Chapter 5
Chapter 6 of 11
nastygrlAfter the war, Hermione needs help, and Ron cleverly enlists Severus' help.
ReviewedAs always, big, big thank yous to Wildcatcdc and Sc010f!!
Hermione woke slowly. She rolled onto her back, stretching and arching before slumping back into the bed. She pulled the duvet a bit higher until she was buried to her chin. She smiled, something she hadn't done in many a morning. She wasn't quite sure why she felt so rested and relaxed. She'd dreamt more than usual the night before, and while she didn't remember her dreams with any sense of clarity, she knew they were good dreams, bringing her a measure of calm and comfort.
She stayed in bed a few moments more, hoping that some remnant of a dream would come back. And then she remembered his voice, whispering in her ear.
Oh gods, she thought, that voice. She admitted that Severus Snape's voice was the gods' gift to make up for his nasty disposition. She remembered more than one occasion where her knickers had actually become damp while listening to his lectures in his Advanced Potions classes, which were more theory than practical application. In those classes, when one was expected to sit and pay attention, she'd found herself distracted, not only by that smooth deep voice, but also by his physicality, the fluid motions of his body as he moved across the front of the room and his hands, oh god, his hands, she thought again, as they pointed to an equation written on the blackboards or some imaginary cauldron. That they were in constant motion in these classes shouldn't have surprised her. They were never still when the students were brewing, either. Severus was used to keeping his body, hands and mouth in perpetual motion.
Is he like that with a woman, as well? Hermione stilled. Had she really just thought that? Severus Snape with a woman? With a lover? Her panties dampened at the thought. Hermione smiled sleepily. It is a glorious a morning, she thought. It's Saturday, I've nowhere to be and no one expecting me. She closed her eyes.
Once again, she was in her Potions classroom, but she was no longer a student, and she wasn't attending a lecture. He was in the front of the room, stowing away his lecture materials and handouts, it appeared. She walked up the aisle, waiting for him to lift his head. He went through the motions of tidying his desk, giving no indication that he was aware of her, but she knew better. He'd spent too many years as a spy not to be aware of anyone in his space. When he'd finished his busy work, he straightened, rounded the corner and leaned his hip against the hard wood, folding his arms across his chest. He was clad in his lecturing attire, a lightweight, close-fitting black half-robe, similar to a waistcoat, which he had unbuttoned as he worked. A green button-down shirt was tucked into his wool trousers that sat low on his waist. A black, leather belt and silver buckle drew attention to how low-slung his hips were, a fact she noted with appreciation.
All he needed was a black Stetson and hip holster, and he'd be a gunslinger, Hermione thought wildly, remembering her father's collection of Clint Eastwood movies.
Severus' eyes traveled up her body as she stood in the aisle in front of her. In her bed, Hermione glided her hands over her pajamas. It was her habit to sleep in pajamas since her school days of sleeping in a drafty dorm room. She let her hands travel from her neck to her breasts, running her fingertips lightly over the sensitive flesh. Her skin tingled from the feather-light contact, and her pink nipples began to pebble, even before she gently ran her fingernails across them. She imagined her nipples hardening under the stare of her former Professor.
The barely-there bra under her cashmere sweater did nothing to conceal her body's reaction, on display for him. He said nothing, but his eyebrow arched. With approval, she hoped. As she made her way to stand in front of him, he stood straight and dropped his arms to his sides.
"Ms. Granger," Severus crooned, "I'm pleased that you could meet with me this afternoon." With that, he turned and began walking away from her, stopping halfway across the room to look back where she stood. He stretched out his hand, as if he meant her to take it, and she quickly crossed to his side. Instead of taking her hand in his, he settled it at the base of her spine, splayed so that he could feel the indent at her hips and the protrusion of her lower spine.
Hermione slipped her hands under her pajama top. Her nipples tightened further, and her fingers found them, plucking and pinching lightly, delighted with the corresponding bursts of pleasure in her quim. She grasped her pajama bottoms and slid them down her legs, letting them gather around her ankles. With her knees bent, she let her legs spread on the bed. How cool her cotton sheets felt on her overheated flesh. How deliciously her bottom slid across the smooth material as her fingers began running lightly up and down the soft pale flesh of her inner thighs, edging closer and closer to the wet heat of her pussy.
Severus guided her into his sitting room, where he removed his half-robe to hang it on a thin coat stand in the corner. "May I offer you a drink, Ms. Granger?" he asked, and Hermione fidgeted with the bottom of her sweater, running the material under her fingernail in a nervous gesture she acquired since leaving school.
"Yes, thank you," Hermione replied softly, "whatever you are having will be fine."
With a small nod, Severus turned and poured two glasses of red wine. With glasses in hand, he nodded to the broad sofa, indicating she should sit, then handed her the wine. He settled in next to her, his arm over the back, close to enough for him to play with the ends of her hair.
"It was suggested that I have a glass of red wine at the end of my day," Severus began conversationally while his finger gently stroked her neck, "for relaxation and for the health of my heart. It had been damaged over the years from various curses, you see." He paused to take a sip of the lush red liquid, and Hermione did the same, savoring the bite of the tannins, as a shiver ran down her spine at Severus' gentle touch.
"Your heart, is it weak?" Hermione asked tentatively.
Severus smiled devilishly and took the glass from her hand. Setting them on the side table, he took her by the shoulders and pulled her to him.
"Not in the least," he murmured before capturing her mouth in a branding kiss.
Hermione envisioned Severus kissing her, stealing her breath as his mouth traveled down her check to her neck where he laved the skin before sucking gently, making her moan in excitement.
He reached up to cup her breast and squeezed gently, learning the shape, letting it fill his hand. When he ran his thumb across her nipple, she drew a quick breath and wetness pooled between her thighs. She pressed her breast into his hand and was rewarded when he palmed the other breast, as well. She placed her hands on his thighs for leverage and squeezed.
Instantly, a hand went to the back of her neck and hauled her closer, dragging her into his lap. She was lying across his legs, and he bent low to kiss her breast through her sweater. His hot breath scorched through the soft material a second before he whispered the spell to remove it. He leered at the inconsequential scrap of lace that barely covered her nipples. Sliding his finger under the material, he pulled it down and covered her flesh with his mouth. She arched her back, eager for the contact. Splayed as she was before him, with his arm crooked under her neck for support, his hand left her breast and traveled down to her belly, lightly tracing his fingers down her ribcage, tickling her and making her gasp once again.
His hand dipped lower, into that concave space between her pelvic bones, running his fingertips back and forth, lower and lower, slipping beneath her slacks. She thrust her hips, hoping her aim was true and his hand would cover her, finally.
Hermione's fingers found her pussy. She traced her labia gently with her fingers before sliding her fingers through the folds and skimming her clit, drawing a moan, much like the Severus in her fantasy.
Severus' hand finally, finally, touched her where she most wanted, and he wasn't delicate or searching. His hand covered her hot, wet pussy, his palm pressing into her clit, rubbing and sliding along the wet, slippery flesh. Severus sought out her opening, inserting first one then two fingers, rocking back and forth along her wet cunt until Hermione was moving and thrusting with him in sync, point and counterpoint, her need building and building. Hermione found her breast and began tweaking and pulling at her nipples, twisting and pinching until in time with the thrusting fingers.
Hermione, in the throes of her fantasy, was doing much the same thing, her fingers on one hand were buried deep within her while the other was at her breast, kneading and pulling, catching her nipples between her fingers, flicking and tweaking them.
As Severus began thrusting his fingers deeper and deeper, so did Hermione until she came, shuddering and gasping Severus' name. Her hand slowed, her clit so sensitive that the slightest caress by her thumb caused her to jerk and twitch.
Eventually, her heartbeat slowed, and Hermione became fully awake, fully aware of what had transpired, both during the night in her dreams and of the last fifteen minutes.
She'd orgasmed for Severus Snape. He'd made her come long and hard, longer and harder than Viktor or Ron had ever caused her to.
Oh my gods, she thought. Out of the frying pan, indeed!
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169 Reviews | 8.09/10 Average
Famtastic! I love SS/HG stories where Ron is NOT the bad guy!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Quite satisfying. Thank you for not telling me about their children. I always find that part rather anticlimactic in these stories. I really enjoyed Ron's side of the story very much. He's usually betrayed as less intelligent than is in cannon. He's not what Hermione needs though. I always felt that way. They would have held each other back. Thank you for helping George. Of those major characters she actually allowed to survive, I always felt he was the most injured in the war. Of course she killed Severus off before he could have one single solitary moment of peace or happiness. His was the most tragic and unfair life in the story. At least she spurred on a plethora of delightful writers who saw the need to redress his wrongs. It's 2013 and I'm still wallowing in it. Thank God for so many stories and people like you.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review! I was heartbroken over the death of Fred and Snape, although I saw the writing on the wall with Severus. Knowing several sets of identical twins, I am aware of the special bonds between twins, and it made sense to me that Fred and George's bond should be magical, as well, since they were wizards. I, too, thank God for all the writers who believe Severus should have been allowed redemption, peace and love after the war.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review! I was heartbroken over the death of Fred and Snape, although I saw the writing on the wall with Severus. Knowing several sets of identical twins, I am aware of the special bonds between twins, and it made sense to me that Fred and George's bond should be magical, as well, since they were wizards. I, too, thank God for all the writers who believe Severus should have been allowed redemption, peace and love after the war.
Damn, girl! Let's not waste any time being coy, now! He'll find knickers on the bathroom floor before he knows it. It's quite exciting. I hope he likes cats. To hell with courting. Was he a virgin? I'm asking based on what he said to himself in the previous chapter when they kissed the first time.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I never thought about Severus being a virgin, but I think not. I just don't think he ever formed an instant connection with anyone, given that he's a Slytherin.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I never thought about Severus being a virgin, but I think not. I just don't think he ever formed an instant connection with anyone, given that he's a Slytherin.
I couldn't find the artwork. : )
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I don't know if the links work or if the website is still up. I'm sorry - the artwork was gorgeous!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I don't know if the links work or if the website is still up. I'm sorry - the artwork was gorgeous!
Did she really think she was going to the Gala with Ron? I thought he'd made it pretty clear that he didn't want to be a couple, only friends. She is in a funk. It was more than a hint as far as I could understand the conversation. Now with Severus, the idea that he could be interested in Hermione has been put into his head by Ron. That could have heightened his sensitivity to the thought. I don't think Hermione heard the hint in their discussion, even though it was there, if she didn't hear him actually breaking up with her. She heard the book part, though. Well, I'm very glad Severus was the person she was with when she realized she wasn't Ron's girlfriend anymore. That ball can't come fast enough now. Of course Ron is right. These two belong together.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Ron knows his strategy! He's a brilliant chess master, and he knows each player and what moves each makes and how to manipulate those players.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Ron knows his strategy! He's a brilliant chess master, and he knows each player and what moves each makes and how to manipulate those players.
Once again, good job Ron!!!! Severus Snape, you are so awesomely brilliant and perceptive! You think about it and you'll know what to do. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your review!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your review!
Good job, Ron!!! That was smooth. I'm impressed! Poor Hermione. She'll thank him later. Now starts the Rocky Music as Hermione starts a new path. Too bad I can't think of a song I actually like to see her off on this new adventure. Obviously, I must not get out enough. Sigh... How about the music in the Lord of the Rings when the flames burst from mountain top to mountain top signaling the call for Rohan. Hermione's epiphanies can be each flame. ...I'm assuming she will have a few now. It just isn't the right song for the actual sentiment. I gotta see more movies. I definitely need to get out more as much as Hermione does, but I don't have the cheerleaders she does. I'm 52 and have no close friends, even though I'm 'perky'. I'm not like other people though, I guess. I just don't have the energy to socialize after I'm done at work mothering moms and dads all day. You'd think I'd have scads of friends. I brace myself, burn as bright as I can all day, then burn out and crawl into my bed. Chronic pain is an uncomfortable companion. Who wants to hang out with someone who hurts like hell all the time. I'm a crusader like Hermione too. I think people at work think I'm not wrapped right sometimes. She's for the elves rights, and I'm for women's rights. These young women have no idea how far we have come and it wasn't easy. If we don't keep fighting it will go backwards. It already is. I've fallen from grace at work for my strong stand on not selling Hooter Hiders. "The Establishment" can't be all, "You're a bad mom if you don't breastfeed, and by the way; could you please cover those things up! You're making us all uncomfortable." "Fuck them all! Tell me what you want to do, Mom! I've got your back! BTW, you can get a gods damned Hooter Hider at a lot of other places, if that's what you want. Here's the website and here's the website for The Badass Breastfeeder if you don't. (Yes. It is awesomely a real website!) You don't want to breastfeed? That's your right!" All apparently, not the appropriate corporate stance. I'm too much of a 60's and 70's style, bra burning, rabble-rouser. I need re-education, I guess. Come on Hermione! Land Snape for the both of us. I'm not going to get any action.
They certainly didn't waste any time. Why should they. They've known each other for years. I suppose one dance fulfills one's obligations to those at the Gala. There will be talk. Hehe! So he made tea just so that he could ask her why she had been afraid at the Gala? A waltz, 5 minutes of conversation is plenty of foreplay when one has been fantasizing for a week, I suppose. On to the more important part! Shall we?
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks for your review! Always need to keep the story moving forward, lol
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks for your review! Always need to keep the story moving forward, lol
Dreams can be so lovely. I have very vivid dreams and sometimes take a nap so I can dream. I hope Hermione remembers the part with Severus. She's luckier than she knows. ..."melted dark chocolate, thick and rich and deep", indeed!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I hope readers read those dreams as lessons for Hermione. Harry has moved on to find a home, and Ron knows how to live in the wizarding society, while Hermione only learned of wizards from Hogwarts - no one has prepared her for life in the wizarding world after school. Thank you for your reviews!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I hope readers read those dreams as lessons for Hermione. Harry has moved on to find a home, and Ron knows how to live in the wizarding society, while Hermione only learned of wizards from Hogwarts - no one has prepared her for life in the wizarding world after school. Thank you for your reviews!
I really like liking this Ron. He's usually portrayed as such a prat. I think we SS/HG shippers sometimes forget he's a gifted strategist. I always picture him with George. I think that is what he would have really done. Worked with George and try to help him. Family is everything to him. He might have wanted to be an Auror before the war, but after Fred's death I think he would have given that up for George. Harry would be OK now. And, he never would have ended up happy with Hermione, nor she with him. This feels more right than the book. I don't know where you have this going, but I do picture him with Lavander.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your reviews! I seem to be responding to them backwards, lolI haven't given much thought to where each character ends up, but Ron and Hermione never felt right. Ron is brilliant, but a bit of a lunkhead, and I could never imagine Hermione having the patience for him in the long run. I'd have liked to see him with someone like Pansy Parkinson - someone who has the same background as he - someone with a common background and sense of belonging. And Pansy would challenge him and his abilities.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for reading and your reviews! I seem to be responding to them backwards, lolI haven't given much thought to where each character ends up, but Ron and Hermione never felt right. Ron is brilliant, but a bit of a lunkhead, and I could never imagine Hermione having the patience for him in the long run. I'd have liked to see him with someone like Pansy Parkinson - someone who has the same background as he - someone with a common background and sense of belonging. And Pansy would challenge him and his abilities.
Oooh. What a nice tale.It's always nice to see Nice!Ron and Nice!Harry in this side of the fandom. Lovely. ♥
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It is much appreciated.There is so much love between the three of them, I needed to be true to that.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It is much appreciated.There is so much love between the three of them, I needed to be true to that.
I'm not usually a fan of Ron but I like the way you've written him.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks! I'm a big fan of Ron, just not with Hermione. :)
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thanks! I'm a big fan of Ron, just not with Hermione. :)
Loved the twist of Ron being the level-headed mastermind. It was a refreshing change from the hot-headed ron that is so commonplace in fics. Thanks!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review and comments!I've always liked Ron - just not for Hermione. He's an excellent chess player, which means he sees the "big picture" and plans. I thought he needed to put his skills to good use.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you for your review and comments!I've always liked Ron - just not for Hermione. He's an excellent chess player, which means he sees the "big picture" and plans. I thought he needed to put his skills to good use.
Really wonderful story!! Just long enough to really immerse myself and not so long that I am saying...OMG 25 MORE chapters! Well written thanks!!!!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Oh, thank you!! It was written for the Hermione BigBang Challenge and is archived here: http://www.hermione.magical-worlds.us/viewstory.php?sid=48&textsize=0&chapter=1Also included is some really wonderful artwork!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I tried to visit the archive and I can not get to it for some reason. I am going to try again,Thanks!!!!
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Oh, thank you!! It was written for the Hermione BigBang Challenge and is archived here: http://www.hermione.magical-worlds.us/viewstory.php?sid=48&textsize=0&chapter=1Also included is some really wonderful artwork!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I tried to visit the archive and I can not get to it for some reason. I am going to try again,Thanks!!!!
Just a very sweet, lovely, and romantic story. Thank you for sharing. I can now go to sleep with a smile on my face.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I am so glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you so much for offering a review after every chapter, I've a smile from ear to ear. :)I love Severus and Hermione together. I wrote this story for the HermioneBigBang a couple of years ago, and I'm so pleased that it is still being enjoyed. I don't know how you feel about Lucius/Hermione. Personally, I'm not a huge fan, but I wrote a story, No Looking Back. If you're slightly interested, check it out. Thanks again!! Dari
Perfection.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I am so, so sorry it has taken so long to thank you for leaving all of these lovely comments!!I'm so glad you enjoyed the story - it was a nail- biter for me; I was so worried I wouldn't do the characters justice!I like Ron - he's funny and smart and honest, I just never saw him as a good match for Hermione. :)
How romantic.. I must finish this story tonight. Well, it technically is no longer the night since it is 1:45 am but I must continue before I go to sleep.
Sigh, to be so close, to share a breath and the slightest of kisses.. Ahhh the fireworks begin. Your take on Fred and George was very heart warming.
"Hermione indulged in a bit of self-mortification and threw her blankets over her head. She’d masturbated had gotten off to a fantasy regarding Professor Snape. Severus! " Your opening paragraph made me chuckle, I don't think I have to tell you why.
I am so looking forward to the first time they see each other again.
Sigh, you are a girl after my own heart, Those old spaghetti westerns with non other than my beloved Clint Eastwood, girl I knew I liked you right from the start.
What a lovely dream. I love how Severus comes up behind her and takes her on to the dance floor. The way he tells her that he is always there, Be still my heart.
Awww, and so it begins. I'm doing my Happy Dance!
How very Slytherin of Ron, he manipulated that scene very well. Ahhh Severus, let us see how you let down your guard. On to the next chapter.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
I'd like to think those seven years spent in school with the Slytherin's weren't wasted, lol
Interesting chapter, I enjoyed the matured Ron. I can't wait to see how H/S relationship developes.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Thank you!
Well, this is a new twist. Ron has never been anything other than annoying at best. I am looking forward to finding out how he will put his plan into action. Looks like your Ron has finally grown up, how refreshing.
Response from nastygrl (Author of A Victorious Draw)
Well, the man had to grow up some time! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, and please accept my apologies for taking so, so long to do it!