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Potions Under Duress Do Tell
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Do Tell

TeddyRadiator

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Humor Romance Smut Friendship Potions Under Duress 2,844 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Be careful what you wish for....

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Chapter 1: Do Tell


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TeddyRadiator

Member Since 2010  |  32 Stories  |  Favorited by 519  |  63 Reviews Written  |  2,566 Review Responses

Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net. 


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Reviews for Do Tell

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10/10

breastlady

My Dear, You know this story isn't finished. You must give us every nuenced beat of the heart, short breaths, whispering, stroking, licking, challanging eachother's trust perhaps with silk scarves and bondage. Making love where they could get caught. You have made a baby boquet of beautiful buding flowers and now this flower of fantasy needs to grow to full bloome. And by the end, these fantiesis realized, will end with love that goes beyond that of normal mortals and every day lovers and a promise that goes beyond death when the end isn't the end of that couple. They move on together and then to what heights does their love reach. Remarkable people have remarkable love. For inspiration, and one example of a love that lasts 2000 years, not so that your story would be just like this story but to show you the depth and bredth of forever love between eternal souls, read SHE by H. Ridder Haggard. You can find Rider Haggard's Omnebus on kindle or ebook through amazone for almost free.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you - as with so many of my stories. my dear Muse gives me this and no more, but there is no greater compliment than to know that it inspires someone to want more. Thank you for the recommendation as well!

0/10

anoesis

You know, I think he'll make good on that promise!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Me too! :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Me too! :)

10/10

HBAR

Awww ... this is really nice.  The only thing better than wild and crazy smut, is said content against a backdrop of love and trust.  And how much must she trust him to spill her deepest, darkest secrets?  And he treats them wiith such respect.  Love it.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you - I've come to realise that I don't enjoying writing (or reading) smut without that backdrop. I'm not one for a casual or soulless encounter, especially with these two. I think something has to be there at the start to make them sizzle for one another. It's very gratifying to know that readers feel this way as well. Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you - I've come to realise that I don't enjoying writing (or reading) smut without that backdrop. I'm not one for a casual or soulless encounter, especially with these two. I think something has to be there at the start to make them sizzle for one another. It's very gratifying to know that readers feel this way as well. Thank you!

10/10

Owlbait

such a lot of trust, good thing he's planning to be worthy

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

I think they've been tiptoeing around one another long enough, and he's smart enough to know a good thing when he sees one ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

I think they've been tiptoeing around one another long enough, and he's smart enough to know a good thing when he sees one ;)

0/10

Severus49

Lovely, as always. Just...lovely!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Hey, stranger! How are you? I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Hey, stranger! How are you? I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

mick42

No matter how many times, I reread this wonderful one shot, I still end up breathless, with envy, Hermione is one lucky witch.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you so much! I'm a little envious as well ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you so much! I'm a little envious as well ;)

10/10

cenicienta

Cute, very cute.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

0/10

KingPig

Beautifully naughty!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

0/10

PHONELADY

oh yes this is a reread for me to and it's still good!!! thanks

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

10/10

snapefan520

Oh, I've read this once before on another site, but I think I enjoyed it even more the second (third?) time around. 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you! I apologise for uploading so many reruns, but I'm trying to get all my fics on all the sites I archive on, so I'm spamming my old stuff like crazy. I'm glad you still enjoyed it, though!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you! I apologise for uploading so many reruns, but I'm trying to get all my fics on all the sites I archive on, so I'm spamming my old stuff like crazy. I'm glad you still enjoyed it, though!

0/10

Belladonna2010

Nice. Subtle, steamy, and not too long or short. The amount of trust she places in him is pretty terrifying!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

cottontail

This was just lovely, I remember reading it a while back and the second time was just as delicious.  :D

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it again!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it again!

0/10

nighthawk

Lovely story. I really like the bantering, not many authors are capable of making it flow effortlessly.Telling somebody of your deepest and darkest desires requires a lot of  courage, so in my mind it is a supreme show of trust to do that and it moves me, when a character does that. I'd like to hear Severus' fantasies as well. I always imagined him to be more restricted and careful of giving anything that could be exploited.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you. I had hoped to show this trust, and how difficult it was at first for her to let go, and how hard he worked to gain her trust. I wouldn't mind knowing what was going on that head of his, either! ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you. I had hoped to show this trust, and how difficult it was at first for her to let go, and how hard he worked to gain her trust. I wouldn't mind knowing what was going on that head of his, either! ;)

10/10

debjunk

She was daring to tell him ALL of that in one shot.  I loved that he loved every minute of it.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

I think he's ready for a little joy in his life!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

I think he's ready for a little joy in his life!

10/10

Jinxie

lovely. Thanks for sharing!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you!

10/10

articcat621

I'd love to tell Severus all of my fantasies ;)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

I know! Wouldn't we all?? :)

10/10

deedeebug95

I would like to whisper some fantasies in his ear!! Well done!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you so much! I'm sorry for the delay in responding - all my TPP notifications were going directly into my SPAM folder on my email account - I thought the TPP readers didn't like me anymore! I just realised what was going on, and I've been catching up. I think we'd all love someone like Severus to whisper our fantasies to.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank you so much! I'm sorry for the delay in responding - all my TPP notifications were going directly into my SPAM folder on my email account - I thought the TPP readers didn't like me anymore! I just realised what was going on, and I've been catching up. I think we'd all love someone like Severus to whisper our fantasies to.

10/10

magalena

Teddy, I hadn't re-read this one in a while, but had to pop in to say, 'thank you so much',  once again for this lovely little one-shot. A perfect response to my prompt. I love everything you write. :)

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Do Tell)

Thank YOU! It was a pleasure. And I really appreciate all the support and encouragement you give me. It means so much.

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