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The Illusory Feast

1: one shot

The Illusory Feast

Rose of the West

6 Reviews   |   6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Angst Drabble/100-Word Hogwarts Castle 532 Words 1 Chapter WIP
Severus Snape

For the Snape_LDWS community on LJ.

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10/10

snitchette

WOW! Excellent response to the prompt!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Illusory Feast)

Thank you!  I felt bad being so mean to him, but I had fun with it, too.

0/10

nagandsev

Completely lured in by your ravenous Severus, as well as the bittersweet ending - with it all being a dream! Poor Severus - even in his dreams he gets burnt!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Illusory Feast)

Oh, thank you!  Yes, he can't even say he's no worse off than he was before, can he.  Maybe whoever she is will show up for real sometime.

9/10

MsTree

Such a dream! Who is the illusion? Lily or Hermione? ^_^

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Illusory Feast)

Readers' choice!  You can go with either... or neither.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

Clairvoyant

This is excellent, Rose.  Severus at his tortured, conflicted best.  Well written!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Illusory Feast)

Thank you so much!  That's the theme I was going for.

0/10

scaranda

Will you continue this, Rose (I hope so)? Or was it a one-off?

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Illusory Feast)

Wow, thank you so much for the review!  I had no idea of doing more than a one-shot, since it was for a drabble competition, but maybe it could be the start of something, or a prologue to something.  Now you have me thinking... not that there's anything wrong with that.

10/10

sunny33

Aww, poor Sev!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Illusory Feast)

Yeah, I know.  He can't even say he wasn't worse off than he was before.  Thanks for the review!

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