YAY!! I'm first!  LOL

I adored this fic when I first read it, and I'm enjoying it even more the second time 'round.  I love the witty dialog and the friendship the two have.  It's just lovely!

Cute!!

Yay!  Very sweet and  cute  and fun and funny!  I really liked the loving repartee between Herms and Sevums. ;)  My one criticism (and it is minor) is that the conflict was solved very easily -- both the possible relationship conflict (okay, we know theyr'e meant for each other) and the scary mail-bomb jealous schoolmate (maybe could have used some more explanation).  That said, I liked the light tone and the fast pace and aside from fanfic I've been reading Greek Drama which maybe has a bit too MUCH conflict as these things go so my dramatic sensors may just be scewed.  Thanks for writing!--Hilaria

Really enjoyable story with a wonderful happy ending.

There's irony, Severus Snape an employee at Neville Longbottom's company. That was great. I thought the villain was Rita Skeeter, but Marietta Edgecombe was a better choice. I especially liked the "let's take it slow" part that actually only lasted 10 minutes. Very amusing. 

Very enjoyable.  Nice and light.

Chapter two is AFTER chapter three?  WTF?

This ia a nice read.  A very soft look at their two personalities so far.  In the last scene, the text suddenly became italicised--I think you may have missed the 'close italics' marks.

Good story. I liked the touches of humor and the ending. But what finally happened to Marietta?

Ahh, what a wonderfully sappy ending!  I truly enjoyed your fic.  It was a delightful read.  Well done!

ooh!  What a chapter.  The ending was, of course, fabulous and I loved it!  That part with P.I.M.P. and Lucius' cane was inspired!  I was laughing out loud.  Great writing.

What a wonderful, heart warming, sweet, funny fic. I absolutely adored the gentle humor, the plausible back story and all of your fresh and inventive ideas.Brava!

Miss Edgecomb is an under used villian. I can see her going around the bend being unable to remove the hex marks. I would have suggested a hair style change, bangs anyone? But perhaps she enjoys her sulking evilness? Oh Britt I miss you so!

Oh Britt you didnt really fade to black for the good parts did you? There better be naked Snape in the next chapter or you are in trouble sister!

Even on my reread this part brought tears to my eyes! “You deserve the chance to be happy, Severus. Are you willing to reach out and take it?”Severus searched her eyes, stunned by the truth he saw there, that a future with her was possible. He took her hand and brought it to his lips. “I am.”

I think this maybe the only fan fic in history to give Miss Lovegood a career as an attorney. Hahhaahh!

Where oh where are you tonight?Why did you leave me here all alone?I've searched the world over & thought I found true loveYou met another and poof you were gone!Yes I have sung the Hee Haw song to you. Where are you Woo Hoo girl? Are you still on email? I miss you toots. Come back if you can.

I've just read this story for the second time. I think I like it better now. (Have been reading so-called fluff for voting purposes, and this is high up.)(The first time around was inside a variety of exchange fics.)

very good!  I like this nice Snape.  I think people are different with different people, and can envision SNape being soft with Hermione and still plenty snarky with others. 

That's my idea of Hermione, going after what she wants.  Like I did when I was young.  :-) 

I think this is very sweet so far.  I love Hermione's drinking his tea, the sort of thing she might do to Harry or Ron, very sisterly.  And it makes sense that he'd be attracted to her, so I found that believable.  I enjoyed their banter; how nice that a friendship has formed between them.On to chapter two!  I love finished stories!