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Potions Under Duress Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day
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Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day

1: A One-Shot

Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day

linlawless

21 Reviews   |   21 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Humor Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 1,201 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Crookshanks Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall other canon item or location Severus Snape

Severus gets a lot of very welcome news.

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Chapter 1: A One-Shot


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linlawless

Member Since 2010  |  34 Stories  |  Favorited by 194  |  139 Reviews Written  |  1,164 Review Responses





I'm a forty-something American woman who is addicted to the SSHG pairing, relatively new to this fandom. I'm also considering starting some original fiction soon...

Check out the story I co-wrote with Remarkable -- it's called "Hidden Attractions" and (as soon as it's through the queue) it's archived under the penname remarkable_linlawless.

For those who are interested, I've got two WIPs at my website (which I will eventually post here, but not until I have a complete draft).  It's easy and free to join the website, so I hope you'll visit!

I am honored that my story, Witchy Woman, has been selected as a featured story for September 2010.  Better yet, this honor came with the very awesome banner at the top of this post!

Here's a couple of banners my friend Atuliel made for the two WIPs at my website:





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Reviews for Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day

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0/10

snapify52

Nice!

10/10

Jinxie

*snigger*  Love the last line.  Thanks for sharing!

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  So glad you enjoyed it! :)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  So glad you enjoyed it! :)

10/10

droxy

LOL!  This is adorable. 

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it! :)

10/10

raj

very funny! 

9/10

deedeebug95

Sweet!! I love Crook's names for everyone!!

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed! :)

10/10

HBAR

I love the King's names for everyone!  Very cute story.

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  It was fun trying to imagine what he would call them all! :)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  It was fun trying to imagine what he would call them all! :)

10/10

phoenix

LOL I love it. I really love watching things from Crookshanks' POV. I especially love his description about Minerva and turning back into her 'inferior form'. LOL And of course anything involving Sir Cadogan can be good for a laugh.

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed my version of the feline thought process! :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed my version of the feline thought process! :D

10/10

snitchette

I just LOVE IT. I like to so much when Crooksie tells the story.

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  So do I -- the feline perspective is so unique! :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  So do I -- the feline perspective is so unique! :D

0/10

noodle

Your Royal Kneazleness:  Congratulations on the recent arrival of a new addition to your pride!  Your kingdom knows no boundaries!  May your tail stay safe when the cub begins to crawl (humans start out on all fours, then devolve to using only two limbs), and I wish you many daring adventures as you teach the arts of stalking, hunting, and ambushing unsuspecting humans.

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

LOL!!!  Crookshanks has asked me to inform you that he plans to train his newest minions appropriately as soon as they are mobile. :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

LOL!!!  Crookshanks has asked me to inform you that he plans to train his newest minions appropriately as soon as they are mobile. :D

10/10

wiccakitty

I do like crookshank stories! very well written. :)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

10/10

mick42

I am a big Crookshanks fan, and you caught his voice so beautifuly, of course he is King, it's only right. I'm sure he will look after the new"kitten" just as he has always looked after bushy-hair and her mate.

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Crooksie is a joy to write, and I'm glad you tihnk I captured him.  Thanks for reviewing! :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Crooksie is a joy to write, and I'm glad you tihnk I captured him.  Thanks for reviewing! :D

0/10

Bentwaters

This was so cute and fun! Loved it!

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Delighted that you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the review. :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Delighted that you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the review. :D

10/10

reader76

I absolutely love stories told by Crookshanks!   This is very well done.  

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  The mind of a feline is endlessly fascinating to me... :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  The mind of a feline is endlessly fascinating to me... :D

0/10

Javoher

Great story! Of course Crookshanks ( spoiled kitty!) thinks he's king, he hasn't had any challengers. This one could make a good part I. Is there a sequel?

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  No sequel at the moment, but one never knows if the muse will change that. ;)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  No sequel at the moment, but one never knows if the muse will change that. ;)

10/10

karelia

This is adorable. I love, love, love Crooksie the King.

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  He really is a charmer, isn't he? ;)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  He really is a charmer, isn't he? ;)

8/10

bluelike

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you! :)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you! :)

10/10

sunny33

Love all the lion stalking etc.  Crooks really thinks he's The King!  LOL :)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

He's really quite sure of it! :D  Thanks for reviewing! 

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

He's really quite sure of it! :D  Thanks for reviewing! 

10/10

Sampdoria

I loved it. You wrote Croocshanks perfectly, he sounded just like what I think my cats thinks about me and the world:-)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  I'm glad it rang true!(Can you tell I am also the minion of two cats?)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  I'm glad it rang true!(Can you tell I am also the minion of two cats?)

10/10

Bardsdaughter

Loved it!

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you! :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you! :D

0/10

Cybrokat

love it! Minerva's nickname was my fav. Having 3 cats, I can see Crooks' every move. And of *course* he is king! Thank you so much!

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

You're welcome!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the review! :D

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

You're welcome!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the review! :D

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

It's great to see things are going well for Severus, and Crooksie's voice is brilliant in this. Very lovely story!

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Crooksie really, really wanted to tell this one. So what could I do but let him? ;)

Response from linlawless (Author of Bushy-Hair's Mate and the Very Good Day)

Thank you!  Crooksie really, really wanted to tell this one. So what could I do but let him? ;)

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