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Malfoy Manor Into You
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Into You

1: What She Saw

2: Better Left Unsaid

3: Daymares and Dance Steps

4: Autumn Bluebirds

5: Looking for Trouble

6: Pleasureable Punishment

7: Daytime Stargazing

8: Perception is the Enemy of Observation

9: Big Bad Malfoy

10: Seventeen Paces

11: Healer Malfoy

12: Silently

13: Mister Malfoy

14: All Sorted Out

15: Detention

16: To The Pitch

17: Desperation

Into You

Aislyn

72 Reviews   |   72 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Romance Malfoy Manor 36,577 Words 17 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Luna Lovegood Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Draco and Luna are paired in a Legilimency class and find that they have an unexpectedly strong connection to each other.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: What She Saw

Chapter 2: Better Left Unsaid

Chapter 3: Daymares and Dance Steps

Chapter 4: Autumn Bluebirds

Chapter 5: Looking for Trouble

Chapter 6: Pleasureable Punishment

Chapter 7: Daytime Stargazing

Chapter 8: Perception is the Enemy of Observation

Chapter 9: Big Bad Malfoy

Chapter 10: Seventeen Paces

Chapter 11: Healer Malfoy

Chapter 12: Silently

Chapter 13: Mister Malfoy

Chapter 14: All Sorted Out

Chapter 15: Detention

Chapter 16: To The Pitch

Chapter 17: Desperation


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Aislyn

Member Since 2011  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 13  |  3 Reviews Written  |  19 Review Responses

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10/10

mick42

Hi, just wondering if this lovely tale is going to continue.

9/10

roni0811

hope this amazing story, will be continue!!

10/10

mick42

I hope nothing else happens to spoil their evening, it may be the last peace they get ,for a while.

10/10

mick42

Luna has been thrown in at the deep end , hasn't she. I am sure that someone of Snape's "temperment" will be able to find something worse than cauldron scrubbing, without even rasing a sweat.

10/10

sunny33

Better to have Pansy on their side? :)

10/10

mick42

Well, that was unexpected, to say the least.

0/10

feisanna

ha!

9/10

demgirl

I just love this story! The author has caputred Luna's personality so delightfully and it's such a great read!

10/10

cottontail

Mmmmm, interesting chapter.  I am curious as Draco is and can't wait for the next update.

10/10

mick42

Keep telling yourself that Draco,these two have a lot in common deep down. I love the way,that you are building the feiendship.

10/10

mick42

Luna is one of my favourites, she always has a somewhat different point of view to anyone else.Draco will have a hard time accepting,she isn't going to blackmail him, or try to gain some advantage over him, he has been raised to be suspicious, of every one. Loving this so far.Thank you. 

10/10

mick42

Draco's mind is a frightening place to be, I don't know who to feel sorry for, Draco, or Luna. 

10/10

sunny33

No pressure, then . ;)

0/10

stgulik

Wonderful story so far. My favorite line:   "But she did hope he would be a kind custodian of her vulnerability." I can't imagine how two such different people will ever find common ground. Yet inside, they have the same insecurities; maybe that's where they'll start. 

10/10

sunny33

That was lovely.  Can't wait for more. :)

10/10

Bettina

I've just found your so very unique story and like the way you portray these two. You depict Draco's home as so extremely unlike Luna's that this already draws their attention to each other. And yet, they're slow about, careful and so perfectly in character. I like that Draco doesn't get enraged at Luna's approach to obstacles or taunts but takes her as a given. That's a big step for him! Yet, now he has a sleepover to explain, and an injured one at that.
Looking forward to more! 

10/10

cottontail

Awe that was so beautiful..

0/10

feisanna

:)

0/10

stgulik

Fascinating story! You've really delved into minds of Lucius and Draco. I'm really enjoying this plot and can't wait to read on!

8/10

SoxFan

I totally love this pairing. Alas too short of a chapter!  I am a bit puzzled as to why Luna won't see Madam Pomfrey.  Great to see the more sensitive side of Draco.  Do update soon.

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thanks for the review, I appreciate your thoughts. Luna didn't want to go to Madam Pomfrey because it would've brought teachers into it and she would've either had to lie or tell on the girls. More soon!!

10/10

ks51689

Apparently I hadn't read the half of it yet when I reviewed the last chapter.  Poor Luna, indeed! I love the delicate way you've described the beauty of their connection while still paying attention to the possible hazards. I look forward to reading more!

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you for coming back to read this story even with the chapters out of order! I love your encouragement and observations.

10/10

ks51689

Poor Luna! And, I wonder what's in that letter...

10/10

sunny33

The faith she has in him is so sweet and pure. :)

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you! I wanted to let you know that I submitted chapters 9 and 10 at the same time and 9 got held up but 10 posted to the site. You missed the chapter that sets up the one that you read. I'm sorry, it'll be there soon...

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

LOL.  I wondered why there seemed a bit of a gap!

10/10

sunny33

Nasty little brats those two.  The blonde seemed okay. :)

8/10

feisanna

enjoying your take on Draco/Luna - thanks for the update

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you! It's so great to know that you are reading Into You, and that you took the time to encourage me in a review. More to come, promise.

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