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Destination
pyjamapants12 Reviews | 12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )
Hermione encounters some trouble with Apparition.
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I'm a freelancing Yank who lives in the Midwest with her husband, three cats, and two dogs.
I'm a dabbler by nature. Jack of all trades, master of none. I write, run, swim, garden, quilt, bake, and so on.
Reviews for Destination
This was absolutely hilarious! The opening sentence really titillated but I almost felt a sense of dread when I noticed Firenze in the summary.
I do enjoy your twisted little mind! Apperating while orgasming. It takes dangerous sex to a whole new level!
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
I'm glad someone enjoys my twisted little mind. :) Poor Severus has his complaints.
this is hilarious and creative and wonderful. I wonder why I never considered this before myself. I especially love the panic about splinching... :)
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Thank you so very much! Accidental magic is a very dangerous thing! Thanks again for the lovely review!
Wow, I did not know we could live without commas! Original story idea as well.
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
It's hard to live without commas. Occasionally one must resort to the sneaky tactic of smushing a line of text together. :)
"What if we came at the same time? The splinching involved would be horrendous."Bwahahahaha! Thank God I wasn't drinking anything when I read those lines! I don't know how this little plot bunny got a hold on you, but I shall be eternally grateful. Pssssst! Little plot bunny? Over here!You do know that destination is only the first of the three part apparition process, right? Go back and bite her ankle until she writes "Determination" and "Deliberation" as well. There's a good plot bunny!
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Hmmmmm. Determination and Deliberation... I shall have to ponder this. *adds to plot bunny drawer* *pats the lovely review* You're so good at keeping the plot bunnies well tended. :)
Bravo! What an interesting and original idea. Can you imagine - appariation based upon climax thoughts. The would would never get over the scandals. That makes interesting daydreams. *hums... Where would they go if Severus developed her "habit"? Sara
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Thank you very much! I'll have to ponder where Severus might take them... MoreThanSirius was kind enough to point out that I've only written about ONE of the three Ds. :D Thanks for the lovely review!
Lovely. It would be great to read about a couple more of her fantasies...with or without commas.
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
*grins* Thanks! MoreThanSirius was kind enough to point out that I've only written ONE of the three D's. I'll have to give this some thought! Thanks for the lovely review!
I am not sure if I should congratulate Severus or feel sorry for him:-))Great story!
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Poor Snape does have to endure quite a bit. Let's hope he continues to enjoy the benefit of Hermione's 'practice'. Thanks for the review!
PJ, you are the best! I adore this -- a very lucky Severus who is loved by a powerful Hermione. The Firenze scene was perfection. Thanks for the chortles!
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Awww! Thanks, June! I think I giggled the whole time I was writing the Firenze scene. Great fun. :D Thanks again for the lovely review!
Loved it!
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Thanks so much for letting me know!
PJ, this was the perfect way to end a Saturday night. It's hard to believe this story is over one-thousand words and you didn't have even one tiny, little comma polluting the lovely, funny smut. Is Hermione too distracted during climax or is she too fixated?I think the best part was the unofficial run-on sentence. 'IwasfantasisingabouthavingsexunderawaterfallandthenIsortofApparatedusherewhenIcame.'That was a LOL moment.
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Hey. Desperate times call for desperate measures, right? I didn't want to write that sentence with a comma or break it up! Really, the writing was a great exercise is playing around with different sentence structures. I highly recommend it!
That was simply hilarious!
Response from pyjamapants (Author of Destination)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I got a kick out of writing it. :) *hugs*