Two Couplets Equal One Death Eater
Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
Chapter 10 of 17
MsTreeHermione returns to Hogwarts to teach Potions and finds something dark and mysterious in the forest. (This is a continuation of Velvet Song's original story archived here at TPP.)
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters in this story belong to JKR. The original plot and story belong to Velvet Song. Any resemblance to anything living or dead is purely coincidental.
Author’s Note: This is a continuation of Velvet Song’s story “Damsels & Dragons”, which she has graciously allowed me to adopt. You will find the first thirteen chapters of her story here: http: //www. thepetulantpoetess.com /viewstory.php?sid =18337 (remove the spaces first). I might suggest you read her story first in order to understand what has been happening.
Virtual chocolates to Fizzabella and writermerrin for the beta of this chapter. The story is completed and will be posted as each chapter is beta’d.
Two Couplets Equal One Death Eater
“This is most interesting,” Phelps murmured as they viewed the memories Hermione had managed to obtain. “Most interesting, indeed.” He scribbled furiously on his notes. “Play it again, please. I think I’ve almost got it.”
“Almost isn’t good enough,” Lucius growled impatiently. “We need to have an answer now.”
“Lucius—”
“No, Minerva. Every minute we waste is another minute that Severus doesn’t have.”
“I’ve got it!” Phelps’ shout interrupted their argument. “At least I believe I have,” he said slowly, as he rearranged several runes on his paper. “Play that again, would you? One more time? I need to verify…”
He glanced up at the wall and back down to his parchments. “Hmmm, yes,” he mumbled. “That makes more sense than this other one.” Looking up, he grinned. “I think I’ll keep my bottle of Hundred Year Reserve for this.”
Not bloody likely.
Hermione giggled. “You couldn’t drink it right now anyway, silly,” she said, seemingly into thin air. “We don’t even know if we can reverse the spell.”
You can if they can’t.
“How sweet of you to think so.”
I am not sweet.
“Of course you are.”
Ask Phelps about the spell.
“He’s changing the subject,” Hermione said, grinning at her fellow teachers. “He wants me to ask about the spell. Do you have all of it?”
“I believe so,” Phelps said, nervously straightening his parchments. “I can give you what I have, but I would really like to see Mrs Tonks-Weasley’s memories as well. They might give me a better grasp of this.” He looked up at the memory, which hung, movement frozen, on the wall. “Where did the man learn Gothic?” he murmured, half to himself. “There aren’t that many of us in the community that anyone could have taught him without someone hearing about it.” He shook his head in annoyance. “I’ll read you what I have, shall I?”
“Please do,” Minerva said, taking her place at the head of the table and gesturing for the others to take their seats. “Then we can decide what our next actions should be.”
Phelps cleared his throat several times. “I want you to remember that this is what I have gleaned from all your memories. It’s only a rough approximation—”
“Yes, yes,” Lucius said, waving an impatient hand. “Get on with it, man.”
Phelps cleared his throat again and looked down at his parchments.
“From man to animal,
From human to dragon;
A life most dismal,
this spell foregone.
Curse be on you
until year ten,
A man you’ll be
never again.”
He finished reading and looked up expectantly. “Well?” he asked. “Does that help any?”
“That’s it?” Minerva sputtered. “Two couplets to turn a man into a great beast?”
“Minerva—”
She waved her hand at Hermione. “It took only two couplets to make Severus into a beast, Hermione.” Sighing, she scrubbed at her face, only to look up with tears in her eyes. “A longer spell would have a better chance of being reversed. This one? I don’t know…”
“We can still do something with this,” Flitwick said cheerfully. “Tell me, Mr Phelps, does the reversal spell have to be spoken in Gothic as well?”
“I’m sure it would have a better chance of succeeding,” Phelps said, assuring everyone at the table. “If you need my help with translating—”
“Oh, we’ll need your help alright,” Lucius growled. “Especially as none of us have the slightest hint of how to speak your precious Gothic language.”
“Lucius, really!” Narcissa scolded her husband. “Mr Phelps, please forgive him,” she apologized. “We’re all just a little upset and shaken over what you’ve revealed.”
“Think nothing of it,” Phelps said, waving away her apology. “I completely understand. Headmistress, if I am to stay for awhile, might I speak with your house-elf—what was its name—Panty?”
“That’s Penti!” Hermione shouted. “His name is Penti!”
“Yes, that’s it.” Phelps calmly turned back to Minerva. “May I? The knowledge he has of his former master is irreplaceable. To be able to regain that knowledge…”
Minerva sighed. “Very well, Mr Phelps,” she said. “I have no objections to your speaking with Penti.” She raised a finger in warning. “However, he shall not be coerced. If he chooses to answer your questions, well and good, but I will make it clear to him that he is under no obligation to do so. Do you understand?”
“Oh, most definitely.” Phelps beamed at her. “This is so exciting.”
Not for me, it isn’t.
* * *
“What do we do now?” Hermione paced the length of the staff room after Phelps had been shown to his guest quarters. “In order to restore Severus, do we have to come up with an original spell? And if we do, how do we know it will even work? We certainly wouldn’t want to test it out on anything first.”
Lucius tapped his forefinger on the tabletop. “There might be a spell somewhere in the Dark Lord’s books and papers. As I said before, he was usually prepared with a counter-curse so he could torture his followers when they displeased him and reverse the spell at will.”
“But we don’t know where they are,” Hermione protested. “And remember, the books said the spell destroys the original body. How are we to find something—”
“I know who owned the vault,” Bill said, interrupting her ranting. “I don’t think anyone’s going to like it, though.”
“Why not, son?” Arthur looked over at his eldest child. “Is the vault still in use?”
“It is,” Bill said, “but not by the person we need. He gave it up and returned the key a few months after the Final Battle. First, though, he emptied the vault.”
“And took another one, right?” Harry asked, leaning forward eagerly. “Who is it?”
“Rufus Scrimgeour.”
“What!” Remus shouted into the shocked silence, the faces of the other teachers echoing his shock.
“He’s a Death Eater?” Hermione cried.
“Can’t be!” said Arthur, brows beetling in thought.
“That slimy, sanctimonious, egotistical git?” Harry was furious.
“But… but… he was Minister of Magic!” Filius protested.
“Doesn’t preclude him from being a Death Eater,” Lucius drawled.
Minerva knocked on the table and waved everyone to silence. “Lucius is correct,” she said. “Being Minister of Magic did not preclude him from following Riddle. And,” she continued, frowning at Harry, “he is the last person any of us would suspect. After all, he fought on our side during the Final Battle.”
“How can we prove he was a Death Eater?” Hermione asked. “Especially if he didn’t take the Dark Mark?”
He was marked.
“What?” Hermione whirled on Lucius. “Severus says he was marked.”
“Yes.” Lucius blinked. “I’d forgotten about that.”
“About what?” Harry’s face was red with anger. “I can’t believe that git thought I would work with him,” he muttered, shaking off Neville’s soothing hand. “He’s a piece of work.”
“Indeed,” Lucius agreed. He tapped on the table with his forefinger again to emphasize his words. “The Dark Lord did not leave his followers unmarked, regardless of what they might have thought. It’s not a visible mark, however.”
“How do we prove he was a Death Eater, then?” Minerva asked. “I’m sure the Ministry wouldn’t accept the testimony of a dragon,” she said wryly.
Indeed, they would not.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
102 Reviews | 7.36/10 Average
Brava! I have been hoping to get to Damsels & Dragons by Velvet Song and this story, the completion of what she had begun. I'm so very grateful that the two of you were able to collaborate so beautifully on this remarkable story. Together you two have given the SSHG fandom a lovely gift.I adore your sense of humor, and having Severus and Hermione telepathically connected had me laughing throughout my reading. And now I have a sequel to read......something about dragons in the dungeon, I think? Beth
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It was a joy to write. The sequel is not a collaberation, so I can only hope you enjoy it as much as the first story. ^_^
So far I have to say you do a tremendously amazing job with continuing this story of Velvet Song, beginning with her exceptional writing style, and not least by bringing in Severus' thought-speach here. Did you have some plot ideas from her where this should go?
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
This particular story is completed and posted. Velvet Song and I discussed a sequel and she gave it the go-ahead. That story is also completed and has started posting here at TPP. However, I suggest you complete this one first before starting the sequel so you aren't confused about situations in the sequel. ^_^
Good job continuing the story. I'm glad Velvet Song let you complete it.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. With her permission, I've written a sequel. It's in the process of being beta'd, but I will soon start posting the chapters. ^_^
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Glad to hear that. I'll look for it.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. With her permission, I've written a sequel. It's in the process of being beta'd, but I will soon start posting the chapters. ^_^
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Glad to hear that. I'll look for it.
If you let Severus argue, he may be as Dragon forever.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
He's stubborn, but Hermione's just as bad. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
He's stubborn, but Hermione's just as bad. ^_^
I never thought, I would hear those words , from a Malfoy.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I know. Scary, ain't it? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I know. Scary, ain't it? ^_^
Obliviate? is that all? he deserves to suffer, a lot more.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, his turn's coming. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, his turn's coming. ^_^
I would be more afarid ,of Minerva And Narcissa together, than the Dragon.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Two rather intimidating witches, n'est pas? ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You know where you are with a Dragon, but if those two get together, thay could rule the world.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Add Hermione to the group and that would be a definite possibility. ^_~
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Two rather intimidating witches, n'est pas? ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You know where you are with a Dragon, but if those two get together, thay could rule the world.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Add Hermione to the group and that would be a definite possibility. ^_~
Corruption in the MoM, unbeliveable!!!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Isn't it, though? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Isn't it, though? ^_^
If Remus isn't careful, he will find himself playing the Death-Eater game, { the drop from 300 ft and catch just before you hit the ground game } I love Athair/Severus.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I do, too. That's why I asked to finish this when Velvet Song couldn't do it anymore. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I do, too. That's why I asked to finish this when Velvet Song couldn't do it anymore. ^_^
Back to Hogwarts, Phelps will have fun with the house-elfs.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Or the house-elves will have fun with him. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Or the house-elves will have fun with him. ^_^
I love my books, and talk to them, sometimes I have to scold them, for spiting out their bookmarks, and losing my place. Luicus and Remus had best keep hold of Hermione, or she will wander off, into the stacks, and never beseen again.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, yes. My precious. I talk and argue with my books all the time. My mother tends to look at me rather funny. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
It's sad when the family don't understand, the love of your life.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, yes. My precious. I talk and argue with my books all the time. My mother tends to look at me rather funny. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
It's sad when the family don't understand, the love of your life.
Love the image , of house-elfs as meerkats.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Well, they had to be able to make sure they were seeing what they thought they saw. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Well, they had to be able to make sure they were seeing what they thought they saw. ^_^
MMMMMMMMMMM Thickned Plot, what a lovely desert. this just keeps, getting better.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Rather like a rich gravy that tastes better the thicker it gets. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Rather like a rich gravy that tastes better the thicker it gets. ^_^
Love the relationship, building between, Severus, and Hermione. Athair, talk to Hagrid, it would make his decade.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I don't think Severus could communicate with anyone except Hermione or he would have talked with Lucius and his family before this. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I know he can't "talk" to Hagrid, but if he would sit still, and let Hagrid talk, he would be made up.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I don't think Severus could communicate with anyone except Hermione or he would have talked with Lucius and his family before this. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I know he can't "talk" to Hagrid, but if he would sit still, and let Hagrid talk, he would be made up.
AWWWW I love that Hagrid didn't have to be told, he just knew. Now the real work begins.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I think Hagrid is just naturally intuitive. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I think Hagrid is just naturally intuitive. ^_^
The books seem to cover, a wide range of , curses, spells and other things it is best not to contemplate. Not knowing exactly what, Riddle woud do, Severus tryed to cover, all the bases he could, with the books. A pity she has to read all that dark stuff, but needs must.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Very icky reading indeed. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Very icky reading indeed. ^_^
Thank you, for finshing this great story. Yes, yes,yes, happy dance, she knows. =
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you, I think? And of course she knows. Severus made sure of it. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you, I think? And of course she knows. Severus made sure of it. ^_^
Absolutely wonderful!!! A sequel?! I can't wait!! I'm practically dying to see how the relationship develops between Severus and Hermione, since we know he's already in love with her from earlier chapters.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Working on it. Or at least trying to. *grin* Hermione, Severus and Athair seem to have minds of their own, however. I don't know how this will turn out. Hopefully, I'll be able to start posting sometime after the first of the year. ^_^
I'm so glad they manage to bring him back. I hope they will all be well after a bit of rest. I wonder if Heverus and Hermione's connection will last. that could be a lot of fun.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Heverus? Who's Heverus? It's a great name, though. *grin* One more chapter to go and it's been sent to my beta. With Velvet Song's permission, I've begun a sequel but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
*grin back* These are great news!
Yay, they did it! Boo for leaving it there! And boo for taking so long to update! Just because the sshg exchange is going on and there's loads of sshg to read doesn't mean I don't look for an update from you daily. Brava, Ms. Tree. Hermione and 'William' saved the day.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Blame my beta for the delay. She's involved in the exchange. *grin* One more chapter to go for this particular story and I've sent it to my beta. Velvet Song has given permission for me to do a sequel and I've started it, but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Great chapter.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. ^_^
yay! You did it! :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Yup. Yup. Only one chapter to go and it's with my beta right now. At least I sent it to her. *grin* I'm in the process of producing a sequel--with Velvet Song's permission--but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Oops, talk about being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Scrimgeour won't do that again! :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
*grin* It would be rather hard to do that when he's in Azkaban. Thanks for reading. ^_^
Better three patients than a dragon. That was nice and tense.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Glad you liked it. One more chapter to go and that will wrap up this part of the story. I've started a sequel--with Velvet Song's permission--but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
WOW! That was incredible! Remarkable too how we find out that the curse hasn't just tied the two of them together mentally, but physically as well - and no better example of how strong the tie is, but as the countercurse was activated. God Bless you too, for finding a Gothic translation as well! I imagine having a devil of a time researching that! You did it justice, my friend!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
The translation was probably the hardest part of the chapter. I had it written out in English probably by the second chapter I wrote, but it took longer to figure out the translation. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. One more chapter to go. *phew* ^_^