Chapter 7: Frustrations
Chapter 7 of 17
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Chapter 7: Frustrations
Hermione and Ernie were sitting in the Snape chambers. Both looked at the end of their wits. Her hair was frizzier than normal, owing to the fact that she kept running her hands through it.
Ernie was sitting with his chin resting on the palm of his hand. He was unsuccessful at stifling a yawn.
“It’s been twenty-four hours, Ernie. I’m sure if they were going to get in touch, they would have already done so.”
“Hermione, we have no idea where the Epps live. The owl may have just gotten there.”
Hermione turned to look at Ernie. She really needed this to move forward. After witnessing the memory yesterday, Ernie had sent off an official owl requesting a meeting with George Epps. As time wore on, Hermione became more and more frustrated.
“Why don’t you try and get some sleep?” Ernie suggested after a moment.
“Severus is sitting Merlin knows where, and you expect me to be able to sleep? I couldn’t. I miss him.” This last was said in a whisper.
“I’m sure we can set up something for tomorrow. It’s the middle of the night. First thing in the morning, I’ll contact Law Enforcement. I need to speak with Professor Snape, anyway.”
“And until morning? What shall we do until then?” Hermione implored.
“I must go home. Hannah will be worried. I’d also like to see my children.”
“Oh, Ernie, I’m sorry. I am being terribly selfish. Please go home to Hannah and tell her it’s my fault you are late,” Hermione said, abashed.
Ernie simply smiled.
“Goodnight, Hermione. I’ll be back early tomorrow, and we’ll go see Professor Snape. Do try to get some sleep. You’ll be of no use if you’re exhausted."
“Goodnight, Ernie, and thank you. I may take something and sleep for a few hours.”
Hermione woke with a start. After a moment, she realized that she was asleep in her chambers. The bed felt large and foreign without Severus’s presence.
Taking a few deep breaths, Hermione decided that sleep had left her, so she might as well get up. She pulled on her dressing gown and made her way to the study. Hermione knew she should have a list of questions written out to ask Severus.
A muttered “Lumos” illuminated the room. Picking up her quill, she sat behind the desk and started to think.
Hermione couldn’t get over the fact that she, well they, were in this position at all. Severus had been cleared. It had been a reluctant decision on the part of the Wizengamot, but he had been cleared nonetheless. Voldemort was gone, and people were finally moving on with their lives.
Now they had encountered this atrocity. Hermione had heard enough of Dawlish’s description to know that Anna Bloom was probably no longer recognizable as the young woman she had been. Hermione could feel in her very soul that the one responsible was an absolute monster. Most of the people fitting that description had been taken care of right after Voldemort’s fall. Lucius Malfoy was the only one she could think of who was free and had the vileness to commit such a crime. Conveniently enough, he had just happened to be here the day Anna’s life was so brutally taken.
Hermione shook herself to get the images and thoughts out of her head. Her questions were not going to write themselves. Maybe if she wrote down topics, instead of specific questions, she would get somewhere.
George Epps, she wrote. He especially bothered her. When Dawlish mentioned Mr. Epps, he resembled a kid who’d been told Christmas was happening twice a year.
Other motives. Hermione didn’t believe Severus held anything against the girl, but it was better to know for certain.
Lucius Malfoy’s job and habits as a Death Eater. If Severus had seen Lucius commit acts of a similar nature, it might help in clearing his name.
As Hermione finished making her list, Ernie Macmillan stepped out of the fireplace. She looked up and stifled a yawn.
“Please, Hermione, tell me you got some sleep,” he asked, sounding worried.
“Don’t worry. I haven’t been up very long. I was wide awake and decided to make good use of my time.” She indicated the parchment. “I’ve made a list of topics to discuss with Severus.”
“That will be helpful. I have some notes as well. We won’t be able to see Professor Snape until ten o’clock. To kill that time, we should compare notes, and you should eat breakfast,” Ernie said.
“Yes, Father,” Hermione said with a small smile.
Author's Notes: A huge thank you to Zen Lady for beta reading.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Faithful Death
37 Reviews | 6.16/10 Average
Excellent retelling of perverted justice and vigilante murder.
Missy/LovesRickman
I looked up the story of Leo Frank when I started reading this story and as soon as I did, I knew your story was going to break my heart! And it did. I still haven't read the second ending. Somehow, I cannot. And if I was Hermione, I don't think I could even bear to see Harry let alone consider him a friend by that point...
It is so much easier to forgive a dead man than a live one and if Snape had survived DH, I can still see this happening. And now, I really need to go read something fluffy...
How odd that a stock photo of Leo Frank looks a lot like young Tom Riddle!
Good ending.
Thank you again for the alt ending, I usually scroll through tha chapter summaries and thought it was just going to be a random student dying. (That sounded really bad, didn't it? I meant a PRETEND one:}
Did you not state at the beginning of this story that the Dementors had been banished? Is there a woman named Dementor in the prison?
Thank you for the alternate ending. Most authors do not do that. I do. I was going to positively send you a Howler!
o dear...i like the second ending sooooo much more... the first one had me crying and wondering how she didnt kill harry...i would NEVER forgive him...but thats just me!
anyways, kudos to you for this wonderful story ssspllleeeee~ SSL
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for reading this story and letting me know what you thought. Hermione is too humane to kill another person, even if they did something terrible. To her, being ignored is an even worse punishment than anything else.
A sad tale but worthy of telling.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you very much. I am glad you feel that way.
I read the original ending on SH. This was much better and didnt bring tears to my eyes. Phenominal story this, well done; again.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you so much! I'm glad to know you stuck through the whole thing.
yep. I definetly like ending B better. lol.
tragic, but nicely done.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thanks for letting me know. Your feedback is appreciated.
i love both versions of the ending, but being a sentimental fool, i have to prefer the one where he doesn't die! terrific story!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you so much! I always looked forward to reading your reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I know I already reviewed you know where, but couldn't resist commenting again.As I said, I like the original ending more. And after re-reading I am even more positive of my opinion. It is more poignant and really strikes a chord in my social conscience. I like that is a story with a true moral, much like "A Man For All Seasons". While Severus is not exactly Thomas More, he is a man with convictions. And that these convictions should see him condemned and reviled is but a symptom of our corrupted version of justice.While the romantic in me is overjoyed with the possibility of Severus and Hermione finding happiness, I can't quite quiet my more pragmatic side.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for both reviews. I am very glad that you like this story enough to even reread at least part of it. These events hit terribly close to our present society's outlook.
I definitely prefer this ending! Thanks for sharing.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thanks for letting me know.
At least there is hope!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Yes, there is. Thanks for the note.
I like Hermione's honesty with her husband and how skilled she is at avoiding misunderstanding. That shows what a strong connection she has with him, and that is very reassuring.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you. I like hearing what people think of my take on the characters.
hermione's letter to harry was great! and i like this kinder version of minerva.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you! I dearly hoped that her letter wasn't too harsh, so I'm glad that you liked what I did with that. We've seen this side of Minerva occasionally in the books, but I think since Hermione isn't a student any longer that this is how she would act toward her friends. Glad you liked it. :)
great update! i don't know which is worse-harry's letter or skeeter's article.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you. To me, Harry's letter is worse because he is supposed to be a friend to Hermione. Though, both things are bad.
poor snape! and poor hermione. please let him out of Azkaban soon!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for the review. Unfortunately, it will be a while before Snape gets out of Azkaban...
the suspense grows... very nice chapter!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you! This is my first longer fic, so the feedback helps.
wow, this is like Law and Order: Hogwarts Unit. it was helpful to have a description of what happened to Anna, but ew. the killer has to be someone especially sick. can't wait to see how it unfolds.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Lol! I like the description. And, yes, the person who did this really is sick. I'm glad you're enjoying this.
Having finally caught up with the first two chapters, I can see how Argus got tied in with things. (That'll teach me to start reading on the third chapter, eh?)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Hehe. Glad you now have all of the back story.
I like how you quickly begin with an "update" on things that have happened since we've read last. Lucius... gonna keep mah eye on him. :)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Lucius is sneaky. Not someone I would trust for very long.
I've greatly enjoyed this chapter. I guess it's because I finally got to "see" what happened to the girl. Good work. Imagery is great.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you very much. I was kind of worried what people would say at the brutality.
Poor Filch. Teehee. How'd he get mixed up in that? (Guess it's some great Squib/Ex-DE conspiracy, eh?) Good chapter.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you, and you've answered your own question.