Chapter 3: Questions
Chapter 3 of 17
Clara MinutesThe first round of questioning.
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Chapter 3: Questions
Just after lunch, Hermione heard pounding on the door to their chambers. She was in her study marking essays while Severus was in his private lab brewing potions for the hospital wing.
Hermione got up and walked to the door. A quick charm told her it was Minerva on the other side. Hermione opened the door and noticed Argus Filch standing behind the Headmistress looking ill at ease.
"Minerva, Argus, what can I do for you?"
"I need to see Severus," Minerva stated in a tone that brooked no argument.
"He's in the lab; I'll go get him," Hermione said. "Please, come in."
She moved through their chambers to the door to Severus's lab. Knowing how he hated to be disturbed while working, Hermione knocked tentatively on the thick oak door. After a few moments, Severus threw open the door in an obvious temper.
"Can't this wait?" Severus snarled. "I'm in the middle of a complex potion that needs my full attention."
"I'm afraid not. Minerva is waiting in our sitting room, and this is not a social call," Hermione explained.
After glaring past Hermione and in the general direction of their study, Severus turned back to his worktable. With highly agitated movements, Severus managed to clear his workspace. He spun back around and stormed by Hermione to the sitting room.
She followed him out in time to hear the Headmistress say, "Severus Snape, I will have to ask you to come with me. A Law Enforcement Officer is waiting in my office to ask you a few questions."
Heaving a great sigh, Severus made his way to the door. Noticing no one was following, he turned back to the room with a raised eyebrow.
"Well, what are you waiting for? I have better ways to spend my Saturdays," came his scathing comment from the door.
Minerva got up and looked at Hermione. "These are only preliminary questions; he should be back in no time."
"Thank you, Headmistress."
Hermione shut the door after them and sat down in her spot on the couch. She Summoned a glass and a bottle of wine. Now all she had to do was wait.
It was late evening when Severus returned from the Headmistress's office. Hermione was still sitting on the couch. Setting her book down, she regarded her husband. He looked pale and drawn. Hermione moved her legs off the couch and motioned for Severus to come and sit with her.
While Severus was getting comfortable, Hermione Summoned a glass and a bottle of firewhisky. She poured him a large measure and placed the glass in his hand.
Severus proceeded to look at the glass as if it had done him a great personal wrong.
"I have no doubt that you'll want to know what happened. Am I correct?" Severus said in a low voice.
Hermione's immediate thought was that things must not have gone well if he was acting so morose.
"I figure that I can keep my tongue until you are ready to tell me what happened," Hermione answered in what she hoped was a calming voice.
In the same low voice as before, Severus stated, "As you are observant, you have probably guessed that things do not look good. First of all, that idiot Dawlish was the one asking questions. He is Head of Law Enforcement, so 'it's his right.' Nonsense, is what I think. He still believes that I acted purely for my own benefit during the war, so I am a condemned man already. Why I was gone for such a length of time was because he insisted on asking Argus and I the same questions three times through. Luckily for me, I was first so I was allowed to leave. Argus was still there being badgered when I left. Dawlish probably hopes Argus will change his story now that I am no longer in the room."
Hermione knew that with Dawlish working the case things would not be easy for them. She was trying to think of people who could possibly help them in this situation. Remus Lupin would have been perfect with his knowledge of the laws, but Wormtail, better known as Peter Pettigrew, had seen to it that Remus would not do anything ever again. During the final confrontation, Wormtail had attacked Remus with a silver knife. The full moon was near so Remus's wolf nature was close to the surface. The silver slowly drained the life from him. Wormtail did not make it through the battle unscathed. As soon as Tonks had seen the life leave Remus's body, she turned on Wormtail and cast an unknown curse. She hadn't been the same since.
Blinking away the memories, Hermione tried to think of someone else. Then it hit her. Ernie Macmillan was a wizarding lawyer. He had worked on some other high profile cases. Ernie was also one of the few that believed in Severus's innocence. She would contact him as soon as Severus finished relaying the day's events.
"Argus doesn't know any more about the murder than I do," Severus said while allowing his head to drop into his hands.
"Dawlish tried to - refresh - our memories by telling us in detail what happened to the girl. As Minerva said, she was brutally murdered. I won't go into it in full, but Anna died from slow blood loss. She was severely beaten and raped; whoever did this is a monster."
Severus glanced up at this last part, a deadened look in his eyes. He got up from the couch and started pacing the length of the room.
"Dawlish had the nerve to stare me in the face and say that this was the work of a Death Eater gone free." Hermione noticed an odd look on Severus's face. He hated that accusation more than anything.
"Minerva abruptly told him that she would throw him from this school if he showed such bias and indiscretion again."
Hermione had to smile at that. Minerva was nothing if not fiercely loyal to people she cared about.
A question that had been bothering her slipped out before she could stop herself. "But, Severus, what about your alibi? You were here with me from the moment your rounds were done until that next morning."
"Actually, no, I wasn't," came the soft reply from Severus.
"What?" Hermione breathed.
"After you fell asleep I was still restless. I decided to walk the grounds. I needed the fresh air. I got back to our rooms at four that morning."
Hermione just stared at her husband in shock.
"Since Miss Bloom is said to have died between two o'clock and five o'clock, I am the perfect person for the murder."
"What about motive, did you have that too?" Hermione asked in a despairing tone.
"Only the fact that she is a 'Mudblood Gryffindor'."
"That's rich, being that you've been married to a 'Mudblood Gryffindor' for four years, and last time I checked, I am very much alive."
The Ministry was absurd for thinking Severus to be guilty. They knew from prior instances what his jobs were for Voldemort. He was Voldemort's Potions Master; because of this, he was never forced to get blood on his hands. Hermione shook her head.
"The Ministry should know better than to suspect you. They have plenty of prior evidence as to why you can't have done this."
Severus nodded in acknowledgement of her statement and said, "It has been a long day for both of us. I am going to retire. Are you going to join me?"
"I'll be there shortly. I have to finish a letter."
Severus bowed and left the room. As soon as Hermione heard the bathroom door close, she found parchment and a quill. She wrote:
Ernie,
I know it has been a while since we've corresponded, but I have a favor to ask. Would you be available to meet me at the Leaky Cauldron for a late lunch tomorrow - say two o'clock? I know it is Sunday, and you are a busy person. If there is a conflict, send this owl back immediately. If not, I look forward to seeing you tomorrow.
Say hello to Hannah and the kids for me.
Sincerely,
Hermione Snape
After sealing the note, she called for Morpheus, their owl. Attaching the letter she said, "Take this to Ernie Macmillan with all the haste you can. Wait for a reply if there is one." With that, Morpheus took off into the night.
Author's Notes: Thank you to Potion Mistress and Zen Lady for the beta! They are both invaluable.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Faithful Death
37 Reviews | 6.16/10 Average
Excellent retelling of perverted justice and vigilante murder.
Missy/LovesRickman
I looked up the story of Leo Frank when I started reading this story and as soon as I did, I knew your story was going to break my heart! And it did. I still haven't read the second ending. Somehow, I cannot. And if I was Hermione, I don't think I could even bear to see Harry let alone consider him a friend by that point...
It is so much easier to forgive a dead man than a live one and if Snape had survived DH, I can still see this happening. And now, I really need to go read something fluffy...
How odd that a stock photo of Leo Frank looks a lot like young Tom Riddle!
Good ending.
Thank you again for the alt ending, I usually scroll through tha chapter summaries and thought it was just going to be a random student dying. (That sounded really bad, didn't it? I meant a PRETEND one:}
Did you not state at the beginning of this story that the Dementors had been banished? Is there a woman named Dementor in the prison?
Thank you for the alternate ending. Most authors do not do that. I do. I was going to positively send you a Howler!
o dear...i like the second ending sooooo much more... the first one had me crying and wondering how she didnt kill harry...i would NEVER forgive him...but thats just me!
anyways, kudos to you for this wonderful story ssspllleeeee~ SSL
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for reading this story and letting me know what you thought. Hermione is too humane to kill another person, even if they did something terrible. To her, being ignored is an even worse punishment than anything else.
A sad tale but worthy of telling.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you very much. I am glad you feel that way.
I read the original ending on SH. This was much better and didnt bring tears to my eyes. Phenominal story this, well done; again.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you so much! I'm glad to know you stuck through the whole thing.
yep. I definetly like ending B better. lol.
tragic, but nicely done.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thanks for letting me know. Your feedback is appreciated.
i love both versions of the ending, but being a sentimental fool, i have to prefer the one where he doesn't die! terrific story!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you so much! I always looked forward to reading your reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I know I already reviewed you know where, but couldn't resist commenting again.As I said, I like the original ending more. And after re-reading I am even more positive of my opinion. It is more poignant and really strikes a chord in my social conscience. I like that is a story with a true moral, much like "A Man For All Seasons". While Severus is not exactly Thomas More, he is a man with convictions. And that these convictions should see him condemned and reviled is but a symptom of our corrupted version of justice.While the romantic in me is overjoyed with the possibility of Severus and Hermione finding happiness, I can't quite quiet my more pragmatic side.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for both reviews. I am very glad that you like this story enough to even reread at least part of it. These events hit terribly close to our present society's outlook.
I definitely prefer this ending! Thanks for sharing.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thanks for letting me know.
At least there is hope!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Yes, there is. Thanks for the note.
I like Hermione's honesty with her husband and how skilled she is at avoiding misunderstanding. That shows what a strong connection she has with him, and that is very reassuring.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you. I like hearing what people think of my take on the characters.
hermione's letter to harry was great! and i like this kinder version of minerva.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you! I dearly hoped that her letter wasn't too harsh, so I'm glad that you liked what I did with that. We've seen this side of Minerva occasionally in the books, but I think since Hermione isn't a student any longer that this is how she would act toward her friends. Glad you liked it. :)
great update! i don't know which is worse-harry's letter or skeeter's article.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you. To me, Harry's letter is worse because he is supposed to be a friend to Hermione. Though, both things are bad.
poor snape! and poor hermione. please let him out of Azkaban soon!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you for the review. Unfortunately, it will be a while before Snape gets out of Azkaban...
the suspense grows... very nice chapter!
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you! This is my first longer fic, so the feedback helps.
wow, this is like Law and Order: Hogwarts Unit. it was helpful to have a description of what happened to Anna, but ew. the killer has to be someone especially sick. can't wait to see how it unfolds.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Lol! I like the description. And, yes, the person who did this really is sick. I'm glad you're enjoying this.
Having finally caught up with the first two chapters, I can see how Argus got tied in with things. (That'll teach me to start reading on the third chapter, eh?)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Hehe. Glad you now have all of the back story.
I like how you quickly begin with an "update" on things that have happened since we've read last. Lucius... gonna keep mah eye on him. :)
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Lucius is sneaky. Not someone I would trust for very long.
I've greatly enjoyed this chapter. I guess it's because I finally got to "see" what happened to the girl. Good work. Imagery is great.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you very much. I was kind of worried what people would say at the brutality.
Poor Filch. Teehee. How'd he get mixed up in that? (Guess it's some great Squib/Ex-DE conspiracy, eh?) Good chapter.
Response from Clara Minutes (Author of Faithful Death)
Thank you, and you've answered your own question.