Chapter Six
Chapter 6 of 16
LooneylunaHermione sets out to torment Severus, but she only torments herself.
ReviewedChapter Six
Hermione cracked her knuckles. She knew it was a disgusting habit, but it helped with the creative process. Biting the inside of her cheek, she stared at the ocean and let the lull of the waves soothe her worries. She harnessed her Cassandra muse and put pen to paper.
Our honeymoon in the tropics is paradise. Actually, I think it's paradise. I wouldn't know since Simon hasn't let me out of bed long enough to explore. My husband is still upset over everything that happened. I, for one, owe his grandfather, Albert, my eternal gratitude. Without his meddling, Simon never would have been assigned to protect me.
Happy with the ease in which she was penning the long overdue epilogue to The Darkest Magic, she giggled with giddy enthusiasm. She was going to make the sleazy bastard rue the day he showed up in her hot tub.
"Come back inside, my love," Simon murmurs against my neck, startling me as he sidles up to me and wraps his arms lovingly around my waist. His hands make quick work of the sash, and my robe spills open.
I gasp. "Have you lost all sense? Someone could see!" I pull my robe closed, trying to discourage him. The balcony is high, and the wind is warm off the ocean, but it does not negate the fact that anyone could come along and see my husband making love to me.
He growls, grinding his erection against my buttocks. "The sun has yet to rise, Cassandra. No one can see us," he reasons with me.
"Absolutely not," I groan in protest as he swipes his tongue against my earlobe. He is incorrigible. He knows what that does to me. I feel the fire spread through me as he nibbles on my tender flesh. .
"I need you, Cassandra," he murmurs huskily.
I turn in his embrace, and we kiss. My tongue sweeps into his open mouth, surprising him with my boldness. My hands mold his shoulders, and then his torso. Rubbing myself against his pale, almost hairless chest, I smile as I remind myself that I must get him into the sun, for he is in desperate need of some color.
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The blue notebook fluttered open, capturing Severus' attention. "It's about time the bloody wench started writing," he growled, as he started to read.
"Simon and Cassandra," he huffed, rolling his eyes. "Why is she writing about those two again? I thought that piece of literary trash was complete. Honeymoon? Disgusting tripe."
Severus continued to read. Unlike The Darkest Magic, what she had written was from Cassandra's point of view and in the first person.
His eyebrows rose. "Sex on a balcony?" He looked out the glass doors and eyed the wraparound porch. "That certainly does have potential."
Severus took a sip of his tea as his eyes glided over the page. ...Rubbing myself against his pale, almost hairless chest. He choked on his tea, tears burning his eyes as he coughed and sputtered.
"Hairless chest!" he gasped, remembering his initial outrage over the similarities between himself and Simon Sanders... Remembering that Simon had a hairy chest and not a hairless one. In awed frustration, Severus watched as the words appeared on the page with an easy flow.
Simon pushes down on my shoulders. He is the only man I have ever...or shall ever...bed. I may not feel completely secure in my own sexuality, but I know what he wants. I've read about it in those magazines I found in my Aunt Edna's attic so many summers ago. I lick my lips in anticipation as I kneel in front of him.
He is unashamed of his own nakedness. My gaze can do nothing but linger on his erect manhood. It is a mere breath away from my face, the tip weeping with a clear drop of excitement. He brushes my hair to the side and tilts my lips toward him. The expression in his eyes is one of dark hunger
Tentatively, I touch the mushroomed cap of his sex with my tongue. I know not what to expect, for I am a novice.
He inhales sharply as though I've hurt him, but he groans and takes hold of his member and rubs the tip against my cheek. "Please," he hisses, moving the rigid flesh toward my eager lips.
His eyes were dry. He couldn't blink. His cock grew thicker and heavier as she continued writing.
Granting his request, my hand covers his, and we stoke the embers of his desire in unison. As the silken flesh slips past my full lips and into my mouth, his hands find their way to the tangles of my hair. He tastes of the earth, warm and full of life.
His rod of flesh twitches in the cavern of my mouth, and he whimpers, emboldening me to create a cadence of ecstasy to lure him closer to completion.
Severus groaned, unable to resist the picture she had painted with her words. He rubbed himself through the fabric of his trousers as he unconsciously widened his legs, forgetting the past few days and his attempts to intimidate and dissuade her.
Twisting my hair between his fingers, Simon takes control. He holds my head and pushes his needy member further into my mouth. I hollow my cheeks, providing more suction. After all, that is what it says to do in the book.
With a harsh growl, he relinquishes his hold on my head, granting me the freedom to pull away. But I continue, determined to finish this delectable treat. Within the breath of a moment, his salty essence splashes onto my tongue.
Severus blinked rapidly and waited for more to appear on the page. When he realized there was no more, he slammed the notebook shut and stood up, intent on either killing her or making her finish the scene.
As he reached the door, the cold touch of reason returned to him and he groaned. "Merlin, how could I have been so daft?"
He hobbled out onto the porch and looked over the railing at the bloody bane of his existence. Hermione Granger was a seductress. She may not have touched him... well, other than breaking his nose and accosting him with the notebook... but she certainly thought she knew exactly how to manipulate him.
Ignoring the torment of his arousal, Severus walked into the sitting room, grabbed the blue notebook, and started editing.
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Lounging by the pool after a quick dip, Hermione rubbed her hair dry with a towel and sighed. She was quite pleased with the scene she had managed to complete. Her tormenter should really enjoy the bloody thing.
Her notebook leapt from the small table next to her chair and fluttered in front of her.
"What the..." she gasped, suddenly remembering that he had charmed it. The pages fluttered as if someone opened them. When she saw the touch of red ink against the paper, she hissed in outrage.
A note from your editor:
First of all, I thought your novel was about Virginia and James. Secondly, I can see who you are writing about, but am baffled as to why you would include this scene in your current novel. Why is this scene written in the first person, present tense when the rest of the book is written in the third person, past tense? I am no literary expert, but if you intend to include this scene, you need to fix it.
I, for one, do enjoy the first person, present tense of the scene. It lends a personal touch to your narrative. If you were to go back and rewrite The Darkest Magic I would be more than happy to give you some insight as to what Simon is thinking... seeing as you did model him after me.
Slamming the notebook shut, Hermione resisted the urge to toss it into the pool. That bloody, pig-headed, self-righteous bastard! Who the hell does he think he is?
Closing her eyes, she envisioned shoving the tool of her trade up his tight arse but quickly shook the thought from her head. Not only would that be a messy endeavor, it would be nearly impossible as well. Unfortunately, she couldn't go on accosting him. He had magic; she didn't. Although that would soon be remedied as soon as Ginny arrived.
Hermione took a shaky breath and decided to ignore his edits. "Personal touch," she grumbled. "I'll show him personal touch."
She opened the notebook and found even more "editor notes."
...Hairless chest? I thought Mr. Sanders had a hairy chest.
Growling, Hermione began to write.
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Severus paused as he added more notes to further antagonize Miss Granger. He was surprised when more of the tawdry scene began to appear on the pages.
I stand, unprepared as my husband crushes me against him and begins to kiss me passionately. His tongue swoops into my mouth. He groans as he tastes himself upon my lips.
"Cassandra," he pants, pressing his fingers against the juncture of my thighs. He finds me wet and needy. Just as he begins to pleasure me, he withdraws. I watch in awe and slight disappointment as he brings his fingers to his lips, licks the moisture from them, and mutters something.
I do not understand. Maybe it's an incantation.
Simon grins, his opaque eyes staring into mine.
Then I feel it... the glide of a tongue caressing my most intimate area.
I jump in surprise, and my husband laughs. "Let the spell run its course. I promise you won't be disappointed."
All I can do is groan and squirm. He turns me in his embrace and nibbles the sensitive slope of my neck. I can feel his recently-sated manhood against my bum.
"Watch the sunrise, my love," he murmurs, brushing the back of his palm against one of my breasts.
I whimper as he seduces me with his words and his magic. God, I love magic! "Simon," I cry.
He grinds against me. "Just imagine, Cassandra," he whispers. "Imagine what it would feel like if I were inside you right now."
I moan, awash in decadent pleasure. I lean forward and widen my stance, forgetting my earlier protestations. I am on fire. My husband's lurid imagination has corrupted me.
"His lurid imagination!" Severus scoffed. "More like the lurid imagination of the author!"
"Tut, tut, Young One," Simon chastises playfully. "I couldn't possibly take advantage of my wife in such a manner."
Moisture coats my thighs as I welcome another orgasmic wave. "You had better... shag... me... if you... know what's... good for you."
Lifting my robe, Simon nudges my legs farther apart. I grasp the ledge and wallow in bliss as my husband slides into me.
Severus slammed the notebook shut and conceded defeat. He could feel the heat in his cheeks, though why he should be embarrassed he didn't know. After all, it was Hermione Granger's deluded fantasies he had just read, not his own. Her personal prose was a bit on the insipidly romantic side. But it certainly did garner his lustful attentions.
Like most men, he was more a visual connoisseur than a literal one. However, the picture that she had painted was one that he had no difficulties imagining as he stared out over the ocean.
Shaking his head, he had to remind himself why he was here. He needed to dissuade his former student's crush. He needed to destroy any fanciful notions she may have construed about his character. He could not have her filling his students' minds with nonsensical romanticism. His job was difficult enough without having to fend off unwanted advances.
He must remain firm in his convictions. He could not relent, nor could he start to appreciate Miss Granger's obvious attempts to strike back at him, no matter how much she seemed to think he deserved it. She had started this whole mess, after all, by writing that idiotic book and using him as the main character. It was time to let Miss Granger see just whom she was fanaticizing of! He had set out to seek a revenge that would be worthy of his Slytherin nature. He sighed. Then why did it feel as though it were beginning to unravel?
The truth of the matter was... he didn't really have much of a plan, other than making Miss Granger miserable.
Erect and uncomfortable, he walked toward the master bathroom and flicked his wand at the shower, turning the cold water onto full blast. Dammed if he would lower himself to masturbation on the words of some romance writer! He hadn't anticipated Granger's vengeful quill, or her rather detailed imagination. Once he was finished with his cold shower, he would finish editing her newest entry and think of a different tactic.
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As Hermione penned the last bit of the scene between her beloved characters, a tidal wave of embarrassment overwhelmed her. She looked down at the page and no longer saw the angry, red scrawl of editor notes mucking up her creative processes.
What she had written was a poorly disguised attempt at seduction! She had opened up the floodgate of her frustration and had let it all pour out.
Hastily, she scribbled over what she had written. Why... why didn't she just write him a personal note, detailing what she would like for him to do to her, or better yet, what she would like to do to him? What on earth had possessed her to write about Simon and Cassandra?
Good gods, she was pathetic! Here she was, regretting her brash Gryffindor behavior and wishing that the sun would melt her into an oblivious puddle so that she would not have to suffer her former professor's snide comments...or worse, seeing him face-to-face. In setting out to "punish" him, she had only humiliated herself further.
Glaring at the horizon, she cursed under her breath. Where was Ginny, and what was taking her so long?
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TBC
Author's Notes...First, I must apologize for the delay in posting. My surgery went well, but unlike the last surgery, I was unable to type after wards. I now have voice recognition software thanks to my wonderful, supportive husband. It is a slow process. Luckily, I got the majority of this chapter written prior to the surgery.
Secondly, I would like to thank my beta readers. Jen is my cheerleader, constantly poking and prodding me to do my best. CocoaChristy is my mind reader, polishing my sentences and completing my thoughts. Soul Bound is my comma Nazi. She is currently on vacation, so if there are any commas out of place, it's my fault. Beta reading is a thankless job. If you feel the need to leave feedback, please thank my beta readers. Without them, this story would not be written.
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248 Reviews | 6.67/10 Average
yea me completed your story...
i did not realize i had not finished it..
thank you for a fun story
waiting for other stories
This was a great story. I had never read read the original but I'm glad you changed it. I was a bit put off over the 'injunction' thing in Chapter 3, it was almost too unrealistic - I know it's silly but I am a corporate litigation paralegal and I am completely aware of how tricky injunctions are in and of themselves simply because of the implications you set forth; an injunction such as that would indeed be illegal and unconstitutional (but I am only familiar with American laws and couldn't speak for the intricacies of British laws) - but I'm glad I kept going.
This was great, I like how you worked the rumor of Albus and Minie in there. I almost wish I could read the novels.
Thank you
Ha! I love this! It's great how the enchanted notebook becomes almost an instant messaging tool, and allows H and S to finally be a little more honest with each other... even if it *is* in a kind of middle school way. I like how pathetic/sweet Severus is in this chapter.I found this story long after you wrote it, but I'm really enjoying it! There are a lot of really quirky deadpan moments in your writing that are completely hilarious. Yay!
Lovely! I like that you didn't rush things, that sex wasn't the cure-all and they still had to work through some issues.
I know I should have reviewed each chapter but I couldn't stop clicking the button to move on to the next chapter. This was a very funny, poignant, sexy and sweet story and I most definitely will be sending the link to my friends and telling them that they HAVE to read it.
I think the thing I liked best was the way you got Severus' voice exactly right. I could hear Alan Rickman's voice as I read the words (I "heard " Mr. Rickman's voice in my head when I first read HP&TPS years before he was cast in the films--go figure).
Thank you for sharing your story with us. It was definitely worth staying up past midnight on a work night to finish reading it.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Witch-nap! LOL
If I were Albus or Minerva, I would have trick-portkeyed those mixed-up two into the Room of Req. and held them prisoner there to force the two of the them to talk things out once and for all. *exasperated*
Oh! It's not a silly story! You shouldn't say so! I rather like it. Please, post the next chapter soon :)
Regards,
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
I am enjoying your story and happy to see an update. Could I put in a request? Please have Hermione stop acting like a rhymes-with-witch. I can't imagine anyone even wanting to share a meal with her like this much less spend the rest of his life. Then again, I don't read romance novels so perhaps a rhymes-with-witch scene is a necessity;). Looking forward to the next bit -- and thanks for your work!
i rather like this story. Can't wait to see what happens now that the ball is in her court.
take it nice and slow, Severus. Nice and slow... He is going to get her, right? *blink*Great chapter, more please!
aww how sweet a romantic kidnapping. I admire you for redoing this story it's very enjoyable.
You may or may not recall that I had some very distinct reservations about your new direction for the story. You've done away with them most admirably; I've enjoyed the last few chapters very much, and I'm looking forward to seeing how this story's going to end. (Eek—that sounds terribly formal. Sorry about that. I've been reading John Donne again; for some reason, his poetry has that effect on me. *Wishes we had a "D'oh!" emoticon*)
On a slightly off-topic note, I agree with you about fan-fiction being AU by nature. After all, the original author writes the real canon, no matter how canon-compliant we try to be. But then, I'm preaching to the choir on this one, eh?
Oh please continue. There has to be a peaceful resolution to this. You made me cry with this chapter and Sev is trying so hard. A little love is really all the poor man needs. I'm such a sucker for happy endings! LOL
hehe!! Too funny! At least he realises it! LOL
Thank you for continuing to write this delightful story! I needed something sweet and funny with just the right amount of angst to tide me over whilst I recover from that which is DH. Sigh. I hope you continue writing, in spite of it all!
Argh! These two need a good smacking! One is so hard headed, while the other is manipulative... Away with false pretence and ego, just get down and boogie! o_O LMAO!Nice chapter by the way... *grin*
At last. I love this story. Looking forward to the next part.Truly
I think he's either going to pass out, or going to throw up as the motion hits him. Either one is not conducive to a romantic interlude. Although the way he talks gets me all revved up--it has to be affecting Hermione because she gets the added benefit of that voice.
Oh, you're wicked! I hope you're madly scribbling on the next chapter.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
I am :).
Oh my. I very nearly fell over when I read that part about Hermione's hair. God, this is hilarious stuff.Thanks for a great story :o) ,Sue.
Woot! I'm doubly impressed that Severus doesn't suffer from Firewhiskey d***!!! Potions' Masters Rule!! I hope Pansy and the babies are okay. I love this story, and I hope you feel better soon!!GG
They had better! Great chapter, even if you left us with a tease of a cliffe.
It's getting awfully hot in here....can't imagine anybody getting that drunk, even with Veritaserum and a massive guilt complex.