Chapter 16: Fear!
Chapter 16 of 20
gersknightladyOn her last night at Hogwarts, Hermione goes to say goodbye to her grumpy, cruel Potions professor.
ReviewedHermione stood in the garden. It was near midnight. The moon was bright, and the stars shone in a brilliant pattern...different from the one she was used too, but beautiful. Severus was in the house sneaking around and getting wine glasses for them. He was trying not to wake her parents. She had been giggling too much and knocking things over, so he'd sent her out and went to retrieve the goods, arguing he was better at stealth than she was. The fact that he was an ex-spy made it hard to argue. So she stood in the yard at the edge of the hedges, looking at the pale flowers her father had growing there. She picked a flower and held it to her nose, breathing in the strange scent.
Suddenly a pair of arms came around her. She started to say, "Severus," but she never finished because a hand clamped over her face and a cloth covered her nose and mouth. The strong smell of chloroform blazed like fire up her sinuses, and then blackness descended. The flower dropped unnoticed to the ground.
There was no one to see her being thrown over the shoulders of a tall figure dressed in black as he carried her out the back gate and headed toward a dark van. The door opened of its own accord, and he tossed her into the back like a sack of potatoes. Then, as he headed for the driver's seat, he flicked his wand back, and the door closed without a sound. He drove away in silence.
*****
Severus, juggling two long-stemmed glasses in one hand and a bottle of champagne in the other, fumbled with the latch of the door. He wished he could use a spell, but he didn't want to do much magic where Hermione's parents were likely to show up. He knew it made them uncomfortable even though they would never say anything.
"Hermione," he called. "Can you help me with this? Do..." His voice trailed off as the hair on the back of his neck stood up. His eyes tried to pierce the backyard's deep shadows. Fear. He could smell it. The bottle and glasses fell unheeded to the ground with a terrible shattering sound.
He drew his wand and sent out a detection spell: "Homenum Revelio."
His heart beat wildly in his chest as he next said, "Lumos Maxima."
Light flew from the wand, and the empty back yard was revealed. The back gate hung open. He spied the newly picked flower and picked it up. He sniffed the stem and caught the faint scent of Hermione's skin. He'd been able to detect scents nearly all his potions career. It had helped him time and again while teaching. He was able to stop cauldrons from exploding when he noticed the scent of a potion gone wrong.
Lights were coming on in the house, and he could hear footsteps coming across the tiles of the kitchen.
Paxton came to the door still tying the robe that was barely over his shoulders.
"What's happened?" he demanded. Spying the broken glass and wine bottle, he started to look annoyed. Then he caught sight of Severus' horrified face. "What's going on?"
Severus' fear nearly overwhelmed his ability to act. Only once in his life had he felt so devastated...the night Lily died. "She's gone. She was taken."
June skidded up behind Paxton, catching the last words. She cried out as her fist covered her mouth.
Paxton drew her close to him.
Severus clamped his emotions down and left her father gaping after him. He went to the alley and detected the faint scent of an automobile and cast a spell.
It revealed the shape of a van and a trail of tire tracks. But even as he watched, they began to fade...washed away by a counter spell.
Paxton was now behind him. "Who would do this?" he demanded.
"It was a wizard or witch. The trail has been washed away with a spell."
He flew now, leaving her stricken parents behind. He cast spell after spell, but the trail was fading. After only a few twisted blocks, it was gone.
"Hermione!" he cried.
In this new country, with no knowledge of anyone, he needed help to find her. He would have to go back to London. He needed men and women who were sensitive enough to magic to listen for the tiniest whispers. He knew Hermione could perform a number of wandless spells and that she was capable of clarity of thought and knowledge in battle. She might be able to work her way out of this, but in the meantime, he would call in any and all help he could.
He felt cold even in the Australian heat as he made his way back to the Grangers.
Paxton was at the end of the alley when he came into view. He saw the man slump with horror when he did not see his daughter.
"Severus, what can we do? Who would do this?"
"It could be someone who hates me." Then a thought occurred to him. "Or it could be Alan, her lab partner."
"Do you mean her lab partner from school? Why?" The man was puffing, trying to keep up with Severus' long legs.
"Jealousy. He fancies Hermione, and I caught him trying to kiss her. I threw him out. That was a year ago. If he is obsessed, he may have come back for her."
"But how would he know she was here?" Paxton found June at the gate and shook his head at her tearful inquiry.
Severus turned to her parents. "I must go back to England and search her place. I'm sorry, but I must go now. I will send my Patronus with news. It's a..."
Paxton waved his hand and said, "Go. I know what it is."
Severus ran through the house up to the bedroom. He grabbed the Portkey and his jacket. He Apparated from there to the Portkey sight and from there to London. He ran down the street; using his wand, he opened the door. Forest was on duty and came forward.
"Hey, hold on! Oh, Mr. Snape! What's going on?"
"Forest, have you seen Alan around here lately? Since I kicked him out last year?"
"Well, I thought I saw him across the street a couple times. But there are lots of students in the area. He only lives a few blocks away. I never saw him on this side of the street. What's wrong? Where is Miss Hermione?"
"Taken." Severus stopped, wondering how he could explain how he'd gotten here from Australia in only a matter of minutes.
"But weren't you in Australia?" the man asked. Then he said, "Ah, a Portkey."
Severus mouth hung open, and then he snapped, "How do you know about Portkeys?"
Forest said, "My mother was a witch, an Order member. She died in the war. I was born a Squib." He saw the frown deepen on Severus' forehead. "The Order wanted Miss Hermione protected. There are still Death Eaters about," he explained. "I'm just a watcher, like Mrs. Figg watched out for Harry when he was young. We can only report suspicions. We have a direct link to other Order members."
Severus waved his hand and said, "I don't care. We can talk later. Please alert the Order. Give me Alan's address and send Harry Potter there when he comes. I believe Alan came to Australia and took Hermione. He's much more than he appears to be." He flew up the stairs and used his wand to access Hermione's rooms. He stopped dead. The room was in shambles, and all the clothes he kept there were torn into ribbons. Black paint was slashed across the wall of the bedroom: "MINE!!!"
As he turned, he saw the remnants of a letter. After picking it up, he realized it was from her mother. The address of their home was circled in red pen. He could smell the man's cologne; it reeked in the air around him.
He turned, knowing for sure now that it was Alan and not a random Death Eater. It did not make him feel better. Alan was obviously unstable, and Hermione was in great danger. It had been literally 18 minutes since he'd discovered her missing. Yet it felt like an eternity.
Forest handed him a paper when he came down the stairs at a dead run. "I alerted Mr. Weasley." He waved his cell phone at Severus, and Severus found he was not surprised. "Mr. Potter will be sent directly to that address."
Severus glanced at the address and knew it to be just a few doors from the restaurant he and Hermione went often. Why hadn't she told him that Alan lived close by? He went into the alley and Apparated to the back door of the restaurant. Harry appeared a moment later. His eyes were wide as he came forward.
"Snape, what the hell's going on? What was that I read in the paper... you and Hermione?"
He grabbed Harry's arm and dragged him into the door to the apartments. "That's not important. Hermione has been kidnapped in Australia by her former wizard lab partner. I have no reference in that country, no familiarity. I cannot find her alone."
"Why would he do that?" Harry asked, following Severus up the stairs.
"Jealousy. He wants her." Severus pulled out his wand and blasted open Alan's apartment door.
"He could have Portkeyed anywhere." As they looked in the door, both men's mouths dropped.
The walls were plastered with Muggle pictures of Hermione. They showed her buying a paper at the newsstand, walking down the street, working in the lab at school, in the market, even bathing. Severus grabbed the picture and tore it to ribbons.
"I will kill him."
But his resolve gave, and he staggered sideways.
"Whoa!" Harry exclaimed, grabbing his arm.
He saw the horror and despair in the man's eyes. He'd forgiven Severus Snape his trespasses from his early life. He'd seen the memories. He'd known what this man had done for him, but they had never really spoken. He'd been furious to see Severus' and Hermione's pictures in the Spectator last week. He'd felt confusion and hurt that she hadn't told him, even though she had known the paper was going to print the picture. But all of it was put aside for now; Hermione needed him. He moved into the room casting spells. Ghostlike figures of Alan moving here and there appeared. It was like a surveillance image...only in 3D.
Severus shook himself and studied the images. They watched him make phone call after phone call, and then he left and came back and packed for severely cold weather. They saw several duplicate outfits, some obviously for a woman.
Harry said, "He's not going to keep her in Australia."
Severus glared at him. "Obviously."
"Let's fan out and see if we can find anything concerning a cold-weather destination."
The two men were deep in drawers and papers when there was a voice from the door: "What the bloody hell is going on?"
Harry stood glancing at Snape and saw him scowl.
"Weasley," he growled. He couldn't stomach the boy since that incident in the dark hall when he'd caught Hermione and the boy snogging.
"We are going to need all the help we can get," Harry growled back at him.
Severus turned away and continued looking.
Harry left the bedroom and went to fill Ron in. After that, more Aurors appeared, and the small apartment seemed to be full of people searching.
Severus was growing more afraid by the minute. It had been several hours since Hermione had gone missing.
Then Tonks shouted from the living room, "I've got something!"
Severus found her sitting in front of a computer. "What did you find?" he demanded.
"He tried to erase the hard drive, but he didn't quite understand that the information wasn't gone, just decoded so it could be covered over by the next documents. He rented a small cabin in a backwoods area of the Swiss Alps. The date of occupancy started a week ago!"
"Are you sure?" Severus demanded. "We do not have time to waste. How do you know about this computer?"
Lupin came to stand close and said, "Severus, my wife is brilliant on these things. If she says it's there, it's there."
Severus looked into Lupin's eyes and saw only truth and concern for Hermione there.
"Let's go then."
Snape took his wand out and waved it, changing the pillow on the couch to a warm down jacket. His shoes became boots and his pants thick jeans.
Harry watched only a moment and then began doing the same thing. The others followed. Kingsley was quickly filled in, and he, being the Minister of Magic, created the international Portkeys. Soon the group stood on a mountain about a mile from the cabin.
*****
One hour after her abduction, Hermione woke with a splitting headache. She groaned when she tried to move her head. She was lying in a bed with thick quilts. There was dim light coming from shuttered windows. She could feel a strong ward just out of reach. She lay still. She was unable to move and also did not want to alert the man who had her that she was awake. She turned her head to take in her surroundings. The shutters were made of metal and locked down.
She reached out with her magic to nudge the ward and test its strength. She wondered where she was, and she worried about Severus. No matter what, she would get out of here and back to him. He was her life; more important, she was his. She knew if something happened, he would give up on life. He would not be able to face that loss twice in his life. She realized who had taken her. She was familiar with the cologne he wore. With gut-churning realization, she knew the only way to get Alan to drop his guard was to convince him she wanted him. If she could get herself released from this binding spell, she might be able to fight him.
Hermione saw the door swing open, and a tall silhouette blocked the light.
"I know you're awake, Hermione."
"Alan, thank goodness it's you. Severus has old enemies. I'm glad it's you. You have no idea what they might have done to me."
He came and knelt down. His face was in shadow. "You have no idea what I might do to you, Hermione," he whispered. His voice was cold and hard.
Hermione forced herself not to shudder. "Are you still mad at me?"
"You bitch! You humiliated me in front of the instructor and a number of students. No one will take me seriously anymore, and they laugh behind my back."
"I'm sorry for what I did. I thought my life was with Severus. Thank goodness you rescued me from that place." The lies felt bitter on her tongue. "Severus has had me bound to him by a spell intertwined with a potion he makes me take."
"You lie," he spat. But she could tell his voice wasn't as certain anymore. His obsession made him want to hope.
"No, Alan. You know he was a Death Eater. He still is. He fooled us all. He's a very good actor. After all, he fooled Dumbledore, didn't he? I was fooled as well. If he has his way, I will be married to him by the end of this year and entrenched with him in that dungeon of Hogwarts. He wants me to teach there. Can you imagine the life there buried under loads of essays and in danger from sniveling brats' experiments?"
Each lie she spoke out seemed to sear her heart. Right now, she would find that job to be the happiest she could imagine. She wanted to be there with Severus, cuddled up on his couch, reading the evenings away. It seemed like heaven.
He stood and flipped a light on.
Hermione stifled a gasp at the hardness of his face and eyes. Gone was the young carefree man she had known. She felt a guilt grip her. Had she changed him so much just by her rejection? There was a dark look...evil, for want of a better word. Dark Magic. Alan had delved into Dark Magic.
"Please, let me up. I'll show you how happy I am to see you." She flashed him a smile. Inside she cringed as he came closer.
"You know you are trapped. My wards won't let you use more than simple magic. I felt you test my wards, Hermione. You cannot escape me." He waved his wand, and the body bind was gone.
Hermione moved slowly, taking a moment to check out the room. She saw that not only did she have to deal with the wards, but it was also more like a prison cell. Well, if she could not use magic, then she would have to use the hand-to-hand skills she had learned as a teen. Knowing war was imminent, she had taken self-defense classes for several summers. Wands often got knocked out of wizards' hands. The danger here was that she had to convince him to come closer, and closer made her want to run the other way.
She stood and was dismayed to find herself in a negligee. Knowing he'd changed her clothing made her stomach roll. She felt dirty as she caught his leer.
He came close, his wand reaching out to caress the side of her face, and then he slid it down between her breasts. "You're one hot woman, Hermione. You will find my touch quite agonizing. I could have once been gentle, but now, I have a debt to settle."
He reached out and grabbed her arm. His mouth was on hers before she even had time to react. His tongue forced its way into her mouth, and his fingers bruised her arm. He was pushing her back onto the bed. She found her fingers clutching at his arms. He was so much taller than she was; her plans might need a bit of revision. She knew of one sure way to bring him down. But she had to get a good grip, and that would mean encouraging his attention.
She was encouraged a moment later when she heard the soft thunk of his wand as it hit the floor. His hands painfully gripped and twisted at her breasts. She groaned and forced her words out: "Yes! Oh, Alan."
"You like it rough, huh? Well, I can show you rough."
Hermione could hear him working at his pants, and she stared at the ceiling as he manhandled her body, pressing her into the bed. Severus! her mind screamed.
She had no doubt that Alan would use her and then kill her. But she was still not able to make her move, so she ran her hands over his back. "Yes, Alan," she cooed.
He was pushing the gown up over her hips, and she felt horrified and vulnerable.
He then gave a frustrated grunt and pulled back. She saw him push his pants off over his hips, and she spied her goal.
"You're magnificent," she said. "Please let me..." Her hands reached out, and she saw his resolve continue to falter.
She moved back into the bed and beckoned him. Rolling to her side, she patted the bed.
He climbed in, and she reached for him. Her fingers clasped him, and his eyes closed as he thrust against her fingers.
"Hermione," he groaned, forgetting his revenge for a moment.
She took that moment and did two things: She dug her fingers in and pulled with all her might. Then she twisted his penis and brought her knee up and over to crash into his testicles.
He screamed in rage, but vomited, twisting and folding into a fetal position on the bed. His hands cradled his damaged parts.
Blood was spreading on the bed. Some of it splashed her before she crawled from the bed, her eyes frantically searching for his wand. She spied it on the floor nearly covered by his discarded pants. As she dove for it, she felt his hand grab her hair.
He pulled her back as her fingers clutched the fallen wand.
As she swung the wand toward him, she saw his hand slip under the pillow, and the glint of a knife caught the light. She screamed, "Defendo!" as a fiery pain pierced her side. The spell hit him in the chest and knocked him over the bed. He hit the wall hard on the other side and fell between the bed and the wall. He whimpered with pain, vomiting again.
Suddenly the door was blasted in, and Severus filled the doorway. Hermione slipped to the floor.
Thank you, Lisa, for your beta work. It's a talent I will never grasp.
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193 Reviews | 8.31/10 Average
It's Potions master, not Potion's master.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thats all you have to say is whats wrong? Nice
This was great! I'm so glad they only waited a week instead of 4 years. I'm not the looser with no self control I imagined myself to be after all. Score 2 for Hermione she got the only complement on her potions work so far. This is going to well I hope nothing happens to mess it up. How lucky are they to find their soul mates. Hermione is a peach. If she wasn't the one to go and thank the nasty Postions Master for his hard work this wouldn't have happened. They may be 20 years apart in life experience but not in romance and relationship experience. They are equals. His life experience will be helpful in making decisions and he has some insecurities she doesn't have but they hopefully will give eachother mercy when one of them cocks things up once in a while while learning.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I'm so ga\lad you are enjoying the story. It was a lark to really have them spend some quality time during their times off. They are soul matesa nd they did have a lot to learn from eachother. Some rgeat times and some tough times come along. I am sorry I didn't answer you sooner. I see you didn't write much more in this review section, but I hope you finished the story and enjoyed it.
Yes! She should write him. That was amazing. I don't think I could wait 4 years to see him again but I do understand the reasoning behind it. It is easier to do her work if she doesn't have the distraction of a love afair and a new relationship. I can't imagine what your next chapter will cover. I'd be staight to 4 years later....LOL
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Ah well who could hold to their promise to wait for four years when the pull to be together is so rgeat for these two lonely hearts. I hope you enjoyed the story.
This relationship is the only natrual conclusion between these to brilliant minded, powerful and private individtuals. I hope they have opportunity to see each other over the next four years for Love's and for hope's sake. I have no doubt that SS will wait and I believe Hermione can all be trusted but she is young and may need someone to hold her once in a while and some kissing from time to time. It's the way were made. It would make them both happier. If she could come to him during the hols they could become better aqainted before the apprenticeship. How can a young woman with Hermione's fine mind find someone else if she can have Severus Snape. He is like no other man or wizard in a miryid of ways. She would only face utter disappointment were she to seek comfort any where else. And if he says he will wait. You know that's a good as a wand oath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I agree they belong together and there woud be no one else for her to look at if she could have SS. I really like your well thought out review and I agree with it. I hope you continued to enjoy the story. I am sorry it took so long to answer this. I haven't been on this site for some. It becasme to difficult to post here. So I have moved on, but I have most of my work on this site. Thank you for the review.
If only anyone had ever been so attentive to helping Severus deal with his trauma and post traumatic stress. Hermione has had only a drop of what he had endured. I think it was therapeutic for Severus to help Hermione with her trauma. I feel happy and think it is very sweet that her parents get to be more a part of her life now even though they are muggles. It must be so hard to feel like you've lost your child to another world and way of life. If it's your only child one probably feels childless at times.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I agree canyou imagine sending a child of 11 off to someplace you normally would never get to see to learn things totally foreign to your way of life or understanding. The houses don't seem to have much supper idiom. The kids all seem to raise themselves. It shouldn't be the older students raising the you get ones. They are children too. Technically. Thanks for all your reviews I hope you didn't Give up on me... When you finish the story let me know what you think.
Severus has certainly been on his best behavior with everyone. The Grangers are about to spend some time in Disney World. I'm sure they'll enjoy it. I hope Hermione doesn't withdraw from Severus as she deals with her ordeal.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
He's just trying to Give Hermione the space she needs. Yes I thought it might be fun for them to come there and see her world.
Hermione is so blessed to have so many people who love her.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Yes she is. We should all be so lucky. I do have a close family.
It took a lot of courage to do what Hermione did. Even though he stabbed her, If you're going down, you'd better take them down with you to the best of your ability. I wonder what made something that may have started as desire, jealousy or coveting her neighbor's wife, so to speak, morph into a psychotic break with reality leading to the actions of a psychopath? Somewhere he slipped a cog.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Who knows. Possessiveness, jealousy. Sometimes it's the quiet ones who snap. Thank you :)
I want a man like Severus Snape who would turn over heaven and earth to find me. It's one thing to feel loved, it's one thing for someone to say they love you, but it's even better to feel precious and have absolute assurance that he will rescue you no matter the cost. He would kill for you without a second thought. Hermione is only going to need to keep Alan as calm as possible until her love rescues her. Alan is a regular Prince Humperdink and Severus is the Dread Pirate Roberts, Hermione is butter cup. Who knows what I am writing at this time of night after some sweet wine. I hope it is making sense.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
You and me both. I've always thought that if he was loved he'd move heaven and hell for that person. Look what he did for Lily a d she never appreciated him at all. I'm not familiar with those characters to I have no frame of reference there :) thank you for your comments.
Response from breastlady (Reviewer)
If you have never seen the movie "Princes Bride" you are missing out on a wonderful, funny, farce of romance. You must see it! You absolutely must!
I'm really happy for Hermione. I'm glad that despite the fact that she had taken their memories, they love where she had sent them. That should provide Hermione no small amount of comfort. Severus is being such a good boy. I hope Hermione doesn't feel pressured to have kids too soon. I realize that she understands why Severus and Minerva think these two should marry next year, but she would have liked to have waited. I hope getting married before she is finished with her studies doesn't prevent her from reaching her goals or result in her having kids before she is ready to give up some of her professional life to be a mom. I understand the pressure she is under, and right now she doesn't see how she can do what she thinks would be best without hurting Severus' feelings and having him believing she just doesn't want to be married to him.I had the exact same situation. Was just starting college and my husband, whom is 7 years older than I, had convinced me he could not enter his chosen profession without a wife and that he couldn't wait for me for 4 years. As a result I didn't finish my degree program and had an unplanned baby at 20. My husband and I were training for the ministry. One has many more choices about how and where they can serve God and others, if they don't have to worry about taking children somewhere dangerous or perhaps living in poverty. Then, after 5 years my husband decided he had been pressured by his mother, father and grandmother to become a minister and it wasn't what he really wanted. It was too stressful for him. So, I had to give up my vocation too. I wasn't in a position back then where a woman could be a minister, evangelist or missionary but not her husband, and he didn't want to be the husband of any of the above; he would have been expected to serve as well, if I did. And there was no way on God's green earth he would have been willing to sever in a medical mission in India or Africa. Ironically, I had turned down another marriage offer because that person wasn't called to the same vocation even though we had deep feelings for one another.I should have stuck to my guns. I think my husband might have realized he didn't feel called before we got married if I had made him wait for me to finish college and then we wouldn't have been married after all. I also wouldn't have gotten pregnant yet and would have had more choices. I regret not listening to my gut.I'm enjoying the story! Happy summertime Christmas from down under!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Hard to remember what happens each chapter. True Hermione doesnt have all the choices she wishes, maybe I should have made them stronger but they just needed eachother so much. You did have lots of choices and pressures. We all make mistakes. We can all say I should have turned right instead of left. I never married. No kids. I have travelled a lot. Never saved much live in an older home. Could have been wiser had more to show for working 2 jobs for 39 years but I'm content enough.
I'm so glad they worked that out. Grandchildren are a blessing. I love mine and they are my sun and stars. It's only too bad they come at such a high price. I hope they don't feel pressured to have children right away. Nice chapter, once again.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you, my great nieces and nephews are such a blessing as well as their parents. We've had the best. Good kids all. They make the sun rise and the world go round.
It went as well as it could have. Do they have any memories of Hermione from before she took them? Was she able to give them back any memories of her as their daughter or did she have to prove she was their long lost witch of a daughter they had never met and didn't know existed and they had to take her word for it? Please let me know if the story doesn't let us know. Can muggles use a pencieve? She could show them her childhood and getting her letter from Hogwarts. Please let me know what her parents know.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I'm pretty sure she was able to give them back their memories. Now I don't know about Muggles using a pensive. I've written several stories of her getting back w her parents so its hard to remember which is which. I think this set took it pretty good. I should use you for ideas before I write. You make good story leaps.
What a way to get rid of stress! It's Hermione and Severus vs the world, in a good way. They are more than a team, they are an entity. No wonder they can't stand to be apart. It wasn't well thought out for Minerva to have Hermione surprise Severus in public knowing they hadn't shared their relationship publicly, yet. Did she know? I'm sure things will be fine with Hermione's parents. Accepting Severus shouldn't be any crazier than all of the other mind blowing things they've had to deal with regarding their daughter. They seem ready to accept her lifestyle. Another great chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I think Severus had told her that he and Hermione were together but not surr she knew it was a secret. Yes they are sn item. Thsnk you again for all your comments.
They're like a couple of silly kids! It's wonderful. I miss those days and that feeling of new love. Even the trip to the library seemed like an imposition on their relationship and then I remembered that grown ups do have lives. It's like they are bound to each other with a magical umbilical cord and can't bear to have too much space separating them. I envy them. Great happy chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you. Happy happy happy makes me happy. It was mostly fluff. Fluff makes me happy.
This year will be a long one for these two. It will be hard to be parted after this summer. I wonder if Severus can make a port key they can use to spend more time together. Very romantic! And very enjoyable chapter! Severus must have quite a nest egg put back to afford this summer's vacation. I haven't heard the couple discuss finances or Hermione wonder how he affords her such splendor. I'm curious. I hope Harry and Ron don't let them down.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Well I guess I just assumed he'd been saving his money for a future when he wasn't tethered to two masters. After all at Hogwarts' they were given everything.
Magical sex is awesome!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I thInk so. Thank you.
What an awesome place that would be! It would be a bit frightening too. I'm sure there I things that one would be fascinated to see but not sure if they really wanted to be there. I bet there are people there Hermione doesn't even know were wizards or witches. What an incredible opportunity to learn. I wish that was real. Great chapter.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I also visited Morano when I was there. Now wouldn't that have been fascinating.
This agreement for Hogwarts will work nicely. This is wonderful for both of them. Venice! That is romantic indeed! "I've been storing it up for more years than you've been alive" is sexy too. It seems she is as needy as he is, which is very good. If not, it could be suffocating to be the center of the universe to such a man, for some women. He doesn't share well. My own dad is jealous when me and my mum spend too much time together and he feels ignored. It used to make my mom feel wanted but after years and years it's a little annoying when he's being a pouty baby about it. I can't stand pouting men. I'd rather just have a good row and get it over with. Well, that was when I was 20 years younger. Now, an adult discussion is the only acceptable way to deal with disagreements. I wonder how Hermione and Severus will handle their first argument? She's bossy and he's controlling and has a penchant for meanness. If they were taking advice, I would recommend they get a plan on how to handle disagreements in advance with some ground rules, do's and don'ts, in order to avoid misunderstandings and to allow for negotiation if the issue is about making decisions. No pouting, no character assassination, no sarcasm, don't expect the other person to read your mind, be open to discussion, agree to take a break if you are hitting a wall, no holding grudges. Forgive each other before you go to bed. They can never say, "I you don't like it you can leave." It's better for Hermione to say, "You can live with a happy wife or an angry wife and you are stuck with me until you die. How do you want this to go?" I only had to use it once but it was very effective. A smart husband knows that if momma ain't happy, nobody is happy. If they survive the first 10-15 years, all the fights are about the same things and you've either worked out a compromise or decided to let it go. On with Summer Vacation!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Wow some good advice. Maybe some one who. Reds it will read your review. I have a hard time writing conflict. Not sure my Hermione's or Severus' have ever had a huge fight. Hey I might borrow this someday for a fic :) Ty I went to Venice years ago. It was one of the best few days of all my travels so far.
Just make sure you don't forget to take your potion! Kids would put a nasty cramp in your plans, right now. You think you're busy now? Maybe you'll never need any. Your lives are full. Research shows that women without children are happier than women who have children. Unfortunately, it's a full time job, they don't appreciate you as much as you deserve and you can't have it all on mommy track. Back in the 70's we got the idea into our heads that we could do it all. It was a lie. All we got was sleep deprivation and giving up our higher educations or promotions because we had responsibilities. Now they don't move out so it's never your turn to live life. And they only get more expensive the older they get. I love being a grandma, but I wouldn't do the mommy thing again. I should have just had dogs. I enjoyed it when the kids were young because I was young and I still had hope, but now I know there is no hope for me. I spend my days at work helping 30 and 40 somethings who thought they needed a baby so bad they went and had the 90 thousand dollar test tube baby that's broken and can't breastfeed or when the baby can, the moms are too tired and their expectations of life are too high to really enjoy motherhood. They are already invested in mortgages and life styles. I spend my nights wondering how long my husband and I will have to support ourselves, our children and their children, while I should be taking care of my parents. Hermione and Severus can get their kid fix at Hogwarts. I hope they are listening to my advice. At least there are house elves if you need a nanny, I suppose. Severus is so heart breakingly vulnerable. I know he doesn't have to worry with Hermione, though. I'm very happy for them!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Sounds like a difficult life. I missed having the husband and kids. Way to late for either I think. I like doing my own thing. Dogs are good. Companions. I've got three. Had some precious ones in the past. I do wish they had longer lives. I think it's hard for Severus to trust that someone loves him with all her heart. Ty for sharing.
I tried getting my guy to be romantic and he just acts like a stupid dolt and says he doesn't know how. It seems a lot like trying to get out of a chore by doing it so badly your wife doesn't make you do it anymore. Thank you for giving us a romantic Severus. I will squash the urge to go hit the man snoring in my bed with a shoe. I can get my romance fix without being tempted to stray. No real man could live up to Severus Snape.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Well the shoe might get his attention. LoL one reason I write romantic fic. Is to get romance in my life as well. Glad your enjoying it.
Minerva will insist will she? Oh well, I guess they'll just have to get married then. But, I wouldn't want to be an apprenticed to my husband. No. I definitely have authority issues. We would have to have serious ground rules. I would take everything personally. He had better be a very nice and polite boy. I probably wouldn't hex my master, but I wouldn't think twice about hexing my husband if he got high handed with me. We would have to work it out so that we were more like research partners. And if he wanted me to do the grunt work he would have to ask nicely and reward me for good behavior. Romantic interludes, inventive sex and books would be just for starters. Let's add, he would have to remember to tell me how much he appreciated my help every day. I would reciprocate, of course. Well, let's at least get through the holidays. I'll be nice.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Can't remember them having a conflict. This was written purely for the love of them being happy together. Most of it. Thank you, I'm glad your enjoying it.
Thank goodness they were only separated for a week! Dear man was a virgin? Hermione must feel just a little bit smug at getting the best man on the planet that no one else had ever had. They are a perfect match. I hope they never actually need that potions ingredient. Between the two of them, they could end up as famous as the Nicholas and Perenelle Flamel! I am enjoying the love-fest. What a summer it will be!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you so much, wow I had 't had a new chapter of my newest story post, so I hadn't looked at reviews in ages. I'm pleased tofind so many.
With the flue, apparition and port keys, why would she need to wait 4 years? My heart is pounding for them. If she can't see him and get her studies accomplished, how would she ever complete an apprenticeship?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Well it was going to be a one shot and then it begged for more.
Glad I happened upon this from a recommendation on snapeyluvshermy. Love the story! Thanks for sharing!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you, :) I'm pleased someone recommended it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Time for Goodbyes)
Thank you, :) I'm pleased someone recommended it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.