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Lemon Drabbles
MMADfan11 Reviews | 7.91/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
A series of lemony drabbles, each one-hundred words, featuring a variety of different characters.
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Reviews for Lemon Drabbles
interesting, very interesting.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
They were an experiment. My curiosity about whether it was possible to write a lemon in 100 words was answered.
All of them were quite enjoyable. But my favorite by far was Disproportionate. LOL
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Oh, yes -- that one was amusing, and yet very suggestive! lol! Thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed them!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Oh, yes -- that one was amusing, and yet very suggestive! lol! Thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed them!
OH! I forgot to mention the Staff Room scene! How could I forget??? I had always wanted MORE detail on that wee memory - was it in DD? Or AAoL? I can't remember which but I always wanted more detail! And while I'd prefer to have MORE than just this drabble - *grins* well at least I've got the drabble!The staff room DIRECTLY before a meeting? Honestly... Albus is as twisted as he's clever! Loved it!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
I believe it was mentioned in An Act of Love, lol! And that, indeed, is where the idea for this drabble came from! hee! Glad you liked it!
How on earth have I been here so long and missed all these delicious tidbits?I love how I seem to remember each of these scenes as fitting in the RaMverse - accept my favorite - as Minerva awakens Albus - that was so delicous - as was him waking her! But the second drabble - my favorite, didn't seem to fit in any of your previous writing - and it was perfect all on its own!I grinned at the Disproportionate drabble - I always wondered about that! Now, I don't have to!And the last one - with Severus and Poppy was enearing - I know, I know, I'm not that receptive to Severus love, but its growing on me! I am glad he, at least, is pleasing Poppy - whom I've grown more and more fond of.Anyhoo - I'll be reading these over and over again, I just know.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Thank you!Yes, a few of these could easily fit in the RaMverse. I'm glad that the second one pleased you as a nice stand-alone bit of ADMM! (I saw it as fitting nicely within a story/universe where Albus and Minerva have a lovely slow-building romance, but I've never written it!)I'm glad you liked that last drabble with Severus & Poppy. I've always thought it might be a good one to use as a jumping-off point for another fic, outside the RaMverse, but it's not happened, either!If you do enjoy Severus & Poppy together, have you read "Heat"? I don't remember whether you have or not. It's non-RaMverse & an SSPP one-shot. It's where my appreciation for writing Severus and Poppy together really took root.Thanks!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I just now understood - in the last drabble with Severus and Poppy - he was holding her UPSIDE DOWN! And that spell reminds me of someone holding someone upside down by their ankle - like a bully making someone hand over their lunch money! That... squicks me a tad... but okay...The three with Minerva and Albus were just glorious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
LOL! -- Yes, Severus originally created that spell (in canon!) for an entirely different purpose, but Poppy didn't mind it here!
Okay, okay. So I got a bit distracted. But in a good way. lol. These are great. You have such a penchant for them. I must say I love the drabbles about Albus and Minerva. But then, I would. =o) Until I started reading Resolving a Misunderstanding I only went to Occlumency because I like Severus so much. Thanks for helping me to branch out.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Heehee! So the drabbles provided a bit of . . . distraction? Glad it is in a good way! ;)
I'm happy you have branched out! I'm especially glad, of course, that you like the ADMM drabbles. *grin*
Thanks very much for reviewing!
I like all of them. I thought that Filius being embarrased at being 'out of proportion' the best.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Thanks very much!
What a neat idea. Definitely a challenge to manage PWP in drabbles, but I think you've done a good job of it.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. Thanks very much for reviewing!
Oh, My, my, my! Where do I sign up for a post at Hogwarts! If this is what goes I - I wanna go...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
*grin* I never read that to become a teacher at Hogwarts, you have to take a vow of celibacy! Haha! I hope not! I'm glad you enjoyed these. (Gosh, that would be an interesting story -- vow of celibacy . . . not for me to write, though!)
Thank you for reviewing!
First of all, let me say I LOOOVE the Lemon Drabble banner. If I need some cool artwork I know who I'm turning to for help. Each of these drabbles are wonderful and I absolutely bow down to your greatness.
I would find it incredibly hard to write such powerful scenes with so few words. You never cease to amaze me.Now, to the actual drabbles...my absolute favorites are the Albus/Minerva ones since they're my true ship of choice. I love the one where Minerva slips into his bedroom in the morning and wakes him with some very well placed kisses. And then to have him return the favor in another drabble...steamy stuff woman!!! The one in the staff room was fun and I could see that happening in the Resolving a Misunderstanding universe...after they're together of course. wink winkThe Pomona/Filius ones are just cute. I'd never given the idea of them as a couple much thought until reading your spin on things. Very cool.Now to the Severus ones...pick a witch...stroke of genius! Of course my mind went immediately to Poppy since I seem to have a new fascination with that pairing lol. But the one that made my eyes pop out of my head was the one called Storm. It wasn't that it was Poppy and Severus but the fact that he used Levicorpus. UPSIDE DOWN SEX....WOW!!! That's a new one and very imaginative!
Clearly you have a gift for writing excellent drabbles. I hope to see more from you soon!! HINT HINT!Cheers,The GLM
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Now I REALLY wish there were a blushie emoticon, because I'd be using it now! Thanks soooooo much for the great review -- I'm glad to know which ones you enjoyed most, and that you liked Severus's careful and imaginative use of Levicorpus, which put him in an interesting position by putting her in an inverted position. Hee! So, I'm very happy you enjoyed them! Thanks very much!
If I write more lemon drabbles, I'll add them here as another chapter, even though I've marked this as "complete" for now!
I love the "pick-your-witch" idea behind "Service", and the lemon was certainly a lovely one. I do like open-ended lemons, since they allow for a fair bit of imagination as to who is getting "serviced". I thought of Poppy, due to having recently read "Heat" and liking the pairing."Disproportionate" was funny, since I always wondered how that aspect of the Filius/Pomona relationship would work out. I loved how shy he was about his lovemaking and how he wasn't "proportionate".I loved "Meeting" - Minerva and Albus are certainly inventive in finding places. Just before a meeting, too! Thank goodness Albus sealed the door so that any visitors wouldn't get a shock!
"Waking" was excellent, too, as it seemed like it would fit perfectly in the RaM-verse, and showed how comforting Albus's presence is to Minerva. "Perfection" was great - I enjoyed the lemon and liked the way that Filius got over the size difference between himself and Pomona. He's certainly an inventive one.My favorite, however, was "Storm". The setting was certainly powerful and evocative, and it was interesting to see Severus's clever use of the Levicorpus spell. The storm imagery was very striking, too.All in all, a wonderful and inventive set of stories!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Thank you! I remember finding the drabble a really peculiar form for a lemon, and quite a challenge.
I think the storm one is my favorite, as well.
Thanks again!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
Thank you! I remember finding the drabble a really peculiar form for a lemon, and quite a challenge.
I think the storm one is my favorite, as well.
Thanks again!
Blush (but oh, i loved it!)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Lemon Drabbles)
They were quite an experiment! I don't think that a drabble is quite the best vehicle for a lemon, but they were fun to try out! I'm glad you enjoyed them!Thanks for the review!