Chapter 17: The Rescue
Chapter 17 of 20
gersknightladyOn her last night at Hogwarts, Hermione goes to say goodbye to her grumpy, cruel Potions professor.
ReviewedSeverus took in Hermione's blood-spattered, half-naked appearance as he moved into the room.
Harry slipped in behind him. He was afraid Severus would murder the man, and he didn't want Hermione to have to deal with the consequences.
Severus heard Alan screaming, "You bitch. I'm going to flay you into little pieces."
Severus raised his wand and was about to blast the man when Harry grabbed his arm.
"Severus, think of Hermione. She needs you. Please see to her. I will take care of this worthless piece of shite. A life in Azkaban will be worse than a few minutes of painful death." He flung a spell at the injured man, and Alan was bound and gagged.
Severus stared into Harry's green eyes and finally nodded. Turning, he pulled his jacket off and went to his knees. A pool of blood was spreading across the floor. In the dim light, he saw a knife protruding from Hermione's side. Her breathing was labored.
"Hermione!" he cried. He raised his hand, and it was covered in her blood.
"Potion," she gasped.
Her words woke Severus from his shock, and he looked at her neck. The bottle was missing.
"Harry, look for a small bottle on a chain!"
"There's one around this snake's neck." Harry grabbed the bottle, breaking the chain and cutting Alan's neck in his haste to deliver the bottle to Severus.
Severus pulled his chain from his neck; his hands were shaking. He only registered that Ron had entered the room and was hauling Alan away. He heard the thud of fists against flesh, but he did not care. If Hermione died, the man was dead.
"Harry, you must open Hermione's potion and add mine. My hands are shaking, or I would do it. Please, hurry."
He watched as Harry did as he was told. Then he took a deep breath, steadied his hands, and reached out.
"I can give it to her," Harry said.
"No, it must be fed to her by her lover's hand." He took the bottle from Harry and held it to the light. The liquid inside was sparkling.
Hermione's eyes met his and she gasped, "I love you." Then her eyes closed, and her chest stopped rising.
Severus pried her lips open and poured the elixir in her mouth. His other hand massaged her throat muscles. He then grasped the knife and pulled it free. He pressed his hand over the wound.
Harry was sobbing next to him, holding one of her bloodstained hands in his. "Is it too late?
Harry glanced at Severus' face. It was deathly pale.
Seconds ticked by...each seeming to last an hour...and then Hermione took a deep breath, and her eyes fluttered open.
Severus sagged in relief. He lifted his hand and saw that the flesh had healed itself. He bent and bathed her face with tears and kisses.
Hermione was crying and trying to cover herself as he gathered her to him and held her tightly.
Harry pulled the sheet from the bed and draped it around her.
"Leave us," Severus said, looking up and seeing that Remus and Tonks had joined Harry and Ron in the room.
"Shouldn't we get her to a Wizarding hospital?" Harry asked.
"She will be fine. Please, Harry," Severus said, holding her to him.
"Let's go. Severus knows what he's doing," Harry said. He grabbed at Ron's arm and pulled him to his feet and through the door. The others followed, leaving the couple alone.
"Hermione," Severus whispered, "are you okay? Did he...?"
She shook her head as she clung to him, feeling the safety of his strong arms. Finally she stammered, "I need to bathe."
He nodded, wanting the stench of the man off her as much as she did. He drew her to her feet and supported her around the waist as they walked slowly to the bathroom. He laid a towel over the toilet seat and sat her down gently. In the light of the bathroom, he could see healing bruises and a few bloody scrapes. Her face was puffy where Alan's nails had cut her. It took an iron will not to leave her and go kill the man. But Hermione's need outweighed the need for revenge...at least for now. And he knew he was a different man now. Hermione's love had changed him.
As the tub filled, he gently drew the torn gown over her head and incinerated it with his wand. He picked her up and lowered her into the warm water. Hermione sat quietly, not looking at him or reacting to anything around her. Shock. He wished he'd taken the time to bring other potions. They had been on holiday, and he'd allowed himself to get out of the habit of carrying an arsenal of potions in his pockets. He took a warm cloth and soap and gently started to wash her. He cleaned the blood off her face and healed what damage he could with his wand. The potion was working inside out. He told her over and over, "I love you Hermione. You were so brave." He caressed her back gently with his hand. He soaped her hair and rinsed it. Then he Banished the dirty water and refilled the tub with clean water. She had started to cry again, and when he went to push her wet hair back, she laid her face in his hand, pressing a kiss there.
"You came," she whispered.
"Of course I came. I'm sorry I wasn't here earlier. But I knew my brave, wonderful girl would best him somehow. You did him some real damage."
"Severus, if he had..." She couldn't finish. "I had to pretend to want him. I had to touch him. I'm sorry."
The thought chilled him, but he took her face gently and turned it so she could see his eyes. "You have nothing to be ashamed of. You did what you had to. I'm so proud of you." He kissed her forehead as he reached for a big towel and helped her out of the tub and dried her off. He was just beginning to wonder what he would dress her in when there was a knock at the door.
Tonks called out, "I have a robe Hermione can wear."
Severus opened the door, and Tonks handed the robe over. "Does she need medical help?"
Severus took the robe and said, "Thank you, Tonks. She's okay. A pain potion and Calming Draught would be a good idea. And it would nice to have some Dreamless Sleep just in case. Is there another bedroom?"
Tonks nodded and said, "Yes, down the hall. I cleaned it. This one, too." She gestured over her shoulder with her thumb. "Harry and Ron took Alan to Azkaban. He'll be lucky if he's not missing some of those damaged parts by the time they are done."
Severus nodded, clearly exhausted. "I'll bring Hermione out in a minute. I want to take her to the other room."
"I'll send Remus for the potions, Severus."
He nodded, turning back to Hermione, who was sitting wrapped in the towel with tears running down her face.
"I need my mother," she said. Her voice was flat.
He got back down on his knees, pulled the towel away, and helped her into the robe. It was soft and warm.
"Hermione, I don't think you will be able to travel right now. Please, let me take you to another room here in the house so you can sleep. I know that Harry will come back soon, and I will ask him to go get your parents. Do you think they will come by Portkey?"
"Yes."
He picked her up, and she buried her face in his neck. "I'm sorry, Severus," she said.
"There is nothing to be sorry for, Hermione. I would do anything for you. I'm sorry I wasn't able to get here sooner." The words seemed flat and empty.
He found that Tonks was waiting for them. She held the door open and warmly rubbed Hermione's arm as Severus carried her past. He noted that the room was now clean, and the shutters were open, making the room look totally different. But he still carried her through the room and down the hall. He saw Lupin standing in a doorway and nodded as he passed. He heard Tonks give him the potions order, and then there was the sound of Apparition.
The other room had a large four-poster bed. All personal effects were gone. It had the look of a hotel room that was clean and ready for an occupant. The bed covers were turned back, so he placed her on the bed. She held tightly to him and said, "Please don't leave me."
Tonks had followed him into the room. "Severus, stay with her. I will bring the potions when they come. I asked Remus to bring some dittany as well."
"Thank you, and please thank Remus for me," Severus said. He watched Tonks nod and leave the room and close the door behind her.
Severus drew his wand and called out, "Expecto Patronum." The big, fat otter danced around the room and then vanished.
"I promised your parents I would let them know when I found you."
Severus slipped into the bed and pulled Hermione close. He could feel tears running down his neck.
"Do you want to talk about this, Hermione?" he asked softly.
"No," she whispered, clutching him tightly. "Just hold me."
He felt her tremble against him, and he felt at a loss to comfort her. He wasn't sure he liked that she needed her mother and not just him. But he tried hard to understand. His mother had never been much of a comfort to him.
He prayed Remus would come soon with the Calming Draught. He must have gone to a local apothecary since he hadn't left by Portkey. He continued to caress her and whisper soothing word. Eventually, Tonks knocked at the door.
"Come," he called.
Tonks came in, and Severus glimpsed Remus behind her.
"Severus, I have the potions," she said. "And Harry and Ron just came back. They would like to see Hermione for a moment.
Severus asked, "Do you want to see them?"
She nodded. Her eyes apologized to him because she needed to see her friends.
"Send them in. Remus, thank you, for getting the potions." He'd never been friendly to the man, and now he saw all the old history was nothing in the light of them all working together to help Hermione.
Lupin nodded, bowing his head slightly and backing out of the room.
"Tonks, give me a few minutes with the potions and then send the men in." Severus took the pain potion and had Hermione drink it. Then he gave her the Calming Draught and watched as the trembling abated. "Better?" he asked. He began to spread the dittany on her wounds.
"I feel better," she said, but tears still leaked out of her eyes.
The rest of the golden trio appeared at the door, and he motioned them in. He started to pull away saying, "I'll leave you."
"No! Please don't leave me, Severus."
He settled back beside her. He felt better that she did not send him away.
Harry and Ron went to the other side of the bed and knelt down. They reached out, one taking a hand and the other touching her shoulder.
"Hermione, are you alright?" Harry asked. His voice wavered as he took in the bruising that was still visible. He watched the flesh on her face heal under the dittany.
Ron seemed to be seething inside and didn't trust himself to say anything. Severus wondered if it was because of him or the situation. He smirked; maybe it was both.
"I'm sorry, Harry, Ron, that I didn't tell you about Severus. It just happened, and I wanted to keep him to myself." Her fingers tightened on Severus' hand. "I have never been so happy in my life. I have been a coward about sharing him with you. I didn't want to lose your friendship."
Ron found his voice and said, "It doesn't matter. We are here now. Severus called us immediately to help. That tells me he's changed, and I have eyes. He lives for you." He glanced up, and his eyes met Severus'. "You'd best continue to take good care of her."
In any other circumstances, Severus would have laughed at his threat. But he only nodded and said, "With my life."
Hermione sat up to hug each young man, and then she turned back, sliding into Severus' arms and laying against his chest.
Severus said, "Gentlemen, maybe you can come back later. She needs to sleep. Harry, will you and Ron go to Australia and get Hermione's parents. I think Tonks will have gotten Portkeys from Kingsley.
Harry said, "Of course. Sir, I can't say seeing you two in the paper wasn't a damn shock. It did make me angry only because I wasn't told. I know what you did for me, and I appreciate it. I also figured Hermione was old enough to know what she wanted. And I know you only commit yourself when you have given your heart. I can see she is in the best of hands." He smiled at Severus and then turned.
Ron said, "Same here, sir." He nodded and followed Harry out the door.
Hermione whispered against his neck, "Amazing."
Severus said, "Your friends have finally grown up. Now, sleep, my love. I will wake you when your parents come."
He settled down into the bed against the pillow, and Hermione snuggled up against him and fell asleep, lulled by the Calming Draught. Severus held her close and was surprised to feel tears leaking down his own face. He continued to lie there, awake and alert, as he caressed her arm and murmured over and over, "I love you, Hermione."
As the silence grew, he had to deal with all the rage inside. Years ago, he would have used Sectumsempraon Alan and watched the man's life blood seep into the bed and carpet. As he lay there, he found that he might be able to commiserate with the man. If he loved Hermione as much as Severus did, what would it do to him if she were with another man? Would he revert to the horrible man he'd been before her love had changed him? Granted, a lot of the things he'd done had been war or under the orders of two powerful men. But he knew in his heart he'd enjoyed his early days of being a Death Eater...until Lily had died, and then it had all become a nightmare that stretched until Hermione had reached out that night to take his hand. He knew he would eventually have to help her accept that Alan had changed because of her rejection. He finally let himself sleep.
*****
It seemed like he had barely closed his eyes when the door flew open and Hermione's parents came rushing in. Hermione roused quickly at the sound of her mother, and then both women were crying and clutching at each other. Severus moved away and faced Paxton.
"Severus, thank God you got to her." He came close and asked, "Did he...?"
"She says no." Severus ran a hand through his hair.
Paxton nodded. His eyes were full of tears.
Severus said, "I will be in the kitchen."
Hermione called, "Severus."
He went to her and said, "Please, if you can talk to your mother, talk. I promise I will not leave the house." She nodded, flashing him the tiniest of smiles. He squeezed her hand and moved away, seeing that her father had taken his place on the side of the bed to envelope both his women.
June was saying, "I thought we'd lost you just when we got you back. Hermione, darling..."
He closed the door and sagged back against it. He felt utterly spent, and a pressure was building inside. He tried to find comfort in the fact that he had his Hermione back. He knew things would take time now. Alan had destroyed her peace for now. He'd seen enough victims to know there would be consequences for both of them.
Harry appeared in the door that led to the kitchen. "Tonks made some strong coffee; it might do you good."
He nodded and pushed himself to his feet. He swayed a bit, and Harry stepped forward and grabbed his arm, steadying him. Suddenly, he knew he could not go into the kitchen with everyone there. He pulled Harry into the other bedroom. He fell to his knees and was able to pull his wand and cast a silencing charm before ragged cries tore from his lips. He didn't know how long the pain tore at him, but he finally realized Harry had a hold of his forearms. It wasn't a hug but an anchor...just what he needed. He saw Harry had tears in his eyes, too.
"I do not know what I would do without her," he found himself babbling. "He's damaged her. He didn't rape her, but she will never have that freedom of spirit she has always had."
"You don't know that, Severus. Hermione has a huge capacity for forgiveness. You just have to be patient and loving. I can see she already depends on you to be there for her. It would be far worse if she was withdrawing from us all...especially you, sir."
Severus freed one hand and rubbed it across his tear-stained face. "I will have all the patience she needs." He struggled to his feet with Harry's help. "I should wash my face."
He left Harry standing there and went into the bathroom, splashed cold water on his face, and then dried his face slowly on a towel. He waited a good 10 minutes for the redness to fade some, and then he came out to find Harry waiting for him.
"Thank you, Harry. Your mother would be very proud of the man you have become."
Harry smiled at him and said, "Thank you, sir."
"Severus," he said, giving the young man permission to call him by name.
"Severus," Harry repeated, "come have that cup of coffee. It should revive you a bit. Your spoon will stand up in it." He tried to laugh at his joke, but it fell like sand on his tongue.
Severus nodded with understanding and followed him to the kitchen.
******
Hermione clutched her mother tightly and cried for a long time. Finally she fell quiet and just held on; her grip was so strong that June knew she would have bruises, but she didn't mind. She held Hermione close, stroked her hair, and cooed soft things mothers say to babies as they comfort them.
Paxton sat by feeling utterly useless...not even brushing away the tears that fell down his face.
"Paxton, please go get us some tea. A nice cup of tea might help us settle our nerves."
Hermione was lying with her head against her mother's breasts.
"Okay," he said, glad of something to do. "Are you okay, my girl?" he asked as he stood.
Hermione nodded and said, "Thanks, Daddy."
Paxton smiled; she hadn't called him that in years. "Anything for my girl."
Severus was just sitting down at the table when Paxton came in the door. The man looked years older than he had that morning. Severus started to stand. "Is Hermione okay?" he asked.
"She's fine, Severus. Have your cup of coffee. June's got her. As much as a woman can love you, there's nothing like a mother to soothe a body."
I wouldn't know, Severus thought bitterly, but he understood. He was eternally thankful that they had made up only days ago. He picked up the coffee that Lupin had set before him and smiled weakly at the woman and men who sat trying to not intrude on his space. They all still feared the man they used to know.
Paxton asked, "May I have two cups of tea for June and Hermione?"
Tonks said, "Mr. Granger, sit. I'll take the tea to them. Have some tea or coffee yourself. There are some chocolate biscuits here as well. She put the cups on a tray, poured the tea, and gathered a couple chocolate biscuits to take to the women.
Paxton sat, placing his face in his hands for a moment to collect himself, and then turned to Severus and said, "I've never been grateful for the magic before. Without it, we would have lost her. It might have taken weeks for you to all track her down the...what is it you say?...the Muggle way."
Severus said, "Even then, it was not fast enough. She had to practically save herself. If we had been delayed any longer, she would have gotten out of there on her own." He didn't tell him about the knife or the potion. "I'm sorry, sir. I failed her. I did not keep her safe."
"Severus," Paxton said, "You could do no more than you did. What you all did is a miracle in my world. I'll not hear about failures. Hermione survived the worst, and she's returned to us. She's tough, and she will come out of this. She's worried about you, Severus. She's worried you won't be able to look at her the same."
Severus' brow creased and he said, "She is not changed in my eyes. I only feel more love for her."
Tonks came back in and said, "Severus, Hermione wants you."
Severus stood and looked at the others in the room. "Harry, Ron, can you go back to Hermione's place and repair the damage? I don't want her to see it like that. Remus, will you please go see Minerva and explain what's happened. Ask her if we can come there. I think Hermione might feel safer inside the wards of Hogwarts."
Remus nodded and said, "Of course, Severus." He kissed his wife and said, "I'll get Teddy from your mother's and take care of him till you come back."
Harry and Ron stood. "We will get right on it, Severus," Harry said. They went out the door.
Severus turned and went to the room Hermione was in. When he opened the door, June looked up at him with a small, tear-filled smile. "She's asleep," she whispered. "Come and take my place."
He slipped under Hermione, and she moved out the other side.
Lisa, thank you for your beta work. I appreciate your help.
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It's Potions master, not Potion's master.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thats all you have to say is whats wrong? Nice
This was great! I'm so glad they only waited a week instead of 4 years. I'm not the looser with no self control I imagined myself to be after all. Score 2 for Hermione she got the only complement on her potions work so far. This is going to well I hope nothing happens to mess it up. How lucky are they to find their soul mates. Hermione is a peach. If she wasn't the one to go and thank the nasty Postions Master for his hard work this wouldn't have happened. They may be 20 years apart in life experience but not in romance and relationship experience. They are equals. His life experience will be helpful in making decisions and he has some insecurities she doesn't have but they hopefully will give eachother mercy when one of them cocks things up once in a while while learning.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I'm so ga\lad you are enjoying the story. It was a lark to really have them spend some quality time during their times off. They are soul matesa nd they did have a lot to learn from eachother. Some rgeat times and some tough times come along. I am sorry I didn't answer you sooner. I see you didn't write much more in this review section, but I hope you finished the story and enjoyed it.
Yes! She should write him. That was amazing. I don't think I could wait 4 years to see him again but I do understand the reasoning behind it. It is easier to do her work if she doesn't have the distraction of a love afair and a new relationship. I can't imagine what your next chapter will cover. I'd be staight to 4 years later....LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Ah well who could hold to their promise to wait for four years when the pull to be together is so rgeat for these two lonely hearts. I hope you enjoyed the story.
This relationship is the only natrual conclusion between these to brilliant minded, powerful and private individtuals. I hope they have opportunity to see each other over the next four years for Love's and for hope's sake. I have no doubt that SS will wait and I believe Hermione can all be trusted but she is young and may need someone to hold her once in a while and some kissing from time to time. It's the way were made. It would make them both happier. If she could come to him during the hols they could become better aqainted before the apprenticeship. How can a young woman with Hermione's fine mind find someone else if she can have Severus Snape. He is like no other man or wizard in a miryid of ways. She would only face utter disappointment were she to seek comfort any where else. And if he says he will wait. You know that's a good as a wand oath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I agree they belong together and there woud be no one else for her to look at if she could have SS. I really like your well thought out review and I agree with it. I hope you continued to enjoy the story. I am sorry it took so long to answer this. I haven't been on this site for some. It becasme to difficult to post here. So I have moved on, but I have most of my work on this site. Thank you for the review.
If only anyone had ever been so attentive to helping Severus deal with his trauma and post traumatic stress. Hermione has had only a drop of what he had endured. I think it was therapeutic for Severus to help Hermione with her trauma. I feel happy and think it is very sweet that her parents get to be more a part of her life now even though they are muggles. It must be so hard to feel like you've lost your child to another world and way of life. If it's your only child one probably feels childless at times.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I agree canyou imagine sending a child of 11 off to someplace you normally would never get to see to learn things totally foreign to your way of life or understanding. The houses don't seem to have much supper idiom. The kids all seem to raise themselves. It shouldn't be the older students raising the you get ones. They are children too. Technically. Thanks for all your reviews I hope you didn't Give up on me... When you finish the story let me know what you think.
Severus has certainly been on his best behavior with everyone. The Grangers are about to spend some time in Disney World. I'm sure they'll enjoy it. I hope Hermione doesn't withdraw from Severus as she deals with her ordeal.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
He's just trying to Give Hermione the space she needs. Yes I thought it might be fun for them to come there and see her world.
Hermione is so blessed to have so many people who love her.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Yes she is. We should all be so lucky. I do have a close family.
It took a lot of courage to do what Hermione did. Even though he stabbed her, If you're going down, you'd better take them down with you to the best of your ability. I wonder what made something that may have started as desire, jealousy or coveting her neighbor's wife, so to speak, morph into a psychotic break with reality leading to the actions of a psychopath? Somewhere he slipped a cog.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Who knows. Possessiveness, jealousy. Sometimes it's the quiet ones who snap. Thank you :)
I want a man like Severus Snape who would turn over heaven and earth to find me. It's one thing to feel loved, it's one thing for someone to say they love you, but it's even better to feel precious and have absolute assurance that he will rescue you no matter the cost. He would kill for you without a second thought. Hermione is only going to need to keep Alan as calm as possible until her love rescues her. Alan is a regular Prince Humperdink and Severus is the Dread Pirate Roberts, Hermione is butter cup. Who knows what I am writing at this time of night after some sweet wine. I hope it is making sense.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
You and me both. I've always thought that if he was loved he'd move heaven and hell for that person. Look what he did for Lily a d she never appreciated him at all. I'm not familiar with those characters to I have no frame of reference there :) thank you for your comments.
Response from breastlady (Reviewer)
If you have never seen the movie "Princes Bride" you are missing out on a wonderful, funny, farce of romance. You must see it! You absolutely must!
I'm really happy for Hermione. I'm glad that despite the fact that she had taken their memories, they love where she had sent them. That should provide Hermione no small amount of comfort. Severus is being such a good boy. I hope Hermione doesn't feel pressured to have kids too soon. I realize that she understands why Severus and Minerva think these two should marry next year, but she would have liked to have waited. I hope getting married before she is finished with her studies doesn't prevent her from reaching her goals or result in her having kids before she is ready to give up some of her professional life to be a mom. I understand the pressure she is under, and right now she doesn't see how she can do what she thinks would be best without hurting Severus' feelings and having him believing she just doesn't want to be married to him.I had the exact same situation. Was just starting college and my husband, whom is 7 years older than I, had convinced me he could not enter his chosen profession without a wife and that he couldn't wait for me for 4 years. As a result I didn't finish my degree program and had an unplanned baby at 20. My husband and I were training for the ministry. One has many more choices about how and where they can serve God and others, if they don't have to worry about taking children somewhere dangerous or perhaps living in poverty. Then, after 5 years my husband decided he had been pressured by his mother, father and grandmother to become a minister and it wasn't what he really wanted. It was too stressful for him. So, I had to give up my vocation too. I wasn't in a position back then where a woman could be a minister, evangelist or missionary but not her husband, and he didn't want to be the husband of any of the above; he would have been expected to serve as well, if I did. And there was no way on God's green earth he would have been willing to sever in a medical mission in India or Africa. Ironically, I had turned down another marriage offer because that person wasn't called to the same vocation even though we had deep feelings for one another.I should have stuck to my guns. I think my husband might have realized he didn't feel called before we got married if I had made him wait for me to finish college and then we wouldn't have been married after all. I also wouldn't have gotten pregnant yet and would have had more choices. I regret not listening to my gut.I'm enjoying the story! Happy summertime Christmas from down under!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Hard to remember what happens each chapter. True Hermione doesnt have all the choices she wishes, maybe I should have made them stronger but they just needed eachother so much. You did have lots of choices and pressures. We all make mistakes. We can all say I should have turned right instead of left. I never married. No kids. I have travelled a lot. Never saved much live in an older home. Could have been wiser had more to show for working 2 jobs for 39 years but I'm content enough.
I'm so glad they worked that out. Grandchildren are a blessing. I love mine and they are my sun and stars. It's only too bad they come at such a high price. I hope they don't feel pressured to have children right away. Nice chapter, once again.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you, my great nieces and nephews are such a blessing as well as their parents. We've had the best. Good kids all. They make the sun rise and the world go round.
It went as well as it could have. Do they have any memories of Hermione from before she took them? Was she able to give them back any memories of her as their daughter or did she have to prove she was their long lost witch of a daughter they had never met and didn't know existed and they had to take her word for it? Please let me know if the story doesn't let us know. Can muggles use a pencieve? She could show them her childhood and getting her letter from Hogwarts. Please let me know what her parents know.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I'm pretty sure she was able to give them back their memories. Now I don't know about Muggles using a pensive. I've written several stories of her getting back w her parents so its hard to remember which is which. I think this set took it pretty good. I should use you for ideas before I write. You make good story leaps.
What a way to get rid of stress! It's Hermione and Severus vs the world, in a good way. They are more than a team, they are an entity. No wonder they can't stand to be apart. It wasn't well thought out for Minerva to have Hermione surprise Severus in public knowing they hadn't shared their relationship publicly, yet. Did she know? I'm sure things will be fine with Hermione's parents. Accepting Severus shouldn't be any crazier than all of the other mind blowing things they've had to deal with regarding their daughter. They seem ready to accept her lifestyle. Another great chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I think Severus had told her that he and Hermione were together but not surr she knew it was a secret. Yes they are sn item. Thsnk you again for all your comments.
They're like a couple of silly kids! It's wonderful. I miss those days and that feeling of new love. Even the trip to the library seemed like an imposition on their relationship and then I remembered that grown ups do have lives. It's like they are bound to each other with a magical umbilical cord and can't bear to have too much space separating them. I envy them. Great happy chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you. Happy happy happy makes me happy. It was mostly fluff. Fluff makes me happy.
This year will be a long one for these two. It will be hard to be parted after this summer. I wonder if Severus can make a port key they can use to spend more time together. Very romantic! And very enjoyable chapter! Severus must have quite a nest egg put back to afford this summer's vacation. I haven't heard the couple discuss finances or Hermione wonder how he affords her such splendor. I'm curious. I hope Harry and Ron don't let them down.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Well I guess I just assumed he'd been saving his money for a future when he wasn't tethered to two masters. After all at Hogwarts' they were given everything.
Magical sex is awesome!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I thInk so. Thank you.
What an awesome place that would be! It would be a bit frightening too. I'm sure there I things that one would be fascinated to see but not sure if they really wanted to be there. I bet there are people there Hermione doesn't even know were wizards or witches. What an incredible opportunity to learn. I wish that was real. Great chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I also visited Morano when I was there. Now wouldn't that have been fascinating.
This agreement for Hogwarts will work nicely. This is wonderful for both of them. Venice! That is romantic indeed! "I've been storing it up for more years than you've been alive" is sexy too. It seems she is as needy as he is, which is very good. If not, it could be suffocating to be the center of the universe to such a man, for some women. He doesn't share well. My own dad is jealous when me and my mum spend too much time together and he feels ignored. It used to make my mom feel wanted but after years and years it's a little annoying when he's being a pouty baby about it. I can't stand pouting men. I'd rather just have a good row and get it over with. Well, that was when I was 20 years younger. Now, an adult discussion is the only acceptable way to deal with disagreements. I wonder how Hermione and Severus will handle their first argument? She's bossy and he's controlling and has a penchant for meanness. If they were taking advice, I would recommend they get a plan on how to handle disagreements in advance with some ground rules, do's and don'ts, in order to avoid misunderstandings and to allow for negotiation if the issue is about making decisions. No pouting, no character assassination, no sarcasm, don't expect the other person to read your mind, be open to discussion, agree to take a break if you are hitting a wall, no holding grudges. Forgive each other before you go to bed. They can never say, "I you don't like it you can leave." It's better for Hermione to say, "You can live with a happy wife or an angry wife and you are stuck with me until you die. How do you want this to go?" I only had to use it once but it was very effective. A smart husband knows that if momma ain't happy, nobody is happy. If they survive the first 10-15 years, all the fights are about the same things and you've either worked out a compromise or decided to let it go. On with Summer Vacation!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Wow some good advice. Maybe some one who. Reds it will read your review. I have a hard time writing conflict. Not sure my Hermione's or Severus' have ever had a huge fight. Hey I might borrow this someday for a fic :) Ty I went to Venice years ago. It was one of the best few days of all my travels so far.
Just make sure you don't forget to take your potion! Kids would put a nasty cramp in your plans, right now. You think you're busy now? Maybe you'll never need any. Your lives are full. Research shows that women without children are happier than women who have children. Unfortunately, it's a full time job, they don't appreciate you as much as you deserve and you can't have it all on mommy track. Back in the 70's we got the idea into our heads that we could do it all. It was a lie. All we got was sleep deprivation and giving up our higher educations or promotions because we had responsibilities. Now they don't move out so it's never your turn to live life. And they only get more expensive the older they get. I love being a grandma, but I wouldn't do the mommy thing again. I should have just had dogs. I enjoyed it when the kids were young because I was young and I still had hope, but now I know there is no hope for me. I spend my days at work helping 30 and 40 somethings who thought they needed a baby so bad they went and had the 90 thousand dollar test tube baby that's broken and can't breastfeed or when the baby can, the moms are too tired and their expectations of life are too high to really enjoy motherhood. They are already invested in mortgages and life styles. I spend my nights wondering how long my husband and I will have to support ourselves, our children and their children, while I should be taking care of my parents. Hermione and Severus can get their kid fix at Hogwarts. I hope they are listening to my advice. At least there are house elves if you need a nanny, I suppose. Severus is so heart breakingly vulnerable. I know he doesn't have to worry with Hermione, though. I'm very happy for them!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Sounds like a difficult life. I missed having the husband and kids. Way to late for either I think. I like doing my own thing. Dogs are good. Companions. I've got three. Had some precious ones in the past. I do wish they had longer lives. I think it's hard for Severus to trust that someone loves him with all her heart. Ty for sharing.
I tried getting my guy to be romantic and he just acts like a stupid dolt and says he doesn't know how. It seems a lot like trying to get out of a chore by doing it so badly your wife doesn't make you do it anymore. Thank you for giving us a romantic Severus. I will squash the urge to go hit the man snoring in my bed with a shoe. I can get my romance fix without being tempted to stray. No real man could live up to Severus Snape.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Well the shoe might get his attention. LoL one reason I write romantic fic. Is to get romance in my life as well. Glad your enjoying it.
Minerva will insist will she? Oh well, I guess they'll just have to get married then. But, I wouldn't want to be an apprenticed to my husband. No. I definitely have authority issues. We would have to have serious ground rules. I would take everything personally. He had better be a very nice and polite boy. I probably wouldn't hex my master, but I wouldn't think twice about hexing my husband if he got high handed with me. We would have to work it out so that we were more like research partners. And if he wanted me to do the grunt work he would have to ask nicely and reward me for good behavior. Romantic interludes, inventive sex and books would be just for starters. Let's add, he would have to remember to tell me how much he appreciated my help every day. I would reciprocate, of course. Well, let's at least get through the holidays. I'll be nice.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Can't remember them having a conflict. This was written purely for the love of them being happy together. Most of it. Thank you, I'm glad your enjoying it.
Thank goodness they were only separated for a week! Dear man was a virgin? Hermione must feel just a little bit smug at getting the best man on the planet that no one else had ever had. They are a perfect match. I hope they never actually need that potions ingredient. Between the two of them, they could end up as famous as the Nicholas and Perenelle Flamel! I am enjoying the love-fest. What a summer it will be!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you so much, wow I had 't had a new chapter of my newest story post, so I hadn't looked at reviews in ages. I'm pleased tofind so many.
With the flue, apparition and port keys, why would she need to wait 4 years? My heart is pounding for them. If she can't see him and get her studies accomplished, how would she ever complete an apprenticeship?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Well it was going to be a one shot and then it begged for more.
Glad I happened upon this from a recommendation on snapeyluvshermy. Love the story! Thanks for sharing!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you, :) I'm pleased someone recommended it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you, :) I'm pleased someone recommended it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.