New Chapter for Our Fate is What We Make It
Our Fate is What We Make It
gersknightlady43 Reviews | 7.16/10 (43 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
Voldemort wins the War and decides to reward his faithful servant, Severus Snape.
Start ReadingChapters (7)
About gersknightlady
Author
gersknightlady
Member Since 2008 | 9 Stories | Favorited by 343 | 915 Reviews Written | 3,004 Review Responses
Age 59, I have been a Severus and Alan Rickman fan for a couple years. I post SS/HG stories.
I went to NY last week to see Seminar (Jan 4, 20012) It was wonderful.
Shades of Severus in his character and his house. I was priviledge to see Alan up close an personal after the play.
Reviews for Our Fate is What We Make It
I love the house-elf army Hopefully Severus can let go of his guilt. It won't be easy, but he is fortunate that she is so understanding. Or maybe that makes it harder on him than if she held him somewhat accountable. While they are in danger and can be killed with one flick of a wand I think their plan is a good one and pretty foolproof as long as the poison works quickly.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you. I'm glad you like the house-elves. Severus is having a harder time working through this all. He doesn't realise Hermione doesn't really blame him at all. She understands, He juts has to learn to elt it go and forgive himself.Yes, if they can get it done quickly they can survive.Thank you again for all your greatcomments.
How difficult the farce of abuse and rape must be for them both. Fancy is right, she can make it physically painless, but there is the emotional, psychological aspect of things that cannot be prevented. Their relationship is so new, this could be damaging. At the same time, they both know that it was for show only, and that they are in desperate times. I think that with some work, they will get through this.Hermione was right to not tell Severus what she planned to do in order to get some cell samples from Voldemort. He would never have allowed it, but it was entirely necessary. I hope their plan works.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Yes, it was very difficult. Especially for Severus. For allt he things he was forced to do in his life this was not one of them. Yes, they both kow it was for show but i thik severus will sufer more for it. He saw and felt what he had to do, she did not. Thank you so much for all your well thought out comments. I'm so happy that the readers all seem to like this one.
THIS IS A GOOD STORY. YOU ARE DOING VERY WELL IN MY OPINION, VERY ENJOYABLE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. JIM P.S.GLAD TO SEE RIDDLE GET HIS COMEUPPANCE! COULDN'T HAPPEN TO A NICER VILLIAN! JIM
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you so much. I am glad that your are enjoying it. I do hope the last chapter will be up in the next week.Yes, I'm glad he's gone too. LOL thank you :)I very much appreciate your review.
Interesting story you've given the house-elves. I fully expected that there were others who would be found to help Severus and Hermione fight, but I never would have guessed this.I sometimes feel like stories where these two are together and instantly have a strong bond are kind of unrealistic. But I think that when you are the last two of your kind and also share a past, albeit not a romantic one, you would be quick to cling to one another and seek out comfort in what ever way possible. I hope they've come to the point where he no longer feels the need to run away when emotions run high, and she understands him if he does.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you...I love Fancy. She just sort of walked into the story and took over LOL. I thik your right it was very quick but don't they say the devil you know id better than the one you don't. Severus is the only familiar person and she has to cling to him. She feels in helping her survive by givng Severus deserves her giving herself willingly so that they both have a chnace to live.Thank you for your comments.
What a terrifying ordeal. For her, the fear of the unknown. She has not been in the presence of Death Eaters much, or taken before Voldemort. At least Severus is one of them as far as they know and he can walk amongst them if he so chooses. For him, the scary part is how much she is trusting him to protect her. He is right, it has always been about what Dumbledore wanted and what Harry needed. Now it is all Severus and while I have confidence in his abilities, to suddenly be the man in charge of an army of two must be daunting. Not giving up hope yet ...
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
This was a rather quick story and I tried to make it grittier than anything I've ever written before. It would be very scary to be put before Voldy in that way. Yes. Severus finds himself in a whole new situation...caring about someone.
Thank you so much for your review.
We are certainly not wasting any time getting started, are we? This was a nice beginning and I hope that they are not as alone in their fight as they think they are. Off to find out ...
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
No I didn't tazke much time in getting going. LOL It was a very quick idea and I wanted it to be a short story. It's paced pretty fast. Looking forward to more of your comments.
Okay, the imagery of Hagrid was fantastic. Imagine his initial horror and anger, and then the excitement of seeing Hermione alive. Hopefully if she is still marked up, he'll be patient enough to let them explain. The elves are really a wonderful component to the story. I love the 'two names' issue. Anxious to see the next chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you, I love Hagrid and haven't written too many scenes for him. He's a wonderful down to earth like character. No I don't think Hermione is marked anymore. She took potion's to heal, thats why she wanted to stay in bed. They were making her sleepy.Thank you for enjoying the elves part of this story...I always thought they probably have great power after seeing Dobby knock Lucius on his back and Lucius didn't attempt to lash out in retaliation.
so glad that horrible creature is dead!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you, I'm glad he is too LOL. Thank yoou for making a comment.
Ah, thanks for the hope. The elves are amazing. Always something unique in your stories. Thanks for writing!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
:) Thank you. I try very hard to write only things I haven't seen before. ( Though I love nearly every marriage Law srtory I've read. ) I like to think of new things and apparently it's working. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Good description of Voldemort dying. The house elves are amazing! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked those scenes. Yes, too bad they weren't free to help when Harry was there. I hope you enjoy the final chapter.
So many people gone! I'm suprised there's a magical painting of Harry. That will be wonderful for them to communicate with it. And it's a great thing that Hagrid (such a good friend - like a surrogate uncle to the trio) lives. But I can't help but wonder why Hermione would have him summoned to their bedroom? That's kind of -weird - isn't it?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Yes, there were to many people gone. maybe I should have writtent hat diffferent, but this was a different war where the good guys lost and the casualties where high. The painting occured to me and I went with it. There no reason why people who are not Headmasters could have portrait's with the right magic or enough money.Maybe that was weird. Sorry, she was so exhausted fromt he stress of what she had to do and the relief of the day as well as all the ehaling potions thats she didn't want to move much.Thank you for your comment's.
Great Story. Cant wait for the next chapters.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you, Another chpater is in the Queue. Thank you so much for leaving a comment.
I do enjoy these Voldemort!wins stories, and this one is shaping up nicely. Clinging to each other for comfort and survival is believable. I do have two nitpicks, however. One, canon!Snape NEVER says Voldemort (it's always the Dark Lord) - there's no reason to change it for fanfic. The second point concerns the first chapter - a virgin that comes the first time she has sex, especially from intercourse alone, is a rare, rare, rare woman indeed. Why every darn HGSS story has virgin!Hermione coming the first time is beyond me. It ruins the flow of the story for me, frankly.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Well, Thank you for the first phragraph compliment. I'm glad you think despite the parts you don;t like thats its working. Maybe that's true what he says in cannon, I think that he had to call Voldemort, The Dark Lord, before the war to his face and his followers... stay in character. I think we can let him change that, now that he has decided to kill the monster.While it might be true most virgin's don't cum the first time, and I'm taking your word for it, this is supposed to be fantasy and sexy in some ways, other wise I wouldn't bother writing it :) thank you for the review
Really really good!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it.
oh no! Poor Severus. But how else could they have gotten cells?! UGH!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
LOL... yes, it's was a gruesome chater to write. I still cringe.Thank you for making a comment.
Severus has to get thicker skin when it comes to survivor's emotions. Hermione is old enough to at least understand he deliberately raped her - or gave the illusion of rape - under the pretense of survival! She agreed to do whatever was necessary. And I know she still loves him, no matter how awful he had to make it appear to be.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
I think Severus is at the point where everythings coming at him. He sees someone who could love him and he feels for certain that she could very well die and possibly at his own hands. He quite torn and emotionally raw. He spent decades working toward Harry finishing Voldermort off and now he has to do the job through Hermione. She is there waiting for him.Thank you for your comments.
OMG! this was a really amazing story! It is really sweet, and at the same time sad. It's a blame that Ron and Harry and a lot of other people died, but maybe that makes it so nice. I just love sev, and i'm happy that, in this fiction;), he found love-"Always"-
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
Thak you. I'm glad you read my story and enjoyed it. It was a challenge.The bad guys win. It's nice to kow someone had recently read it. I like making Severus happy. He deserves it.
Response from XxSeverus SnapexX (Reviewer)
Yeah! Severus indead really deserves it! It's nice to read a story of him from a different vieuw. I like the story's about him and Hermione a lot, but I also like them with lily<3. Have you written more stories like this one? Cuz than I really have to read them!:) Btw, sorry for my sometimes bad English, but I'm from Holland so i don't speak it very well, i'm still learning a lot about it;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
This was my first story of: The otehr side wins.I have a number of other stories on thepetulantpoetess.com. All HG/SS stories. I try to find new angles to write.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
This was my first story of: The otehr side wins.I have a number of other stories on thepetulantpoetess.com. All HG/SS stories. I try to find new angles to write.
Response from XxSeverus SnapexX (Reviewer)
Okay,You did an excellent job with this story! And I have a test tomorrow about French and acient Greek, so I won't read your stories toninght, but I will read them as soon as I can! Are you from England or from another English country? Or isn't English your native language? Maybe I'll write a story of my own, and than about Severus and Hermoine in a whole other angle;) I won't say too much for now, but maybe we can write a story together? Like we both write a couple chapters, and see if it fits together:)
i hope you update soon! :)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of Our Fate is What We Make It)
The next chapter is in the Queue, I'm glad you like it.