love Story
230 Reviews | 6.63/10 Average
So lovely, thank you.
Hermione did the right thing cutting Draco loose, he desevers someone that loves him with all her heart, and Hermione's heart belongs to Severus.
Very sad, so near and yet so far apart.
They are getting on very well, aren't they.
Hermione is well rid of Ron, he is a selfish prat. Somone should tell Caroline, If they will cheat with you they will cheat on you.
Ron does not appear to be very... affectionate, towards Hermione, does he?
Sweet kids, Minerva would be so proud.
They have all grown up, and can laugh at the past, Ron is an unknown quantity, we will see in the next chapter.
It's always hard untill the funeral is over, then the grieving can start.
" tolerably well" I never thorught to hear such effusive praise from Severus Snape, death must have mellowed him.
I love the easy frendship between Draco and Hermione, nice to see after all the drama of their school days.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
It was one of my favorite parts of the story. It was enthralling to watch as it came up on the screen as it was entirely unplanned. Thank you for taking the time to review:)
So sad to see Minerva passing, all lives must come to an end but it is still sad. Draco is making himself at home I see.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Very much so. But you will see that he has grown up rather nicely:)
Together, at last.
A good, if sad beginning.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much.
That was a beautiful love story.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you very much.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you very much.
How sad, but I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. :)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:) I hope you enjoy it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:) I hope you enjoy it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
This is so sweet! I loved it, thank you!
I have read this story twice. It is lovely
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm honored:) thank you so much.Warm regards,Fizzabella
so sweet
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you. It was a strange story to write but I enjoyed it, and it's wonderful to know you enjoyed it.Warm regards,Fizzabella
okay now I'm all teary. Excellent, totally captures how I feel about his death. I just wish it hadn't turned out that way. Glad he can enjoy his portrait form and hermione's company.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so happy you enjoyed the story:) Thank you for letting me know:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
I'm so glad you were featured in the Live Journal sshg_quiz this weekend. I've enjoyed reading your Headmistress Hermione Granger story. It was very sweet and romantic. I loved it.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so honored:) I use the quiz to look for stories I haven't read, also:) I'm delighted that you enjoy my story, and honored that you took the time to let me know:)Thanks so much,Warm regards,Fizzabella
What a lovely story. Very touching ending. If I may offer some constructive criticism? I almost didn't read the story because the summary was kind of rambling and wordy. I'm glad that I decided to give the story a try anyway. You may want to consider re-working the summary a bit. Other than that, you've done a wonderful job.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I appreciate the criticism, I didn't know we were allowed to do that:)I will condense it down, then:)And I am so glad you enjoyed the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella:)
Thank you for a beautiful story!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so happy you enjoyed it:) Thank you for taking the time to comment:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Sweet.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I want to thank you for your reviews:) Your comments on other chapters made me very happy, cause I could tell you were enjoying the story:)Warmest regards,Fizzabella
Aww! What a beautiful ending! I really enjoyed your story!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:)-NBV