Mystery Patient
Chapter 12 of 15
anogeteHermione uncovers Snape's final remaining secret when he hires her as an assistant. Will she be able to keep her job and help him through another difficult time in his life? HBP-compliant.
ReviewedChapter 12: Mystery Patient
Hermione was unsure how long she tossed and turned in fitful sleep. It was still dark outside when the sound of the front door woke her. Had she been resting well, the slight click wouldn't have disturbed her rest, but her heightened emotions and new feelings for Professor Snape were turning the wheels in her mind too fast for sleep. Grabbing her robe, she slipped into the hall and hurried to the window by the door. Snape was standing a few yards from the cottage, looking at the night sky. Before she could puzzle out what he was doing up so late, he Disapparated.
Opening the door, Hermione stepped out on the stoop and sighed heavily. She wanted to be let into his life, but he still had secrets he insisted on keeping. Only a person with troubles or secrets would sneak out in the middle of the night to Disapparate to some unknown place. Hermione's eyes widened. Disapparate. Disapparate! Harry's spell!
She rushed down the path to the spot Snape had last been. The exact frame of time one had to follow traces of the first person was something Harry and Ron had not worked out completely, but it had only been a few seconds between Snape's departure and that moment. Hermione closed her eyes and clenched her fists at her sides. Please don't let me splinch myself, she thought as she whispered the incantation and tried to relax enough for a proper Disapparation.
It was, without question, one of the most disorienting moments of her life, but she found herself only a second later in an alley next to a large building. She saw Snape, in his white dress shirt and black pants, turn the corner around the building and disappear from her sight. Hermione didn't have time to rejoice over her successful attempt at following him or she would lose sight of him. She felt absolutely ridiculous in her robe so she performed a quick charm to avoid notice and rushed after him.
As she neared the glass doors of the brightly-lit building, she realized that Snape had entered a hospital a Muggle hospital. She berated herself for thinking that he only would have visited a patient at St. Mungo's as she followed him up two flights of stairs. He stopped on the third floor and briskly walked down the hallway, giving the two nurses at the desk a nod of acknowledgement. He obviously came here often since they didn't question his presence so late at night.
She tiptoed by the nurse's station and peered through the small crack in one of the doors. Snape was sitting in a chair by a hospital bed with his hand resting on someone else's hand. She was unable to see whom the hand belonged to from the view afforded by the slightly open door. Snape produced a small phial from his pocket, and Hermione knew it was the potion he worked on the previous afternoon. His body moved out of her line of sight for several seconds. She could only assume that he was administering the potion to the patient in the bed.
He sat back down in the chair beside the bed and waited. Minutes ticked by, and his face was still the same, giving no indication that the potion was working properly. Snape dropped his head down onto his arms as he rested them on the side of the hospital bed. Hermione blinked back tears and turned away. It was hard to see Professor Snape in such a state, but as much as she wanted to help him, she knew he would be furious with her if he knew she had been spying on him in such a private moment. Ducking into an empty room down the hall, she Disapparated and returned to his bedroom.
She was extremely curious about the identity of the person in the bed, but he would never tell her unless she asked for the information, and she couldn't ask because that would reveal the fact that she had spied on him. However, now more than ever, she wanted to help him finish that potion. His misery and despair were palpable, constricting her heart into a painful lump in her chest.
Hermione estimated an hour of time passed between her return and Snape's return. She heard rustling at the other end of the house, and finally, the small light that had been lit when he arrived was snuffed out. She closed her eyes and forced herself to fall asleep again. She wouldn't be any help at all if she fell asleep on his desk in the morning.
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Sunday morning arrived, and Hermione dragged herself out of bed. She did her usual morning rituals quickly and threw on a pair of jeans and a t-shirt. She no longer felt the need to impress Professor Snape with her professional attire at all times. She found him in the laboratory. His elbows were resting on the island countertop, and his fingers were clenched tightly in his black hair. "Professor?" Hermione asked softly.
When he raised his head to look at her, Hermione saw just how distressed he was. His eyes were bloodshot, and the bags beneath them were even darker than usual. His rumpled clothes were the same ones he had worn the previous night. She wanted to order him to bed, but he would never agree to it; no one was more stubborn than Severus Snape. "Yes, Miss Granger?" he replied, blinking his eyes and trying to pull himself together.
"Would you please talk to me, sir?"
"Talk to you?"
"Yes, tell me what is wrong, tell me what is going on."
He snorted and turned his head. "I don't know what you're talking about."
"You're unwell, and you left the house in the middle of the night. You look worse this morning than I've ever seen you look. I'd like to help you, but I don't know how." She stepped further into the lab and slipped onto a stool across from him.
Snape gave her a small smile. "Thank you for appearing to care, Miss Granger. Most don't even give me the courtesy of that."
"But I do care!" Hermione exclaimed.
"I do not know why you would. There isn't much to care about in regards to me."
Hermione furrowed her brow and leaned forward to bring herself closer to him. "Professor, I think there is a great deal to care about. You're an intelligent, insightful, interesting, passionate person. I've never met anyone like you, and I doubt I ever will. I'm deeply honored to be working with you, and I'm thrilled that you've been treating me like an equal by letting me assist with your personal projects. I only wish I could do more to help you."
Snape's eyes were wide, and disbelief was written across his face. "Have you gone mad, Miss Granger?"
She laughed and shook her head. "You're also a saint for putting up with me."
Despite his dour mood, he laughed softly at her and looked away. "A saint, indeed." Snape paused and returned his gaze to her. "You're not as bothersome as I've alleged you to be, and I've enjoyed working with you over the past few weeks."
His admission made Hermione flash him a wide smile. "So, I was thinking about your potion the one for the coma patients."
The talk of work sobered Snape up, and the creases reappeared on his forehead. "Yes? What about it?"
"Well, there may be another way to go about it. You're positive that gotu kola is the best bet to stimulate brain cells?"
Snape nodded.
"The trouble is boosting its healing qualities enough to affect a patient, right?"
"Correct."
"What if we found an ingredient, like blue algae, that would make the body more receptive to the gotu kola instead of strengthening the gotu kola?"
Snape brought his hand up to tap his lips with a long finger. She watched him for nearly a minute as he thought her suggestion over. Finally, he nodded his head slowly. "That's a promising idea. Perhaps we can work on it today?"
Hermione nodded enthusiastically. "I'll run out to the nearest apothecary and get the blue algae. You prepare the base, and I'll be back in a few minutes."
Snape was already moving toward a clean cauldron when he replied, "I give you a compliment and suddenly you believe you can begin ordering me around." His voice didn't have the usual angry tone to it. Hermione simply smiled at him before Disapparating.
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Snape's hand covered Hermione's and guided it closer to the bubbling liquid in the cauldron. Hermione wasn't sure whether to faint or jerk away in shock. She could count the number of times she had touched Snape on one hand. He rarely let anyone into his personal space, and he avoided touching everyone. Such a casual gesture on his part unnerved her.
"You'll disturb the potion if you drop it in from that height," he said softly, lowering her hand even more. She let him direct her movements until he told her to add the last ingredient. They had both created the potion, and Hermione was surprised to realize they worked extremely well together. She imagined them as an old couple, turning, and spinning, and reaching for ingredients in a small lab, but never bumping into one another. She mentally laughed at herself for such a silly thought.
"Do you think it will work?" she asked, stepping back from the counter and watching him lower the fire with his wand.
He turned to face her. "Perhaps. I'll test it as soon as possible."
"On whom?"
Snape abruptly turned around and walked across the room to rearrange a row of empty jars. "That's none of your concern, Miss Granger."
"I helped you make the potion; I'd like to know who you're going to test it on."
"I'll let you know the outcome once I've tested it."
"But "
"I refuse to answer your question, Miss Granger; accept that and move on."
Hermione opened her mouth to respond, but a clicking at the window distracted her. A small barn owl was sitting outside with a white envelope tied around its leg. Snape did not make a move to let it in, so she walked across the room and slid the window open just enough for the owl to hop inside. It took flight and disappeared into the midday sky once she removed the letter.
"It's for me," Hermione said, opening the letter.
Miss Jane Wharton,
After careful consideration we have decided to allow you to continue living in your current flat. However, you must remove all potion paraphernalia from your quarters, and you must cease all unauthorized potion-making, effective immediately.
Perdido Station Apartment Association
Hermione frowned and folded the letter up.
"Miss Granger?" Snape looked slightly concerned. She never thought she'd see the day when he was concerned for her.
"It was from the Association. They've decided to let me return to my flat, but I can't experiment with potions anymore. They're making me remove everything from my place." She sat down on the stool with a heavy sigh. "I'll be bored out of my mind if they won't allow me to experiment. It's my passion. I can't think of anything that gives me more satisfaction."
Snape tilted his head to the side and watched her silently. Finally, after several moments, he spoke up. "Far be it from me to stifle the growth of a Potion Mistress in the making. You may use my laboratory after hours for as long as you like."
Hermione looked up at him in complete shock.
"Provided you aren't a nuisance," he added when he saw the smile growing on her lips.
She jumped up from the stool in barely contained glee. "Professor, thank you! I could... I could just... hug you right now!"
Snape looked uncomfortable. "Yes, well... please do not. Your verbal thanks is quite enough."
She was giddy at the thought of having access to his personal lab for all of her experimentation. He had also said she was a Potion Mistress in the making. It was enough to make her want to spring into a dance right in the middle of Snape's laboratory. "I've imposed on you long enough, Professor. I believe I'll go home and finish tidying up my flat. I appreciate your hospitality and our talks."
"Yes, yes. Off you go," he said, dismissing her. She could see he was uncomfortable with the gratitude and appreciation. He didn't exactly welcome compliments either.
Hermione retrieved her belongings from his bedroom and stopped at the door to the lab before she left. "Thank you, sir," she said in a soft voice.
He looked up from the cauldron to meet her gaze. "You're welcome, Miss Granger."
She smiled and walked down the hall with a spring in her step.
Author's Note: Thank you to Snarkyroxy for being such a great beta. Thanks also go to Allyness and Jessica for their help with this fic. And for all of those who have been wondering who is in a coma, I'll reveal that in the next chapter.
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180 Reviews | 6.19/10 Average
I really enjoyed their conversation. Each took steps to coming to terms with the pain of the war.
Well its a complicaton when another man enteres the pciture at leats it's not Victor .... hes not my favorite third person. Looking forward to more.
Ahhh they are going to live together at least a few days :) Thats exciting :)
Ah so a way to aman's heart is throughhis stomach LOL Loved the last scene.
Little progress. I look forward to the next chapter.
Well that was a tuff beginning for them. I know it will get better in time :)
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to more interaction between them.
Looking forward to more. Good start.
That was a wonderful ending and a pleasure to read. I enjoyed my time with this story. It was very well spent. Thank you.
That was a wonderful exciting encounter between them. You worte a very beleivable Snape.
really enjoyed this chapter. I love the growing awarness they are having of eachother.
Well Bummer she's moving back to ehr palce. LOL. Loved their growing friendship. Looking forward to knowing the identity of the patient...hoping it his mother. :)
Very well done. Glad they managed to come together. Sad that he had to lose him mother so soon after getting her back. Love the closing line, "they can put a sock in it."
This was a truly wonderful story. I read it all in a day. And you kept both of them so well in character. I could picture it all in my mind. Very believable. And the love scenes were so sensual. I found myself wanting to switch places with Hermione.
Great job.
omg
this is perhaps the best ss/hg fan fic i've ever read
and im not just saying that
the characters of hermione and severus were DEAD on
oh my good lord that was good
BRAVO
(now write more)
I have to say that this is among one of my all time favorite fan fics. I love the way that you portray Severus' character. It is believable and honest. What man would not be snarky and bad tempered if he felt responsibe for his mother's incapacitation? BTW you are also one of my favorite authors on TPP. I apologize that I do not review more often. I have made it a New Years resolution to leave more reviews even when I am rereading fics that have been written long ago. Irish
This was quite lovely. I enjoyed it a great deal.
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
Thanks!
Awww. I loved it! I just wish there was a cure for her and evil bid bad daddy snape (he doesnt even deserve that name!) would go away. Eileen is such a sweetie and i love how you used her so pivotally. Nicely done!
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
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Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
Thank ya! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. I didn't want to wrap everything up in a nice neat package at the end. I wanted things to be left undone or unsaid. I wanted there to be good things and bad things.
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
And that is exactly what you did. As mad as I am...*grawr*...that you didn't tie it up in a pretty christmas package for me , I think it worked wonderfully in this story. Thank you!!!
What can I say. I didn't realize you had updated and missed it until today. Incredible story. How gifted a writer you are! I loved the ending. Snape's sterility is fitting. In line with the barren waste of his heart. At least that has been revived. That note was so sweet. I really cried at this. My aunt's two year-old fought cancer for a year before she died, and this really made me wish for a moment that magic could be real. It just goes to show that at some time, everyone's life is touched with tragedy. But having those that you love around you makes all difference in the world. How grateful Eileen must have been to know that Severus had Hermione.I truly loved watching this develop. Again thank you for such a terrific story.
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
Thank you for the kind words! How horrible that such a young child had to go through the difficulties and pain of such a evil disease. I've always had trouble (and still do) with understanding why some of these amazing people in my life have had to deal with cancer and the awful things it does to a person's body.
Dear Anogete,
*Much applause. Reader rises, and continues to clap hands furiously.*
I have read quite a bit on the internet, and this story definitely be in my top 5 favorite stories.
Thank you for making the effort to write this so well. And I also extend my thanks to Snarkyroxy, Allyness, and Jessica for helping you to bring this story about. (although, I have to admit the term "beta" is very new to me....)
Some of my comments might be a repetition of the past remarks I have made. Please forgive me that. And a disclaimer now, I'm new to this area of fandom, so my experience with these stories is limited. Please bear that in mind as you read my comments.
Wonderful story. I like how the relationship evolved, and the depth you gave to the characters. Usually when I read a Snape and Hermione romance, I overlook the....abruptness? of it just to see what happens. That DEFINATELY was not the case for me in this. I totally believe the transformation. You took the time to make it real. It worked for me.
I would have to say "believability" is the highest mark I give this work. Considering how some fandoms, any fandoms, go, that's a big compliment. Especially from me, because that's one of the tests I give everything I read. I do like some stories that do not pass that test for me. It's nice to read one that does. Not that anything I say has to mean anything, but for what it's worth anyway.
You also, to me, have a great build to this story, in both the events and the sexual tension. And you have some falling action too, which is nice, because many stories of a sexual nature tend to end on the climax of the story (pun not intended, but useful ). Or at least most of the ones I've read -- not just on this site, elsewhere too.
You made me laugh several times throughout the story. Just over quirky things, like how he called her a "potions mistress", and some of Crookshanks typical antics. Although the fact that Crookshanks curled up by Severus's feet was kind of a big deal, since his lineage means he can discern natures........which you understated, which was great. Oh, and his mom making those comments was classic. I loved it. My jaw actually dropped when she told Hermione how glad she was Severua had found someone "as beautiful and talented" as her.
My one low point is that the mother was found to have cancer upon waking up. Granted, it's believable that no one would have found it before now, because, well, why do a head scan of a patient comatose for over two decades? But, it seemed a little overdone. I thought she would have just passed away, since I guess that has been known to happen. However, the story would not have been able to end as it did. His mother is okay for now -- a grieving Severus would have led to quite a different ending. So I understand the decision.
That, and Hermione invited him home that morning not the night before.... (take it as a compliment I'm obsessing over this story enough to note that mistake)
All in all, absolutely wonderful story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and I think I might actually be reading this again.
Any chance of a sequel?
Sincerely Satisfied Reader,
Mrs. Mystified
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
Wow, I've been a bad author and haven't check my reviews in a while. What a pleasure it was to sign in and see such a wonderful note! I'm very glad that you enjoy the story. Unfortunately, I have no sequel to offer for this one, but I do have a couple other shorter fics floating about out there, as well as ideas to begin other stories. I'm just waiting for that darn muse to return to me. The words just don't come so easily sometimes.
Response from Mrs Mystified (Reviewer)
Dear Anogete,
I completely understand about not checking reviews. My computer actually broke about half a year ago, and hadn't been able to come online at all, really. So when I came online again (finally!) and checked my email, it was kindof interesting to see that a response came the same month I got a new computer. Thank you for taking the time to reply after all this time! It was nice to see a response on the first page of my inbox to help me jump back into things. I hope you are well, and again, great job on a wonderful story -- I remember how estatic I was about your piece when I wrote this review.
Sincerely,
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
May the Muse amuse you soon!
Dear Anogete,
So, I am commenting again before the end. Ah well.
What I truly appreciate is the depth you are giving to Hermione and Snape. The psychosis depicted in this chapter is very real. The need to apologize and be forgiven on such....gosh, how to put it......indirect hurts? is a real need of people. As it is to be thanked, as Hermione thanks Snape for his sacrifices. I've known of people who were thanked for actions they did completely unrelated to the person who thanked them, and it....helped something inside them. So having this exchange of thank you's and sorry's is a welcome site to me. It's real.
I truly like where you are going with the character's developments. I didn't completely believe some of their interactions, the first Saturday conversation for example, but as you have expounded on the story, I do believe it now.
The way you describe Snape sound like real psychosis (nice way of saying "mental problems.") Like Snape could be Bi-Polar with paranoia (albeit rightfully so).
And I have to admit, I'm glad I'm reading a fiction that is already posted in it's entirety, so I don't have to wait..........
Which is good because I can't put the webstory down!
Sincerely,
Mrs. Mystified
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
I feel your pain on incomplete fics! I feel a sense of loss when I devote so much time to reading a fic, only to find that it has been abandoned. And, I actually won't even read an incomplete fic until at least five chapters are posted. There are too many authors that write a chapter or two and putter out after that. I started this fic months before I posted anything. The last two chapters were away at my beta's before I posted the first chapter. I thought I should give the same sort of consideration as an author that I like to receive as a reader.When I first began posting it, many people responded with questions about Snape's motivations. Some were concerned that he was out of character or that he was acting strangely for no reason at all. I had the entire story planned out by the time I finished the second chapter. I knew what I wanted to do and where I wanted both characters to go. So, I wrote with the end in mind. I didn't want Snape to remain a complete mystery until the very end when he finally reveals what is going on to Hermione. So, I think many of his actions in the beginning do seem off without the knowledge of what is happening in his life that is revealed in later chapters. I kept telling everyone that there is more to Snape's life than just potions and Hermione working for him.Anyway, glad you're enjoying it. And I promise to never post an unfinished story. ;-)
Dear Anogete,
I was planning on commenting when I had finished reading all of this -- and I still do.
But I simply could not pass by this chapter without remarking.
White Sheets?!!!!
I was completely surprised!!! I would never have thought of white sheets for S. Snape's bedroom! So, thanks for surprising me! Such a small detail, I know......... Until Later, Sincerely,
Mrs. Mystified
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
LOL I'm glad I could surprise you. ;-) I've never really bought into all those thoughts of Snape's sheets being silk or satin. Nor do I believe that he'd be one for indulgent colors. He's a very matter-of-fact sort of fellow, and I think because of that he would have plain, white sheets. I don't think he'd fuss over his bedclothes or put much thought into them at all. He'd just use what he had - and everyone has white sheets.
Thank goodness they're finally using first names!
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
It took me a while to talk them into it, but I think I finally convinced Severus to play nice.
Aww, i loved this story, it had a few turns, and characteristic disagreements, and yet everything turned out great :) I loved your idea of the letter from Eileen, such a brilliant idea to bring them even closer!Great story!~Sarah
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
Thank you! Glad to hear that you enjoyed it! :-)
Great love story, great writing
Response from anogete (Author of Love Him in My Absence)
Thanks!