New Chapter for Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
MsTree102 Reviews | 7.36/10 (102 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )
Hermione returns to Hogwarts to teach Potions and finds something dark and mysterious in the forest. (This is a continuation of Velvet Song's original story archived here at TPP.)
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A citizen of Calontir, living in the State of Misery, located north of Are-Kansas and south of Iowewaytoomuch. Writer of fiction who reads more than is healthy for her and owned by two terrors... I mean, terriers. ^_^
Reviews for Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
I had to come back and read this again. I really cannot tell you how much it means to me that you were willing to take on this story, and I cannot wait to read the sequel. You are such a brilliant and generous writer. *hugs*
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Will you send me your new e-mail address off-list? Every one I have for you has bounced and I have been trying since before the new year. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Will you send me your new e-mail address off-list? Every one I have for you has bounced and I have been trying since before the new year. ^_^
I love this story. Maybe you'll continue with a sequel...:) Thank you!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The sequel is in the process of being written. I do not begin posting any of my stories until they are completely written, so it's anyone's guess as to when I will finish and begin posting. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The sequel is in the process of being written. I do not begin posting any of my stories until they are completely written, so it's anyone's guess as to when I will finish and begin posting. ^_^
Can't wait for the sequel!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm working on it. Slowly. I don't plan to post until it's completed and I seem to have hit a snag. It's called "writer's block". I can't seem to think of how to get them back on track after their argument. ^_^
Response from DreamHowler (Reviewer)
Yeah, I know how that is. Sometimes I feel really bad about not posting for long times. I also keep losing my beta readers, which doesn't help. :(
I love Hermione and Severus' private exchanges, maybe not so private. I hope there will be more in the future
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
The story, at least this part, is completed, and, yes, there will be more exchanges. Thank you for the review. I really had fun writing this. ^_^
I love the humor you throw in with each chapter. I think it lightens up the drama, without making things ridiculous. It's a good thing Severus has a copy of the book, or else things would be even more complicated than they are now. I can't help but wonder how Severus will pursue a relationship with Hermione once he's back
in human form.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm glad you're enjoying the humor. I think all stories need a touch of humor or they end up being too dark and morbid. Even the best horror writers add humor somewhere in their stories. If the staff at Hogwarts manages to reverse the curse, they may have to find Severus a body. Remember, the book said the curse destroy's the body of the person being cursed. ^_^
Love the interaction between Hermione and Severus. :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thanks. I think that's the best part of the writing, the interactions between the two of them. They're so much alike, even in canon, in my opinion. ^_^
"For you are crunchy and taste good with tomato sauce."How long have you been waiting to use that line? LOL!I'm going to be positive and hope that the fact that there are missing pages means that they are headed in the right direction.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Actually, this is the first time I even considered using it in a story. It just felt right as a counter to Minerva's comment of never teasing a dragon. Thanks for the review. ^_^
I love this banter going on in her head with Severus. Cruchy and taste good with tomato sauce. ROFL. It seems they are getting somewhere, even if the spell is missing from the book. There is hope in finding it at Severus' home.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Velvet Song loved that line as well. It just sounded right when Minerva said to never tease a dragon. Thanks for the review. So, when do we get the next chapter of "More Than Brushstrokes", hmmm? ^_~
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
ignoring. :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
That's okay. I thought about telling you to ignore this when I finally signed onto the archives, because I always do my email first before reading the archives. Thanks for the new chapter. Eagerly waiting for the next one. ^_^
really love the story.keep going!!Love snarky Dragon Severus.Hope they can recreate his body ;clone it from his hair or tissue etc....
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. I really enjoyed taking over from Velvet Song and running with this. It was fun. ^_^
Dragon Severus has a sense of humor. Hee.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
And it gets even better. Thanks for the review. ^_^
LOL. I love that Severus is speaking to Hermione in her head. How very odd that would be. I'm glad they're getting somewhere.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm glad you're enjoying the Hermione and Severus show. Thanks for the review. ^_^
There's an easy banter between Head-voice Severus and Hermione that I really enjoy reading. Speaking of which, I really do hope that page is the one they need or it at least points them in the right direction. It does concern me, however, when it was commented that Severus might not have a body to return to, even if they can create a counter-curse. It would be absolutely horrible if he has to stay a dragon forever, or worse- be stuck in the body of a person that disgusts Severus forever!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
There's always Lockhart. Just kidding (ha ha). Since Moldibutt designed the curse, you just know he has to have a counter-curse, don't ya know. How else could he torture his enemies? ^_^
I'm so glad you loved this story enough to want to finish. I was sad when it was abandonned and I can't be gratefull enough for this woderful gift. I hope you will be able to update regularly.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm updating as fast as I can. Chapter 15 is in the queue and sixteen is almost ready to be added. Thanks for reading my little effort. ^_^
ahhhhhhhhh finallllllllllllly!!!!! i have wait oh so long for this story to continue!!!!! whoo hoo hope this gets somewhere!!! Keep up the great work so far!!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. We spent some time emailing each other: me to ask questions and her to answer. Hopefully, I'll be able to update fairly often. ^_^
So glad to see someone caryying on this wonderful tale. I really liked this chapter and hopefully more will be coming soon..please?
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you for reading. Chapter 15 is in the queue. ^_^
OMG! I'm glad she figured that out. Please write more!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Glad you're enjoying it. Chapter 15's in the queue and 16 is with the betas. ^_^
have you thought of beta-ing the previous chapters and just posting them here so they are all together?
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm not sure I understand what you mean. Velvet Song's first thirteen chapters can be found on this archive under her name. I am just continuing the story for her so that we can see it completed. ^_^
I am so excited this story is being continued! I must say that I'm really happy that Hermione figured out that Severus is the dragon. Now, if only she would read the books that are obviously being left for her. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
So speaks the dragon? Thank you for your review. I like your screen name. ^_^
Great continuation! I certainly was hoping that Althair was really Severus.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. Hope you keep reading. ^_^
*Snort* Severus is turning Hermione into Harry.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Ya think so? We'll see. ^_^
Absolutely lovely! You are doing a brilliant job and I bow down to your writing skills!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm just following your lead, sweetie. Thanks for starting this wonderful story. ^_^
Sweeet!!!! She figured it out, and without books even! I was hoping you wouldn't delay too long in continuing this. Thanks for getting it up and running. This is such an intriguing tale and you've continued it perfectly. Now, I wonder just how much everyone knows.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm glad you like it. I've had to find another beta because Velvet Song couldn't do it anymore. Chapter 15 is in the queue and Chapter 16 is beta'd. I've written through Chapter 19 so far. ^_^
I'm so glad you are taking this over! It is off to a great start!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. I am glad you like it. I hope I can stay close to Velvet Song's original story idea. ^_^
Oh I am so HAPPY to see you do this for real!!!!Severus/Athair is really a mystery as to what's going to happen. I can't wait to see what unravels!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I think that would be me. *grin* Thanks for reading. I'm trying to do the original story justice. ^_^
Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)
Oh, god, you KNOW you are!!!! You are one of the few authors who can wrap me up in a story within a fingersnap!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm glad you think so. It's nice to know my stories can bring joy to people. ^_^
I haven't read the original story for a while, but so far your continuation seems to be flowing nicely. :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I'm trying. Thanks for reading. ^_^