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To Conquer Her
sapphire_phoenix124 Reviews | 7.14/10 (124 Ratings, 0 Likes, 117 Favorites )
What will Hermione Granger do to escape the Marriage Law? What will Draco Malfoy do to get the girl?
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I've been reading fic for over a year. All those stories got busy in my head and now I've got new little stories to give back.
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This is an interesting story so far and I'm anxious to read the rest:)
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Thanks! More is in queue...
Poor Hermione, she just can't escape Draco. Her feelings of betrayal are understandable. I'm enjoying this very original and fascinating story. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Thanks!It's definitely not what she was expecting...More is in queue!
Just read from the beginning and am intrigued by the community you have created here. Am curious as to how Draco would interact with him parents and life in England should he reach Mage level. Mostly at the moment though, I just want to see how Hermione and Lucious react to Ariula's offer towards Draco.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
All very good questions. Westwitch.I'm glad you like the colony. Writing HP out of Hogwarts/Britain is like generating a whole new character, very tough!Can't wait to see what you think of what's to come...!
Time for her to step up! She's a powerful FIRE mage for pity's sake and she loves her refuge. Draco has to accept it first. She might not be SOL afterall.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Yes, despite the offer, Draco's hardly in the clear to get the girl!Can't wait to see what you think of what's to come!
Clever of her to do this. But I fear it only farthering the inevitable. And I'm curious about what will happen when he finally join the colony she is living in.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
I think she just wanted him away from her... I don't think she meant to do anything but shoo him away.
Rock on! Life as he knows it will never be the same, even if/when she gives in.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
*twinkles*Glad you are enjoying it.
OUCH!!! Damn... you'd think that even a Malfoy could take a hint by now!!!
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
I know, right?He's determined, that's for sure.
Nice story so far, even if I normally prefer HG/SS.Somehow I hope that Hermione is strong enough to resist Draco`s stalking. Someone has to tell this boy that he can`t get fulfilled his every wish only because he`s a Malfoy with money and power...lol What made me read your story was you mentioning a certain potions master with the characters.....I don`t know why I can`t stop thinking about a connection between Hermione`s lovely cat and this man....lol
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
HG/SS is my primary ship. I have other fics featuring them that aren't shiny enough to publish at this point. This is the... fifth? full length story that I've written.I'm a firm believer of not putting more crap-fic on the web. It's just not necessary. You will be seeing HG/SS from me in the future. And SS will be here, I promise! It'll just be a few chapters (what can I say, the dead are always late!). And hopefully you will like it very much.*twirls maniacal mustache*
Response from ginny24 (Reviewer)
haha, yeah you and your moustache......mr. Poirot.....lol
Hah!I'd have let Acara at least take some of one finger off or something. There is Nothing sexy about stalking, and I applaud Hermione for her sanity in these instances. I'm interested in what's coming next, since the only outcome I'd be really satisfied with involve death, dismemberment, or a restraining order. I'm guessing that's not where you're going. Lemons are fantastic, but falling in love with someone who's raped you in your sleep repeatedly... isn't.That said, I'll still be reading and hopefully reviewing, no matter which way this story turns. -Liv
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Hermione is so much more noble than we are!I'm glad you're going to stick with it, despite the unsavory undertones!
I LOVE this chapter. Keep 'em coming!
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Thanks! Next on is queue!
That was deliciously hot. Again I'ike to advise Draco to try to understand and befriend her. Because he could never control her.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Thanks! I try for hot-ness.
a thought I just had after rereading this chapter--if the dreams are happening in real time, ie, draco and hermione are dreaming them at the same time, would it be more immediately obvious which time zone hermione was in? or is this another bit of magic which I should just accept as working out here? :)
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Like ships in the night, turtle.Draco only knows that she sleeps when he sleeps, but he doesn't know if she's just started or is about to get up when they connect.VERY KEEN OBSERVATION THOUGH!
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
m'kay. Thanks! That does make sense.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
I can't wait to see what you think about what's coming next...
Things are getting really interesting here. But arousing is not the only thing that can woo her. I think Draco should start to speak to her, try to know her. SO, when he finds her she will be ready to give him a chance.And I have just a little question concerning computer texting. I catch the main conversation between Harry and Hermione, but idk and np. ty. leave me cluelesss. Maybe I don't care for the first one?
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Close!..I Don't Know.No Problem.Thank You.I'm glad you are into the story. Thanks for reviewing!
GAAAAAHHHH not mind control! I hope Hermione beats him black and blue, and not in a sexy way.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
...I wouldn't call it mind control.I think it is more of Hermione is being an unwilling witness to Draco's fantasies.I assure you, Hermione is not impressed...
DRACO MALFOY IS SUCH A CREEP. How on earth is this going to end in a positive light?
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Thanks, I wanted him to be such a creep!I've got about 20 chapters so far, and I'm not done yet, so hopefully you'll enjoy the twists and turns as I go.
So Draco's insinuating himself into her dreams now, is he? I so hope that Hermione will be able to turn the tables on him once again and take control of the dreams away from him! On the other hand, that could also tip him off to her location if she's not careful...My only complaint (and "complaint" is too strong a word, really) about this chapter is that I'm an old fogey who doesn't know the first thing about texting and its form of shorthand, so about half of the DA Galleon conversation between Harry and Hermione when he informed her that the Malfoys had gone travelling totally escaped me! If you have more of that in future chapters, definitions at the end for ignorant people like me would be most welcome!
What did happen to Crookshanks, anyway? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
The dreams! The dream!~~Now, for your reference:DM/LM trvling-HP. (Draco/Lucius are traveling) WHERE?? Mid East Colchis idk (I don't know) np. ty. (No problem. Thank you) u ok? yes, h, xo (Harry, in this instance) u sure? YES xo's, W's too (Weasleys) send love ~~You are not the first person to need a translator Crookshanks...? Oh, uh, he um, is at the place, with those people? (Dead maybe.) Hey! look over there! *ducks away*
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Oh, Look! There he is! (not dead, I shouldn't have said that!)
Love it. I don't usually read D/HG stories, but you have got me hookedon this one! Please keep up the regular updates!
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Thanks! Next chapter is in queue!D/HG isn't really my main ship either but... this is the first thing I've written that is suitable for public consumption. Hoping to get something else out here with some SS in it by the end of the year (muse willing)
Oops! For once Ron was right: Hermione doesn't do anything she doesn't want to. Now I'm dying to see how Draco will cope without his magic.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
I think Ron gets a bum rap in the fandom. He's a stand up guy!Next chapter is in queue! (twirls mustache maniacally)
Wow, what an ending!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Thanks!Hope you are enjoying it!(sorry to have taken so long to repond by the by, your review must have gotten lost in the shuffle)
Excellent, Hermione's not taking this lying down. Glad to see that she prepared herself for a quick exit, and had the forethought to get Colin to record it as well. Witnesses are all well and good, but you know what they say--get fifty witnesses to something, and you get fifty different stories about what actually happened. I do like Draco, but he needs to learn that you can't just buy someone as though they're a favorite ice cream or something! What will the consequences of Draco's magical tattoo being on her when she did this be? Will he lose magical energy permanently with the destruction of Hermione's wand due to the binding? Or will this just be a temporary setback for him? I can see where the tattoo might allow him to follow her no matter where she went, so her safety could be short-lived...Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
Those are some very good questions, Indigo! All will be revealed soon.I don't think Draco perceives what he's done as 'buying'. I think he'd call it more of a ... facilitating a situation through financial encouragement.
delightfully intriguing! can't wait to read more!
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
More is in queue!
I enjoyed this story. It was completely different from what I was expecting and I appreciated that. I loved how inventive Hermione was and how dedicated Draco was. It was a grand time reading this! Thank you!
This boy is hopeless. I thought by now he would begin to understand her. Honestly how could she fall in love with him? I wonder what would happen if she were to not respect her part of the contract and not marry him.
Response from sapphire_phoenix (Author of To Conquer Her)
hmmmm.... what would happen to hermione if she renig'ed on a malfoy contract? something tragic I'm sure... More is in the queue (sorry for the wait)... can't wait to see what you think.