That was beautiful!  I loved it.  Thanks for a great story.

I couldn't review for the first three chapters because i was so confused about what exactly was going on, but everything came together at the end very well. I'd have never put the two facts together, Fenrir saying he liked children, and Snape's fear of werewolves, but it totally makes sense in the "how did i miss that?" Sort of way.

Oh goodness... my heart was aching the whole way, and when he finally burnt the note I let out a little cheer. Thank you, thank you, for such a beautiful peice of writing...!

Nice! A very clean and warm ending! Well done!

Now I fully understand everything. I'm relieved they all will be fine from now on. I guess they now have a wedding to plan.

WOW....Well done, I love the ending...I'm glad he took care of Greyback...Excellent story..

Very good final chapter in a lovely, short story.  You removed all confusion for me nicely.  Thanks for sharing.  I look forward to your next story. JoAnne

I love this. But, it's too short! ^_^

And it is all finally explained! It all makes sense now- the color changing hair, the potion, the allergic reaction, all of it. I'm surprised that Severus hid though- he has always said (and he is right) that he is no coward.

I wasn't confussed once. It was beautiful. You had me thinking several outcomes for a while, but I think that's what you were trying to do. Nicely written :)

“He wants to use a spell, one that would alter Evelyn’s DNA… permanently,”

Screech!

O.o

DNA?

What Wizard or Witch would bandy about an acronym like DNA? Does  the HP universe, or even JKR for that matter, even know what the heck Deoxyribonucleic acid is?

Talk about driving over an IED! Boy did that kill the moment!

Still, it was a well-written piece!


Author's Response: You're the first person to mention that! LOL

Sorry that threw you out of the story, but I guess I don't understand why they wouldn't know about DNA.  They may be a separate society, but they still interact with the Muggle world quite a bit.  With Muggle-borns entering the Wizarding world all the time, I don't see how they couldn't know about this sort of thing.  And as Hermione is the one who is speaking ... *shrugs* 

Hope you can enjoy the rest! Thank you!

EdgeOfDark's response: LOL!

I will enjoy the rest, thank you! ^_^

If I had a dime for everytime I made the same mistake...

What really tore me out of the story was the fact the HP universe treats the Muggle world as a complete mystery even though it exists side-by-side with their own. The characters never mention DVD's, CD, GPS, or even cassette tape decks! If Wizards and Witches can't comprehend proper Muggle dress, can't fathom how to repair simple plumbing, electricitical theory, or understand how a simple radio works, Hermione speaking or not, how in the world would they understand a complex concept like RNA or DNA?

I mean, following HP Canon, it just isn't possible.

Wow.....I hadn't expectedt the threat from Greyback but I really enjoyed reading this.....thanks for the answers. I am so glad that Evelyn can live her life as the person she really is and not a Polyjuice version of someone else.

Warm and moving. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I didn't get it at first....I thought they were doing it to hide it from Ron....obviously not. I think I see why they are protecting her if he is still serving the other master.....oh my what a conundrum! I guess all will be revealed later.

This is simply gorgeous - mystical and lyrical.  Just the sort of thing that I love.....

I think I got it. And I'm sooo glad Ron isn't the father. And that Severus gave up that stupid idea about changing her DNA. He would have regret it forever.

Maybe not that clear. Wonder where ROn is and if he is really the biological father or not. I long for the other two chapters.

I don't think I've understood everything but I guess more will be revealed in the nest drables. Anyway the song is really lovely.

oh.. tears.... lots of them. Just beautiful.... more please...

Beautiful. I looked up the lullaby after the first chapter was posted, but could only find it as a poem. Is it set to music somewhere?

Ok just so you know -- No "More pieces fall into place" in this one.  For me, at least, it only made the confusion stronger.   I am grateful that I only have to wait another day to find out my answers.  Thanks for sharing such an intriguing story.  JoAnne

That played out nicely. I assume we'll learn his motivations.

WHOA...YAY!! I'm glad he will let the DA help...I LOVE IT!

O_o is Evelyn Severus' baby? His comments about her resembling her father... but then she changed? Is Hermione giving her Polyjuice Potion?

Oh this is gooood... cannot wait for the resolution. I am thinking the child is his, disguised with polyjuice to resemble Ron's child?