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Dark Veela Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Reactions
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Dark Veela

1: Prologue/Chapter One: And So It Begins

2: Chapter Two: Family History

3: Chapter Three: Back to Life, Back to Reality

4: Chapter Four: Snape’s Alive?

5: Chapter Five: Plans and Actions

6: Chapter Six: At Malfoy Manor

7: Chapter Seven: Repercussions

8: Chapter Eight: Confessions and Desires

9: Chapter Nine: Reactions

10: Chapter Ten: Profitable Excursions

11: Chapter Eleven: The Meeting of the Order of the Phoenix

12: Chapter Twelve: Touched by the Dark

13: Chapter Thirteen: The Victory Ball

14: Chapter Fourteen: More Slytherin Plotting

15: Chapter Fifteen: The Order of Merlin Awards

16: Chapter Sixteen: Confusion and Comfort

17: Chapter Seventeen: The Malfoys entertain

18: Chapter Eighteen: The entertainment continues

19: Chapter Nineteen: The Fudge Ball

20: Chapter Twenty: A new home for Severus

21: Chapter Twenty-One: Conversations

22: Chapter Twenty-Two: What happened to my parents?

23: Chapter Twenty-Three: Post-Oz Results

24: Chapter Twenty-Four: Slytherin Plotting Gryffindor Style

25: Chapter Twenty-Five: Birthday Wishes

26: Twenty-Six: Tête-à-tête

27: Twenty-Seven: The Castle Speaks

28: Chapter Twenty-Eight: Hermione Granger-Malfoy

29: Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Halloween Feast

30: Chapter Thirty: Halloween Results

31: Chapter Thirty-One: Manoeuvring

32: Chapter Thirty-Two: Covert Meetings

33: Chapter Thirty-Three: Slytherin to the rescue

34: Chapter Thirty-Four: Outcomes

35: Chapter Thirty-Five: A meeting at Grimmauld Place

36: Chapter Thirty-Six: Theodore Nott

37: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Surprise

38: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Engaged!

39: Chapter Thirty-Nine: High Magic

40: Chapter Forty: The Ending of the Dark Veela Curse

Chapter Nine: Reactions

Dark Veela

Chapter 9 of 40

kittyperry

The Weasleys react to the press conference and the aftermath of the Battle of Hogwarts.

Drama Romance General Potions Under Duress 169,869 Words 40 Chapters WIP
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(i) The characters and world of Harry Potter are the property of J.K. Rowling. I make no money from this.

(ii) Thank you, everyone, for the reviews. Please, please do continue to let me know what you think of the story.

(iii) And last, but not least, a big hug of gratitude to my beautiful beta, Queen_of_Stars.

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While Harry, Hermione and Luna were busy planning and plotting, the Weasleys returned to the Burrow. There, they attempted to eat a sorrowful breakfast and come to terms with Fred's death. George seemed unable to accept that his twin was gone. He seemed as if he was waiting for Fred to pop back in at any moment to announce that it had all just been an elaborate ruse. Percy seemed stunned. He had just regained Fred and the rest of his family and could not cope with having lost his brother once more. Molly was unable to part with any of her children and could do nothing other than hold them all in turn and kiss them repeatedly.

However, Arthur and Bill were both aware that much needed to be done. Bill collected a frantic Fleur from Shell Cottage, and once she had been calmed, reassured and safely ensconced within the bosom of the Weasleys, he departed for Gringotts. The bank and the Goblins were still busy dealing with the aftermath of the break-in and the escaped dragon, not to mention the destruction to their building.

After a brief rest, Arthur prepared to depart for the Ministry as well. Realising that brooding was detrimental to the mental health of his family, he coaxed a conscientious Percy to accompany him, saying, 'Come along, Percy, it is time to go. The Ministry desperately needs all the good men it can get right now.'

Calling on his sense of duty seemed to work, for Percy straightened his shoulders and joined his father in Flooing to the Ministry.

Arthur, with his long years of service to the Ministry, realised that there was much work ahead of them. There, he and Percy attempted with their colleagues to deal with Ministerial matters and the release of prisoners from Azkaban even as Death Eaters were arrested and incarcerated. More directly, Arthur worked on curbing the enthusiasm of the wizarding public that was indiscriminately celebrating the demise of the Dark Lord. Arthur was rushed off his feet, working to make sure that the Muggles were not made aware of the magical world. Flocks of owls could be explained away as an unusual migration, but fireworks, spontaneous parties, drunken brawls and public rejoicing in the street, however heartfelt and joyful, needed to be contained with Muggles Obliviated.

Percy found solace in working. He spent most of the day behind his desk and sorting through piles of release papers for prisoners, ensuring they were sent to St Mungo's for treatment and making sure that family members were sent owls with news and information. The work seemed to help him cope, and he was grateful his father had brought him in to work.

Buried in his work, Percy did not pay attention to the gossip circulating about the press conference, but while rushing around at the Ministry, Arthur did. He sent his weasel Patronus to the Burrow to make sure the family was listening in. Then, at noon, Arthur collected his son and, like the other employees of the Ministry, stopped to listen to the press conference.

The reactions to the press conference at the Ministry were mixed. Many of the Aurors were angry that the Minister had pardoned hardened war criminals, especially Snape. Others were glad that the purebloods were given a way out, a chance to throw off the mantle of evil that had been placed upon them. Still others, who had worked willingly with Voldemort's regime, were furious at their Dark Lord being portrayed as a half-blood megalomaniac. From long experience, Arthur made it a point to note who was saying what; he knew the Order's task of suppressing evil had not ended merely because Voldemort had been defeated.

Later that evening, as the long day was winding to a close, Arthur was called in for an important meeting with Kingsley. There, as one of the few remaining members of the Order, he was informed of the repercussions of Harry's speech and of Severus' survival. Arthur listened with glowing pride to hear Kingsley's praise of the way the teenagers had handled the aftermath of the battle. He was proud, for he thought of Harry and Hermione as his own. Arthur had noticed how Ron seemed to have forgotten about Hermione after the battle. He had tried to persuade Harry to return to the Burrow with the Weasleys, but had relented when Harry had said he would wait for Hermione. He now realised that Hermione had probably been doing her part to recover Severus.

When Arthur and Percy returned to the Burrow, they met a very weary Bill. He too had had a long day working on securing the bank property and working on reconstruction. At the Burrow, things had not been much better. Molly seemed drained and looked like she was still dealing very badly with the loss of Fred. Arthur realised that for his wife, the loss of their son was still new, still personal. He, on the other hand, had been so involved with the loss of all the fallen that Fred's demise had been put into a kind of rational perspective. He did, of course, grieve the death of his son, but his grief was tempered with the knowledge that they were the lucky ones. With so many of his family so closely associated with the resistance, their losses could have been far greater.

Molly had spent the day trying to get the children to rest. George had finally been sent to bed with a dreamless sleep potion, and Ginny, who had refused to leave the side of her mother, had fallen into a restless slumber on the sitting-room sofa. Ron had merely spent the day eating, as if food would take away the sense of loss and pain he was feeling. Fleur was the one who seemed to be holding the family together while Molly prepared the evening meal. Dinner was a sober affair. However, hunger had finally settled in, and it was not only Ron who ate well. Although still numb, Percy, who had missed his mother's cooking, found in the strangely quiet family meal the comfort and strength he needed to cope with the death and destruction he had witnessed.

After dinner, everyone continued to sit around the table. Everyone was quiet and lost in their own thoughts; no one seemed ready to disturb the sense of peace and comfort being together provided. After a while into the silence, Arthur brought up the topic of the press conference. 'Did you all hear what Harry and the girls had to say?' he asked.

Bill replied. 'Yes. The Goblins aren't happy. Now they won't be able to persecute Harry for the destruction of Gringotts. If the Ministry has officially pardoned Harry, there will be no compensation. Brilliant move that though. They covered their bases immediately.'

'That speech sounded like Hermione's work,' said Ron. His tone of voice was not filled with pride at the achievement of his friends; Arthur found that it was resentful. 'I can't believe they would have a press conference without me. How could Harry introduce Hermione as his best friend? What am I, chopped frog's liver? And Loony Lovegood? What were they thinking? Why did they get her to speak? I did much more than Loony Lovegood.'

Arthur tried to placate Ron. 'Well, you did come home and leave them at Hogwarts. Luna had no where else to go; her father was only released from Azkaban sometime this afternoon. He's still being treated at St Mungo's.'

Ron could only grunt in reply.

Ginny spoke up next. 'I thought Luna was my friend. The presenter was talking about how she shone on Harry's arm as they left the Great Hall. Why was she holding on to him? I don't understand. I thought he didn't like her. I know he took her to Slughorn's Christmas party once, but really, Luna? Did you hear the comments about her charming robes? When did Luna ever wear anything remotely fashionable?'

Arthur looked thoughtfully at his children. They didn't seem to understand that Harry, Hermione and Luna had done what they could at a difficult time. Finally, he said, 'Wait until you speak to them. I'm sure it will all be explained. I think they got Luna involved just because we all came home.'

'Well,' said Molly defensively, 'they could have told the children about the press conference. They could have gone back.'

'Yes, but perhaps they didn't want to intrude on our grief,' said Arthur sharply. 'You were the one who insisted this morning that we all come back to the Burrow and that it was a time for family. They were simply abiding by your wishes.'

'Well, I didn't know they were going to address the public and leave my children from their rightfully earned spotlight, did I?' replied Molly. She seemed extremely hurt and resentful that her children had been denied their moment of glory.

'I think Luna spoke very well,' said Fleur into the awkward silence. 'She iz after all connected to wizarding royalty, and it doez not hurt to remind the publik that 'Arry haz friendz like zhat. Hermione, too, waz very good in ze way she replied. She made sure ze purebloodz would have a way out if zhey want to work with ze Ministry.'

'Yeah,' said Ron. 'That was the other thing, the woman on the wireless kept talking about how mature Hermione looked and how well she seemed to get on with the Minister. What's Hermione doing sucking up to Kingsley? From what they said, she seemed to be clinging onto his arm and smiling at him.'

'I've never liked to tell you, Ronald,' said Molly, 'but this isn't the first time she's made a play for someone in a position of prestige and power. Remember her romance with Krum?' Molly's words fanned the flames of Ron's anger and resentment until he was almost completely red in the face.

Arthur was very disturbed by these turn of affairs. 'Really, Molly,' he said sharply. 'Wait until you speak to the children and know what's really going on before saying things like this. You know what the press are like. They love scandal. You do a disservice to Hermione.'

Molly sniffed. 'You can say what you like Arthur; all I'm saying is that that girl is too smart to not try to climb up the social ladder. Where was she when my Ronald needed her this morning? She wasn't there, and that's why Harry had to wait for her. If she was interested in Ron, then she should have stayed with him. You mark my words, something is brewing, and it isn't something that will work in favour of our Ron.'

Arthur was too tired to argue, but he was disappointed in Molly, Ron and Ginny's attitudes. He only sighed and said, 'Well, when the children come to visit, we'll know what's really going on.'

Then, he bid goodnight to the family and went to bed.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Dark Veela

432 Reviews  |  6.61/10 Average

10/10

mom2divas

Even though real life demanded my attention for quite some time, I'm so glad I finally got to finish reading this story. We'll done!

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you. It's not finished really. I've written more chapters and posted them on another site, but I don't have a beta now so can't really post it here at the moment.

Response from mom2divas (Reviewer)

Which other site? Beta or not, I'd still love to read it.

10/10

mom2divas

Yay! Back together.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

mom2divas

Lol I just loved how Severus was handled! Ginn really annoys me so I was happy to see that come to an end. So glad some of the Weasleys started the mend! 

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

It has been fun to make Ginny into the evil one in my story. She's just perfect for the role. Glad you approve :)

10/10

mom2divas

It feels like I should be offended for some reason at the start of some chapters due to misunderstandings between Hermione and Severus and her almost always apologizing and then you go and keep writing the chapter and make me see why it worked out the way it does. Lol! Another fantastic chapter (or couple of chapters as I can't recall if I reviewed consistently as I get very involved and just keep reading) and I loved the castle getting into it. 

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you. I don't want Hermione to always apologise - and I'm sure he'll be on bended knee to her at some point too :)

10/10

mom2divas

Lovely chapter. I really like how the Malfoys are taking to Hermione. Can't wait to read about her chat with Narcissa and her date with Severus.I hope you don't mind but found 2 small typos. "This brought fought another round of giggles" and "Hermione blushed and shock her head."

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thanks so much for your eagle eyes. I really appreciate all such heads-up. I really need to find a beta.

10/10

mom2divas

Lol love the portraits!

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thanks so much. I love them too.

10/10

mom2divas

I had a feeling that was going to happen however that last sentence... I must find out where he's going with that!

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Glad you're enjoying the story :)

10/10

mom2divas

Sorry to see that reaction but I can see it fitting in well with how the story has progressed so far.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

I'm pleased you think so. This is a bit of a long winded story - a bit of this, a bit of that, but the action is still there.

10/10

mom2divas

Still loving this story. Different take on the reason behind certain Weasleys behaviours as well as relationships surrounding the Malfoys. Excellent chapters so far!

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

I'm so happy to read your reviews. Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me what you think.

10/10

mom2divas

Yet another excellent chapter! One small typo though; severed instead of served in the sentence, "Hermione was conscious of the amount of alcohol being severed..."

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you so much for your review. I do appreciate your kind words. :) And great job with the eagle eyes.

10/10

mom2divas

Yay! Fantastic interactions between Severus and Hermione.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed them together.

0/10

roni0811

new and interesting learning about severus' family history!! so must didn't have their true love.. so dad...

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

It is sad. But that's the curse of the Dark Veela and fingers crossed that Snape breaks it for the rest of the bloodline.

10/10

joyfulheart

Oh, I haven't been around for awhile. I was so excited to see two new chapters!

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you. Sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. It wasn't showing up that I'd got reviews for some reason.

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you for a marvelous update, it was all one could have hoped for and more:-))

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter is waiting to be gone through.

10/10

chyara

So excited to see this.  I was so sad to think it would be lost to WiP.You had a couple of minor errors.  Fluer's sister is Gabrielle.  

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thanks so much for letting me know. I thought I'd caught that one :)Also, no, I've written up to chapter 48 and am working on 49. But not having a beta makes the whole process of posting a lot slower.  But it isn't going to be a WIP.

Response from chyara (Reviewer)

I remember when you started writing this one and the other one, the name escapes me.  I am pulled into your story.  Truly a work of art.I had to go back and start over and re-read it, as it had been awhile.  Then I went back to read it again...lol

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

That is one of the nicest things anyone has said to me. Thank you.I do that all the time with stories I enjoy/love. So I'm feeling really over the moon. You made my morning honey.xxx

10/10

indigo_rose

Congratulations Doctor Perry!  So glad that you've finished the post grad work, and it was definitely worth waiting for to get a new chapter of this story.  Even though Severus had been laboring under a powerful curse, it was breathtaking to see that despite everything it wasn't all powerful.  If one had the ability to see past the surface of those around them, the curse just didn't pack its usual punch.  In a way, it's an analogy for life--everyone around us has more to them than what we get to see at a cursory glance.  But how many people take the time to really look?Thanks for the update, and I'm looking forward to the next one!

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Love your insightful review. Thank you so much for taking the time to think and respond. Yes. Exactly. I couldn't have put it better myself. Because really, people didn't look beyond the caricature of Snape the evil dungeon bat, the slimy git. He played the role so well he became the role. And yet, there is more to him. The dedicated potioneer, the passionate lover.

10/10

Sampdoria

What a marvellous update, well Worth waiting for. I loved it, absolutely loved it. Severus realising that Hermione was never repulsed by his Veela curse was icing on the cake.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Hello my dear,So glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I wanted Hermione to be more than just the girl who fell for the man but someone who had seen his worth even before, kind of like Luna had done.

10/10

jadecadence

Any betas in sight? :D It's great that this story hasn't been abandoned. :D But still WIPs make me nervous... :D 

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Hello lovely,No, still no betas in sight. Desperately looking out for one.Sorry I've not responded to this before today. I've not got the email that tells you someone has written for some reason and I'd not checked for ages. Sorry. Don't worry, I'm working on more chapters. They will get written the story will be complete :)

10/10

littleone17

Lovely. I'm so glad to be reconnected to this story. Defintely enjoyable to read and watch the growth of all the many characters. I'm very impressed with your ability to balance so many of them. I look forward to future chapters. Thank you for sharing. Also, congrats on submitting your PhD thesis, I hope it was well received. 

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

It was. I am now Doctor Perry. Glad you are enjoying the story. Have actually posted new chapters on another site but haven't got a beta so can't post here yet. 

10/10

mick42

Severus is capable of finding true love, but it will take some convincing to get him to belive that he is truely loved.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Yes. Exactly. He's so used to being hated, or used. To accept that the love that's offered is real is going to be a challenge.

10/10

mick42

Given her previous experence at the manor, I doubt Hermione would want to go back there just yet, but as it was her that lead them to Severus, it would hav been nice to be asked at the very least.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Oh, I totally agree. But I think that at this point the Malfoys haven't had enough time to think of how useful getting Hermione on their side is. They're still only thinking of survival, kind of like on instinct. The plotting will fall into place later.

10/10

Alifromnm

I spent the last day re-redating this wonderful story!!!  You have me in tears here.  This last chapter was so powerful.  Thank you for the wonderful read.  I so look forward to another installment.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, that it has touched you so deeply. I'm beyond words.

0/10

monami

I was so delighted to see another chapter up for this story. I have really enjoyed your writing and I am very intrigued by this story!  Congrats on getting your PhD thesis in!  What an accomplishment!

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you. I'm so happy the PhD is done and dusted. It was 4 and half years of drugery.

10/10

indigo_rose

I am so glad you're back, and congratulations on the PhD!The ceremony was lovely, and the emphasis on magical intent and near silence of it all made it quite profound.  Tansy is a fun new character as well--I'm looking forward to seeing more of her in the future.

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Thank you so much. So glad the PhD is done. Tansy is marvellous. I'm so into her.

0/10

beaweasley2

Still enjoying this immensely. I love the slow progression of the relationship and his inner tumoil. It’s refreshing and he’ so in character, even when being romantic. Great job.  I wonder though, and forgive me for suggesting, but there are a few things.  This: ‘If her Gryffindor brashness sent him scurrying away, she would use her Slytherin wiles.’ – I get so tired of the house thing all the time, repeated over and over, wouldn’t it have been better if she’s simply thought: If her brashness sent him scurrying away, she would use her feminine wiles.   And it’s Severus’ house, er, manor now, cant’ he rename the place Snape Manor?   And what’s with the opening of the two buttons – mum always told me that was a ‘loose’ thing to do, it would have read cuter if the buttons were ornamental, a decoration, not gapping and straining because she’d gained weight or a larger bust. 

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

Hello lovely,Well, I get your point about not linking everything to House affiliation. And you're right of course, but, Hermione is still too close to Hogwarts to think in such a grown up manner. I'm sure she'll get there eventually. The same is true for her ane the buttons. I mean, before Severus, she's only had Ron as a possible beau. I'm sure as time progresses that she will learn to be more subtle and lady-like.As for the name change, there is magic tied with the name of the place. To change a name also means sometimes in letting go of the magics that are tied to it. I really appreciate you thinking things through so carefully. It is wonderful to have a review that is so detailed. Thank you so much for reading my story with such great care. Lots of love. Do keep reviewing. It makes me so happy.

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

You're right, and keep in mind these are only my thoughts, nothing more, and it's your story. It's a great story and I'm enjoying it. My bedtime read actually. I'll rememebr to review more frequently (me bad at that) and try not to be too critical. But I can easliy immerse in it and it is really that good.bea~

Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)

You have me grinning. Thank you. Given that I adore your work, this is a real compliment to me that you are enjoying my story.

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