Chapter 9
Chapter 10 of 11
nastygrlAfter the war, Hermione needs help, and Ron cleverly enlists Severus' help.
ReviewedA/N: Many, many thanks to Wildcatcdc and Sc010f for their patience, guidance and support.
Neither remembered entering his bedroom. He stood her next to the high sleigh bed that stood prominently against the far wall of the room. To either side were windows draped in nothing more than green silk. The furniture was dark and tasteful, and the counterpane was startlingly white, while the floor was covered in a thick, dark green pile.
They stood for a moment, looking at each other, taking in their flushed cheeks, bright eyes and moistened lips. He reached up slowly and cupped her face, slowly lowering his mouth to meet hers once more. The kiss was achingly slow, but powerful.
"Hermione," he murmured, tracing his lips over her mouth, to her chin then down her delicate neck to the base of her throat, sucking gently on the tender flesh before laving it with his tongue.
Reluctantly, his mouth left her skin and he lifted his head. "Before we proceed, there is something you must know, something I want to tell you," he whispered. His hands were caressing her shoulders, as if he couldn't bear to break contact with her skin. He traced her fingertips down her arms.
"You are the piece that has been missing in my life. When I held you in my arms, that day in your office, I'd felt like I'd come..."
"Home?" Hermione interrupted. She was now cupping his face in her hands, smiling softly into his deep obsidian eyes.
Severus nodded, scanning her face, looking for an indication of her feelings. He felt himself slipping into her warm, golden-brown eyes, and there he felt her acceptance, her care and concern for him, her loyalty and esteem. And love. He felt her love, felt in it wrap around him, warming him, filling up the empty cracks and crevices in his heart and soul and mind. He shuddered under the intensity; he knew she felt the same.
He smiled softly before leaning and taking possession of her mouth again. "Yes, home."
There were no slow movements, now. With one purpose, they began removing each other's clothing. In between gasps and soft sighs and low moans, piece-by-piece, they fell away. Buttons were opened, zippers undone, laces untied. A soft murmur of thanks was uttered by Severus as he freed Hermione's breasts from her scrap of a bra. Cupping the soft globes, he ran his thumbs over her nipples, encouraging them to harden. He lowered his head and gently kissed the soft flesh, raising a moan from Hermione's throat.
As his hand explored her breasts, learning their shape and weight, the sensitive areas that had her catching her breath, her hands closed over his, and the sight of her fingers intertwining with his, the contrast of small and large, set fire in Severus.
He pulled her to him, their thighs brushing, his hard length pressing hard into her belly. Hermione gasped and raised herself on her toes, seeking more direct contact, her pussy now wet with desire.
They wasted no time falling into the bed. Hermione scooted back onto the pillows as Severus climbed onto her. On his hands and knees above her, he bent down to kiss her mouth; their tongues danced and tangled, learning their shapes and textures and tastes. Hermione wanted to wrap her arms and legs around him, pull him down and into her, but before her desire-laden body could respond, he shifted, bending low so that his mouth began a slow decent down the long plane of skin. He was intent on learning every inch of her, every spot that drew forth pleasure, every patch that made her giggle and moan.
He kissed and traced her nipples with his tongue before gently sucking on them, gradually pulling more and more flesh into his mouth, and Hermione arched off the bed as the ragged course of sensations ran down her spine, flooding her pussy with hot, delicious wetness.
He dipped his tongue into her navel, and she couldn't stifle her giggle. He chucked at her reaction, and his warm breath on her skin raised bumps on the sensitive flesh. He moved lower still, tracing her pelvic bones with his long nose as he kissed and licked the delicate skin. When he finally moved to her mound, Hermione whimpered. She let her legs fall back, unself-consciously opening herself to him, inviting him to explore.
Severus' sharp intake of breath permeated the room. He waited no longer; eagerly, he feasted on her womanhood. There was nowhere his mouth did not explore; he nudged her clit with his nose as he smelled her unique scent. He gave wet, open mouth kisses to her soft flesh, following the seam to her opening. There, his tongue delved inside.
As his mouth feasted upon her, Hermione's hands were busy trying to find purchase, to hold some part of him, but his shoulders pinned her legs wide, and her hands only found his head. She thrust into his mouth, moving in time with his tongue as he flattened it and ran it along her slit, from her perineum to her clit.
"Severus, Severus," Hermione moaned softly and brought herself up on her elbows. He paused briefly and looked up at her from between her legs. A shiver ran down her back at the sight of Severus Snape's black eyes peering up at her from between her legs. Like a cat, he lunged forward, pouncing atop her and kissed her. She could taste herself on his tongue, and it spurred her desire to new heights.
"Turn around, Severus," urged Hermione as she broke the kiss. She reached down their bodies to grasp his cock in her small hands, and she felt him lurch. His eyes registered his surprise, then a smile took hold of his face, and with another soul-searing kiss, he complied. They took a moment to arrange themselves on his large bed, with strategically placed pillows to ensure maximum comfort and access.
Severus wasted no time in returning to Hermione's pussy. Where before the room had been silent but for the soft moans and heavy breathing, words of pleasure and encouragement filled the room.
"You've the sweetest tasting pussy, Hermione," Severus praised between kisses. "Your skin is soft and hot."
Hermione took a moment to admire the magnificent cock in front of her. She ran her hand down his inner thigh then up, lightly tracing over his heavy balls to his cock, proud and erect, droplets of pre-come glistening on his glans. She leaned forward and daintily licked, and Severus lurched, heaving a breath of air, causing Hermione to smile wantonly, as if pleased by his reaction to her initial touch.
From there, she wasted little time. Taking his hard length in her hot, little hands, she guided him into her mouth, where she set upon him, using her tongue and her lips and her imagination. She used every part of herself that would reach him; her breast was pressed into his pelvic area, her arm wrapped underneath his leg to clutch at his inner thigh. Her hand held his cock, occasionally sliding along his length as she eagerly and steadily brought him into the warm cavern of her mouth. She kissed his hot flesh and licked the small planes and crevices, talking and cooing.
"You taste so good on my tongue. You feel perfect in my mouth, but I want you inside me, I need to feel you moving in and out of me." On and on she whispered and praised, all the while Severus working her to a fever pitch. When he slid his long finger deep into her body, she rose to meet it eagerly. Inserting another, her breath caught in her throat. And when the tip of another found its way into the small, tight hole of her anus, she screamed in delight, convulsing in a deliciously long orgasm that stole the words from her mouth, leaving her mumbling long, unintelligible ramblings.
Severus moved from Hermione's side, even as she reached for him. Returning to the bottom of the bed, he looked at her splayed out. Her legs spread wide, her pussy wet and swollen, and a blush that spread from her glorious breasts up her neck to her face. Her eyes were half-closed, but intense and she peered down at him.
"Come here," she demanded softly, and once again, he sprung, covering his body with his. He entered her, smoothly and steadily, seating himself fully as his lips settled on hers. Hermione instinctively brought her legs up and wrapped them around his waist, tilting her hips so that the tip of his cock touched her cervix. She gasped at how completely he filled her, stretched her, and how her body eagerly accepted him.
They whispered their hopes and dreams to each other, made promises to each other as they moved together, and with each promise made, each hope for their future offered, their hearts opened to what was being revealed before them.
With their foreheads touching and their hot sweet breath on each other's lips, they moved fast and furious to their completion. As they stared into each other's eyes, they saw their future intertwined and knew they'd come home.
Later, panting for breath, Severus pulled Hermione into his arms and pulled the soft cotton sheet around them. The room smelled of sex and candles and Hermione's own scent. Almost as if he was afraid to ask, he squeezed his eyes shut for a moment, then opened them to look down at her. "Well then..." he began.
In his arms, Hermione squeezed her arms around his middle and giggled. "We've some specifics to work out, of course," she agreed, knowing without a doubt of what he'd been about to say.
"Where?" Severus asked lazily, his fingers tracing rune symbols on her arm and shoulder.
"Here, without a doubt," she answered immediately. "I'll not be sorry to give up the house. Besides," she continued and she wiggled contentedly, "I've become permanently attached to this bed. I doubt I'll be able to leave it for a week, let alone before Monday."
It was then that she sat up like a shot, startling Severus so that he released her immediately.
"Sod work." She said it forcefully, full of conviction and mettle. Just as quickly, she twisted and fell onto his chest. His arms came around her immediately, holding her fast. She looped her arms around his neck and kissed him energetically.
"I no longer work at the Ministry," Hermione announced between kisses. "I'm no longer working on that gods-damned book. In fact, the Minister can shove that book right up his..."
"The Minister had his own reasons for the book, Hermione," Severus interrupted with a few kisses of his own. "And now is not the time to show your displeasure at an assignment placed in your hands. In fact..." he paused as he saw the smile that transformed Hermione's face.
"You're right, of course, Severus. I'll need to convince him that Wizard Studies courses for all levels at Hogwarts is an absolute necessity, won't I? And what better way to show him how important it is needed than through this book?"
"Quite so," Severus murmured approvingly, then rolled onto her back and lowered his mouth to her neck, effectively cutting off further conversation until later. Much later.
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Victorious Draw
169 Reviews | 8.09/10 Average
Famtastic! I love SS/HG stories where Ron is NOT the bad guy!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Quite satisfying. Thank you for not telling me about their children. I always find that part rather anticlimactic in these stories. I really enjoyed Ron's side of the story very much. He's usually betrayed as less intelligent than is in cannon. He's not what Hermione needs though. I always felt that way. They would have held each other back. Thank you for helping George. Of those major characters she actually allowed to survive, I always felt he was the most injured in the war. Of course she killed Severus off before he could have one single solitary moment of peace or happiness. His was the most tragic and unfair life in the story. At least she spurred on a plethora of delightful writers who saw the need to redress his wrongs. It's 2013 and I'm still wallowing in it. Thank God for so many stories and people like you.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review! I was heartbroken over the death of Fred and Snape, although I saw the writing on the wall with Severus. Knowing several sets of identical twins, I am aware of the special bonds between twins, and it made sense to me that Fred and George's bond should be magical, as well, since they were wizards. I, too, thank God for all the writers who believe Severus should have been allowed redemption, peace and love after the war.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review! I was heartbroken over the death of Fred and Snape, although I saw the writing on the wall with Severus. Knowing several sets of identical twins, I am aware of the special bonds between twins, and it made sense to me that Fred and George's bond should be magical, as well, since they were wizards. I, too, thank God for all the writers who believe Severus should have been allowed redemption, peace and love after the war.
Damn, girl! Let's not waste any time being coy, now! He'll find knickers on the bathroom floor before he knows it. It's quite exciting. I hope he likes cats. To hell with courting. Was he a virgin? I'm asking based on what he said to himself in the previous chapter when they kissed the first time.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I never thought about Severus being a virgin, but I think not. I just don't think he ever formed an instant connection with anyone, given that he's a Slytherin.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I never thought about Severus being a virgin, but I think not. I just don't think he ever formed an instant connection with anyone, given that he's a Slytherin.
I couldn't find the artwork. : )
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I don't know if the links work or if the website is still up. I'm sorry - the artwork was gorgeous!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I don't know if the links work or if the website is still up. I'm sorry - the artwork was gorgeous!
Did she really think she was going to the Gala with Ron? I thought he'd made it pretty clear that he didn't want to be a couple, only friends. She is in a funk. It was more than a hint as far as I could understand the conversation. Now with Severus, the idea that he could be interested in Hermione has been put into his head by Ron. That could have heightened his sensitivity to the thought. I don't think Hermione heard the hint in their discussion, even though it was there, if she didn't hear him actually breaking up with her. She heard the book part, though. Well, I'm very glad Severus was the person she was with when she realized she wasn't Ron's girlfriend anymore. That ball can't come fast enough now. Of course Ron is right. These two belong together.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Ron knows his strategy! He's a brilliant chess master, and he knows each player and what moves each makes and how to manipulate those players.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Ron knows his strategy! He's a brilliant chess master, and he knows each player and what moves each makes and how to manipulate those players.
Once again, good job Ron!!!! Severus Snape, you are so awesomely brilliant and perceptive! You think about it and you'll know what to do. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your review!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your review!
Good job, Ron!!! That was smooth. I'm impressed! Poor Hermione. She'll thank him later. Now starts the Rocky Music as Hermione starts a new path. Too bad I can't think of a song I actually like to see her off on this new adventure. Obviously, I must not get out enough. Sigh... How about the music in the Lord of the Rings when the flames burst from mountain top to mountain top signaling the call for Rohan. Hermione's epiphanies can be each flame. ...I'm assuming she will have a few now. It just isn't the right song for the actual sentiment. I gotta see more movies. I definitely need to get out more as much as Hermione does, but I don't have the cheerleaders she does. I'm 52 and have no close friends, even though I'm 'perky'. I'm not like other people though, I guess. I just don't have the energy to socialize after I'm done at work mothering moms and dads all day. You'd think I'd have scads of friends. I brace myself, burn as bright as I can all day, then burn out and crawl into my bed. Chronic pain is an uncomfortable companion. Who wants to hang out with someone who hurts like hell all the time. I'm a crusader like Hermione too. I think people at work think I'm not wrapped right sometimes. She's for the elves rights, and I'm for women's rights. These young women have no idea how far we have come and it wasn't easy. If we don't keep fighting it will go backwards. It already is. I've fallen from grace at work for my strong stand on not selling Hooter Hiders. "The Establishment" can't be all, "You're a bad mom if you don't breastfeed, and by the way; could you please cover those things up! You're making us all uncomfortable." "Fuck them all! Tell me what you want to do, Mom! I've got your back! BTW, you can get a gods damned Hooter Hider at a lot of other places, if that's what you want. Here's the website and here's the website for The Badass Breastfeeder if you don't. (Yes. It is awesomely a real website!) You don't want to breastfeed? That's your right!" All apparently, not the appropriate corporate stance. I'm too much of a 60's and 70's style, bra burning, rabble-rouser. I need re-education, I guess. Come on Hermione! Land Snape for the both of us. I'm not going to get any action.
They certainly didn't waste any time. Why should they. They've known each other for years. I suppose one dance fulfills one's obligations to those at the Gala. There will be talk. Hehe! So he made tea just so that he could ask her why she had been afraid at the Gala? A waltz, 5 minutes of conversation is plenty of foreplay when one has been fantasizing for a week, I suppose. On to the more important part! Shall we?
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks for your review! Always need to keep the story moving forward, lol
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks for your review! Always need to keep the story moving forward, lol
Dreams can be so lovely. I have very vivid dreams and sometimes take a nap so I can dream. I hope Hermione remembers the part with Severus. She's luckier than she knows. ..."melted dark chocolate, thick and rich and deep", indeed!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I hope readers read those dreams as lessons for Hermione. Harry has moved on to find a home, and Ron knows how to live in the wizarding society, while Hermione only learned of wizards from Hogwarts - no one has prepared her for life in the wizarding world after school. Thank you for your reviews!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I hope readers read those dreams as lessons for Hermione. Harry has moved on to find a home, and Ron knows how to live in the wizarding society, while Hermione only learned of wizards from Hogwarts - no one has prepared her for life in the wizarding world after school. Thank you for your reviews!
I really like liking this Ron. He's usually portrayed as such a prat. I think we SS/HG shippers sometimes forget he's a gifted strategist. I always picture him with George. I think that is what he would have really done. Worked with George and try to help him. Family is everything to him. He might have wanted to be an Auror before the war, but after Fred's death I think he would have given that up for George. Harry would be OK now. And, he never would have ended up happy with Hermione, nor she with him. This feels more right than the book. I don't know where you have this going, but I do picture him with Lavander.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your reviews! I seem to be responding to them backwards, lolI haven't given much thought to where each character ends up, but Ron and Hermione never felt right. Ron is brilliant, but a bit of a lunkhead, and I could never imagine Hermione having the patience for him in the long run. I'd have liked to see him with someone like Pansy Parkinson - someone who has the same background as he - someone with a common background and sense of belonging. And Pansy would challenge him and his abilities.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your reviews! I seem to be responding to them backwards, lolI haven't given much thought to where each character ends up, but Ron and Hermione never felt right. Ron is brilliant, but a bit of a lunkhead, and I could never imagine Hermione having the patience for him in the long run. I'd have liked to see him with someone like Pansy Parkinson - someone who has the same background as he - someone with a common background and sense of belonging. And Pansy would challenge him and his abilities.
Oooh. What a nice tale.It's always nice to see Nice!Ron and Nice!Harry in this side of the fandom. Lovely. ♥
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It is much appreciated.There is so much love between the three of them, I needed to be true to that.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It is much appreciated.There is so much love between the three of them, I needed to be true to that.
I'm not usually a fan of Ron but I like the way you've written him.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks! I'm a big fan of Ron, just not with Hermione. :)
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks! I'm a big fan of Ron, just not with Hermione. :)
Loved the twist of Ron being the level-headed mastermind. It was a refreshing change from the hot-headed ron that is so commonplace in fics. Thanks!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review and comments!I've always liked Ron - just not for Hermione. He's an excellent chess player, which means he sees the "big picture" and plans. I thought he needed to put his skills to good use.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review and comments!I've always liked Ron - just not for Hermione. He's an excellent chess player, which means he sees the "big picture" and plans. I thought he needed to put his skills to good use.
Really wonderful story!! Just long enough to really immerse myself and not so long that I am saying...OMG 25 MORE chapters! Well written thanks!!!!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Oh, thank you!! It was written for the Hermione BigBang Challenge and is archived here: http://www.hermione.magical-worlds.us/viewstory.php?sid=48&textsize=0&chapter=1Also included is some really wonderful artwork!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I tried to visit the archive and I can not get to it for some reason. I am going to try again,Thanks!!!!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Oh, thank you!! It was written for the Hermione BigBang Challenge and is archived here: http://www.hermione.magical-worlds.us/viewstory.php?sid=48&textsize=0&chapter=1Also included is some really wonderful artwork!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I tried to visit the archive and I can not get to it for some reason. I am going to try again,Thanks!!!!
Just a very sweet, lovely, and romantic story. Thank you for sharing. I can now go to sleep with a smile on my face.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I am so glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you so much for offering a review after every chapter, I've a smile from ear to ear. :)I love Severus and Hermione together. I wrote this story for the HermioneBigBang a couple of years ago, and I'm so pleased that it is still being enjoyed. I don't know how you feel about Lucius/Hermione. Personally, I'm not a huge fan, but I wrote a story, No Looking Back. If you're slightly interested, check it out. Thanks again!! Dari
Perfection.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I am so, so sorry it has taken so long to thank you for leaving all of these lovely comments!!I'm so glad you enjoyed the story - it was a nail- biter for me; I was so worried I wouldn't do the characters justice!I like Ron - he's funny and smart and honest, I just never saw him as a good match for Hermione. :)
How romantic.. I must finish this story tonight. Well, it technically is no longer the night since it is 1:45 am but I must continue before I go to sleep.
Sigh, to be so close, to share a breath and the slightest of kisses.. Ahhh the fireworks begin. Your take on Fred and George was very heart warming.
"Hermione indulged in a bit of self-mortification and threw her blankets over her head. She’d masturbated had gotten off to a fantasy regarding Professor Snape. Severus! " Your opening paragraph made me chuckle, I don't think I have to tell you why.
I am so looking forward to the first time they see each other again.
Sigh, you are a girl after my own heart, Those old spaghetti westerns with non other than my beloved Clint Eastwood, girl I knew I liked you right from the start.
What a lovely dream. I love how Severus comes up behind her and takes her on to the dance floor. The way he tells her that he is always there, Be still my heart.
Awww, and so it begins. I'm doing my Happy Dance!
How very Slytherin of Ron, he manipulated that scene very well. Ahhh Severus, let us see how you let down your guard. On to the next chapter.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I'd like to think those seven years spent in school with the Slytherin's weren't wasted, lol
Interesting chapter, I enjoyed the matured Ron. I can't wait to see how H/S relationship developes.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you!
Well, this is a new twist. Ron has never been anything other than annoying at best. I am looking forward to finding out how he will put his plan into action. Looks like your Ron has finally grown up, how refreshing.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Well, the man had to grow up some time! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, and please accept my apologies for taking so, so long to do it!