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Potions Under Duress The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited
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The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later

The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited

fizzabella

37 Reviews   |   37 Ratings, 0 Likes, 33 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 21,909 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Other Canon Witch/Wizard Minerva McGonagall Neville Longbottom Filius Flitwick Ginevra Weasley Albus Severus Potter Astoria Greengrass Draco Malfoy George Weasley Hogwarts Hugo Weasley James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Lavender Brown Lily Potter (daughter of Harry) Luna Lovegood Original Character Rose Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Sorting Hat The Bloody Baron The Fat Friar The Grey Lady

Summary: The final battle and its aftermath where the saga's most charismatic and misunderstood hero receives the happy ending which all heroes deserve.

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later


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fizzabella

Member Since 2007  |  10 Stories  |  Favorited by 47  |  267 Reviews Written  |  467 Review Responses

I'm Lynnette. I'm a wife, stay at home mother of 9, with 5 daughters and 2 sons still at home. I have two grandsonz and one granddaughter:)
 
I LOVE to read, I LOVE to write, and am thrilled to be published here on The Petulant Poetess. I love the Harry Potter books because of my kids, and hope to get good enough to become an accredited beta reader at some point:)

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Severus49

I agree with your statements about Snape. However, I do not agree with the coupling of Granger/Snape. Though I love the stories because they are so well written, as in the case of yours - the pairing - for all intents and purposes would never have worked. Let's face it, the only reason people think of throwing Snape and Hermione together is because they're both Canon characters and both intelligent. I feel the pairing would have never worked because their life experiences make them from two separate planets entirely.  The age difference is hard enough, but their social circles and status in life is too far apart.  Snape would never be able to move past the teacher/student aspect, no matter how stubborn Hermione is. 

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Thank you so much for your compliment on my writing:) I appreciate that very, very much:)As far as whether Hermione and Severus would have worked as a couple, I like to think they would have, as even in the mundane world, more unlikely couples make a success of relationships every day, while other couples, perceived as perfect matcthes don't remain together. It all depends on the individuals involved and their love for one another.Given Severus' experience with Lily, I think he would be chary about giving his heart, and this story represents the beginning of their relationship-the feelings that each one has discovered within his or her heart. I used the timeline for JKR's epilogue, but I could easily see Severus and Hermione waiting five years or even longer to marry, while she pursues her post-Hogwarts education and he works to regain the trust and respect of the wizarding community.Given their natures, I AM very certain that neither one would actually go through with marriage without a lot of thought, and certainly not impulsively.Also, the war would have made fundamental changes in the wizarding community and social circles and status in the old world would certainly have been changed in the new one. I don't know what all those changes would be, but the war with Voldemort would have changed people's outlooks on things like social worth, and with Kingsley Shacklebolt as the Minister, there would have been sweeping changes.Call me a romantic, but I believe that they could have made it work:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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Olivain

A Weasley in Slytherin...scandalous! I enjoyed the reworked epilogue. Great job!

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I had the biggest sense of VINDICATION when I was writing the epilogue. I wanted to right ALL the wrongs and give the best characters the happiness they deserved.Thank you so much:) It means the world to me that you apparently liked one of my stories and then went on to read my other published works and comment on it. Thank you so much. I am so honored!Warm regards,Fizzabella

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Olivain

I recognized the line from "Love Actually" that you mentioned in your End Note. That was a nice little touch. I love that movie, and that story in particular was so sweet and sad. Next chapter coming up!

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

YAY! I love that segment almost more than the ones with Alan Rickman in them:) I'm so honored that you're reading my stuff:) Thank you:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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linlawless

This is definitely how it should have ended!  I think I'll just go ahead and Obliviate JKR's version from my memory and substitute yours ... Great job!

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Thank you so much:) I'm glad you liked it:){{hugs}]Fizzabella

10/10

deniedangel

I do believe I will print this and place it where appropriate in my copy of Deathly Hallows - because you are absolutely right: some times reality must be rejected to be replaced with your own!

Thank you!!!! A wonderful story indeed!

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kimjo2

yay!  the best kind of ending!  yes, jkr told a splendid story but i can't help but think she let us down in the last book.  wonderful story.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Thank you so much:) I know you have reviewed each chapter of this story and I am honored by your interest and thrilled that you enjoyed my story:)warm regards,Fizzabella

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kimjo2

wonderful, just wonderful.  i so approve of your versiom and your dumbledore.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story:)Warmest regards.Fizzabella

10/10

makaem

It is always delightful to read an alternative ending. This is far more satisfying than the original's "poor Severus".

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I'm so glad you find my account of the final battle satisfying. It was very satisfying to write it:)Thanks and warm regards,Fizzabella

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sunny33

A Slytherin Weasley.  Now that's a story waiting to be told. :)

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

That was something I could not resist:)And maybe someday I will write a story about the kids, but my one true pairing is SS/HG, and always will be:)Thank you for your reviews, and I am glad you enjoyed my little tale:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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chyara

You never said what Hermione taught as a Professor at Hogwarts.is she muggles studies?  Potions... etc.

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

LOL:) I am such a a fanatic about details usually and I left that out. Hermione taught Transfiguration just as Minerva McGonagall had done. I'm sorry:)Warm regards,Fizzabella 

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sunny33

Bring on the epilogue! :)

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I do hope you will enjoy the epilogue, too:) And the house assignments:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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sunny33

That explains a lot. :)

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

:)Thank you so much:)Fizzabella

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sunny33

Very clever! :)

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story:) I enjoy your writing very much so feels very good to have the approval of someone whose work I admire:)Thank you:)Fizzabella

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sunny33

A message from Dumbles set for when the wards failed.  Great idea! :)

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Thank you:) I had to have Dumbledore d SOMETHING for Severus, and he should have done a whole lot more:) But most imprtant was that Severus should survive and have a happy ending:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

10/10

Sampdoria

Wonderful story, absolutely wonderful and I loved your last chapter!!!

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it:)Warmest regards,Fizzabella

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firewall

I like this alternate ending. I quite agree that Severus got the short end of the stick and I like your interpretation. Hmmm, I wonder if Jo ever even considered saving Severus. Anyway, a nice little story and one I enjoyed greatly.

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Thank you so much. I have to admit, I have wondered how she would have done it if she had elected to save Severus. Would have been a better story:)Thank you for taking the time to review:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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mimmom

It seems a bit sudden to me, but I guess in battle situations if people have something to say there isn't much time.I love the line from Love Actually and recognized it immediately.  I love that movie, even many of the bits without Alan Rickman.

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I love it, too. I wish I hadn't hurried through Severus's reflection of his feelings for Hermione. I wanted to convey (and didn't to my own satisfaction) that he had been thinking of her for some time, but figured he was not going to survive so what was the point?The "...to me, you are perfect..." just seemed to fit. I love that scene and many others, too:)Thank you for taking the time to review:) It's so much appreciated:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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mimmom

Every time I read these parts from the book it makes me so angry and sad.  I'm glad you've added things to help Severus.  I cried off and on for days after I read it.

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I couldn't NOT write this story-it sort of got me by the scruff of the neck and shook me till I wrote it. It was so unfair!On the other hand, I'm so glad you have enjoyed my version of the story:)Thank you for taking the time to review, also:) It's much appreciated:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

10/10

mimmom

Too right you are!  Snape deserves better!!!!  I love stories in which Snape has a happy ending.

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

To me, he's every bit as much a hero as Harry, if not more. And it's as natural a law as gravity, to my way of thinkinh-the hero gets a happy ending:) I'm glad you enjoyed my story and thank you for taking time to share your thoughts with me:)Warm regards, Fizzabella

10/10

Sampdoria

I just love this chapter, and I am very much looking forward to read more.

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story:) I will get it posted as soon as I can:), real life permitting:)Thank you for taking the time to let me know you're enjoying it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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countrymouse

Just keeps getting better and better!  Looking forward to your description of the battle!

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

The battle is next chapter, and then, because I couldn't resist it, the infamous Epilogue:) I'm so glad you have enjoyed the story so far:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

10/10

countrymouse

SO glad you're doing this---it truly was disgraceful the way Snape was cast aside in the original like used rubbish.  I am thrilled with your "corrections" to the 'mistakes' and 'omissions' of the original!Looking forward to the next!

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Thank you so much:) It was a story that demanded to be told:) I'm glad you're enjoying it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

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kimjo2

i'm a mythbusters fan, too!!  i'm all for your reality.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Hurray!!!!! Thank you so much, make yourself comfortable in my reality! Come on in, the water's fine:){{huggles}}Fizzabella

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kimbee73

Well on to the next chapter....this is a very interesting beginning.

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to let me know.Fizzabella

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MuseAmusant

Would that JK's Dumbledore had been as clever and solicitous with regard to Severus' protection, considering all that he had and would suffer to ensure the Order's eventual victory. Though Moody died long before the battle at the school, he surely would have been one of the biggest threats to Severus, otherwise.

I'm pleased to see Hermione was the quickest to accept and agree to what Dumbledore asked, but I'm curious to see what Severus himself thinks of all this.

Well done, I really like the way you're integrating the more acceptable parts of DH with your vastly more pleasing account of Severus' survival.Kudos!

Response from fizzabella (Author of The Battle of Hogwarts Revisited)

Severus truly deserved better. One of the things that disappointed me the most was that Severus was treated so shabbily, and this story would pop into my head and would not let go until I had written it.I'm honored that you think my efforts to integrate my story into canon are working. I wanted it to flow seamlessly, and I'm thrilled that you think I managed that.Thanks so much for taking the time to give me your opinion.Warm regards,Fizzabella

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