Chaper 5
A Different Kind of Love Story
Chapter 5 of 15
fizzabellaDeathly Hallows Prompts 6 and 8.
6. The kids leave after Snape dies. He sits up and realizes he is a ghost. (I changed this to a portrait instead of a ghost.)
8. As Hermione, Ron, and Harry watch Snape die, Hermione is devastated because she has been secretly in love with him. (The prompt calls for Hermione to use a Time-Turner to go back and rescue Severus, but I wanted to comply with the book and see if I could write a story where Hermione develops a strong, loving friendship with the Severus Snape she meets as a portrait many years later.)
Time: After the Epilogue. Place: Hogwarts. Hermione is teaching at Hogwarts and is Deputy Headmistress to Minerva McGonagall. Her children, Rose and Hugo, live at Hogwarts with her; her husband Ron manages the All-England Quidditch League. When Minerva McGonagall dies, Hermione is appointed Headmistress and moves in to the Head’s office.
Chapter Five
Office of the Headmistress, Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, Hogsmeade, Scotland.
In the empty Headmistress' office, the portraits on the walls woke up and began to speak quietly amongst themselves.
"No good can come of it! A Muggle-Born witch to be head of school! Mark my words, no good will come of it."
"Which is it that bothers you more, Salazar; the witch part or the Muggle-born part?" That was Dilys Derwent, former Headmistress and noted Healer.
"In my day, the only witches who taught outside their homes were witches who couldn't find themselves a decent wizard. And I certainly didn't have any Muggle-born in MY house!"
The crotchety co-Founder of Hogwarts, Salazar Slytherin, could discourse for hours on his favorite topic, pureblood superiority. He had, in fact, done so many times. The other portraits on the wall had heard it before, and it hadn't been interesting the first time. Most of them didn't bother to reply; instead they went back to sleep or began conversing quietly amongst themselves.
The portrait of Albus Dumbledore remained awake, however, as did the one of Severus Snape.
"Amazing, really, how grown up they are, isn't it, Severus?" The portrait of Dumbledore was remarkably realistic; his eyes seemed to twinkle as he spoke to Snape’s portrait, across the office from his.
"To whom did you refer, specifically?” Snape looked up when Dumbledore spoke to him, an expression of long-suffering on his expressive features.
"Why, Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy, of course. I saw them in here earlier, when they came to open Minerva's desk, find her will, that sort of thing."
"Governor Malfoy, Chairman of the Board of Governors, and Madam Granger-Weasley, Deputy Headmistress of Hogwarts, have turned out tolerably well. They both have made good use of their talents and station in life."
The twinkling-eyed old wizard, in the huge portrait directly behind the desk, chuckled as he looked across the office at the black-haired, sardonic younger one whose portrait hung on the wall above the sitting area.
"Tolerably well, Severus? I have not heard such effusive praise from you in many years."
A snort was the only reply from the black-haired wizard, but as the big office once again grew silent, the portrait of Albus Dumbledore chuckled and repeated, "Tolerably well, indeed. Yes, I should say so..." before nodding off to sleep once again.
Story Actions
To follow, favorite, like, and more either log in or create an account.
Leave a Review
Log in to leave a review.
Latest 25 Reviews for A Different Kind of Love Story
230 Reviews | 6.63/10 Average
So lovely, thank you.
Hermione did the right thing cutting Draco loose, he desevers someone that loves him with all her heart, and Hermione's heart belongs to Severus.
Very sad, so near and yet so far apart.
They are getting on very well, aren't they.
Hermione is well rid of Ron, he is a selfish prat. Somone should tell Caroline, If they will cheat with you they will cheat on you.
Ron does not appear to be very... affectionate, towards Hermione, does he?
Sweet kids, Minerva would be so proud.
They have all grown up, and can laugh at the past, Ron is an unknown quantity, we will see in the next chapter.
It's always hard untill the funeral is over, then the grieving can start.
" tolerably well" I never thorught to hear such effusive praise from Severus Snape, death must have mellowed him.
I love the easy frendship between Draco and Hermione, nice to see after all the drama of their school days.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
It was one of my favorite parts of the story. It was enthralling to watch as it came up on the screen as it was entirely unplanned. Thank you for taking the time to review:)
So sad to see Minerva passing, all lives must come to an end but it is still sad. Draco is making himself at home I see.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Very much so. But you will see that he has grown up rather nicely:)
Together, at last.
A good, if sad beginning.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much.
That was a beautiful love story.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you very much.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you very much.
How sad, but I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. :)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:) I hope you enjoy it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:) I hope you enjoy it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
This is so sweet! I loved it, thank you!
I have read this story twice. It is lovely
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm honored:) thank you so much.Warm regards,Fizzabella
so sweet
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you. It was a strange story to write but I enjoyed it, and it's wonderful to know you enjoyed it.Warm regards,Fizzabella
okay now I'm all teary. Excellent, totally captures how I feel about his death. I just wish it hadn't turned out that way. Glad he can enjoy his portrait form and hermione's company.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so happy you enjoyed the story:) Thank you for letting me know:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
I'm so glad you were featured in the Live Journal sshg_quiz this weekend. I've enjoyed reading your Headmistress Hermione Granger story. It was very sweet and romantic. I loved it.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so honored:) I use the quiz to look for stories I haven't read, also:) I'm delighted that you enjoy my story, and honored that you took the time to let me know:)Thanks so much,Warm regards,Fizzabella
What a lovely story. Very touching ending. If I may offer some constructive criticism? I almost didn't read the story because the summary was kind of rambling and wordy. I'm glad that I decided to give the story a try anyway. You may want to consider re-working the summary a bit. Other than that, you've done a wonderful job.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I appreciate the criticism, I didn't know we were allowed to do that:)I will condense it down, then:)And I am so glad you enjoyed the story:)Warm regards,Fizzabella:)
Thank you for a beautiful story!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so happy you enjoyed it:) Thank you for taking the time to comment:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Sweet.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I want to thank you for your reviews:) Your comments on other chapters made me very happy, cause I could tell you were enjoying the story:)Warmest regards,Fizzabella
Aww! What a beautiful ending! I really enjoyed your story!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:)-NBV