Foundations
Chapter 2 of 24
potionmistress23It's the first Potions class of the term! But is it just Hermione, or is Snape crankier than usual?
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"Yes, it was childish and you got aggressive, and I must admit that I was a bit scared, but it gives me thrills to wind you up." (Foundations, by Kate Nash)
Hermione, Ron, and Harry jumped as Snape threw open the classroom door behind them. Here we go again, Hermione thought to herself as the formidable Potions master stormed by her desk, the dungeons seeming to grow even colder with his presence.
"As always, there is to be no foolish wand waving in my class. Your silence, attention, and respect are demanded. Now, let us begin." Snape's tone was so dangerous that even Malfoy didn't dare to speak.
"Is it just me, or does he seem more irritable than usual?" Hermione asked Ron, hoping that it was, in fact, just her.
"No, he definitely does. I wonder what's made him an even bigger git than usual. He didn't even try to impress us by telling us all about the cool stuff we can do if we pay attention to him. We've been taking this stupid class for five years already, and I have yet to liquefy lust or pickle victory," Ron replied, giving Hermione exactly the answer she had been dreading.
"You mean 'bewitch the mind and ensnare the senses? Brew glory and put a stopper in death'...?"
"Hermione, stop. Please tell me you were not just reciting Snape's first-year speech!"
"No, Ron, I just..."
"Miss Granger. Ten points from Gryffindor for your complete ignorance of the meaning of the word silence." Hermione couldn't exactly determine the look in her professor's eyes as he berated her; what she saw confused and discomforted her more than she was willing to admit. It was a glare filled with absolute hatred, yet she thought for a moment that she saw a glimmer of remorse. After regretting that she had managed to make him hate her only five minutes into class, she quickly focused her attention on Snape's lecture.
"As I was saying before we were all so rudely interrupted, seeing as Polyjuice Potion has been utilized as a 'battle' tactic of the Dark Lord, it seems necessary that we study it more in depth." Harry tensed at the mention of Polyjuice Potion and glanced over at Hermione and Ron, who looked equally as uncomfortable. The three friends had long suspected that Snape knew about the Polyjuice experiment they conducted in their second year, but they had never heard him mention the potion until now.
Snape continued. "Although the creation and use of this potion by students is forbidden, and should be unknown to all of you, perhaps Miss Granger could tell us the ingredients required to brew it?"
Oh God. Hermione began to panic. He's challenging me. He must know I brewed it second year. I need to get out of this.
"Miss Granger, answer the question." The class could tell that Snape was getting angrier by the second.
"But sir, I didn't even raise my hand. How could you possibly assume I know the ingredients needed to brew Polyjuice Potion?" Hermione hoped her answer would be enough to sate him.
"Well Miss Granger, considering that you are the school know-it-all, I felt at liberty to assume that you would know the answer to such a simple question as this. Are you trying to tell me that you don't know the answer? If not, this would be a momentous day indeed."
Hermione heard Malfoy snicker across the room and cursed Snape under her breath. He did not just say that!
"No, sir, I know the answer. Polyjuice Potion requires lacewing flies stewed for twenty-one days, powdered bicorn horn, leeches, knotgrass, shredded boomslang skin, fluxweed picked at the full moon, and, finally, a small piece of the person into whom you desire to transform. The specific nature and preparation of the ingredients in the potion results in a lengthy brewing process." Hermione sighed as she eased back in her seat. Normally she lived for moments like this, but she had a bad feeling about where Snape's line of questioning was leading.
"A surprisingly thorough answer, even for you and your precious text books, Miss Granger. Such detail usually comes from personal experience." Snape paused to let his words adequately affect Hermione. She was floundering. He sensed the panic in her eyes as she struggled to remain calm. "It seems that your expertise in this area merits further questioning. Tell me, what would happen if someone were to accidently introduce a piece of an animal in the final stages of brewing?"
Oh bugger. He definitely knows. How did he find out!? Why is he bringing it up now of all times? Hermione had just dug herself a very deep hole and Snape had proceeded to push her into it.
"I'm sorry, Professor; did you just ask me what would happen if Polyjuice Potion became the essence of an animal instead of a human?" Hermione asked, hoping that she had simply misheard him.
"Yes," Snape answered abruptly.
"Well then, thank you for clarifying. Polyjuice Potion is not to be used to transform into an animal. If it is used for that purpose, a partial transformation takes place, the effects of which do not wear off normally as in human transformation and require extensive medical attention." Hermione shuddered as she thought of her short time spent as a cat in her own Polyjuice fiasco. She had never been more humiliated in her life. Except for now.
"Yet another incredibly extensive answer. Finally, Miss Granger, is there any known way to differentiate between the drinker of the potion and the actual person being reproduced?"
"No known way exists. The Ministry currently advocates a password system for every witch and wizard. The password or question should be something that only the person whose identity must be verified can answer. This method is clearly not fool-proof, since any good impersonator would need to have an extensive knowledge of the person they have transformed into anyway in order to avoid suspicion and capture. In addition..."
"That is quite enough, Miss Granger. A simple 'no' would have sufficed. In all of my life I have never heard someone enjoy listening to themselves talk as much as you do. Do you ever stop?"
"She sure doesn't!" Ron blurted out before he could catch himself.
"Ten points from Gryffindor, Mr. Weasley, for being unable to keep your anserine comments to yourself. An additional thirty points are taken from Miss Granger, for her continual inability to remain silent and persistence in being an insufferable know-it-all. Class dismissed."
Before Snape could finish, Hermione had already rushed out the door, slamming it behind her with a strength she didn't know she possessed. She ran as fast as she could to the Gryffindor common room; she had to scream and at least retained enough of her composure to realize that it wouldn't be the best idea to do it in the hallway. As soon as she entered the room, she let out a scream so shrill that even Bellatrix Lestrange's hair would stand on end. She collapsed in a chair in front of the fireplace and thought of how nice it would be to set Snape on fire... lots and lots of fire.
I shouldn't be thinking like this. There must be some reasonable explanation for Snape's lecture today, but what? Hermione's rational side was finally regaining control, saving Hermione from her brief moment of insanity. Before she could even begin to theorize about Snape's bizarre behavior, Ron burst into the common room.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT GREASY BAT! I CAN'T BELIEVE HE TOOK AWAY POINTS BECAUSE I SAID YOU TALK A LOT! I WAS BASICALLY AGREEING WITH..., OH, MY GOD, I AGREED WITH SNAPE!" Hermione rolled her eyes, frustrated by her friend's complete focus on himself.
"Oh yes, Ron, that class must have been so terrible for you. You had to spend the whole class being personally challenged and attacked by Snape in a blatant and direct attempt to humiliate you!" Hermione couldn't handle being irritated with two people at once and hoped Ron would get her hint.
"Sorry, Hermione... I just hate him so much! Yeah, what Snape did to me was nothing compared to what he did to you. The craziest part of it is that he was really only trying to make you feel uncomfortable. I mean, he didn't humiliate you in front of the class any worse than he usually does. The class didn't even understand how incredibly awkward that entire Polyjuice conversation actually was!"
Wow, he's usually not this observant. It must be because it has to do with Snape being a bloody idiot, Hermione thought, impressed by how much Ron had gathered from what happened during class. "That's exactly what I was thinking," Hermione agreed. "I'm completely used to his constant ridicule, but today he's taken it to a whole new level. It was as if just seeing me in class made him hate me more, I have no idea why!"
Ron was nervous seeing Hermione so desperate and confused. She'd never been like this before; at least he'd never seen her like this. She needed to be the sane one of the Golden Trio. Ron was having trouble imagining how they could defeat Voldemort, Death Eaters, or Dementors with Hermione in this state.
"Well, don't worry too much about it, Hermione," Ron said, clumsily trying to comfort his best friend, "it's only Snape! It's not like me and Harry started a vicious rumor that you're pregnant or something. Okay, so maybe that wasn't the most comforting thing I could have said."
"It's alright, Ron," Hermione replied, "you tried your best. You're right. I shouldn't even care what Snape thinks of me. I think I'm going to take a nap before Transfiguration." Hermione headed up the stairs and practically fell into her bed, chastising herself. Why can't I get him out of my head? Okay, time to end this.
Hermione tried to clear her mind before falling asleep but couldn't stop seeing Snape and the cold look of hate in his eyes. This isn't going to be as easy to forget as I had imagined...
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64 Reviews | 3.66/10 Average
I do hope Severus returns soon.
I think she underestimates his 'esteem' for her. :)
Poor Hermione! I've been in her shoes one too many times with the feelings on life and luck. I'm afraid at my age, I'm almost positive I've got the world's rottenest luck and I just keep on swimming, keep on swimming (you know the song). And I've done the same thing. Sometimes it really helps to get it out on paper, sometimes it makes one feel ten times worse. But if she's crying, she's not holding it in and letting it eat away at her. But she's no good to anyone totally falling apart like she is (besides, it's MUCH too dramatic), and she's too young for all the fates to be lined up against her. She indeed might be right in worrying about Severus, but if he comes back and can't find her, it might be much worse!
Response from potionmistress23 (Author of Love Vigilantes)
I know exactly what you mean. Things will get a bit worse before they get better, but I hope you keep enjoying the story! Thank you so much for your reviews!
oh dear. Poor Hermione! I hope Snape returns soon safe and sound!
Wonderful update, they are so sweet together. I think it will be good for them to take things slowly and really get to know each other. I can't wait to read more
She's taking the high road on this, but it's a really shitty thing to be in love with someone and not be able to express it. Blah!
how sad. Excellent story. I can't wait for the next chapter! Glad I can do an update bookmark!
The nod toward the musical episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer was not lost on me. It was, however, out of character for Snape.
I've noticed these two talk. A lot. A lot more than most people actually talk. Their conversations are more like lectures.
I know you're building up a story here, but I have to admit there's a certain expectation when you label something with the rating you've put on your story, and twenty chapters later we've yet to come anywhere near that rating.
Absolutely wonderful!! Can't wait to read more.
I hope that Severus takes her words into account. She was sincere, if not very Slytherin. I'm sure he'll appreciate that eventually. (The Slyterin part.) He needs to see that he deserves something good, too.
whoa, Hermione! LOL. Actually, that kind of fits in with canon. She can be pretty rough sometimes what with hitting Malfoy and setting Canaries after Ron. Poor Severus. She was right, he was completely unprepared for that! I love it.
Response from potionmistress23 (Author of Love Vigilantes)
=) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had been thinking of the same scenes when I wrote this chapter... especially the instance where she gets Umbridge to go after Dumbledore's "secret weapon". She can be pretty feisty when she wants to be. But at least now things are somewhat out in the open!
Ha ha! He sure played her just right to get her to Crucio him!
Why would you give us such a great kiss to end it like that! nasty author. Well, I'm glad Hermione is determined. Hopefully she can knock some sense into our silly Potions master.
Response from potionmistress23 (Author of Love Vigilantes)
Hahaha, well yes, I do love a good tease (as long as it's my own writing and not a fic I'm reading, of course)! But, at least it's progress! =)
LOL. Oh my! Well, the potion worked. That should fuck that old moldywart real good. Bastard. I hate him.
Brilliant! Really wonderful chapter-- all of the different dynamics, and yes, finally=) them having physical contact and releasing their emotions/passions with one another, and Sev's reaction afterwards, as well as Hermione's - and the potion works!
Response from potionmistress23 (Author of Love Vigilantes)
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's one of my favorite chapters in the story, so I was very excited to post it. =)
Really nice twists and revelations in this chapter!
Wonderful chapter -- Voldemort and Severus; I enjoy the secret understanding and deep care between him and Hermione.
Great chapter! Enjoying the steps of them being together & comfortable being together outside the lab inch-by-inch; the build up is indeed growing! Something's got to give :D
'Enjoyed' the dream - great description and visuals. Also, how intimate and beautiful is a smiling Severus! Thanks:)
Catching up on your story after a long hiatus; enjoying the growing tension between Sev and Hermione, he's growing tenser, his awareness and longing for her. Even though I don't prefer Ron ever involved with Hermione ;), I do feel sorry for him; you've written him so sympathetically and realistically - poor guy!
Loved your detailed info about Cruciatus curses and the Longbottoms; it always strikes me profoundly the whole reality of their interminable condition, always well up with tears - it's so depressing. Grinning like the Cheshire Cat about Hermione hearing her name from Sev - yummy!
What a conflict - finally being open/wanting to date a life-long friend, at the same time, another new level of relationship developing with someone she's been both in fear and awe of , and must now demand to be equals with on more than one level.
Response from potionmistress23 (Author of Love Vigilantes)
Instead of responding to all of your reviews, I'll just respond to them here! Thank you so much for all of your comments. You've pinpointed the things that I've tried to accomplish with this story, and I'm thrilled to hear that I've been somewhat successful. =) I hope you continue to enjoy my story!
Really feel his fear and need to cover up his feelings towards by laying down the rules with his gruffness - last line/her name being said is really achingly heartfelt! So sad.
Poignant last thoughts of Severus'... how Hermione's potion's skills rekindle his thoughts/feelings about Lily... Reading on to find out how these two will deal with each other
The gap between Hermione and Harry & Ron is starting to increase rapidly; how harsh will it get? Reading on :)