I am a puddle of goo. Literally.You have once again written another breathtaking chapter. Reading his inner-war and desperate need for her, his strained confessions was wholly erotic, and Hermione's frenzied state was realistic and intense. I loved it when she command-shouted for him to make her come.Oh I do hope we get another delicious update soon.

Good, smutty chapter!  The boys are perplexed (as if that was a new thing) and things are going nicely!

I love the pacing you are using for this story.  Very well done.

Grogeous.Which means gorgeous, only my fingers weren't working.Because, well, guh.The emotion is what sent it over the edge.  Not just erotic, but so emotional.Wonderful!

Thank you!  Thank you!  For working on this story.  When SW said that she would see if you would work on it over at HG/SS Quiz Livejournal,  I so hoped you would.  That is why, when I saw that there was an update, I knew I had to stop at where I was in reading from the first stories that are put on this site.    What I wonder is, how much longer until she graduates?   Is what Severus feels for her really lust or does he want more?  How many other lessons does he have in store for her?  And could he please write a book for the poor females out there how could use these lessons in their lives?  It would have been very useful way back when.   LOL  Thank you again.  Now I will go back to where I left off.  Until next time.  Tamara

Wow Wow Wow!  This story just oozes sex appeal.  And the scene with Sev dressing Hermione was hot!!  I love the sweet Sev too!  I just LOVE everything... (That's easier to say and makes this review more compact).  :)

I thought the hottest part of the chapter was when Severus helped her put her undies back on!!! After he fixed them of course.

Guh!  I mean... GUH!!!I think this is an utterly FABULOUS story, and I get a little thrill of excitement everytime I see you've updated.*wiggles in chair*Fabulous chapter, dahling! I can't wait for the next!*goes off to squee where family won't think I'm odd*GG

Severus knew exactly how to comfort Hermione in the only way she would have accepted. Perfect!

Not only is this a fabulous story, it's also a wonderful primer in writing erotic fiction; I've found it very instructive.  I see it is updated sporadically.  Any plans for an new chapter in the not to distant future?

I am really enjoying this story...are you going to finish it anytime soon?

Oh my god this story is amazing. I just discovered this site today. I've been floating through your stories over the past several hours. I was actually going to go to bed about an hour ago, (it's 3:30 am right now), but then I saw the title of this one and thought, "why not?" It was definitely not what I was expecting. I was expecting some cheap smut where the seductive student approaches the experienced professor for some private tutoring. I was not expecting this wonderfully slow, provacative, seductive piece of artwork. I love the...tempo, is the only word I can come up with right now. I found myself in a trance, my eyes glued to the screen, my eyes partly closed. It's just beautiful. I sincerely hope that this story isn't over. I don't think that I've come across any stories with this "flavor" before. I'm very glad that I decided to read this tonight.

Gosh.  Please don't leave them like this...!

I really love this story so far and can't wait for an update.  Please do so soon. 

OK added you to favorite author and story.  LOVE This and am going to go read your others waiting patienctly for more. More Please!

What an absolutely gorgeous--and utterly hot!--fic. THe literary seduction has to be one of the best Hermione / Severus seduction scenes I've ever read. Be still my heart! Surely, the way reading it made me feel has to be illegal (things that good usually are in my experience).

This one is definitely being marked as a favouriteand I wish it were possibleto give it more than 5 stars. You made having insomnia worth it, otherwise I don't know if I would have found this story.

Thank you so much for sharing this sweet, romantic, and very, very sexy tale.

Please tell me that there will be another lesson soon?

holy crap...this has to be the hottest story i have ever read.  it absolutely leaves me breathless.  you are building it to such a feaver pitch i'm not certain i won't spontaneously combust.  i have read stories more explicit but none so arrousing.  good lord, i'm going back and read it again!  thank you so much. 

I just love this story; right from Hermione being clueless in the Library to Severus realizing he has the chance to be in an intimate relationship with Hermione and the chance to be loved. Their physical encounters seem to be filled with need, curiosity, longing, and passion. Your writing draws me in and I can't put it down until there are no longer words to read. Brilliant. I'm rambling. It touches my heart, moves me.

Hmmmm.  Chapter five squicked me a bit, and I almost didn't continue, but I have to say that almost in spite of myself I thought this was a great chapter.  You are building their relatinship too fast and excrutiatingly slow at the same time -- very much in character for these two.

Whoa nelly - that is just - wow.

The intensity is just...oof.

Rock on, I can't wait for the next chapter - each one seems to increase exponentially - I have a feeling we'll be reading it completely overwhelmed...in a good way, of course. :P

I remember reading up to chapter three of this a while back and the controversy that surrounded it.  I must say that this chapter has begun to fulfill the promise.  Their words to each other are beautiful.  I'm quite interested in reading more, now.

*flail*

Have you been stalking my posts in exchange comms?  How did you know otherwise I'm such a sucker for Legilimency seX???  SUCH an underexplored topic, sadly . . .

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Guh!

Unf!

And yes, I see a Slytherin such as Snape (ANY Slytherin . . .  any TRUE Slytherin, at least) being completely unafraid to use sex to achieve his or her goals. 

And why use sex if you're not good at it?  What good would that do?  *flail* 

Hogwarts has make out huts. Heh. How very handy. I really love the way you have made Hermione almost lyrical in her thoughts. She is poetic and introspective and ((gasp)) give Snape a handjob!

I look forward to the next chapter! Don’t make me wait so long again??