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Time For Us

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Time For Us

Saltfish

7 Reviews   |   7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 579 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A post-war ficlet written for 30minutefics LJ community. The prompt was a scar. Fluffy-angst, if that's possible.

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Member Since 2006  |  7 Stories  |  Favorited by 8  |  30 Reviews Written  |  60 Review Responses

~Just another newbie writer playing with fanfic~

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10/10

WickedlyWanton

Ok, so I have always thought that you write brilliantly.  This only confirms it.  So sad to lose a child, and not just one who dies from something unpreventable, but through outright murder.  Wonderfully emotional, although you don't realize it until the very end exactly how emotional you are going to have to be about it.  You have to think about it for a second, and it's great that you don't really see it coming.  I am assuming that the scar wasn't actually from the war, but from a caesarian section.  Tricksy Salty!  ;)  BTW, I obviously got to read it before I thought I would. 

Response from Saltfish (Author of Time For Us)

You did read it before you thought! You are so very, very kind! And yes, I can't imagine being returned in that condition--whole but so very not whole. I'm glad it was emotional and not sappy! LOL. Thanks dear! And good luck for your paper.

0/10

MollysSister

Oh my but that is heart breaking! well done

Response from Saltfish (Author of Time For Us)

thank you. It is indeed heartbreaking.

8/10

KMJ

Leaves alot to the imagination, but what i am thinking is quite horrible!-KarlaMarie

Response from Saltfish (Author of Time For Us)

Then you're most likely on the right track. thanks!

0/10

SlashisSilly

That sent shivers down my spine just thinking about the implications. It's a very gruesome thought, but I enjoyed the story nonetheless. Very believable and well-written.

Response from Saltfish (Author of Time For Us)

Thanks for the kind words. Yes, the implications are gruesome.

0/10

orm irian

Sad, but well-done.  I like how you've left a lot to the imagination.

Response from Saltfish (Author of Time For Us)

Thanks. What went on (in my mind) was pretty gruesome. i needed to leave it to the imagination!

0/10

karelia

I like it! It makes an interesting read, short and to the point.

Response from Saltfish (Author of Time For Us)

Thanks! To the point, indeed.   Very apt.

0/10

EverMystique

Grr... Lucius in a bad form. Darn. Dramatic and very sad. :(

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