Haha, loved it. *holds up a twenty for him* We need more stripper!Snape stories, I've decided. ;) Another great story from you, thanks for sharing it!

Oh I loved this!!  You posted the link on FB and I just had to give it a read. Fabulous and soooo sexy!!!

Well done, Lucius, in assisting your friend -- as dubiously as expected. XD

Full of fun (and yes, cliché), and a happy ending to boot!

Nice finish. I love the turnabout that it's his turn to be the exotic dancer.

Oh, Severus, learned about yourself, but not about knocking on doors of houses with sleeping babies. I love that both Ginny and Harry approve of his feelings towards Hermione. The talks with Bates have been great as it forces Severus to confront his emotions, something he needs to do better.

Okay, that is definitely a traumatizing thought. I can see how that might affect Severus' ability to get it up. I'm loving all the puns by the way. Very nice. :)

That's some questions answered. Poor Hermione reduced to that, but at least she kept her pride, even if Severus found out a bit too late about that. Hopefully he can find her and apologize for being an ass.

Good thing he was there for the rescue. and I can most definitely see him liking that type of thanks.

See, he can count on Lucius for help. Now I wonder what has led Hermione to turn to the world of exotic dancing?

"Dancing for money and even stripping had its perks, but Hermione was an old fashioned girl who believed that some things are not for sale."  Ummm....riiiiiight.  Who are you trying to convince, your reader or yourself?  This story is hugely OOC and should be marked as OOC.

Wonderful story! I love the end. Sometimes I even wonder if she shouldn't have been sorted in Slytherin.

I just found this story when I logged on and went to Newly Submitted, I have no idea how I missed this.  You had me chuckling from the start with little Severus and then threw in a tremendous EWWW with Wormtail.  Hermione did a very Slytherin thing having him promise while she was um... enjoying little Severus.  Heh he.  I loved the fact that when he asked her if  she really expected him to go through with it and she said "  Well, only if you really want to, Severus. I know I made you promise but I would never make you do anything you didn’t want to do.’ and his response of  "‘I knew you would say that,’"  and proceeded was great.  How lucky Hermione is to have such a man.

What a great promise he made, even if he thought he'd regret it later (which he most assuredly did not).  Well, I wish them much happiness.  That room will always be a play room, but if things continue to go well, they may have to trade the pole and mirrors for dolls and Legos.  This was funny and sexy ... a great combo!

Well of course the baby stopped crying.  It was smashed between Snape and Hermione and couldn't breathe.  I knew this wouldn't end well, LOL!I'm glad Ginny was nice to him and gave him the insider info that he needed to find Hermione.  I do hope they can work things out without too much fuss.

*starts chapter*  Things are going along really well.  This will surely be smooth sailing, no angst in sight.  *Checks name of author*  Dammit!  Never mind ... :)

Hey, whatever it takes to get them to cut to the chase, I say so be it.  And I hope she does thank him.  A lot ;)

"little Severus was no longer in his happy place"  Big Severus is quite undeserving right now and little Sev is right to tell him so.

Ewwww!  That would give anyone problems! :)

Hot and sweet. Thanks for posting!

Um, Hermione Granger?  I didn't see that coming, either!  Well, yes, I knew these two would be involved, but I didn't expect her to be working at such an establishment as this.  I'm sure there is a good story there and I hope we find out.  I shouldn't have started this right before I had to leave home.  Drat!  This is too fun and I am throughly sucked in.

OMG!  That was so hot, I had a delicious image of Severus's show. Damn Hermione is one lucky witch. *fans face* Well done neelix :) This is going in my favorites

Oh, Neelix, I'm glad to see you back.  Don't apologize at all.  I am a sucker for punnage and innuendo as long as it is done well.I love this start and can't wait to see what comes next.  I didn't see the Lily/Wormtail thing coming.  I'm suprised that upon seeing that, his bits didn't just shrivel up and fall of right there on the spot.  *shudders*

OMG. Severus having ED! Wormtail and Lily?!

Sexy and fun!!

Ginny was understanding, thankfully! But I wonder who's baby it is that Hermione's holding?