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A Long Vernal Season

1: Prologue: Return

2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly

A Long Vernal Season

MMADfan

1,058 Reviews   |   1,058 Ratings, 0 Likes, 88 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 652,726 Words 136 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Filius Flitwick Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Pomona Sprout Original Character Other Canon Witch/Wizard Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid Hogwarts Eileen (Prince) Snape Tobias Snape Draco Malfoy Professor Vector The Fat Friar Madam Rosmerta Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Firenze (Centaur) Professor Sinistra Name Withheld (surprise) Ginevra Weasley Arthur Weasley Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Harry Potter Fawkes Bellatrix Lestrange Peter Pettigrew Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Sorting Hat

Severus Snape had believed that, for him, life after the Dark Lord was an impossibility, that his death was not merely justice, but necessity. He has survived, though, and now he must learn to live his new, unexpected life, and to find something beyond the narrow existence to which he was once bound. A Snape-centric post-war fic.

A Death’s Dominion sequel, but may stand alone. Not DH-compliant. DH-disregarded. Rated M for overall content. Much of it is "T," but the ratings rise to MA later for a reason, hence the switch to an M-rating for the earlier chapters. Watch the individual chapter summaries and author’s notes for ratings, warnings, and the characters appearing in that chapter.


Part One finds Severus dealing with some very immediate and dangerous consequences of his final confrontation with the Dark Lord more than three months before.

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Chapters (118)

Chapter 1: Prologue: Return

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

Chapter 49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

Chapter 50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

Chapter 51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

Chapter 52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

Chapter 53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

Chapter 54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

Chapter 55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

Chapter 56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

Chapter 57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

Chapter 58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

Chapter 59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

Chapter 60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

Chapter 61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

Chapter 62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

Chapter 63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

Chapter 64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

Chapter 65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

Chapter 66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

Chapter 67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

Chapter 68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

Chapter 69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

Chapter 70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

Chapter 71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

Chapter 72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

Chapter 73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

Chapter 74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

Chapter 75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

Chapter 76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

Chapter 77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

Chapter 78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

Chapter 79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

Chapter 80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

Chapter 81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

Chapter 82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

Chapter 83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

Chapter 84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

Chapter 85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

Chapter 86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

Chapter 87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

Chapter 88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

Chapter 89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

Chapter 90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

Chapter 91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

Chapter 92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

Chapter 93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

Chapter 94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

Chapter 95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

Chapter 96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

Chapter 97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

Chapter 98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

Chapter 99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

Chapter 100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

Chapter 101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

Chapter 102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

Chapter 103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

Chapter 104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

Chapter 105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

Chapter 106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

Chapter 107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

Chapter 108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

Chapter 109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

Chapter 110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

Chapter 111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

Chapter 112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

Chapter 113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

Chapter 114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

Chapter 115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

Chapter 116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

Chapter 117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

Chapter 118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly


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Reviews for A Long Vernal Season

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10/10

Fishy

Well! That was..... completely... well I mean to say, I thought I saw this coming but - this really came out of left field - I had no idea THIS would happen so ramdomly, and right HERE!Is this Severus Snape? *coughs* Severus, who in the last two chapters, seemed to be so needy in his emotional splurge and suddenly is thrown into the pit of some kind of love - quad of some kind? Is he just playing with Poppy? Oh if he is I will surely hate him for life.... I adore Poppy... he had better not toy with her, I will be furious!She is not an experiment and I seriously hope he meant those words he said to her - as well as the kiss!Now I am truly worried.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Oh, you needn't worry! The initial flirting was experimental, but then he found himself . . . feeling more. (And not just in one particular area of his anatomy, either!) And the kiss, yes, he meant it.

0/10

Fishy

I think I'm still recovering from the previous two chapters to say a lot here- though I did find it interesting that Severus is thinking of Poppy, even if its just in an abstract way. I found his facination with a certain part of her anatomy quite, adorable. *winks*

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you liked his preoccupation with her assets! ;-) Thanks!

10/10

mimmom

Somehow I don't think Severus would ever be concerned about Poppy's age.  I'm enjoying this.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, I think that's something that he wouldn't really think about. Poppy would be more concerned about him being concerned than he would ever be concerned! ;-)Glad you're enjoying it!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

That was certainly intense and I dare say none of us thought Getie would take him up on the offer of taking his hand from him. It goes to show how deeply sorry Snape is about what he did in the past and wanting to turn over a new leaf, which I think this little trip to the island with Gertie has helped to do. Maybe nwo he can focus on his future with Poppy!!!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

We can hope that he can do that now!I'm glad you liked the chapter. :-)

10/10

HogwartsDuo

What an emotional chapter for so many reasons. I suspected Gertie would take him to the island, especially after she said he'd need a Side-Along Apparation. It was nice of her to take him there and to show him the kindness of trusting him so much.The discussion about her arm was eerie and yet comforting. I think it was healing for both of them to discuss the aftermath in such a way as to bring some measure of closure. And Gertie's warning to Snape about not hurting her son and not being so "blind" to what she thought was happening between them was very telling. Off to read the next chapter!!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you! I do think there is some eerieness in this chapter, a bit of other-worldliness and a sense of disconnection from normalcy, and a little bit of discomfort, too.Yes, she was pleading with him as well as warning him; association with Severus could be dangerous on many levels, and Gertrude is aware of that, but particularly concerned about her son being hurt emotionally by Severus. It was good that Severus was able to clear things up for her there and give her some reassurances.Thanks for the review! Hope you enjoy the new chapter!

10/10

mimmom

I look forward to seeing how this new plan works.  I can't think anything but good will come from it.  I think Severus is right that he might have taken a completely different path if he'd been in Ravenclaw.  He'd have been appreciated for his intellect and that would have changed his adolescent development a lot.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, Severus would have done well as a Ravenclaw, I think! At least in that era, when so many Slytherins were being attracted to Riddle, and it might also have given him some insulation from the Gryffindors -- and he would have found it less attractive, himself, to set up a rivalry with them.

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

It's so WRONG that all the adults would fail to protect a kid, but it's also VERY realistic.  I see it all the time.  Even when I substitute as a support person in the local school I catch glimpses of it.  I report what I see and I'm sure it means more coming from an adult than from a kid.  They sometimes need a new set of eyes on some things and I tend to be very sensitive to the kids who need a bit of extra help and protection with my own children having special needs.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

You're right. (Did you read An Act of Love, by any chance? There's a short discussion in one of the chapters, between Severus & Minerva, about one of the Gryffindors' "pranks" on him, and how she'd dealt with it -- AAoL is the prequel to Death's Dominion, which is the story that comes before LVS.)

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

No, I didn't read that one.  I will look at that once I'm sort of caught up with LVS.  :)

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

It's a lot about Severus's psychology, so you may enjoy it. Death's Dominion, though, is the best of my fics, any of them, and if you've not read that one, I am pretty sure you'd enjoy it.

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

I'm pretty sure I read that one but I'll go and have a look to be certain.  I love reading about Snape and what goes on in his head, that's for sure!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I just checked by filtering the reviews & looking just for yours, and you've read both An Act of Love & Death's Dominion! (I hadn't remembered, because it's been a while!)

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

Is An Act of Love the one in which Snape gets hit by a stray spell?

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

That's the one -- filled with a combination of humor & drama, or something of the sort.

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

and a gigantic dose of hurt/comfort which isn't listed as anything here on TPP but which is something I seem to enjoy a lot!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I never use that "genre" -- guess I'm too much of a traditionalist when it comes to genres! LOL! Besides, I dislike most h/c fics that I've read (or tried to read) -- they just dwell so on it, from the ones I've read -- so I never think of myself as writing it, especially as there's more, and the endings aren't what I've seen as typical of those fics, either. (It seems that when you have people relating to one another in a story, and when there is injury or illness for one of the characters, naturally you'll have other characters taking care of him/her, unless it's some kind of Dark!fic with torture and such other nastiness.) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

That's probably why TPP doesn't list it as a Genre.  I'm pretty clueless about that.  I know that I've seen some on other sites that were VERY H/C and they annoyed me because they were just kind of gross and sappy and disgusting.  You are careful with it so it doesn't become the whole story.  It's more realistic this way.  I don't do a lot of writing because my brain really tends toward stupid, sappy h/c and then I can't seem to pull out of that at all.  ROFL!  It's just fine in my head but not so great to read it when it's the whole story.  You have some very realistic situations and how could Snape not have some of the issues he has.  He's never dealt with the emotions of all the terrible things he's experienced.  I really like the way Poppy handles it when she's figured out she has hurt his feelings.  He is able to tell her that now and she always tells him she's glad he told her.  Which is a lot like some real life situations I've had to deal with.  I seem to surround myself with people who are on the autism spectrum and they have a really hard time using words to express things so when they DO express it I usually make sure to thank them for telling me in a calm way at a point before they're angry.  It's not easy but Poppy would need that skill in her profession.  Snape is learning that he can tell her negative things without it turning into a major ordeal that overwhelms him.  So he's getting to have people around him show him some compassion and kindness and he's learning how to show that as well.  So I do see the difference between strictly H/C and stories that contain some of that.  Sorry if I offended you saying "gigantic" that was an exaggeration but there's a pretty good sized element of it simply because Snape has so much to be hurt about.  Other people have some things to be hurt about, too and Snape is learning how to comfort as well as how to accept kindness and comfort from other people.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

No, no offense taken! Just explaining my own take on that category of fics & why I prefer not to use it myself."I know that I've seen some on other sites that were VERY H/C and they annoyed me because they were just kind of gross and sappy and disgusting.  You are careful with it so it doesn't become the whole story"Yep, those are the fics I'm talkin' about! lol!Severus doesn't really have anything "wrong" with him organically, to use a short-hand word, but he's had an extremely abnormal existence, as well as not having had a particularly pleasant childhood (though as Gareth thinks in one chapter somewhere here, a lot of people grow up with less-than-ideal childhoods and don't become Death Eaters who cut off someone's arm for entertainment -- or what they thought would be entertainment until they actually did it), and he is a relatively introverted personality, too, so all that combines to make him have to play "catch up" with personal relationships and how to deal with his own emotions, as well as those of others -- but he's highly motivated to do so, and he's had the right kinds of people around him to encourage him n that direction.As you point out, Poppy, in addition to being a warm and loving person by nature, also has had experience in dealing with certain kinds of reactions and issues, and she's also motivated to want to "do the right thing" when with Severus, because she cares about him so much as a friend, even before this point, and now has come to care for him in other ways, as well.

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

Severus grew up in a difficult situation and that will have an effect, but not as much as something organic.  Also it doesn't sound like he was neglected as an infant or toddler which could lead to some really awful stuff.  Voldemort, I am almost certain, has narcissitic personality disorder and or reactive attachment disorder.  If Harry was a real live person I'd wonder why he DIDN'T have RAD because his parents died before he was 3 years old and after that I think the Dursleys were reluctant to have anything to do with him.  Poor babe.  There's a critical period between birth and 3 years during which babies learn to become attached to other people.  If it doesn't happen the consequences can be pretty awful, I think.  Sorry, talking about psychology again.  I find it so fascinating.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

In Death's Dominion, Albus is reflecting on the past, and he hopes/believes that Lily's sacrifice also protected him from the consequences of his early childhood being so stark.

10/10

Anonymous

Wow, who would have thought that. Either I am not too bad at long-distance-legilimancy after all, or there is more to dreaming than I thought before *g* - so my dream wasn't totally off. Still, I'm happy that Madam Gamp didn't accept Severus's offer, though it would have been extremely interesting to see something like that in fanficion. Not only the deed itself, but everything everybody so close particularly to her would have made of it... I just hope he now really feels forgiven and can lay that dark part of his past to reast-  after telling Poppy, of course.


Author's Response: There were a lot of hints and clues leading up to it, so they probably wormed their way into your subconscious and gave you the dream!

Hey, if Riddle could use Dark magic to create a whole new body, and he must have used a ritual that he found somewhere, why wouldn't the vita furtiva have some version of a similar spell. It's something that kept flitting through his mind ever since DD (well, flitting through his mind in my mind! lol!), and after her forgiveness, and then Aine's words & his own fears for what Poppy might think, he came to his decision.

It would have been very interesting to see what people would have thought when they saw Gertrude with 2 arms, and then Severus with most of his hand removed, I agree!

10/10

mimmom

oh that meddlesome Albus!  LOL.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Indeed! Little did he know that he was hindering rather than helping! LOL!

10/10

mimmom

I am again enjoying all of Severus' internal processes.  He's thinking about the difference between tutoring and detention and it's nice he sort of has the option to consider it now.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

It is good for him not to have to play such a narrow role that he was forced into as a spy and supposedly still-loyal Death Eater. I'm glad you're enjoying it again!

10/10

esmelle

Oh where to begin. I'll start with the fact that my long-held opinion on who the vigilante is, is wrong, since she was at the dining table. I have been "racking my brain" all day trying to come up with another guess based on what you/Aine said here. I have a new guess but hope it is wrong. Aine and Hafrena are very patient and tolerant in the face of the skepticism some of the guests displayed regarding their talents. I think Severus is going to be a believer now. Your talent for creating secondary characters that I grow to love as much as the primary ones was on display here. Calum sounds fantastic and I loved learning about him as well as seeing more of Aine and catching up with Hafrena. As Aine was telling Severus what she divined from him, I got the chills. Fantastic writing and chapter. Thanks.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I would love to know what your previous guess was! (And, not to be mean or tease you or anything -- well, maybe to tease you just a little -- but Aine only said that she could tell whether it was someone at the table, and when she did the divination for Severus, she could tell that it wasn't he. She didn't go around and check up on all the guests that night! lol! But I'm just teasing!)Yes, I think that Aine and Hafrena are rather used to sceptics and people who, while not completely sceptical, do think of it as hardly real magic. Like what Flitwick says about it being a "quaint art." However, they do know better, and so are happy to be tolerant of the less "enlightened"! And Severus, sceptical as he may be, still has enough belief to worry about what Aine might be able to see. I do think that you're right, and his opinion of divination, at least from Aine and Hafrena, has improved!Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed seeing the various characters.

Response from esmelle (Reviewer)

Hi. My guess was Helena. A while back she asked for a change in her dinner duty schedule because of a class she was taking and I thought it coincided with when one of the attacks occurred. On another topic, why did Hafrena act as she did when Gareth asked Calum if he was going to do a binding? I thought a binding was commonplace.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hafrena is quite old-fashioned, and she feels that bindings are too serious a topic -- and too personal, as well -- to be casually discussed at a dinner party. And a binding isn't exactly commonplace in RaMverse, though it's not completely unusual, either.

10/10

doralupin87

I looooveeee Gertrude! She's so wonderful! Thanks for posting, this was wonderful. I love the Island and it's nice that they are able to move on now. Severus it's sweet and he's been hunted by what he did for so long, I hope he can start healing now. I look forward to the chapter where he tells Poppy about what happened, I'm sure she'll forgive as Gertrude has. Thanks again for the update, wonderful writing! Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you liked the chapter! It was a crucial point for both Gertrude and Severus.Thank you!

10/10

mars m

There is so much in this chapter! But let me start with Snape's insistence to offer his hand to Gertrude so that her arm can be restored to her...his wish, his conviction, are so true and strong, it is very revealing of how intensely he feels guilty and how far he is ready to go to undo - part of - what he did to her. I think this must be decisive in the healing of both of them. Though Gertrude of course was already very far on that path. The description of the island, its history, the cottage, the cloak, you've done very vividly and lovingly and I can see it before me and love those details! The relation between Gertie and Sev. I think is both awkward and deeply involved and I realized that ever since Snape harmed Gertrude so badly their fate has unavoidably been connected and it must be so important for both of them, to finally really connect...and I think you have brought across that whole range of emotions that is related to it very sensitively and in awesome depth. Great chapter, masterfully done! *smile*

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you! This chapter has been gestating since Death's Dominion, this one and the previous one, and I'm glad that you found it moving. It is healing for them both, and Severus will take away more from that evening than he realizes now, and it will resonate in him for a long time.I'm glad you liked the details of the cottage and the island. I wanted to have enough atmosphere, but at the same time, not overwhelm the interaction between Gertrude and Severus with description -- but to keep it in sync with it, if you know what I mean.Thank you very much for the review! I really appreciate all your feedback. :-)

10/10

mimmom

I have some serious catching up to do!  I left off with this for a while.  I'm not sure why.  Probably something to do with my terrible attention span and too much stress in my life.  Time to take my daughter to get some school supplies.  AGG!  I'm enjoying getting back to this story again, though.  I noticed an update that sounded very intriguing and decided I needed to jump back in.  I haven't forgotten much of it.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Real life can certainly pull us away from the fun stuff!I'm glad you are enjoying it again! Thanks for letting me know you're back -- I've missed you! :-)Back to school -- probably a lot different from when I was in school, but I always loved getting new notebooks and pens and all. Everything seemed fresh & full of promise! The only thing better was the last day before the summer holiday! lol!

0/10

gurlimargrethe

hopefully Severus will be at more peace now

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

This may help, yes. :-)

9/10

Anonymous

Now things are really getting interesting. I read this yesterday evening and was SO glad that you already updated, though I didn't have time until now - and am now retiring with the new chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, there are developments in this chapter! Enjoy the new one!

Alcina vom Steinsberg's response: I had the strangest thing happen last night: dreamed the first time about a fanfiction - yours, that is, and that chapter. I dreamt that Severus was sacrificing his own arm, for Gertrude to get it... our mind plays weird tricks sometimes. *g*

Author's Response: Doesn't it, though!

9/10

Anonymous

Oh, poor Severus. It must have been really hard for him, sitting patiently through this... *hugs him*

Author's Response: He was patient -- but he is capable of patience when necessary. And not a particularly comfortable experience, either, you're right!

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Squibstress

This whole chapter gave me the willies (in a good way!)Gertrude's repeated mantra of "Professor Snape, do not hurt my son," Gertrude's persistent vision of Innis Ablach, and the discussion of what happened to Gertrude's severed arm... all quite chilling.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, there is an eerieness here, I believe, an otherworldliness that I tried to capture. A sense of being foreign but present, something like that. Both peace and unease at the same time.This chapter has been a long time coming, so I'm glad that you liked it.

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gurlimargrethe

happy to see Severus get some kind of closure - but still a long way to go before he can forgive himself I think. It was wonderful to "see" Avalon with them

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Severus is healing some, but there will always be traces of his past that he will have to live with. This healing will make that easier for him, or has the potential to do so, as you say, though he still has a long way to go.I'm glad you enjoyed seeing Avalon!

9/10

Anonymous

And it went a bit downhill from there! *lol* I really, really would have loved to be present and to see Severus' facial expressions trough all this. Party games, in every direction! I hope you'll make it up to him later, the poor laddie! ;o)

Author's Response: At least he got to eat chocolate cheesecake with Poppy, and he was picked captain, so he didn't have to perform any charades! There was a bit of a bright side! lol!

10/10

mars m

What should one say? This was so beautiful, so touching, so comforting...a refuge indeed, from all those years of mutual pain and suffering and hiding...all of that shared by these two people, but in different ways and for different reasons. Yet brought about by one terrible event - inflicted by one upon the other - that ultimately unites them, thanks to their growth and thanks to their courage and thanks to a bit of encouragement by loved ones in the background...unites them here on this island, in their soft talk and in seeing beyond the sea.Healing! Even to me as reader. And beautiful! Truly beautiful!Thank you for this fast update, though it would have been worth a very long wait even!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you very much! I am glad you sensed that unity here, and the courage that both showed in different ways. Even agreeing to meet with Gertrude was difficult for Severus, and frightening, something he would never have dreamt of doing even a year before. And Gertrude, in addition to her having forgiven him from afar so many years ago, has had an opportunity to observe how he has acquitted himself after the war, and to see his friendships with Gareth and Hermione, as well as with Minerva, and to see him in person, herself, and can thus gather the courage to bring him with her to the island, introducing a private part of herself to him, believing that he will be open to it and will benefit from it, as will she.And as you say, they have both reentered life after having had to hide for many years, and they do have an understanding of each other because of that.Thanks again! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much.

10/10

esmelle

I thoroughly enjoyed catching up with all of the different characters in this chapter. What an interesting dinner party this is turning out to be. Poor Casper, getting sort of rejected by Helena. It reminded me of Johannes in RaM asking Gertie to breakfast and then her agreeing and making it a group thing. Aine's personality isn't what I expected but I like her. I think I had her pegged as the quiet, shy, dutiful daughter. Severus' reaction to "meeting Max" was terrific. For him, that was practically fawning and he is rarely speechless. BTW thanks for the lesson on sushi :-)

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, poor Caspar! Always the "nice guy" in Helena's eyes! I'm glad you enjoyed Aine. She is a multifaceted character, certainly, and while she may not be as out-going as her brother, she's no demure little thing, either, as you noted. And dutiful she may be, in some sense, but out of strength of character and love of family, out of choice, and not for lack of independence, if you know what I mean.Yes, Severus was practically fawning over her, but he tried to maintain his dignity! LOL!You're welcome for the lesson on sushi! ;-)Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying catching up, and seeing the various characters again!

10/10

doralupin87

awww Gertrude just breaks my heart sometimes! Wonderful chapter, it never crossed my mind that they would go the island. I'm sooo happy two chapters with Gertrude in them! and the next it's bound to have her there too, Severus has yet to make his offer. I can't wait! I loved their dinamics here, they seem to be getting along better and letting go of the past maybe. Thanks for such a quick update! you are the best! Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

You're very welcome! I don't know how long this pace of updates will continue, but I thought that while I could, I would!Yes, Gertrude will be in the next chapter, as well, and it won't be the last time we see her in this story!I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

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Squibstress

Oh, Severus--where is that extraordinary mind of yours? As always, I love the interaction between Severus and Gertrude.Looking forward to more.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you! And I hope that more will be coming soon!

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Squibstress

Fascinating chapter. I really enjoy how you treat Divination here; it's much more interesting when the writer takes it seriously and uses it, as you've done, than when it gets dismissed as it does in the books.Poor Severus, though. I share his feeling about party games.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this take on Divination.Yes, poor Severus! At least he was captain and didn't have to choose himself to act anything out! lol!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

EEEP. I wonder where Gertie is taking Severus? Part of me thinks it might be the island where she spent so much of her time (Albus and Minerva's island) since she said it was a tricky Side-Along. Either way, I'm on pins and needles waiting on the next chapter. I want to know where they're going and how this will all play out!!!Thanks for updating. Now ... on to working on CSG! lolTTFN,the GLM

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

You do have a good sense for Gertrude here, I think!I'm glad you enjoyed the suspense -- I do hope to get the next chapter out soon!I would love to be reading a new chapter of CSG, myself, so we'll see whether my Muse cooperates. Thank you for the review! I hope not to keep you waiting too long for the next one!

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