Hen Night, Interrupted
ayerf20 Reviews | 20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )
Written for the Spousal Duties challenge on GS100.
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Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.
Reviews for Hen Night, Interrupted
I'm too sexy...I know the song you are talking about. It is not worthy of Mr. Snape!! It made me laugh that Hermione suggested it. Ha!
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
I thought of it because of something I once saw on the web, of Severus being animated to sing along to it. It was funny, so stuck in my mind.Glad it made you laugh, even if it was unworthy of Severus!
OK. That was absolutely hilarious! The inuendos, the revelation of his location, hoisting her over his shoulder, revealing that he knew her to be his masked lap dancer... well done. Very entertaining.
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thank you! I hoped it would be funny! I'm delighted you found those aspects so entertaining.
Heeee! This is fun and adorable.
Severus' outburst made me laugh so hard, ha!
And the song… “I’m too sexy for my shirt”
And Hermione being the masked lap dancer at his stag night? Hmm, that’s interesting :D
Another lovely one-shot! Well done.
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thank you! So much for stealth. Severus better hope that Mad-Eye Moody didn't gatecrash his stag night, or Hermione's secret might be out.
*lol* Oh, good one! ~Lotm
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thank you! It's quite impressive that you think it's worth a giggle.
Perfect levity and saucy, no raunchy repartee!! Just the kind of lighthearted thing your loyal readers need next to your magnum opus.
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thanks! Considering that Resurgam is going to start getting darker by chapter 4 or 5, I guess it's a good thing that I've got more lighthearted one-shots where this one came from...
WOW! AWESOME!
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thank you! I'm guessing that it's largely the thought of Severus stripping that most readers will find awesome....
Response from SlytherinGirl_260489 (Reviewer)
That's weird, you know me too well without even really knowing me...
Things this good deserve to be shared!
I love the conversation you have amoungst the women and the thought of SS having to do a strip tease.
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thanks again!Posting different fics does seem to encourage different readers out of the woodwork. Must be the promise of SS stripping at the end, even if it is at wandpoint.
Thanks for the laugh!
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
You're welcome. Glad you liked it!
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Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thanks! That's the song, and the funniest Snape version to be found.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
ik! i love it. love the story too. I can totally see molly being like that
Funny, entertaining and cute. You should do one with the garterbelt and boquet!
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thanks! I'm currently writing my first wedding scene and not finding it easy. I hope that difficulty will be enough to keep that plot bunny you just set loose at bay.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
If you want I had a wedding consultant for my 1st marriage and helped plan a few weddings including a military (think OotP) wedding. I can share some ideas of what I've seen and done if it will help a bunny!
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thankfully the wedding scene is small and simple in Resurgam.I'm also trying to avoid plot bunnies whenever I can, so while I appreciate the offer, this one doesn't need feeding right now!
chuckle, chuckle, heheheh.
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thanks! Seems humour was the right genre to pick.
Oh, very cute! I'm sure the other hens are well enough into their cups that they won't miss Hermione *too* much.
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thanks! The other hens will also have those rumoured strippers to keep them occupied. I'd be surprised if they missed Hermione at all.
Can't resist... have to reread again...
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thank you! My willpower is severely lacking too, particularly when it comes to fanfic.
Oh, just think of all the blackmail material he missed! Go back and face the music, Sevvie!! Very cute!
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thank you! I suspect he's happy enough missing the blackmail material when Hermione isn't exposed to any stripper but him.
Muahaha! Strip, Severus, strip! It'll save the buttons! Loved the wand polishing xD
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Oh yes, must save the buttons! I just couldn't resist that.
polish his wand??!! OMG *gasp, snort* great stuff! thanks
Response from ayerf (Author of Hen Night, Interrupted)
Thank you! Glad you found it funny.