Wonderful !!!!!!
Missy/LovesRickman

I really enjoyed reading your Vampire Tale. A most unusual story that was well written and moved along nicely from beginning to its end.

Many thanks for writing and sharing.

Yay for them!  That was pretty neat.  A lovely ending for them.  Severus really was the hero, and it's great!  I think I would've liked Severus' POV a little more, perhaps some description of how he felt kissing her or something.  But it was brilliant in the end and I loved how she rescued him from his nightmare.

Oh, Oh, this is interesting! Wait – is Narcissa the vampire that bit Hermione? Can they save her too? Does she know who bit her? Would that work? They could take Lucius! Oh, what a intriguing story… What an interesting premise!  

And I don’t even LIKE vampire stories!!!!   Usually.

HIS own blood? I have a feeling that will not only effect the potion - but them as well! Ooooh.

Oh, this is juicy. I love how Severus had to work through his delima - and you wrote it so well.I could feel the wheels of his mind turn.

Oh, he found her!   I do like how you describe things.

Oh, my gosh! The personal reflection regarding the absent reflection in the mirror - very powerful. I usually avoid vampire stories... but this has a good start.

Lovely images of her and the mirror.  Knowing from the summary what she was, it was fascinating to imagine the scenario of Hermione not being able to see herself, and the analytical part of her mind watching things move; I'd never thought of that before.

I loved this story!  Hope you win, I'll try to vote, but I just got my pc back from the shop...

If you pardon the pathetic pun, this chapter was worth sinking my teeth into (acknowledges 'groans' of protest).  Good chapter, nice flow and great pacing.

Nice ending!

Narcissa being "truly evil" made the final choice so much easier, of course - I can't help but wonder what it would have been like for Severus and Hermione if Narcissa had turned out to be an innocent victim herself. But then, those two had been through enough - no need to add yet another burden on them.

Severus was so strong. The way he helped Hermione exterminate Narcissa--his speech--was inspired. What a nasty piece of work Narcissa was. Poor Lucius.

Very nice

Hm... female, probably pureblood, considering the insults, knows Hermione enough to recognise her - Narcissa might just be a good fit to all of that!

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! 

Thanks for this tale.

Well, if the vampire is who I think she is, this complicates matters nicely!

oooh.  Does this mean that perhaps Narcissa is a vampire too? 

I kinda see Hermione's "accident" as wishful thinking, that she was human again.  If anyone can help her, it's Severus.  They'll always be my OTP.

well, it's not like Hogwarts hasn't been home to "dangerous creatures" before.  Professor Lupin. . . What an equally frightening and fierce creature the other Hermione is.  I only hope Snape can help her. 

*heh* Snapey has compassion--he just calls it a need for "fame" and "recognition".  Well played by Minerva; that was as manipulative as ol' Twinkle-eyes ever got.

Woot!  Liking the twist that Vampirism puts on Hermione's character.  Of course all the special warding would be like catnip to a practiced spy of Snape's caliber. 

I believe we now know where Narcissa is and who made Hermione a vampire. Lucius is going to be devastated.

Intriguing beginning--I've always liked stories in which either Snape or Hermione was one of the undead.  What will she do now?  Feed from animals, but not people, or hunt down criminals? 

the vampire is... Minevera! Jokes, I really have no Idea... mmmm

Well the only way for me to find out is if you update soon!

Cheers

karlamarie