Chapter 33
Chapter 33 of 57
gersknightladyAfter the war, Severus finds himself only aware when someone comes to mourn him. Is this death?
Severus collected his samples and his wife. After a brief visit with Molly and Arthur, they returned to Hogwarts to start their work.
Minerva listened anxiously as they told her of the Weasleys' plight, and she gave them permission to work nearly non-stop. She assigned Albus and Scorpius to them during their entire school day.
All Severus' patrolling was cancelled, much to Filch's dismay. He was realizing he was no longer capable of keeping up with his duties. He asked Minerva to assign several of the older students to help him.
Hermione and Severus awaited the boys in the classroom. She was rubbing her arm subconsciously where Ron had given her a bruise.
Severus took her arm and pulled the sleeve up. With a few incantations and a wave of his wand, the bruise started to fade, and the pain stopped. He said apologetically, "I'm sorry. I should have vanished the bruises earlier."
"It's okay, Severus. I should have done it myself. I've just been worried about Arthur and Molly. They are like my parents now. I cannot think of losing them." She slipped her arms around his waist and pressed her face to his chest.
"We will help them, Hermione. As soon as we talk to the boys, I would appreciate it if you would go to the library and research the restricted section for this sort of curse. Anything even remotely related may give us the spark we need to head us in the right direction."
She started to protest, but he held his hand up. "Please, Hermione. I know you have the Potion skills to be of great use in the lab. Right now I need a researcher, and no one in this entire school is as thorough and as fast as you are. I will keep you up to date, and if anything occurs to you, send me word. When the research is done, I would welcome you working with me. I will also share what I am doing with you. After all, I'm 15 years rusty on new discoveries."
She said, "Alright, Severus. I agree with you about the need for research. I do love it."
"That's my girl." He held her close, trying to stop his own fear from overwhelming him. Being touched by Voldemort's evil again was disturbing. The only reason Molly and Arthur where still alive was because the monster was dead. His curse had lost some of its potency, but it still continued to ravage their bodies.
The door opened, and Hermione and Severus moved apart. Scorpius came first, and Albus followed. Their faces were alight with curiosity.
Severus said, "Gentlemen, come into my office. We have some serious work ahead of us."
Albus asked, "Are we going to start the project?"
Severus said, "No, Albus. Something has happened, and we need to postpone the contest for a time."
He asked the boys to sit, and Hermione came to stand with him behind his desk.
"Albus, your father asked me to tell you what has happened. Your grandparents are gravely ill because of a dark curse left over from the war."
The boy jumped to his feet, saying, "I must go to them." He turned to dash from the room.
"Albus, please stop," Hermione called. She came around and took him by the shoulders. "They are in St. Mungo's and are being well cared for. Severus and I need you to stay here. He will begin work in a few minutes to try to solve the problem."
Albus turned to look hopefully at Severus. "Can you help, sir?" the boy asked with fear in his eyes.
Severus came around the desk, "Yes, I think we can." He squeezed the young man's shoulder and then glanced over at Scorpius, who was looking confused. "Scorpius, I asked you to come because I want you and Albus to help me. Madam Snape will go to the library and do research for us. We will begin the process of developing a potion that will cure the malady or at least slow it down. We will work simultaneously with staff at St. Mungo's. Will you help me, boys?" he asked the astonished young men.
Albus nodded, his eyes still wide with fear for his grandparents.
Scorpius exclaimed, "Yes!" with excitement and then looked back at Albus apologetically.
Albus gave him a wan smile. "I understand."
"Well, let's go to my lab and get started. I will fill you in on the symptoms. Then we can do some brain-storming."
Hermione gave Albus a tight hug, and the boy held on to her for a moment. "It will be okay," she said, running her hand over the back of his head. "We will all make sure it's okay." She released him and stepped back. "You and Scorpius are gifted Potions students. You will be able to assist Professor Snape, and we will save them," she said with confidence that she did not feel in her heart. "Now off with you. I must get to the library."
The boys watched with embarrassed smiles as Severus leaned and kissed her gently and then said quietly, "Keep me informed."
She nodded and left the office.
Severus said, "Come with me. The lab is attached to the Headmistress office. It was Albus Dumbledore's lab when he was Headmaster." They followed him from the classroom. Their eyes were enormous. They had heard about this lab and had talked about it before, thinking they would never get a chance to see it.
"You two will be preparing ingredients. It's grunt work, and I want you to share anything that occurs to either of you, no matter how unlikely. You boys have a gift for Potions, and I need that to work in our favor. We are in a contest of sorts with the staff at St. Mungo's. This will be good practice for you when working toward the contest goals. We will bounce ideas off each other, and Madam Snape will be sending us information as quickly as she can find it. We will be testing these theories and sending the information to St. Mungo's if anything looks promising. They in turn will share their research. If we all work together, we will come up with an answer." Severus thought to himself, I hope it's in time.
They entered Headmistress McGonagall's office, and she greeted them enthusiastically. "It's good to see you, Albus and Scorpius. I am going to give you a password that will allow you to come into the office and lab at any time of the night. I will insist you spend at least 6 hours a night sleeping. I will not have you becoming sick. Perhaps you can work out a schedule with them, Severus, so that you are covered. I want you and Hermione to sleep as well."
Severus protested, "I am well able to stay up days at a time."
"That may have been true years ago, but you have been sleeping a long time Severus. You may find it's not as easy as it used to be. Never the less, I will expect you to know your own limits. I have spoken to several teachers, and they will take Hermione's classes. They will also send her several seventh-years to help her gather books and do research. Filius and some of the other teachers will assist her. The Weasleys are very much respected in our community. Everyone wants to help."
"Thank you, Minerva." He turned to Scorpius and Albus. "Boys, let's get into the lab and get started." He waved his wand at the far wall, a door opened, and the boys craned their necks to get a glimpse.
The room they entered must have been three stories high. It had shelves upon shelves of the most fascinating potion jars full of ingredients. It was like a three-story library with sliding ladders reaching to the shelves. There were cauldrons of all shapes, sizes, and metals already over burners. The room was huge. Scorpius looked closely at the instruments on the tables. They were clean, well organized, and in excellent condition. His fingers itched to touch them. This was a Potion master's dream lab, and a boy's fantasy world. There were instruments for testing everything imaginable.
"Wow!" the boys said simultaneously.
Severus couldn't help but grin at them. It had nearly been his own reaction upon seeing it many years ago. "I know you're excited, but we really need to get to work."
The boys sobered and nodded.
"Scorpius, take this station and dice the ingredients that I have laid out for you. I know you know to make sure the entire surface is clean before working on another ingredient, but I want to stress that. We need to be careful with what we have. Some of the ingredients are very volatile. Albus, you take station two and grind the ingredients I laid out for you. Scorpius, when you have completed that task, take the 3rd station and sliver those items. Albus, you'll take the fourth and pulverize those items. If you have any questions...no mater how insignificant you might think they are...do not hesitate to ask me. This is not the time to make an educated guess, ask," he commanded. "We have no time for mistakes."
The boys donned aprons and got to work. Severus watched for a moment always amazed at how gifted they were with their hands. Then he turned and began to light the fire under the cauldrons he would use. He selected more ingredients and then added them, carefully studying the colors and scents they produced. Eventually, he began to add some of the things the boys had prepared and watched the potion as it brewed.
There was a thought nagging at his mind, and he tried to dismiss it. They needed help from someone who had known Voldemort better than he did, but Severus could come up with only one name. He kept rejecting the idea, and yet his thoughts dragged him back to that one person...the one person who had shared his home with Voldemort, one who'd lived with him far more that any other Death Eater: Lucius Malfoy. Severus never wanted to see his 'old friend' again. He could pretty much be assured that Lucius would not want to talk to him. Their friendship had disintegrated over the years. It had gotten so bad that he'd had to watch his back around the man. Granted, Lucius had been shamed and beaten down by Voldemort in those last years. There was so much anger in the man, as he'd demonstrated when he'd taken Hermione. As the day wore on and the potions proved to be useless, Severus knew he would have to go see if Lucius would tell him where Voldemort might have kept his books and records.
Severus finally sighed. He turned the fire off and told the boys, "I must go see Hermione. Please clean up and get some food and sleep. We will start again in the morning. If you have any ideas in the meantime, write them down, and we can discuss them when I get back."
"Yes, sir," they chorused and set to cleaning up.
Severus left the lab and went directly to the library. He found Hermione nearly buried under a pile of books.
She glanced up when he came close and did a double take, "Severus? Did you find anything?" The hope in her eyes died when he shook his head. He stood looking down at her with a steady, uneasy look.
She stood took his hand and pulled him into an alcove with a deeply set window. It had a window seat below, and she pulled him down till they were knee to knee. "Tell me," she demanded.
Severus sighed. She knew him so well now that she could almost read his mind. "I must go to Azkaban to see Lucius."
"What!" she cried out as her face paled.
He turned his hand to hold hers tightly. "I don't want to lay eyes on him either. but he may know something. He may have heard something we can use."
Hermione could see the pain in his eyes, so she swallowed her fears and said, "Go, Severus. Do what you must. Be careful and come let me know when you're back."
"Go sleep, Hermione. I promise I will come to our rooms when I get back. There is no danger. Lucius is under magical dampening fields and can't harm me."
Hermione slipped into his lap. "I know. I just hate when you leave without me."
"I feel the same," he said, pulling her against him. He kissed her deeply, running his tongue against hers, tasting her, feeling a part of her. It calmed his ravaged nerves.
"Hermione, go sleep, and I will be back."
He pushed her to the seat and strode out quickly without looking back.
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Your beta misspelled dining and shining. There are also other misspellings and punctuation errors.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
ok ty
We lost Alan last Thursday, 5 days ago. My husband remarked at how badly I had been affected by the death of someone I've never met. I told him straight out, since after 37 years of marriage I seldom beat around the bush, that during the last 14 years since he hasn't been up to the task of performing his biblical duties to his wife, AR in the character of Severus Snape's has been my drean lover. I have just finished another story I had been reading, and as soon as I knew AR was lost to us, I thought, "I have that story "Ghost of a Chance" saved in my favorites. Maybe if I read it it will provide some comfort for my greif. I can pretend that the Potions Master is still with us." It's silly really, since The Postions Master was never real; but AR's inspiration for many Severus Snape stories gave us a beautiful voice, a striking face and all the mojo a man could want to embelish our Potions Master with.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Sorry I seldome come to TPP. They don't seem to like me and have left my Queue so blocked I can not add anything new. I know how you feel, I did meet Alan twice recently in June. Brief moments both for a quick heloo and autogrph and a thankyou. It been evry hard to lose him. (Lost a nephew in Dec. too) Chnages how my life is. much more alone. Severus will always live in Fan fic. He will never be gone... never. He lives in many many ways brough back by people who love him. Alan is another matter. Lost to us... especially lost to his wife and family. I have never felt the loss of a star like this and I followed Leoanrd Nimoy probably 45 eyasr or more. Hang on to fic. You have made me want to read it again. I am finally posting more of my newwest work on Ashwinder... I found a new Beta. I am also finishing Beckys story. She lost to us last summer. So progress is being made.Thank you for letting me know that AGOAC helps.hugs (email anytime)
Yay, a happy ending for all. (I'm such a sucker got happy ending HG/SS stories lol). A long story, but one that bent and folded over on ourself so that there was always something happening. I liked it!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I would never write a bad endung. I write stories for myself. I alesys want happy warm fuzzy endings lol. Thank you for all the many reviews. I hope you will read some of my other stories.
The treehouse sounds awesome, by the way. I guess house elves had to have originated from somewhere, right? Even oompa loompas came from loompaland lol.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, they do. I,m glad you like it. I love looking up pis of unusual housing on the internet. This includes treehouses, caves, etc
I'm glad your tree house was saved. I never had one growing up, but I always wanted one.
If you care to know/correct, I spotted these things this chapter:
Peal= the noise a bell makes, or a peal of childrens laughter. It's a noise. Peek= to peel layers of clothing off, to peel a banana of it's skin.
Legillimens= someone who can do legillimency. Legillimency= the act of reading minds. You had the wrong usage in your chapter. Hope this helps, as I said earlier, I'm never really sure if authors want to have errors pointed out, or if I just annoy people. ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Again I will have to take some time soon to get your corrections done. I have reread some of my stories and always find errors. Thanks
I don't like the Malfoys, and don't read fics about them unless they happen to be in a HG/SS story like this one, but I actually didn't mind them in this one. You made them hateful when necessary, sympathetic when it was called for, and by the end of this chapter I was actually happy got them to have gotten their "happy" ending. I even feel a bit sad for Lucius here, but happy I guess since he can finally talk to Narcissa without fear or guilt.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I ne er liked them much either. Malfoy was a very good looking man but that's about all I liked before this occured to me. I have a hard time not giving every one happy endings. I belive in forgiveness for any sin.
I'd have expected someone to bring Albus portrait to the wedding ceremony..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol actually you might find that in another of my stories lol.
I'm a little surprised they didn't just pay for harrys owl, then have the bird deliver a note to him starting that he was the new owner lol. Seems simpler. Wonder what the problem Molly ran into was. Hoping it's not a redheaded son that is the problem.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well since I was the writer apparently it didn't occure to me lol. Its always hard to know specifically what a reader references in a story I havn't read in ages. Ii do appreciate our time.
Lol, poor Snape, having to deal with girly issues.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol. Yes, I thought that would be amusing. Thank you for your comments.
..yeah, I didn't think that would go well lol. Hope he's ok, and they get that bastard warden!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I think they will. its going to take Severus some time to heal.
Hmm.. I'm not thinking the wizarding world will be too happy about his suggested improvements, even if there is only two or three death eaters left..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Lol you pegged it right. Poor Severus.
Grr, I can't respond to replies on reviews lol. Abbeys, I have adobe too, I love it! I have corel, but I don't use that nearly as much. Also, I'm not a beta here on PP (I've yet to even get my writings posted here yet because I don't have computer access at my house, just mobile on my phone), but I read a ton of fanfiction online, and spotting things after a story has been betaed is kind of a pet peeve. I'm never sure if authors want them pointed out, or if they don't care.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I find it surprising they are there. I would love a good beta to check over the story before sending it to my Tpp beta. I had a good one for years and she had to stop as life got too busy. If your ever interested let me know.
So I'm curious, do you imagine this spell as a slower acting version of what Molly killed Bellatrix with in the movie? She kind of shriveled up then imploded.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
If I remember this story was written before the movie came out. I remember thinking people are going to think I stole that idea after seeing it. Yes, I think it would have looked a lot like that. Thank You for your comments and reviews.
Well, that seemed a bit easy.. Still, I suspect we can't fight every little plot advancement, or this would turn into a hundred chapter story! I'm still really curious about this dehydration spell..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Some times you have to jump a bit. Your right we don't need a 100 chapters. It was somthing that came to me. I really thought it the weakest part of the story.
I thought earlier in the story you had said that Percy already was minister of magic? Severus had asked Minerva who it was now after the war? In this chapter your said he's pretty much next in line to the position.. Did I misunderstand some part of the story, or was one of these a typo? Just a little confused..
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I may have. Over writing that take a year or so and the posting that usually takes longer, glitches ike this happen. I don't honestly remember. Are you a beta?
I'm not sure if you know about it, but there seems to be a glitch or something with quotation marks throughout your story so far. I keep seeing (apparently randomly placed) question marks on the ends of paragraphs where no one is speaking. Just wondered if you knew about it. I know the fanfiction.net boards wreak havoc with layout, but I don't know how TPP's are.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Thats odd because they are very careful about the corrections and the chapters are gone over with a fine tooth comb. Maybe I'll jave to read through it again.
Thank you
So the worm can change into a butterfly, if given the right incentives.. I'm still not convinced we've seen the last of Lucius though.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes, he can. I think most people can given care and love.
Hmm, so will the little worm actually change his tune? I'd like to hope he will, but am not holding my breath.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL the littel wrom is Scorpios right? Guess you will see.
Ah..and now I begin to see where the remaining 40 odd chapters will be necessary. I really hate the Malfoys, I'm sure I'll hate Jr. too.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Well I hope you get past the hate and find the story works for them. I never liked him much until this idea occured to me.
So it was Albus! One more question solved. My next one, though, is will severus disappear after hermione helps him get through the lady layer, our did I understand Albus correctly that severus never actually died, he's just under a 20 year long spell? He's actually alive now, still?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Right he never died, he is under a spell, enchantment something like that. It's been a long time since i read this story so I hope I'm not spoiling anything LOL.
Thank you so much for leaving a review.
Hmm, I doubt Lucius will be that accommodating.. Is this where having a junior Malfoy in their pocket will help?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Kind of lost as to where you are with out looking at the chapters. I'm not sure that Scorpius was instrumental in helping with malfoy. I think Severus' friendhsip was more helpful... but then that could be another story.
Hmm, so now there will be rumor of her having a guardian angel perhaps. I've been meaning to ask, too, what does your profile name mean? Gers?
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
I used to write Fan fic for Forever Knight. I had the name Gersknightlady for that fandom. Geraint Wyn Davies was the actor that playes Nick on that show. Since my fan fic was already under that name I kept it.
Hmm.. So is this maybe something Albus did to him? I can't imagine lily would have, but who else would have if it's not a curse? Hmm.. I apparently didn't read the chapter number on the summary- holy cow! I guess I won't get all my answers tonight, at any rate.
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Well I think you got some answers in ch 8 sorry I didn't see this one first. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Sigh. Un-removable clothes do put a damper on things. Yes, lets go see Poppy!!
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
Yes they do LOL, a big damper!
Yep, he kissed her. He's definitely here for a shag! ;)
Response from gersknightlady (Author of A Ghost of a Chance)
LOL Yes, I think he's hoping for that eventually :)