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Potions Under Duress A Slip of the Tongue
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A Slip of the Tongue

1: A Slip of the Tongue

2: The Truth Hurts

3: To Tell the Truth

4: Truth and Consequences

5: The Owl Cometh

6: A Victim's Rights

7: Him, Him, and Her

8: The Truth Without Veritaserum

9: True Colors

10: Pain and Potions

11: Convenient Truths

A Slip of the Tongue

GinnyW

228 Reviews   |   228 Ratings, 0 Likes, 214 Favorites )

Drama Romance General Potions Under Duress 42,687 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Ron wonders why he and Hermione have yet to start a romantic relationship and he takes drastic measures to find out.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: A Slip of the Tongue

Chapter 2: The Truth Hurts

Chapter 3: To Tell the Truth

Chapter 4: Truth and Consequences

Chapter 5: The Owl Cometh

Chapter 6: A Victim's Rights

Chapter 7: Him, Him, and Her

Chapter 8: The Truth Without Veritaserum

Chapter 9: True Colors

Chapter 10: Pain and Potions

Chapter 11: Convenient Truths


About GinnyW

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GinnyW

20 Stories  |  Favorited by 251  |  164 Reviews Written  |  529 Review Responses

I'm a 40+ year old mother of 4 who works full-time, goes to school, and writes in what little spare time I have. Once upon a time I co-moderate the SS/HG Gift Exchange with Shiv5468 and Scattered Logic.

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Reviews for A Slip of the Tongue

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Anijade

Good chapter I am really looking forward to the reveng.  Personally I think I would have snubbed the Weasley's more at the restaurant but that's just me

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Thankyou. It's just taking so long to get to the revenge. *snort* It never was supposed to take this long, you know. ;)

9/10

ancientgirl

I'm dying to read about the revenge.  I'm wondering though, so Ginny is off the hook for slipping her the calming draught?  I like the relationship you are building between Severus and Hermione.  It's flowing very well.

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

*snicker* I'm terrible for making people wait so long, aren't I? Ginny is off the hook... it was a simple calming draught more with the intent of calming Harry than anyone else... she just had to drug all of them to do that.

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ann1982

This started with an interesting concept and carried through brilliantly. Thank you for sharing!

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LillaQ

This was well worth waiting for!

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Thank you, I'm so glad that you think so! :D

9/10

Kore

"Not unless you want me to," he murmured silkily in her ear.

 *Cackles* That's a perfect line. I'm now off to read more!

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HogwartsHoney

Bloody Aurors. You just KNOW they're gonna take care of their own.  Still, I'm interested to see what revenge gets plotted over lunch!

Looking forward to more, and I totally understand how RL gets! ::hugs:: 

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

HA HA HA! Yes, most definately. Those darn Aurors. Revenge will be plotted over lunch though I'm toying with how to write it. You see, it's much more fun to SEE the revenge than to read about the plan. ;) *Evil Ginny* We'll see how it goes. I'll get more up as soon as I can. Thank you, hon!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)

*grins* Evil Ginny indeed, but that's why we lurve you!!

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

*snicker* I know... I need to see if I can get all of it into one chapter otherwise people will get frustrated. LOL!

10/10

cocoachristy

Great update! I feel bad for Ron, but he should've known better...!Cliffie!

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

*snicker* Yes, he should've known better. :) Thanks, sweetie!

10/10

Megzela

Love! Wonderful story :)

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Lady Apythia

Oh. wonder what the scrolls are about and exactly what Snape is up to... off to read more.

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Lady Apythia

Oh no! What a great opening. Stupid, stupid Ron! He deserved that for dousing Hermione!

8/10

carmille

Women, eh?Well I gez you could say that. We all have our moments of insanity. LOLGood story btw and I really like the way Severus is using the situation.

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

HA HA! Indeed we do. Glad you like the story. Severus is indeed using the situation as best he can.... we'll see if he can get himself out of the hole he dug for himself. ;) Thanks! ~Ginny

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averygoodun

The bastard.  Miserable git.  Stupid louse.  Hopefully Hermione can convince the Ministry that Severus is NOT a victim, and that she hasn't pressed charges, therefore there is no case against Ron.

As for Severus... he'd be lucky if Hermione ever spoke to him again, in my opinion.  Doesn't matter what Minerva told him, that was incredibly immature and dispicable. 

I hope the next chapter will be ready soon, cause I really want to see how this mess can possibly be sorted out.  Good job, Gin! 

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

HA HA HA! Yes, well... Severus really shouldn't have done that behind Hermione's back... hard way to 'win a girl's heart', LOL! But this chapter also had to happen for him to see her as a strong, intelligent woman... not one that's weak and easily manipulated.

Anyhow, I'll get more up as soon as I can. Thanks, hon! ~Ginny 

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Arachnae

OY! What a cunundrum! LOL

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

HA HA HA! Indeed it is. :) Thanks! ~Gin

10/10

Mrs_D_Radcliffe

Hahahah! Yes women indeed, don't we all have days like that? haha. Absolutely fab! Loving it so much, please update soon!! 

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

LOL! Yes, I believe that we do. Thank you so much, I'm glad that you're enjoying this! ~Ginny

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charmed3

*snort* this is brilliant... poor old Ron though...

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Thank you so much! Yes, poor Ron, indeed. ;) ~Gin

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Severus49

I think my favorite line in the whole story is when Severus tells Minerva "I hate you too."  You can almost hear him saying it back to her in a sympathetic way! 

9/10

ladyljd

It feels like it's been forever since we've had an update to this lovely story.  Can we get an update on when we might see an update?

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black spot

I like the idea that he has never considered her as a woman before. Look forward to reading more.

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Thank you! Yep, he hadn't given her much thought before. I fear that he's becomming just as confused as Hermione right now.  ~Ginny

10/10

snagerlover50309

***waiting waiting waiting ****  ***wonders what the potion is***  I hope her and severus make up... ***cough cough *** lol your doing great!!

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

LOL! I know... I uploaded and someone was already asking me where the next chapter is. I really am working on it. (In between moving into a new computer and sorting out Vista troubles.)

Yes... more as soon as I can. Thanks! 

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LillaQ

Great first chapter!

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Thank you!  ~Ginny

9/10

sinbad

wow, Hermione blurted that one out.  Severus, unfortunatly isn't  a 'emotionally sharing' kind of guy.  I like how you brought them together let's see 'Won-Won' squirm.

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Yeah, she really didn't make the wisest choices. But truly, one of the first poor choices she made was jumping into bed with a man that she didn't know all that well yet. Thanks!

10/10

LillaQ

It was well worth the wait, I'd say. It's a great chapter, you really manage to capture the characters. I love it!

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

pickles

Geez back to being prickly...

Thank you for a new chapter.  Glad to see you back.  Hope you had a wonderful trip.  Send pictures.

Hugs 

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Yes, he is rather prickly. ;) I've got a few pictures on my LJ. When I have a chance I'll try to get up a few more. I just need to get my new computer behaving. :)

10/10

casey

Ooh, I'm dying to know whose hair went into that second potion.  And I like the techy twists in their relationship, perhaps because it seems so much like the reality of so many young women.  It's so hard to resist stepping into that quicksand of prematurely asking the future of a relationship, particularly with an emotionally unavailable man.  I'm looking forward to seeing how all this will be resolved.  Thanks for updating.  ~

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

*snicker* Oh, I would've thought that people would've figured that out already! :D Never fear, I am still working on it. :D

Yeah, young women can make some rather foolish mistakes in relationships. Especially when they try to dally with older men.  :) Thank you. 

10/10

sregner

Severus is a DICK!!!  (But I hope everything works out for them, tee-hee)!

Response from GinnyW (Author of A Slip of the Tongue)

*snerk* Yes he is... he was rather irrational in his response, but he felt like he had his reasons.

Thanks! :D 

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